SANRAJ*Moment** WATCHING Part 6** (P48 Pg143) - Page 49

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Posted: 15 years ago
WOOOOOW...really, excellent writing, da way you discribed his feelings was really shakespearean language...felt like i waz reading romeo and juliet....really bravooooo =D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: DmLovesSantu

Sorry for the late reply shah...

Awwwwwwww I love love love ur FF..❤️.soo Romantic dear.☺️.. I felt like I was watching an actuall scene while reading ur FF.. sooo sweet.. our sanraj finally getting their own little bundle of joy... DM playing with the workers baby... thinking that in 6 months It'll be him holding his and his priya santudi's pyaar ki nishani...☺️. was sooo cute...and Santu hugging her Maalik so affectionate.. 😍😍😍.. Shah please please continue asap ... U r leaving us all thirsty for more.. and Please continue being this ROmantic as It melts my heart when I read it.😍 .. and the song ☺️😍 soo sweet.. I kno its one of ur Fav.. (what a track)... u rock HUn Muahz..🤗



Thanks Sam love u loads, waiting for that day to happen in reel Bandini!😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HAOOY

SHAHARA...MY ever die hard ROMANTIC like me...awwwwwwwwww.🤗.you are full filling all my dreams ..into reality by your fanfics..THEY ARE JUsT MIND BLOWING SCENES..shahara..I really mean it from the bottom of my heart & that song..."Peheli nazar mein..awwwwww..Just perfect to our Sanraj..like many many others... love-hema 😳



Thanks Hema my diehard romantic pal 😍 I' glad I can fulfil my firends wishes. 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: azna

WOOOOOW...really, excellent writing, da way you discribed his feelings was really shakespearean language...felt like i waz reading romeo and juliet....really bravooooo =D


Azna, your really making me blush, love us loads 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

Hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon



Thanks 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago


Thanks Priya 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Shah...i'm so eagerly waiting for next dose.. Got to knw ur lappy had a heart attack...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal30

Shah...i'm so eagerly waiting for next dose.. Got to knw ur lappy had a heart attack...



yep still without will get this week once its back will type up and post soon 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Salaam Friends

Hi guys I'm back with more of our favourite Jodi our Dufford couple SANRAJ!

Sanraj story continues from the

Part 20 - DM after the News of the Expected One both arriving home

and here goes.................

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Blessing of SANRAJ's Joy

Part 21



Baa pacing the floor with the Tali anxiously waiting at the front entrance door for SANRAJ. Baa spots SANRAJ walking towards the house, her eyes light up and with her excitement she wobbles over towards the door and calls out to everyone as if she is the siren...


Baa: Thoral, Khaddu, Birwa, Hiten, Suraj tere Maa aur Pappa avi, jaldi usku swagat kari, jaldi jaldi!! Santu, Dharamraj ruku ruku!!!! (your Maa and Pappa have come, come quick and welcome them, quick, quick, SANRAJ wait wait!!) 😛


Santu: Kyu Baa?


DM: Areh Dufford, jese Baa bholti, vesi kar (do as Baa says)


Santu: Ji Malik, Malik upp ki hatt! (yes Malik, Malik your hand!) 😳


DM: Mari hatt? (my hand?)


DM looks at his hand still around Santu, he looks towards Baa who is smiling looking at DM as if to say "so what, whats up, you love your wife you dufford so what everyone sees!!" with a laugh to herself. DM embarrassed wipes Santu's arm and looks at Santu and says....


DM: There...there....was a spider so I wiped it off, no need to worry, I know Santudi is scared of Spiders.


Suraj: Nai Pappa, Maa spider ki neih darti, uski marteheh
(Maa is not afraid of spiders, she whacks them)


DM: It was a BIG SPIDER, not small, it was the size of my fist
😡


DM scrunches his hand together into a tight fist to show Suraj and thinking to himself Suraj shut up you dufford
before you blow my cover, Suraj gets scared and his grabs on to Santu. Baa laughs and Santu looks at DM and DM shakes his head, Santu smiles trying to cover her laugh.


Baa: Stop playing, everyone let me carry on with the ritual of welcoming my Santuri and Dharamraj and my grandson!


Baa holds the Tali and moves it round in circes infront of SANRAJ, puts tikka on their forehead ad feeds the Prasad. SANRAJ both go down and take blessing from Baa and Bapuji. Bapuji helps Santu up and says...


Bapuji: Daughters do not touch their Father's feet, they give them a hug.

Santu has tears in her eyes and she rushes into Bapuji's arms and hugs him with her tears of joy.

Bapuji: May my Daughter always be happy and if there are tears in her eyes, that they are only tears of joy. May you and Dharamraj always be happy together hamesha.


Baa: Ey Santuri, where's your Maa's hug???


