My Untouched Desire (AR) pt 18 pg 136 - Page 9

Awesome update
missed armaan
can't believe atul and rahul cousins
I hope rahul doesn't fall 4 ridz
can't wait 4 the next update
con soon
thanks 4 the pm

hey dear awesome update

loved the entries of atul, rahul and muskaan.. it was superb part.. look forward to the next part!

so glad your writing another one! nice part, continue soon!

nice part

Howdy...lol the story's going suave...and well intriguing as well..gud gracious..rahul and riddhima are getting close as buddies ...nw nw she's got one more defense at college although muskaan's approach seems nrmal but fr an introvert lyk ridz a lil hazardous lol...she's her well wisher as well i'm pretty sure wen armaan said -a living nightmare he didn't mean it it was just an excuse to get closer nd nt let ppl know...hmm..well i cudn't care less i luv the way rahul and ridhhima's budding friendship is going on seems lyk a gud guy..atlst sum1 who cn support her in public..go ahead with the story asap...nd cud u pls pm me the next tym u update it...moreover is this ur 1st attempt u seem to be pretty gud at writing...i love the way they talked abt abhi being a student in the same college gosh itz one big possessive family nd sooner or later armaan's is just gonna add to the list of protective XY chromosomes arnd ridz...hey although the characters are mingling with MJHT's sets y nt get sapna in the show as well...lyk ridzi's friend or stmg??/

now pooja,