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Posted: 15 years ago
ok
starting obviously from start, means from start of ff
i have read the whole of it right now
n am happy about it
otherwise like others my name will also be in those, dying for waiting for the update
ok
awesome ff
brilliantly written
tooooo good
n last but not the least
do continue soon plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

ok

starting obviously from start, means from start of ff
i have read the whole of it right now
n am happy about it
otherwise like others my name will also be in those, dying for waiting for the update
ok
awesome ff
brilliantly written
tooooo good
n last but not the least
do continue soon plzzzzzzzz

hahahahahahahahahahaah glad that you didnt have to wait !!!!! Hopefully i would be able to update nw regularly !!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys I am back with update finally on time !!!!!! Hehehehehehehehehehe !!!!!!! So here it goes !!!!!

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Update 3 ' Preparations

Scene 1 ' Samrat's house

Samrat was so happy today . He swirled around the room happily collecting his things & throwing them in the briefcase like a small child locked in the disney world with a permission that he can play with any toy and then throw it away anywhere . Just then benji n uday arrivedand they stood shell shocked in the middle of the door on seeing samrat dancing around in the room . They blinked few times like this all woul dissolve like a dream by doing so !!!!!

U :- " Ek min benji main aaya '''"

Benji looked at uday and tried to say smthng but no voice came out only his lips moved .

U :- " Sound to de benji !!!!!!! "

B ( his voice still shaky ) :- " Kahaan ja rha hai ???? "

U :- " Abhi aaya yahi rukna '''' "

Uday runs out of the house and came back within two minutes . Benji was still standing shell shocked in the doorway . Uday came n stood beside him with utterly confused expressions .

B :- " kahaan gaya tha ? "

U :- " Name plate check karne !!!!! "

B :- " Hain ??????? "

U :- " Yaar name plate pe naam top sam ke dad ka hi hai , address bhi wahi hai , ghar bhi dekha dekha lag raha hai , to fir ye duniya bhar ka change is ek hi kamre main kyun ?????? "

Samrat was still smiling to himself & packing actually throwing things happily in the suitcase . His room was messed up with his efforts of packing nad this was completely out of character for him as he usually would irritate himself and other members of his family to death when he saw even a little bit of mess in his room or house but today he was the one messing up his room !!!!

B ;- " Chal dekhte hain ke ye parivatran Kaise hua ????

U :- " PARI '''.. What ??????? "

B :- " Pari nahi idiot parivartan , change you know . hamesha ladkiyon ke naam pe hi ruk jaaya kar tu . Chal ab "

They slowly moved inside .

B :- " Hey Sam !!!! "

Samrat looked at them and grinned widely n they got terrified even more like he was showing them his vampire teeth rather than his grin .

S :- " Hey Benji , Uday !!!!!! "

He moved towards them & hugged both of them tightly in one go . They noth were perplexed .

S :- " achha hua tum log aa gaye . Mujhe packing main tumhari help chahiye thi "

Samrat looked at them n his grin faded . They both were so silent .

S ;- " Kya hua ????? "

Only then both of them realised that they were standing in the middle of samrat's room with their moutyhs hanging open and sam had noticed them .they quickly composed their features and sam's smile returned .

B :- " Kuch bhi to nahi , lekin tu bta tu kar kya raha hai ?????? "

Samrat throwed another pair of jeans in the suitcase , looked uo to benji n rolled his eyes .

S ;- " Benji !!!! Dikhta nahi hai kya ???? Packing kar raha hun baba !!!! "

B & U ( unison ) :- " Packing ??? Kyun ??? "

S ( getting tensed ) ;- " Kya matlab kyun ? Jaana nahi hai kya ??? "

U ;- " tu kahi ja raha hai kya ???? "

S ;-" Main nahi hum ''' "

B & U ( unison ) :- " Hum ??????? "

S :- " Haan '' hum log shimla ja rahe hain na ??? "

B :-" Tu uske liye packing kar raha hai ?????? "

S :- " Haan '''' uske liye to aur kiske liya packing karni hai ????? "

B ;- " Lekin samrat mere bahi , trip parso subah jaana hai aaj nahi !!!! "

S ;-" Parso jaana hai to kya packing nahi karni ??? Chalo ab time waste kanrna band karo aur packing main meri help karo !!!! "

Benji n uday helped highly elated samrat with packing . After 2 hours almost alll the packing was done n almost entire room of samrat was in his suitcase . Samrat was trying to find something , benji uday ignored him and slumped on the bed . After few moments :-

S ;- " SHIT !!!!! "

Benji n uday's eyes popped open .

