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Posted: 15 years ago

Domestic DM

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Part 11


Continued......


Its a hot afternoon, Moti, Baa, Bapuji, Hiten and Thoral are all sitting in the hall joking about. Santu and Champa come in with ice cold Mango juice.


Bapuji: Areh wa, you read my mind beta, I have been sitting here for so long and your Baa has forgotten all about me, its a good thing my daughter is here or else who would notice me, look i think even my Kurta is getting loose, your Baa doesn't feed me.


Baa: Aacha.... that Kurta I had to take out and sew up again as all you seem to do is eat, everyday I have to scold you to not eat soo much, your just like a child. Arehh Santuri, no more mitay for your Bapuji, if you give him any even I will scold you.


Bapuji: Dekho.....Hiten, your Nani is not letting me eat drink which happily fills my stomach, ey Vasudha, have you never heard the saying a way to a man's heart is through his stomach? (Bapuji is patting his stomach) this is just water retention not fat and I am big boned.


Baa: Ha, you keep thinking like that.


Hiten: It does sound like there is water in there (Hiten is shaking Bapuji's stomach and listening and laughing)


Thoral: Baa, I have an idea, it will be up to me and Hiten to get Nanaji in to top shape. Every morning at 6am we will go for jogging. We shall hold a Mahiyavanshi sports day on Sunday and there will be 2 teams. Boys vs Girls, Hahahaha (Thoral is clapping her hands at her idea)


Hiten: 6am! Wot, are you mad?


Bapuji: Don't I get a say? (looking side to side)


Thoral: No, Nanaji, look Hiten, Bapuji needs to get fit and you, hmm (eyeing him up and down) you seem to be putting on weight as well, people will say Thoral Ki Pati bohot Moti Hogayee. Na na na, that will not do (shaking her head)


Hiten: You will be the death of me.


Bapuji: Welcome to married life, it goes downhill from now.


Baa: What, what did you say?


Bapuji: Nothing my jann, just giving Hiten some loving advice about.... stuff, you won't understand (winking at Hiten who hides his laugh by covering his mouth)


Santu: Choro, drink up before the ice melts.

Santu is serving everyone drinks and rushing around not thinking of taking a drink herself. DM has just walked in and is watching Santu run around, he can see she looks tired and she looks flustered wiping her forehead with her saree.

Santu: Malik, Upp Agaya, meih uppkeli panni lekhr ateyhu? (you've come, I will get water for you)


Santu comes running out with a glass of water and hands it to DM to drink and then runs off saying she forgot that the dhal was still bubbling on the cooker. She runs back to the kitchen. DM gets blessing from Baa and Bapuji and then follows behind Santu to the kitchen. DM watches her working away busily and has a smile on his face thinking dufford smacking his head. He walks up behind her and puts his glass of water to her lips and makes her drink it. Santu is shocked thinking why is Malik feeding me his water that I got for him?


DM: Ah I feel much better now, that glass of water was so refreshing.


Santu: Malik, that was your water and how are you refreshed, I drank it?


DM: You drank it, I drank it, its the same. I was watching you once I walked through the door and all I could see was you running around like a servant to everyone giving everyone drinks but not taking anything for yourself and I know you haven't stopped since you woke up! I love you for serving our family members but remember that you also a family member and not their servant. I don't like this, I will tell Thoral she must also help she is Bohuu, you are her Sass, Thoral is Hiten's Patni and after all she needs to learn how to run a house and family the responsibilities that go with it and you will teach her I am sure of it and I will ask Motiben to help whilst she is here. I will take Hiten to Factory and he will be shadowing me by being my apprentice so he learns the ropes of the business which will free up my time more and I can spend more time with everyone at home.


Santu: But Malik this is my duty to you, my elders and my children...and....


DM: Dufford, remember you are also DIL, Mother, Sass, Malkin of this house and most importantly my Wife! So drink up, relax and don't take tension, meih ho na! (I am here)


Santu is really happy hearing these words from DM and did not say anything but just did as he said and fed him the remainder of the water in the glass.


