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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sammy..

it was a funny update. Armaan and poonam lost in the jungle and their partners in the lift. enjoyed reading it..

thanks for the Pm and continue soon..

love Mel..
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for late comment...
loved it...
its aussum
swahas thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sammy
it was damn hilarious.. 🤣
lagtha hai, in do jodiyon ki jeevan mein honeymon naam ki koi cheez hai hi nahi..... 😆
i pity prem nd armaan 😉

update soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by swahas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sammy dear.. like ur ff so much yaar....bara maja aaya....tum jo ushme mazedar point dalti ho...really love it...
punam
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys
sorry maine itne din se update nahi kiya.was busy with assignments .ab bas kal mujhe ek last assignment submit karni hai uske baad main jaldi jaldi sab ff's update karongi.

sorry!!


love
sammy
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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok sweety.......take ur tym.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
HiDear
Its ok
Take ur time
Thanks for note 😊

LoveSurat
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25

same night

Pr:hush'..finally humlog bahar aagaye.😊

ar:chalo chalkar khana kha lete hain...mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai.

they go to have dinner.

Ri:i'm tired plz ab chalein armaan.

Ar:haan haan chalo.

They go to their room.

Pr:mujhe kuch kaam hai so poonam tum jao main aata hoon.

Poo:ok.

Prem jaakar wapas aata hai.

Pr:poonam darwaza kholo.

Poo:haan ek minute.

Woh try karti hai lekin darwaza nahi khulta.

Poo:prem yeh darwaza nahi khul raha hai.

Pr:kya😲'.accha theek hai tum darwaze se hato main push karta hoon.

Prem try karta hai lekin kuch nahi hota.

Pr (thinking):ab kya karoon'.idea.AR ke room se jaane ko miljaye toh'jaakar check karta hoon.

He starts banging AR room's door.

Ar (opening ):kaun hai?😡....prem😕..yaar kya hai'kyun disturb kar raha hai?😡

Pr:arrey yaar mere room ka darwaza nahi khul raha hai.😕

Ar:so iska matlab tum dono humare saath rahoge.😲

Pr:nahi yaar main yahan iss room ki khidki se apne room mein jaonga.😕

Ar:kaise?😕

Pr:jump marke duffer.😕

Ar:ok try.😕

Prem jaakar dekhta hai toh there's no way ki woh khidki se room mein jaaye.naa hi AR ke room se aur naa hi niche se.

Ri:kya hua buddy tum yahan '.aur poonam kahan hai.😕

Pr:woh apne room mein hai.😕

Ar:oye tune toh bola tha ki tumlog ke room ka darwaza nahi khul raha hai😡

Pr:haan kyunki jab poonam room mein gayi tab khul gaya lekin ab nahi khul raha hai😡😡

Ri:what'u mean pooanm wahan apne room mein hai aur tum yahan.😕

Pr:haan buddy.😭

AR aage kuch nahi bolte.

Pr:guys kuch idea toh do.

Ri:ummm'haan'.i guess tumhe hotel mein inform karna chahiye darwaza khulwane.😕

Pr:hmmm.😕

Prem reception par phone karta hai aur inform karta hai.

G:sir'phir aap kahan se phone kar rahe hain..i mean agar aapke room ka darwaza .

Pr:dekhiye main'.apne mr. n mrs mallik ko dekha hai na ..unke room se bol raha hoon'.fine.😡

G:sorry sir ..humlog kuch karte hain.

Ar:kya hua yaar?

Pr:yaar yeh receptionist ..shes so annoying 'aapka room band hogaya toh aaap kahanse baat kar rahe hain.😡

Ri:arrey yeh sab choddo poonam ko toh inform karo.

Pr:haan ek minute.

He calls poonam.

Poo:tum kahan ho?

Pr:AR ke room mein.

Poo:oh'lekin yeh darwaza.

Pr:bola toh hai..lets see kya karte hain..waise tum theek toh hona?

Poo:haan I'm fine.

AR

Ar:yaar yeh sab kya chal raha hai?😕

Ri:buddy phone par apni wife se baat kar raha hai.

Ar:aur main apni wife ke saath romance nahi kar paa raha 😡

Ri:armaaan'.buddy hai na.😕

Ar:tabhi toh isse baat karne de raha hoon😊..koi aur hota toh ab tak haddi pasli ek kardi hoti'..honeymoon ki lagakar rakhdi hai.😡

Ri:ARMAAAN!!!😡

1 hour later.