B & U ( unison ) :-" Ab kya hai ???? "

S ( sheepishly ) :- " Ek gadbad ho gayi mujhse ''''' "

B :- " Ab kya kar diya tune ????? Please ye mat kehna ke aunty ki sadis bhi pack kar di tune !!!!!! "

S :- " Nahi yaar . Vo excitement main maine saare achhe kapde pack kar liye hain aur night suits aur shorts ke ilaawa yahaan kuch nahi bacha '''' "

B :- " Haan to ???? "

S :- " To idiot mujhe suitcase main se kapde nikalne padenge jkal aur parso ke liye . Chalo suitcase kholo ''' "

B & U ( unison , shocked , terrified ) :- " KYA ??????? "

S ( sheepishly , innocebtly , cutely ) ;- " Please ''''' "

Benji nearly got boiled up with irritation and he literally tore open the suitcase n snatched the first pair of jeans & T-Shirt and threw them at Samrat .

S ;-" Benji lekin ye '''' "

B :-" Sssssshhhhhh muh pe ungli rakh !!!!!!!! "

S :- " Kya ????? "

U ;- " Muh pe ungali rakh !!!!! "

Samrat did so with confused expressions .

B :- " GOOD !!!! Agar pehen na hai to chup chaap ye pehen lo nahi to shorts main shimla leke jaunga tujhe !!!!!!!!

Samrat smiled and nodded at his friends . after few minutes :-

S :- " Tum dono ne packing kar li kya ? "

U ;-" nahi yaar parso jaana hai to kal raat ko shuru karenge . "

S :-" WHAT ???????? "

B :- " Abe yaar dheere . Loud speaker laga ke kyun bol raha hai ???? Kal kar lenge na packing !!!!!! "

Samrat grabbed benji n uday's hand and pulled them up .

B & U :-" Kya hai ??????? "

S :- " Abhi ghar bhaago !!!!!! "

B & U ( bewildered ) :- " KYUN ????? "

S :- " Kyunki tum logon ko apni packing khud karni hai aur vo bhi aaj hi . Kal shaam 7 baje tak yahaan pahunch jaana . Subah sath main college ke liye chalenge "

B :- " Arre '''' "

S :-" No !!!! "

U :- " Lekin sun to ''' "

S :- " No !!!!! '

And then he pushes them out of the house .

S ( in doorway ) :- " Ok Gud nyt !!!!! Kal milte hain , achhe se packing karna . BYE !!!!! "

And shuts the door 8in their faces .

U ( slowly ) :- " Benji ''' "

B ( even more slowly ) :- " Haan ''' "

U :-" Sambhal lena '''' "

B :- " Kya ???? "

And then uday faints on benji !!!!!!!!!

( Vancouver , Airport Office )

Nupur is even more elated now . She had her passports and tickets in her hand . Tomorrow evening she would be on a flight to India . This all seemed unbelievable . The permission of research project which she was trying to attain from past 3 months was with her now . Life is full of surprises . Just when she gave up all the hopes about fulfilling her dream , her dream destination called her . Nupur is on the way to her home when she caught the sight of the church . She happily moved inside it . After few moments of silent prayers :-

N :- " THANK YOU !!!!!!! Aapne mera sabse bada kaam kar diya hai aaj . Sirf aap jante hain ke ye research to sirf ek zariya hai India pahunch kar apne sawaalon ke jawaab dhoondne ka . Mujhe aapka saath chahiye ta ke main apne un dhundhale sapno ki gehrayi tak ja sakun , us awaaz ko , us chehre ko dhoondh sakun jo meri zindagi main ab tak na hokar bhi mere sath rahaa hai . Pata nahi kyun par lagta hai ke mere har sawaal ka jawaab India main hai , Vo India main hai '''' To bas ab sab maine aap pe chhod diya hai aur is baar aapko meri madad karni hi hogi '''' "

She smiles a little n winks and then happily moves out of the church with peace filling her senses .

