My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 17

Originally posted by: arunabehere

pooja it was long and sweet update ,mayank realised it it was really good

now MAYUR will be really interesting

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

omg pooja....great one...i just luved it when nupur forgave mayank.....the way she forgave mayank was really super sweet.......it describes her character a lott....n dat devdas part tho by god super funny tha....😆....looking forward to read d next part....and haan,i'll definitely pray for ur friends.......sure thing...

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

hello kulsum
wow, u finished them all, finally,
thanks for ur prayers
i'll try updating soon

Hi sweetu....loved ur update....i like nupur's character very much.....so pakka more of mayur in d next update na?

Originally posted by: kulsumd

Yup... 😉 yeah i had finally read all parts.. 😃 n waiting 4 d next update.. 😉 😛 😆

Originally posted by: cool_shwets

Hi sweetu....loved ur update....i like nupur's character very much.....so pakka more of mayur in d next update na?

n d devdas part loved it....was fun reading it....devdas no.5.....lolz

thanks for pm n do continue soon

Love,

shweta

Originally posted by: ridhima_sukirti

Awesome update !!

aww nupur 4gave him ...soo cute

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Beautifully written Pooja.. waiting eagerly for the next update..