AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :) - Page 34

hey really good! loved it! please add me to your pm list!

Originally posted by: bary

oh god i am surprised u updated fatal end as i was expecting unwanted truth never mind u always surprise me,patting ur back😆
the part?is sahil the evil one?not abhi then dont say its rahul,u are damn unpredictable like DMG cvs but u are really good n cannot be compared to them😆
i read the whole ff to see whether i am reading right ff or not,two mysteries solved,armaan n riddhima both talking to abhi,rahul n abhi wanted riddhima to be armaan's wife,sahil is the one watching over her before reception?why is armaan that angry on riddhima?why armaan want to marry riddhima?
i know u say u will get in next part,but just filling my self😉
any way really wish we get next one soon after unwanted last part(mind to make it romantic)😳
thanks 4 pm
swetha

yeaaaaahhhh...i surprised you..😆.. okay now i am mad at you.. when did unknown truth changed to unwanted truth? You changed the name of the fic .not done swetha😡.. now i am thinking of canceling your surprise part. ;P
sahil is a new character and you know I won't reveal it here. have patience.😆.everything will be out from next part onwards. No more suspense and maybe you'll get a surprise in the form of............. first you tell me what you think and I'll tell you the surprise,"the main culprit"..😉
since you got the story right till now, I guess I am on the right track😛.. Armaan-Riddhima track and the secrets will come out slowly.. ab mein yaha to nahin bata sakti, the story will be over as soon as the secret is out, so i am stretching it like a chewing gum till it reaches the breaking stage. what a horrible example I have used here. 😆..
see you wrote it yourself, so fill yourself till I reveal it.😆..
again unwanted..now i am really mad at you😡 and mind it, don't come with the excuse of typing error. this is not a typing error, I know that.😆... you should have a good excuse for this mistake...otherwise.... I'll tell you later..😉 ...

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: here-i-am

loved the part
add me to ur pm list please

thanks dear.. glad to know you enjoyed the part. will Pm you from next time..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: lil_mizz_shawty

Unreserved!

Awesome part! There's so much suspence!! I wanna know who's took her!

Thanks for the PM!

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed the part. who took her will be out soon.😉..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

dear.....its really anything...

plz update next one soon want to know more...

thanks dipu...glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon



love
Riddss

thanks riddss..glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: swetha10

nice update... very exciting.. do continue soon

thanks swetha...glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love..
Mel..

hey just caught ur ff
it is full of suspenses
and i liked it very much
plsss cont soon
and pls add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: imshveta

Whoooohoho. That is another twist in the tale. Very gripping. I am really curious to know why and how of this Sahil guy.
It was a nice update but please please please continue soon.
Love
Shveta

thanks shveta. glad to know you enjoyed the part. Sahil mystery will be out in next 2-3 updates..

loads of love..
Mel...

Originally posted by: Lu_Armi

Loved The Part... Thanx 4 the PM... Great Work.....

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

fantastic update 👍🏼

thanks dear..glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love..
Mel...

Originally posted by: sammy4u

amazing updt yaar
loved it

thanks sammy ..glad to know you enjoyed it..

loads of love...
Mel..

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

OMG....she got kidnapped....

might be sahil.......coz abhi was wid armaan.....

n this whole plan was made by rahul....

but then y armaan is saying that she is not wat she looks..

so much suspense yaar....

cant wait for the next part....

plzzz update soon...

thnx for the pm............

thanks anu glad to know you enjoyed the update. yes she got kidnapped. let see who kidnapped it. Rahul is the man behind the whole set up but his plan didn't went the way he wanted.

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

Hey Mel Di........


Haww I loved the part!!

It was O think one of ur best!
I think It is Sahil who took her!

But I hope she is okay!!
Sorry for short comment but really got to go!!

Jinu!!

thanks jinil..glad to know you enjoyed it..aww that's so sweet of you..😳..
let see who took her..
yes will be, i'll make sure😆..
and don't be sorry for short reply..😊..

loads of love..
Mel..