( Excel College , Mumbai )

Gunjan was sitting in library , deeply involved in raeding a book . This was her habbit , she gets completely lost in the words whenever she reads a book . She normally gets this involved that even if third world war would break , she woul never notice . Mayank enters the library & sees Gunjan n prepares himself to ask her .

M :- " Gunjana vo '' Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai ''' "

No Response !!!!!! Mayank gets confused .

M :- " Gunjan main tumse kuch keh raha hun '''' "

Again no response !!!!!!!

M :-" Gunjan ???? tum yahaan ho na ???? "

Again no response !!!!!! Just then mayank notices that she was reading the book very deeply . He rolls his eyes n hits his head with the book in his hand . Suddenly his eyes brighten up & a mischevious smile marked his lips . Luckily there was nobody besides them in the whole dand library , the one n only thing he needed . he moved close to gunjan's right ear & then screamed

M :-" GUNJAN !!!!!!!!!!! BACHAOOOOOOOO !!!!!!! "

Mayank's scream shook gunjan so hard that she nearly flown the book to the other corner of the library . Before she could start panicking n screaming , mayank kept his hand on her mouth to shut away the scream that was about to escap her lips . Mayank tried to control his roll of laughter but failed and he nearly got choked up laughing on seeing gunjan's incredulous expressions , while still keeping a hand on her mouth . Gunjan struggled to free herself but he didn't noticed . Gunjan tried to convey the same message through her eyes .

M ( still laughing ) :- " Kya ??? "

She got little frusterated and then closed her eyes n with full strength slapped him on the hand with which he ws covering her mouth .

M :-" Aaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!!! Ooooppsss Sorry !!!!! "

He dropped his hand & smiled again . gunjan led out a big huff of air and tried to control herself . She stood up holding a book , mayank was sti8ll laughing so he didn't noticed this . She was clearly irritated a hell by him so she statted hitting him with the book .

M ( still laughing ) :- " Oooouucchhh !!!!! Gunjan ye kya kar rahi ho ??? aaahhh "

G ( highly annoyed ) :- " Main ???? Main kya kar rahi hun ????? Tumne kya kiya idiot !!!!!!! "

M ( now running from Gunjan ) :- " Gunjan main to vo bas ''' "

G ( running behind him n hitting ) :- " Kya vo ??? Aise koi karta hai kya ???? "

M ( still running for his life n smiling ) :- " Aaaaahhhh !!!! Arre gunjan meri baat to "

G :- " Kyun sunu main tumhari baat ??? Pata hai kitna dar gayi thi main !!! Kuch ho jata to ???? Mujhe heart attack aa jata to ???? "

Mayank stopped on listening to it n fresh laughter shook him , " Kya ???? heart Attack ???? "

Gunjan threw the book and tried to find something bigger to aim at him . Mayank noticed that and he sweetly tried to stop gunjan .

M ( controlling his laughter n gunjan ) :- " Achha achha sorry sorry baba ''' "

Gunjan looked away from him . He smiled a little , he so much loved her this childish behaviour . He turned her face towards him but she turned away again .

M :-" OK baba phir se sorry !!!!! Kaan pakad ke sorry !!!!! "

He holds his ears and made face like an innocent child . Gunjan looked at him .

M :- " Please Sorry !!!!!!! I Plomise dubala aisa kabhi nahi kalunga gunjan Didi , kabhi nahi !!!! Aap kaho to uthak baithak bhi kal deta hun !!!!! "

Sunjan tried to control her laugh but failed . She couldn't remain annoyed with him for long especially when he turns into a child like this . They both laughed together now . Gunjan hit him once more playfully .

