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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
loved your ff.
its awesome.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys hi there
sorry for being late
n sorry for being not able to reply to each one of u
n literally sorry for this short update..
jeezzz so many sorrys
k guys here is the update its short n basically has sammy getting ready for the concert with saynk convo n mayu in bg
hope u guys will like it
loads n loads of love dolly
n i hope my three s's likes this one tooo

Update4>>>>>>>

(flash back continued)

Clutching the broken locket even more tightly in my hands , I ran upstairs to my green room , pushing away the gawking-at-me humans out of my way..

M== what do u mean??? Who sacrificed what???

He sounded completely freaked out' I tried to answer him calmly..

S== mayank.. twin listen to me .. go start the show' I promise I'll join u shortly n pls don't freak out now , I am freaked enough forr both of us..

My viose cracked a bit in the end n I could feel everyone's eyes on me as I pulled open the door to my green roon n stumbled inside..

M(taking deep breadths)=k .. m believeing u n m going.. as u say the show must go on..

S== bang on twin, the show must go on..

Saying so I ended the call n wrenched the earphone out of my ears n threw them along with my mobile over the dressing table..

Then taking up deep breadths I finally musterd up enough courage to look at myself in the numerous mirrors in the room..

N I came to a simple conclusion

I looked crappy n dampy..

Well ok may be .. I think crappy n dampy weren't words enough to describe my state but still'..

I was happy that mayank didn't get a chance to see me like this..

Even on hearing my panicked voice he had been so upset n freaked out,..

I shuddered to think what would have happened if he saw me like this covered in blood n mud'..

I blinked my eyes n scrutinised myself yet again '

Another simple conclusion ..

No way in the hell was I going to be able to go onstage painted I red like this..

I sighed n stole one more glance at the locket before kissing it n placing it too on the dressing table..

N then I wrenched myself out of that torned up messy shirt'

"HELLO MUMBAI'''R U READY GUYS??????.....

THERE IS GOING TO BE LOADS OF FUN TONIGHT!!!!!!!"

A sudden warm relief washed through me as I heard mayank speaking from on the stage'..

He was rocking it as usual .. n thanks to chashmish I would be joining my twin on stage in just a few minutes'

"HEY PEOPLE I SEE SOME ROCKING YOUNGSTERSS OUTTA HERE TONIGHT!!!!"

I Smiled '. MAYANK had always been great with the start up lines to any concert show'

I smiled some more as I heard the crowd going crazy after him'.

He was one rockstar for sure my twin'.

Well I didn't really have much time so I picked up the water jus kept in the room n poured it over my face ,Rubbing clean the blood from my cheeks n neck..

Then I repeated the same thing with my arms'

Using a towel I wiped my arms n face ..

I pulled on a black jacket,

the words "THE SERIAL KILLER" were printed on its back side in a fuinky calligraphy ..

I didn't wear a shirt underneath it ' as I looked damm cool with bare chest n a muddy torn up wet jeans'

Or atleast that was what the girls used to say'

Whatever' I shifted my concentration to my hair now ..

They were wet n in critical position..

This was an i-need-my-hair-gel-this-very-second crisis..

My hair were messy . so I ruffled them some more?(in a stylish way) using my gel'

Then I looked at the nasty cut just above my right eye..

It still stunged bad.. n that was really really sad..

I couldn't go out like this.. I looked around the room thinking hard about what could I do to about it????

That's exactlt when my eyes fixed themselves on a black band kept just at the edge of the dressing table..

"perfect"'.."I needed just that"

Saying so I pulled on the band over my head positioning it neatly on my forehead so that it covered the nasty cut completely'

N then I ruffled my hair a little bit to let them fall over the band..

Finally feeling a little better about the way I looked .

I picked up my guitar and literally ran upto the stage'

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res
me first me first😆😆

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woh !!!!!!
i never thought i will be ever be able to make it to the first
well remember a line from a story in my school"where women are concered unexpected always happens"😆
😆
now to the update
muahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so the rockstars r on roll
loved it dear
i wonder how mayank will react after concert to sams wounds which somewhat made invisible
u truley rock maate

lots of hugs
sush


ps: dont make me wait longer to read the next part

😆
Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
tehzeeb25 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr888 prt
thanxxx 4 d pm
-Jyotika- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt jaana..
luved it..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dolly sweetheart short but superb update loved it to the core do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sushups

res
me first me first😆😆

edited***************************


woh !!!!!!
i never thought i will be ever be able to make it to the first
well remember a line from a story in my school"where women are concered unexpected always happens"😆
😆
now to the update
muahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so the rockstars r on roll
loved it dear
i wonder how mayank will react after concert to sams wounds which somewhat made invisiblebut u truley rock maate

lots of hugs
sush


ps: dont make me wait longer to read the next part

😆

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sush u were really actually first????????????
congo yaar lov u reallyyyy
n m so glad that u liked the part babes ,,, just wait for mayu's reaction .. i hope there usn't a need to hospitalize him .. n i promise u wont wait 4 long
n pls hum logon se bhi zyaada intezaar mat karwaan n upxsate those two stories of urs nn did u read mohabbatein till now????
loads n loads of lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sushups

unreserved my post😆

sush u actually actually have a signature????
i had too make myself pinch myself just to be surte that i wa seeing correct
when did u decide to have a signature?????😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
@tehzeeb
thanks dear for reading n replying mm happy that u liked the part
lov
dolly
@jyoti
awwwww jaan thanku so much for replying n mm happy that u liked the part
'thanku loads n loads n loads
will try too update soon
loads n loads of lov
dolly
@ishu
hi mate .. just two weeks left in that aieee disaster 4 us remeber..
k sorry 4 talking about that
thanks loads dear 4 replying nn mm glad that u liked the part
i'll update soon
loads of lov
dolly

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