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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: wow123

Sorry for late reply dear. Actaully caught with my own so much that doesn't have courage to write anything else.

Well i loved their cabin scene even i have the same smile on my face as Nikki after getting out his cabin. Armaan spolit my mood by dragging in uhealthy discussion btw him n Nikki.

Awww Nikki didn't realize the time to go Abh's home in the night. Abhi is so sweet that inspite of so tired he took care of her. I was imagine on how Nikki is looking in Abhi's shirt, i wish she wear his blue shirt that pool side one.heheh

I faint by reading ur last scene on the sofa.😳😳😳😳 *sharam se lalam lal* 😆😆

Continue i know u r not going to leave any chance to faint me....................

Aww Shale I loved your FF! 🤗 Really, really good job! 👏

Yeah I was having a lot of fun writing that cabin scene! 😆

They needed that talk, Armaan and Nikki. We're blaming Armaan for everything, but then even Nikki hasn't told him everything khullam khulla. They're both flawed characters, and they both have different views on this. They just need to look at it from each other's position, problem solved. 😃

And I was itching to write a hell lot more in that sofa scene but I stopped myself...it wouldn't go well with the entire scenario, with Nikki being so upset about the whole thing.

Thanks for the comment!

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#782

hey i like ur ff so much.though im regula silent reader... im commentin 4 d first time. actualy i m new here .... waitin for next updates. bye.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#783

Awww lovely sneak peek.. Waitin for the update:)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#784

Oh lovely you have updated as well.. Havent been around so didnt know.. Will read it soon and give my comments.. Thanks Khush:)

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#785

@Kalindi...

I love this! Wonder how I didn't see it before...Sayru is awesome!

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#786

part11

i love nikki's fierce yet subtle concern... she's just the character for it! and i can imagine vivid scenes when i read it like that... in fact, tbh - i think i prefer AN best this way... when they aren't the hilt of extreme emotions, but so deep into their characters with the most subtle of signs... great moving the track here khushi - and i know this may be the armaan fan in me talking, but i wish he just wasn't around that much in this FF than to keep showing up and rebelling illogically :| but thats what the show did to him in the AN track right? oh well!!!

part 12

yeh, i repeat... i like the slow but sure movement in the AN bond much more than any of the rushed options. i like how AN are being - well, easy and comfortable in each other's presence. vishal is sure a mte, even in his loss abhi benefits in the big picture - hopefully he recovers without much ado!

part 13

i love the bit about her using his shirt for a personal handkerchief and him actually cursing to not have offered her a real one - aww her dog and pingo is SO cool a name! he he! yeh, this was cute, and the end was a sure build up ... i'm going to continue reading it from here soon - bookmarked at this point for now!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#787

@Jyothi...yes yes I know! Have written 2 pages of the next part and I promise you it's worth the wait...I'll write the rest soon and post! Am busy with the AN Challenge wrapping up, you see!

@nj...wow, you read them finally! Yeah I really liked one thing about the AN track...that they were so comfortable in each other's presence even when not a together. They were not a couple but still everyone around them would think they were...few couples achieve that, and AN were one of them. Yes Armaan was a real kabaab mein haddi and this FF mainly deals with him. He'll be a thorn for quite a while, am sorry to say. But oh well, glad you got reading this again and hope you continue! Looking forward to your comments on the next parts!

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#788

Khush yaar aisa kya likh rahi ho jo ab tak pur anahin ho paya.

Kyu CV ki tarah hume hope deke adhe main lataka k chali gayi ho

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#789

@Shale...yaar tum mujhe DMG ke CVs se compare kar rahi ho? Kya insult kiya mujhe!!! *highly offended* :P

Yaar you'll see what I'm upto when I post it na! Wait wait...I need it to be good.

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
@Shale...yaar tum mujhe DMG ke CVs se compare kar rahi ho? Kya insult kiya mujhe!!! *highly offended* :P
Yaar you'll see what I'm upto when I post it na! Wait wait...I need it to be good.

tum mujhe precap dikha bhaag jo gayi.😆

BBNH jaisa precap dikhaya hain now don't cut it off main scenes.I don't like chopped AN scenes

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