My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 27

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

itna chota update tha.....

i mean mere liye bahut chota hai......

i can never get enough of your ff.......

i simply love it.......

the update was awesome......

glad you were able to update.......

mayank's jealousy was so cute.......

nupur is a perfect friend......

she helped adhiraj, suhani and sumit.......

loved the canteen mayur fall scene......

mayur garden talk was so cute.......

and the best was the last part......

continue soon

luv

mahima

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

That was a really nice update... Do continue PMing..

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey that was beautifully written, its really hard to find such great friends, I am so proud of N, would love to read ahead, i was also the editor of my law school's paper, wowwww it reminds of the old days man. They aren't really that old hehe.

Keep up the good work!

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

you forgot to reply to my comment

Originally posted by: ghtk1

fantastic update.enjoyed it thoroughly.do update fast.😊

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

hey i hv edited my post on pg 30..hv a grtday!!! 😊

Originally posted by: sonam961986

hi pooja .... just read the whole story ... it's beautiful .... plese pm me the next time you update .....

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

reserved...
#edited*
hey pooja....anothr grt ff 4 my sunday brunch!!! 😃 jst finished reading all d 5 parts in 1 go.... 😊 must say d story has now taken a gud exciting turn!!!! ⭐️ 👏 n i like 2 mention dat in d 1st part,d song frm titanic was jst brilliant!!!d aptest song ever!!! ⭐️ do continue soon hun... 😍
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

hey Mahi
i apologised for not replying
i just missed this page
sorry

okies
now,
to ur comment
ye bhi chhota tha,
haye rabba,
meri fingers ko heart attack aa gaya tha ye likhte likhte
i am so glad u love it
it means so much to me





i'll update asap

love u too
pooja