M :- " Aaaaaaahhhhhhh "

G :- " Theek hai maaf kiya lekin agli baar kuch aisa kiya to chhodungi nahi "

M :- " To ab kaunsa chhoda tha , maar maar ke saari haaddian to tod di "

G :- " MAYANK !!!!!!!! "

M :-" Ok ok baba !!!! "

G :- " Ab btao itna drama kyun kiya ? "

M :-" Tumhein HITLER ki duniya se nikaal kar 21st Century main waapis laane ke liye , ta ke tum apne bechare bahi ki pukaar sun sako !!!!!! "

G ( smiling sheepishly ):- " Aur apne bhai ki pukar kyun sunu ????? "

M :- " Kyunki gunjan ji aapke is bechare se bhai ko aapse kuch baat karni hai . "

G :-" Kya ? "

M :- " Yahaan nahi , pehle mere sath chalo . "

G :-" But kahaan ????? "

M :- " Paas ke coffee shop main "

Before gunjan could say any further , he held her hand and took her to coffee shop .

They went to nearby coffee shop and ordered the coffee . Mayank didn't knew how to bring the subject up . Gunjan noticed this .

G :- " Mayank ???? "

M :- " Haan '''' "

G :- " Ab to coffee bhi aa gayi hai , ab to vo baat btao jiske liye tumne itna drama kiya ? "

M ;-" Gunjan vo '''' "

G :-" Kya ???? "

M :- " Gunajn mujhe lagta hai ke humein kuch dini ke liye SHIMLA chale jaana chahiye '''' "

Gunjan was shocked to listen this from mayank because he never talked about going to that place .

G :- " Bhai , aaj achaanak , kaise ? "

M :- " Avhaanak nahi gunjan , soch to bahut dino se raha tha but tumse baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila . Kal maasi ka phone aaya tha , vo bhi keh rahi thi ke humein unse mile bahut waqt ho gaya hai . Vo hum dono ko bahut yaad kar rahi thi '' "

Gunjan looks up at him with deliberation in her eyes .

M :- " I know gunjan , wahaan jaana hamare liye difficult hai especially tumhare liye but gunjan humein kabhi na kabhi to is sab se baahar aana hoga . Vaise bhi college ki chhutiyan kal se shuru ho rahi hain aue shimla jaana hum dono ke liye ek achha change hoga . Mumbai ki bheed bhaad , shor se dur , nature aur freshness main kuch din bitaana achha rahega . Maasi ko bhi achha lagega aur main wahaan bui ke charitable trust ka kaaam bhi dekh lunga , kab tak maasi wahaan akeke sab dekhti rahengi . Bui use meri zimmedari par chhod kar gayi thi aur ab hum dono ko hi to use sambhalna hai . Please Gunjan chalo na , mere liye , please '''' "

Gunjan looked at him . He has never asked or wante anything from her . For the first time mayank had requested something from her . How could she not givfe it to him ?

G ( smiled and touched his nose with his finger ) :- " Theek hai ! Hum log chalenge "

M ( smiled ) :- " THANX GUNJAN !!!!! I love you !!!! You are the best sister in the whole world !!!!!! "

And then he hugged her tightly and she hugged him back . She was happy with herself that she could give this happiness to him . She smiles to herself , but inside her heart , she herself felt drawn to that place . Mayank released the hug and immediately took out his phone .

G :- " Ab kise phone kar rahe ho ? '

M :-" Tickets nahi book karwaani hain kya ????? "

G ( astonished ) :-" Bhai tum ''''' tum sach main paagal ho !!!!!! "

M ( smiling ) : -" I know !!!!!! "

After few minutes :-

M :-" Chalo gunjan "

G :- " kahaan ????? "

M :-" Ghar aur kahaan !!!! Tickets are confirmed . Parso subah 5 bje Delhi ke liye flight hai aur phir 9 bje delhi se shimla ki flight hai . Aur hum log wahaan hotel main rahenge , it would be more comfortable , so hotel rooms also booked . "

Gunjan looked at him incredulously . He was just away for five minutes & he had confirmed all th preparations . Only Mr. MAYANK SHARMA could do this . Mayank noticed gunjan's silence .

M :- " Kya hua gunjan ? "

G :- " Main tumhara kuch nahi kar sakti '''' "

M ( Even more confused ) :- " Huh ?????? "

G ( smiling ) :- " Tumne 5 min sab kuch confirm bhi kar diya ?????? "

M ( smiling ) :- " Genious aise hi kaam karte hain !!!!! "

They both laughed n headed towrds there home to make preparations .