Santu lets go of Bapuji and moves towards Baa who has her arms out open wide for Santu to settle herself there, Santu stops infront of Baa and looks into those kind loveable familiar eyes that had lived nearly a 100yrs which witnessed alot of grief, sadness and happiness but when the happiness came it made up all the sorrow experienced that had happened in their lives. They both have the same expressions on their faces of pure joy, happiness, no need to say anything as they felt the same and the bond between them was soo strong that they sensed what eachother were thinking and saying to eachother. Santu and Baa had accepted eachother years ago as Mother and Daughter and that was it, Baa did get angry at Santu when she lied about killing Arjan but the time spent in jail, it was Baa who was beside DM all the way helping him to get Santu freed and justice. Baa's anger at the time she slapped Santu was that Santu lied and made herself look bad and let her down and for that moment when her body was taken over she misread her Daughter's good intentions, the sacrifices she made for her children, her happiness but thank Gauriamaa all was sorted and she came back to her senses knowing that her Daughter was pure and sacred as the Ganga plant that protected them and their house in the Angaan, Santu proven innocent and that good prevailed over the wrong. Santu collapses into Baa's bosom with Baa wiping Santu's happy tears and hugging her with all the strength she had in her tiny old body. The comfort of those arms were the second place Santu felt safe and comforted and knowing she be protected from anyone and this person would also fight for her and keep her safe. 😭😊

Santu: Baa

Baa: Ha beta

Santu: How do you know its going to be a boy? 😕

Baa: Trust me 😃 I know, my Grandson will be exactly like my Dharamraj strong follow in his Father's footsteps with the softness warm heart of his Mother who binds everyone together and will have a good knowledgable head on his shoulders. My Grandson will love and protect his Maa and Pappa unconditionally and this child will not demand anything but follow the nature of his Maa and Pappa who live for eachother and everyone else. My Grandson will shadow his Maa and Pappa into their old age like how my Dharamraj and Santuri has done for me and Bapuji. There are times when we think that the person above does not listen but he always does, sometimes we have to go through the bad in order to be rewarded with good, we get tested in everything we do and patience and good deeds and intentions always gets rewarded, me and your Bapuji never were blessed with a Son but later we were blessed with Dharamraj and then we gained another Daughter who is our ladli 😳 I prayed for this day for you both and with all your lifes good work HE listened to us and HE will certainly listen for this hope of a Son. Aur....look at me.....crying like a mad women......


Santu wipes Baa's tears telling her to be quiet. DM in all the time is standing next to Baa watching and listening to his Mother and Wife the two most important women in his life. DM happy with all that Baa has said and also prayed that they have a Son so that when he is not there, he knows that their Son will always look after Santu. He knows that all their kids love Santu as their Mother, Birwa and Suraj he has no doubt will always be with Santu they considered Santu as their biological Mother and loved her unconditionally and stand by her, Hiten, Khaddu and Moulik were not so strong as Birwa and Suraj but he still wanted that security that when he is not here later in the future hoping and praying that he can live as many years with Santu that there is someone their Son their pyar ki nishani there to protect and look after his Santudi in order for him to be at peace and wait till the day they are reunited again in their next lifetimes. 😭


Thoral: Nani, let me hug my Sassumaa, Sassumaa, did you know that I've cooked all yours and Pappa's favourite dishes! just like how you showed me, your mouth with be watering 😃


Hiten: And your eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thoral: Ey Chuppp!!!! I heard that, my Sassumaa showed me how to cook these dishes and I followed her instructions step by step!


Hiten: And something would have gone wrong during this process when your head would have been away day dreaming about the party planning, you do rememeber the difference between namak and sakar??
grinning at Thoral


Thoral: Your talking too much yaar! snapping her fingers at him..😡


Birwa: Hitenbhai, Bhabhi followed Maa's receipe, I watched and helped so it will be delicious but it wont taste the same like Maa's who has magic in her hands, once you eat you cannot stop and you end up licking your plate clean, kya Pappa????

DM: Ha, tere bhatt bilkul such heh, tere Maa ki hatt koy jhadu heh
(yes, what you said is completely true, your Maa has some magic in her hands)


Thoral: So Pappa, you wont eat my hand made food?


DM: Nai, esse bhatt naih, meih tujeh kya sumjuw?
(no its not like that, how do I make you understand?)


Santu: Come lets eat, Thoral's cooking I know will be amazing and my Birwa helped, the smell is drawing me in, I am hungry 😊


Thoral: Sassumaa 😛 see I'm glad your home, this Hiten never knows when or how to open his mouth 😡 Please teach your ghadera Son how to talk to his wife and what he should and should not say or do! Actually.....he has become a BIG BABY, I'm glad that you will be getting a new baby because this BABY needs to relaise he is no longer 5 he is 25yrs old! He is too used to being pampered by his Maa's touch and cooking, Sassumaa this is your fault, its time for a change!!!!
🤓 Thoral rubbing her hands together Lets see what I cook up, wait and watch Mr Hiten 😆 Come Sassumaa. Thoral walks Santu to the dinning table and says..... You know what I hear one of my friends say, she said when your near delivery eat spicy food or do something so then the baby will pop right out, what was the other thing it involved.....???? 😆


Baa: Ey Thoral, serve the food quick, yeh ladki, kya kya bholeh??
(this girl, she says anything!)


Suraj: Baby pops rights out? whose baby? where?


DM: Ey Suraj, stop parrotting just when the subject gets changed, this duffords repeats.


DM picks Suraj up in his arms and walks over to the dinning table whispering to him
explaining that he will get a baby brother soon.


Suraj: 😲 KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone starts laughing and sits down to dinner.


To be continued...........


Precap: ....Santu falls into DM's arms, DM looks cross and Bapuji squashes something....


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Edited by Shahara3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome epi.................... 👏 👏 so sweet......waitin for d nxt part....santu fallin into DM's arms 😳 😳 😳

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