Ar:chal prem.

Pr:kahan

Ar:chalkar darwaza tod dete hain..yeh log kitna time lagayenge kya maloom'aur tu yahan aise hi baitha rahega?😕

Pr:haan theek hai chal.

Ri:kya chal'abhi kafi raat hogayi hai'bahar aise hulla karoge accha lagta hia kya?...kal subah chale jaana 'woh bhi agar hotel wale kuch na karein toh.😡

Ar,pr:ok.

Phir ridz sojati hai aur armaan aur prem bhi couch pe baithe baithe so jate hain.

Next day morning.

Armaan aur prem darwaza todne mein lage rehte hain aur riddhima wahan khadi hoti hai.

Awaj se baju ke room se ek aadmi nikal aata hai.

M:arre yyeh kya kar rahe hain aap log.😕

Pr:arrey iss darwaze ko todne ki koshish kar rahe hain.

M:par kyun?

Ar:khul nahi raha hai isiliye.

Pr:yaar main toh thak gaya '.armaan ab tu try kar.

Armaan try karne lagata hai.

Ar:uff..kaisa darwaza hai.

M:darwaza todenge toh band kaise karenege.😕

Ri:dekhiye fihaal toh iss darwaze ka Khulna zaroori hai..band baadmein ho jayega.😡

Phir teeno use todne mein lag jaate hain.

M:jee aapse ek request hai

Ar:kya?

M:mere room mein bhi washroom ka darwaza nahi khul raha toh aap zara'😊

Ar:oye tabiyat theek hai na'darwaza todne ka kaam nahi hai humlog ka 'jaiye aur hotel walon ko complain kariye 😡

Woh aadmi wahanse bhag jaata hai.😆

Teeno wapas ussi kaam mein lag jaate hain.

Dusre room se koi hotel walon ko inform karta hai ki kuch log todfod kar rahe hain.

Mngr:arrey aap teeno yeh kya kar rahe hain?

Ri:iss darwaze ko tod rahe hain.

Mngr:par kyun?

Ar:shawk chad gaya.😡

Mngr:jee.

Pr:dekhiye yeh mera room hai hai ,meri wife andar kal raat se band hai aur mein pagalon ki tarah inlog ke room mein pada hoon'.aur yeh darwaza khulne ka naam nahi lee raha😡

Ri:aur toot bhi nahi raha hai.😡

Mngr:jee'humlogne itne mazboot darwaze lagaye hain ki yeh kabhi nahi toote.😃

Ar:chalo prem bomb dhund kar late hain.

Mngr:woh kyun?

Ar:hum aapse keh rahe hain ki iski wife andar hai..humhe yeh darwaza todna hai kyunki yeh khul nahi raha..aur aaplog apne darwazon ki tariff karne mein lage hain.😡

Mngr:arrey darwazza nahi khul raha tha toh staff ko inform karte

Pr:humne kiya tha inform 'raat ko hi 'kuch hua nahi toh humlog khud karne lage.

Receptionist:haan sir inlog ne inform kiya toh tha.

Mngr:toh ateend karna tha na ..kya hogaya?

G:sir woh shyaam nahi aaya hai ab tak'isiliye.

Pr:ab darwaze se uss shyaam ka kya lena dena.😕

Mngr:darasal woh hi aisa hai jis se yeh darwaza toot jayega.

Ar (whispers to prem n riddhima):haan han woh toh CID wala daya hai na uss se hi darwaza tudwayenge.😡

Pr:apne ko darwaza todawane se matlab phir woh koi daya ho ya shyaam apne ko kya.

Woh shyaam aakar darwaza todta hai.

Pr:yippee!!!!!😃

prem apne room mein bhag jaata hai aur ridzie bhi poonam se milne chali jaati hai.

Ar:accha sunno'.woh room mein jo bhi rehta hai uske room mein bhi darwaza nahi khul raha'woh bhi dekhlo.😕

woh bhi prem ke room mein ghuss jaata hai.


love

sammy

Edited by sammy4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
haha so funny darwaza nahi khul raha
toh tod rahe hain :P
cont soon
n thx for pm
luv
dhruvika

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