My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 29

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

tum sorry mat kaha karo....... mujhe accha nahi lagta.....

aur koi baat nahi bade bade shero mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai

aur mujhe tumhara update chota laga toh meri kya galti hai

tumhara ff hi itna perfect hai ki mujhe aur padne ka maan karta hai

aur tum thank you bhi mat bola karo kyunki dosti mein no thx

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

when are you updating the next part

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

hmm...this is gonna be fun...nupur is mayank's assistant..wat cud be more interesting than dis???luved it pooja....

Originally posted by: hazraluvroka

i read ur parts.

really ausum..

loved it..

u write so well..

Originally posted by: shruti1326

1 of the BEST MAYUR FF i have read 😃 keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

okies
no sorries then
hehehe, nice dialogue
original hai kya?😉
okies again, no thank u bhi,
happy?

Originally posted by: armayurfan

hey loved ur updates .
waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi pooja yaar plz soon update ok

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

plzzzzzzzz update soon

Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was fab

Sahi mein Bhagwan aur Pinci Nuos ko Mayu ke paas lana chahte hai😆😆

Loved wen Nups spoke to him that to so much in one breath Mana thats Nups speciality😆 par Mayank se bhi itni baat

Waise why she dosent takes her name yaar

Liked her caring Nature for her frnds and not frnds also

Their closeness was jus sho shweet

Loved it😉