Moti is standing at the door annoyed with the love DM is showering over Sanduri thinking Nanka has changed so much that she cannot recognise him anymore, he was now always coming home in the afternoon from the factory to have lunch with Santuri and family, never did he act like this with Subudhra, why was he like this with her, how could he betray Subudhra? Anger rushes through Moti's body and she storms off.


DM: Ok let me help you with the dhal, I will fry the garlic in the oil and put it into the dhal, give me the spoon and you start on the rotis.


Santu picks up a dough ball and start patting it with powder and then starts rolling the roti out in to perfect circles. Santu is getting tired and then DM comes up behind her wraps his arms around her body puts his hands on her hands and assists in the rolling process. Santu is taken back by his sudden movements and just stands there letting him help her, she is smiling and then giggling.


DM: Shoo Santudi?


Santu: Malik, what are you doing?


DM: Whats it look like? Helping my wife cook lunch, helping her roll out perfect round rotis, the texture and the taste of these rotis will be superb. It is also practice for when you won't be able to come into the kitchen.


Santu: Why won't I be able to come into the kitchen Malik?


DM: Dufford when we have our children, when we get pregnant, I will be up at who knows what time in the middle of the night getting you snacks when you start having cravings ha ya na? I will have to become domestic DMDKM for my dufford DM has smile on his face whilst teasing


Santu: Malik you would really do that for me? Beaming up at him


DM: Mere Priya Santudi, if I don't then who will, am I not your husband? I missed out a lot from my kids and I don't want to make this mistake again, I have been given a second chance with my children and our up and coming children, I want to be part of the upbringing of all our children as I promised you when we spent the day at the village that night on the Pier, remember.


Santu: Ha Malik, I remember, those words are always with me, very dear to me locked in my heart and I promise I will be the best mother to our children and you will always be with me so I wont worry, our children will get both mother and father's love.


DM leans down and tries to kiss her but Santu picks up a roti and put it in the way, DM ends up kissing the roti, Santu just laughs and tries to move away.


DM: You need to try harder thats not going to stop me.


DM grabs the roti chucks it in the air and swings his Santudi around and gives her long sweet kiss on her lips and Champakali walks in and turns back around and out again with a giggle and DM nor Santu realise but sweet Champakali let them have their sweet private moment.


Santu: Malik enough, you said you were helping me make lunch are you not hungry.


DM: I got taster, but still hungry for more!


Santu: Malik upp be na!

DM and Santu carry on with making the rotis,

DM rolls the rotis and Santu heats them on the hot tal.

To be continued......................

Precap...DM is talking to Kanji on the phone and asks him to come to the factory tomorrow, he needs to talk to him about current living arrangements.

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Edited by Shahara3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
DM: Dufford when we have our children, when we get pregnant,😲🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Sahar you made my day.. Dharampur ka maalik pregnant🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome epi Shahara!👏Waitin 4 da next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammoos

DM: Dufford when we have our children, when we get pregnant,🤣 Sahar you made my day.. Dharampur ka maalik pregnant🤣🤣🤣



🤣 thats what my husband said when i got pregnant, "We get pregnant" nice to make you laugh
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aparakshitij

Awesome epi Shahara!👏Waitin 4 da next part...



Thanks Apara, couldn't sleep so got this up nxt part in my head but tired now going to ZZzzzzzz off.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow shahara,nice epi...DKMDM pregnent...[:o(]...Our sanraj romance in kitchen...thnk god champa didnt disturb our luv birds...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shahara luuuuuv it the story was sooo sweeet dm helpin his santurii how sweet the kiss, his carin , her smiles all so romantic luv it darlin brilliant keep it up
Edited by DmLovesSantu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
our dm so romantic and luvly hubby aha............ thaks fr such a sweet epi...............👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shahara, amazing epi. Jus loved this when we get pregnant...DMDKM 😆😆 Champa this is 4 u👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
okay shaz...one word
FANTASTIC!!
i mean wow - i loved the bapuji baa comedy and then torla idea of sports day - yay just like old bandini
and then DM help her to mkae rotis hands around her😍
shah you won my heart today by writing this FF - really loved it!!
always wanted to write osmehting like this - but neevr got round to it - but thank you for writing it!!!
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