AnotherChanceForUs-Prt.7 Updt 1/30 pg16 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
hey sheena di..aww np!..
i understand ur situation, even mah comp betrays me sometimes!..have fun in brazil..
will wait 4 u 2 update
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Hi guys ! u shd save ur work by sending it as an email to ur own adress so that you dont loose it cause i hear this a lot .... 'my hard dsik crashed " so be proactive !!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

hey sheena do u remembr me?????? 😳 hey ur ff is so nice .nice concept!👏

plzzzz dear tak ur time. n coun as soon as possibl. m waiting despirately😃
lotz of lov n hugzzz 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
hello , pls update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
She's put this on hold...
*sticks out tongue at Sheena*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
"Mumma?"


"Haan, beta?"


"Why don't I have a daddy?"


Amit's innocent question brings the pang of guilt back. I should tell him.


"Well, beta, you'll get one very soon."


"Does that mean that you will get married?"


"Well, yes."


"And I'll have to change my last name?"


"Yeah…but only if you want to."


"What is my last name gonna be?"


"Mo- I mean, Saxena."


God, I think. Did I really almost say MODI?


"Hmmmmm…Amit Saxena. Mumma, doesn't that sound like a hero's name?"


"Of course it does! Because you ARE my hero!"


Amit giggles. "Mumma!"



"What?! I was just saying the truth! Mera beta aaj se bees (20) saal baad, hero banega! Yeh ek maa ka dil kehta hain!" I proclaim.


Amit laughs so hard that his milk comes out of his nose.


"Mumma, you're so funny!"


We both laugh and eat silently, overlooking the beautiful view of the city from our balcony.


Amit suddenly becomes serious.


"Mumma, who is my daddy?"


"Kya?"


"Mumma, who is my daddy? I want to know! Please tell me."


"Beta, not right now; maybe later."


Amit can understand the tone of my voice.


"Go get ready for bed. I'll come later."


He leaves, and I clean the table. Why do kids have to be so curious all the time?


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The next day is a big day for me. Mr. Dhruv Saxena is coming to meet me.


All of a sudden, I remember something.


Oh, shit. I'm dead.


Amit doesn't have school today. It's a holiday.


Okay, let me think. I can take Amit to the hospital and let Atul take care of him— oops! Atul has a surgery. Umm, I can take Amit anyways and let him stay with me until Atul's out of surgery and make sure Abhi doesn't see him. Perfect!


But how do I see to it that Abhi doesn't see him?

********************************************************************


Next part on Monday!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
Yayyy me first!
*EDIT*
Itna chhota?
Chalo update to kiya at least! 😛
Hmm...good good...
So Nikki was gonna say "Modi", huh? 😳

Wahi to sach hone wala hai...ab you can't run from destiny, can you! 😉 😃
I hope Abhi sees her the next day! 😃
Can't wait for Monday! You better keep your promise! 😡
And me loves you for updating! Even if a small one, thanks! 😃
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
nice part yaar sheena but plzzzz no amit sexena sounds bad amit modi sounds better gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
pls update ... love this ff ...
i really like this style of writing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
First of all Sheena .Welcome back dear.Its good to see u back.
AN fiction thread is empty without u.How can we search for new AN fiction??
Thanks for update dear.I remmember this story.Nice update.Short but end on curosity.Take care of urself.
Love u.🤗

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