Mayur FF-Nafrat se Mohabbat #2 Part 17-pg72

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Chandni

@Chandni-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

AWESOME UPDATE i feel so bad for Nupur i really want to know wht happened and ARJUN is SHO SHWEET thnks for the pm

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

awesome part dear
Mayank n arjun convo vz soo cute...
Piya n arjun tying boss shoe lace while reading i also broke into laughter..
Arjun is such a naughty n sweet boy...
Teddy n daddy talk vz cute..
Mayur convo vz emotional.feeling sad 4 both mayur...plz make mayur n arjun together...do continue soon..
Thanx 4 d update

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

nidzy yaar totally mind blowing update
i love each part of thsi specially the boss humpty dumpty fall i love it
arjun is so sweet
and pia too
yaar plz do something i know nupur is right but plz do something which change her thoughts which less her pain

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Nidzy, I know your hands must be hurting after writing such a long part... but it is beautiful part.... you wrote wonderfully...

You described Mayank and Nupur's pain perfectly.... very touching and heart-wrenching update...

But the little angel Arjun was so cute... and his naughty tricks were awesome... made me smile...

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

awesum part yr

loved it a lot

long part aqnd interesting one

mayank knw abt his son

no dont sent mayank back

cont soooon

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

wow.....

awesomeeeeeeee update!!!!!

poor nupur and mayank....

continue soon!

thanks for the pm

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

OMG!

This was a huge update

and you lived up to it

wow just wow

I am truly amazed

claps for you!!!!

so much happened

I can't even say it in my review/comment

but my favorite scenes were:

-the Arjun-Pia scene where Arjun tied the shoes

-When Mayank came with Arjun to Nupur's house

But seriously

I am impressed by this part

this was the best written part so far

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

nidzyyyyyyyyyyy

yeh tumne kya kiya

abhi tume bilkul mafi nmahi milegi

wht is this

first of all mayur met''

and then this nupur

tumr maafi chahiyer kya

aye madam

im very angry yaar

this nupur is sooooooooo

i hate yaar

and this soooooo arjun is soooooooo adorable

i love him yaar

hes damn shweet

chalo ab plzzzzz pehle isska next

part ke pehle

lu aur tm update karo

aur fir isska nxt part

contnue soon

plzz ab jaldi

love pebbzzyy

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#209

OMG SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely part!!!!!
I dont know how to describe it!!
I was JUST TOOO GOOD!
Plz update soon!
I cant wait untill nupur forgives him..