Next day ' Vancouver Airport

Nupur's flight was on time n her happiness was literally tangible . In few hours she would be in Delhi , India . Maasi was there with her . In few short minutes final announcement for boarding was made .

N :- " Ok maasi !!! Ab main bhaagti hun !!!! "

Ma :- " Sun !!!! sab kuch confirm kar liya tha na ???? "

N :-" Bilkul maasi . India ke date aur tme ke hisaab se main 30th Nov 2009 ko theek 7 baje Delhi main houngi aur Dia mujhe wahaan lene aa rahi hai . Ab khush ???? "

Ma :- " Chup badmaash kahiin ki !!!!! "

Then they both laughed .

Ma :- " Sun apna khayaal rakhna , phone kart rehna , khaana peena theek se khaana , achhe se kaam karna , kisi faltu aadmi se baat mat karna ' "

N :- " Ek minute maasi !!! Aap sabse important kaam to mujhe kehna bhool hi gayi !!!! "

Ma :- " Kya ??? "

N :- " Yahi ki wahaan sabse pehle apne liye ek achha sa , handsome sa , dashing sa Indian ladka dhoondhna hai , BY GOD !!!!! "

Ma ( astonished ) :- " Nnnuuuupppuurrr !!!! Sudharna mat tu kabhi "

N ( smiling ) :- " Nupur Awasthi sudharne waale din paida hi nahi huyi !!!!! "

They both laughed heartedly and then nupur hugged masi goodbye . Nupur was highly elated when she boarded the plane , but hardly did she realised that this trip would change her life forever ''''''

Ok hush bhagwaan finally update khatam !!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 !!!!
Hope is baar aap logon ko shikayat nahi hogi ke maine der se update likhi 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Pls guys do read , comment n criticize !!!!!! Waiting for your replies !!!!!!
Precap : -
Samrat leaves for Shimla with his college group . Mayank , Gunjan n Nupur At Delhi Airport . Will Mayank n nupur be able to meet there ????????
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Edited by simar456 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow kya baat hai. This time timely ud. Sammy's packing was so hilarious. I remembered the story packing which I read in school. Uday was confused whther he is the right house. 😆 😆 But the most hilarious is when sammy told him that he needs some dresses to wear in next 2 days. Here Mayank also convinced Gunjan. Nupur also is coming. Waiting for this gr8 trip.
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Posted: 15 years ago
did nobody liked it ?????? Update ini buri thi kya ???? 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchitaroy

Wow kya baat hai. This time timely ud. Sammy's packing was so hilarious. I remembered the story packing which I read in school. Uday was confused whther he is the right house. 😆 😆 But the most hilarious is when sammy told him that he needs some dresses to wear in next 2 days. Here Mayank also convinced Gunjan. Nupur also is coming. Waiting for this gr8 trip.

hahahahahahahahahaha finally kisi ne to padh hi li !!!! Ab itni gaaliyaan khaane ke baad koi bhi timely update karega sanchita !!!!!!!! even i liked the packing one !!!!!!! Thanx for jheling it !!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey such a nice update.loved samrat packing scene.It was really funny.Even loved the majan scene too.Ok I loved every bit of it.The update was superb.Cant wait for next part.Continue soon.Thx 4 the pm.
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Originally posted by: ammykhan

hey such a nice update.loved samrat packing scene.It was really funny.Even loved the majan scene too.Ok I loved every bit of it.The update was superb.Cant wait for next part.Continue soon.Thx 4 the pm.

Hahahahahahahaha thanx a lot for liking dear !!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
res

haila pehli baar itni jaldi update kiya hai tune😲

good😆


it was mind blowing simi

akhir sab apne apne destination ke taraf badh hi gaye

par bechar benji itne hate kate uday ka bojh kaise sambhala hoga😆

each and every scene was too good

completly loved it


iss baar ki tarah agla part bhi jaldi update kardena😳


Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
grat update loved it u rock simi tooo good👏

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