Mayur SS Part 23pg 98 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago

😲very shocking promo

con't soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
twist...............
oh god my nups was crying...........
do continue soon...........😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
so shocking yaar.......
but i still have some hope......
maybe they are acting in front of ria........
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice but shocking promo. update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!! what a twist... eagerly waiting for da next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Did i read correctly? Looks like you have learnt from the Cv's how to shock the viewers... i need an update ASAP....
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 4

Mayank and nupur both enter the college just to see the gang waiting for them in the canteen. Both mayank and nupur went to the place where gang was sitting.

"Dude mujhe nahi pata tha mayank sharma gaana bhi gaata hai" said samrat

"pata to mujhe bhi nahi tha" said mayank looking at nupur

"Waise nupur I must say tum bohot lucky ho jo tumhe mayank jaisa husband mila" said dia

"Haan di aap sach much bohot lucky ho jo aapko jiju jaise husband mile" said gunjan handing over the coffee to nupur

"Sorry guys lucky nupur nahi lucky main hoon jo mujhe nupur jaisi wife mili jo meri wife ke saath saath meri best friend bhi hai, jiske saath main aapni har problem solve kar sakta hoon" said mayank placing his hands around nupur's shoulder

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" said gang

"mayank sharma aapko principal sir ne bulaya hai" said peon

"Guys I will be back" said mayank ad went to meet prince

While mayank was returning from princi's office a girl came and hugged mayank tightly. Mayank was shocked by this even the gang who were watching it were shocked to see.

"Hi mayank, god I missed u so much" said the girl breaking the hog

"Ria tum yaha" asked mayank

"samrat yeh ladki kaun hai jis se mayank baat kar raha hai" asked nupur who saw mayank talking with ria joyfully

"Woh ria hai, jo mayank ko bohot like karti hai par mayank hai ki use bahv hi nahi deta" said samrat

Both mayank and ria came to the canteen.ria greeted every one except gunur.

"Guys yeh dono kaun hai mujhe introduce nahi karwaoge" said ria holding mayanks arm who seemed to be irritated with ria.

"Ria yeh hai gunjan, meri chasmish meri girlfriend aur mera pyaar" said samrat

"Aur yeh nupur hai meri wife, meri best friend in short who meri life hai" said mayank placing his hands around nupur's waist while nupur just blushed. Ria after hearing it stood shocked. After sometime she started to laugh which confused the gang.

"Mayank tum kab se majak karne lag gaye. Shaadi aur tum aur who bhi isse sorry nupur par main jitna mayank ko jaanti hoon mujhe nahin lagata tum mayank ke type ki ho" said ria trying to control her laughter. Nupur was very much hurt with what ria said right now. Tears formed in her eyes but she somehow managed not to show that she was hurt but the least she knew was mayank knew she was hurt with ria's words. He saw tears in her eyes. He was angry with ria for making his love sad and hurting her.

"Ria u r wrong nupur is the perfect one for me. Nupur hi who ladki hai jisne mujhe life kaise jeete hai yeh bataya aur mere har kadam par mera saath diya agar uski jagah koi aur hota to shayad who mere liye yeh sab nahi karta aur sabse badi baat ye hai ki main nupur se aur nupur mujhse pyaar karti hai" said mayank pulling nupur close to him while ria was shocked to hear what mayank said but at the same time she was angry since mayank said all this thing to ria in front of the whole group which she thought was an insult to her. Soon the bell rang and the gang went for their classes. After the class mayank had some work in library so he asked nupur to move a head and he would later join her. As nupur was walking ria stopped her.

"hey nupur sorry subh canteen main jo kuch bhi hua isliye" said ria

"It's ok ria" said nupur

"Par fir bhi main yehi kahungi jitna main mayank ko jaanti hoon mujhe nahi lagta tum mayank ke type ki ho. Mayank aur who bhi ek village girl se pyaar it really dosen't match u know. Aur dekhona ab tumse shaadi ke baad use kitni problems ho rahi hai. Use ab sirf tumhari wajah se part time job bhi karna pad raha hai. Any ways mere baton ka bura mat maanana par maine wohi kaha jo mujhe laga" said ria with smirk on her face and left the place. Nupur after hearing this was hurt.she thought she was the reason for mayank's problem moreover whatever dia and gunjan told her in canteen too bothered her now. She thought may be every one is right that she is lucky to have mayank in her life even though she does not deserve him. A lone drop of tear fell from her eyes she quickly wiped her tears and went to canteen where mayank was waiting for her. After nupur came both mayank and nupur left for house. The whole evening nupur did'nt say a word. Mayank was worried for nupur. He wanted to ask what was troubling her but he thought it was not the right time to ask so he kept quite. After dinner both went to sleep.

"Mayank please mat jao" said nupur crying

"nahi nupur mujhe jaana hai shayad ria sach hi keh rahi thi, aaj mujhe lag raha hai tumse shaadi ka faisla meri life ki sabse badi galti thi" said mayank and went from there not even looking at nupur who was crying very badly

"mayankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk" yelled nupur

with nupur's voice mayank got up from the sleep just to see his wife sitting on the bed. Nupur was sweting with fear as she saw mayank she hugged him tightly and started to cry. This made mayank worry more.

" mayank please mujhe chod ke mat jao. Main jaanti hoon main tumhari type ki nahin hoon par main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon mayank. Mujhe pata hai meri wajah se tumhe bohot problems hui hai mayank par please mujhe chod ke mat jao" said nupur between her sobs while mayank consoled her. He was first shocked to hear what nupur was saying but then understood that may be today whatever ria told nupur was hurt with that and this was thing which was bothering her.

"Shhhhhhhhhhh nupur chup ho jao main tumhe chod ke kahin nahi jaa raha shayad tumne koi bura sapna dekha hai" said mayank cupping nupur's face and wiped the tears.

"nupur tum meri zindagi ho meri saans ho koi aapne saason ko chod ke kaise jee sakta hai aur jahan tak baat ria ki hai to uski baaton ka humare zindagi main koi importance nahi hai aur tumhari wajh se mujhe problem nahi hoti balki meri problems kum hoti hain. Tum hi to ho jiske saath main aapni life ki har problem share karta hoon" said mayank consoling nupur who was still hugging him and crying. She was afraid of loosing mayank the person who was her life her whole world.

"Mayank tum mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaaoge naa" asked nupur between her sobs

"Nahin kabhi nahin is janam me to kya agle saath janam tak tumhara peecha nahi chodunga" said mayank in filmy way to which nupur hit him on her shoulder

"ouchhhhh" said mayank

"Nupur agar tum mujhe aise hi marogi naa to main 100% yahan se jaa raha hoon" said mayank and got up from the bed and was about to move when nupur held his hand and hugged him tightly.

"Agar tum jahnoon(hell) main gaye naa to wahan se tumhe le aaongi samjhe" said nupur and both burst out laughing

hope u like it

plz do comment

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear!!!
awesummm upd8!!!
that was sooo cute!! :)
btw...m the first one to comment... :P
thanx 4 d pm.. :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome awesome awesome

luved it to da core....
marvellous writing skills...
superb update dear!!!!
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute.............i wish instead of the crap, we cud have got this

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