Mayur ss Pyaar ke imtihaan epilogue updt Pg 48 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
Totally great Udate!! I loved hose jealous scenes!! I wonder whats gonna happen the next day!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
fabulous update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
awesome work dear ......................
lovely concept...................
keep up the good work
and i am really sorry for late reply..........
actually exams are going .................😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
heyaa sweety ,
soo sorry for late comment yaar , but the part was amazing soo loved reading it hmm
mayur r too good yaar , loved them a lot
really waiting to read it ahead , please update this soon
till then take care and thanks for the pm
love you lots
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Note
Ok frnds no idiotic reason that i didnt had tim n all as i had plenty of tim as my holidays are going on but i didnt liked updating the FF
Im jus feeling that no one is liking the FF so this will be ending soon
I dnt mean to hurt sumone but thats wat i feel
Soon the truth will be revealed n FF will be ended
Sorry if hurted anyone
PART3
Next Morning
Nups got up at her usual tim
She never liked to get late
She was always punctual
She got ready in Saree though she was a businesswomen she never wore western but always wore Saree n left her hair open as they use to be wet but once she started work she use to tie them
She had a big bunglow but except her no one was there wit her
She was alone jus wit her memories n pain given by the one whom she loved a lot more than her life
Only servants use to be there n they were elderly so she use to respect them a lot
They always use to force her to hav food on tim n all thgs lik sleeping on tim n all
Nups was having Coffee n that coffee had less sugar
She remebered a moment her past
Flashback
She remembered how once Mayank while dropping her home said" I make Worlds Best Coffee"
Nupur:Really so cum lets check it whether ur telling truth or not She knew he was jus trying to come inside her house so evn she played along n guided him the way towards Kitchen
Mayu made it n servered her he didnt tasted it
Nups had a sip than she laughed
She laughed a lot on it n teased him saying World ki Best Coffee but wit less sugar haina n laughed agn
He was jus looking at her n felt that she was joking so he took her mug n sipped the coffee
N"Arey tum meri jhooti Coffe kyun pi rahe ho hav in other mug
M:Its ok mein tumhara Jhoota pi sakta hoon
Nups didnt knew why Mayu said this but MAyu knew why he said this
Than he gav a faint smile n said:Sahi mein sugar kam hai
N Nups strted laughing n Mayu jus kept on seeing her
Almost wenevr she got chance to tease him she use to tease him wenevr they use to sit in canteen n hav coffee so Nups use to say
Chinu bhaiya:Coffee wit less sugar n look at Mayank wit mischief in her eye
He just smiled at her he had got the habbit of all this
He came to knw after Nupur came in his life that he wasnt perfect but infact she was perfect cacording to him
Flashback ends
Tears rolled down Nupur's eye
She left everythg n walked out
Though serveants tried to stop her but she was too fast
She reached office in her car she had driver but she use to drive the car
She wanted to do all thgs that Somtim Mayank had said u cant do these thgs
Mayu's palce
Mayu got up wit headache he always had headache wenevr he use to get up because he use to cry at nght till he didnt fall asleep
He had Painkiller n got ready
As he said Mr Malhotra he will be their in the Office n work on the new deal alone
Evn he didnt new why he was doing this jus..........................
He got ready
MM made breakfast for him
he had witout saying much jus hugged MM n left
He reached office n directly went to Mr Malhotra's cabin
There they had lil talk on that deal n Mr malhotra said they shuld go to N&M company so sort out sum thgs
N Mayu agreed n they left
He jus culdnt let Mr Malhotra suffer due to him so witout thking he left
They reached the office
Mr Malhotra spoke to receptionist whl Mayu was checking out the Comapny
He literally thought that the Outlook of the Company was jus fab evn he desired to hav a business lik dat but his Heart after wat he had done to his Love never allowed him to do wat gav happiness to him
He jus got sad but came ut of the thought wen Mr Malhotra called him
He jus nodded n walked in
The cabin door was of glass n Mr Malhotra knocked on the door
A voice came: Cum in
Mayu jus froze at the voice
He knew it was her voice how can he forget her voice it was jus lik forgetting to breathe
But his Mind agn interuppted n said many ppl hav sam voice
He jus shook his head n began to walk behind Mr Malhotra
He saw a lady other side of the table working on her laptop really very busy
Mr Malhotra:Mrs Nupur
Mayu's heart beat began to race was she the same Nupur he was searching for 2 Years
Was she her he questioned himself n was waiting for Nupur to look up
He was standing behind Mr Malhotra he culd see Nupur but he was sur Nupur cannot see him until Mr Malhotra moves
Listening to Mr Malhotra's voice she got up to greet him
She shook hands wit him
Mayu was speechless his mind was not working it was his Nupur standing in frnt of him he was meeting her seeing her after 2 years
She was wearing a light blue saree she was jus the same jus became lil more or much more beautifull he thought
He was jus gazing at her wen Mr Malhotra's voice broke him frm his thoughts
Mr malhotra to Nupur:Plz meet my Business partner Mr Mayank Shrma
Nupur eyes got wide in shock
Soon the shock turned in Fear
Mayu culd see in her eyes the fear of being used agan
Mayu was hurted to see the Fear in her eyes whch was due to him
Mayu jus moved ahead n said:Hello im Mayank Sharma
Nups came out of her shock n shook hands
Their hands jus met for few seconds as Nups pulled it back as soon as possible
They both looked at each other
Mayank had that smile whch he lost 2 years ago
While Nups had fear jus fear nthg else
Nupur broke the eye contact n asked Mr Malhotra:So sir any problem that u came her ur assingment is getting ready
Mr Malhotra:Yeah but i hav some probs in sum materials so can u jus sort it out wit my partner Mr Mayank
Nupur looked at Mayank he was still staring at her wit smile on his face
Nupur:Sorry Mr Malhotra i hav to leave for sum personal work ur Partner can talk to my Manager he will sort out thgs
Mr Malhotra:Ok as u say but it wuld hav been good if u culd sort out
Nupur:Sorry Mr Malhotra but i hav to leave n i will be late
Mayank who was jus listening the covo knew Nups was jus trying to ignore him
He got hurt wen she said him Partner rather than Mayank
MayanK:Its ok i'll come tomm n sort out thgs
Nupur was hell angry n shock she jus wanted to ignore him but here all thgs were going ulta
Nupur:Sorry Tomm is Sunday
Mayank:Its ok i can cum to ur house if u want
Nupur was looking at him in disbelief
He betrayed her hurted her n the most imp thg Used her but than to he was behaving so clamly that nothg had happen
Nupur:No thanks i dnt tak my Proffesional work or person to my hom I'll c if i can cum tomm to Office n jus sort out ur probs
Mayank:Sure i'll be waiting for ur reply
Nupur's cell rang
In that tensed position also she had a smile on her face after seeing the name
She said excuse me n moved a side
She was talking to that person openly similing laughing
Mayu also smiled seeing her smile
Nupur came back n said :I need to leave i'll let u knw if i can meet u tomm in office
She said n apologized seing Mr Malhotra:Im sorry im jus lil busy today Hop u dnt mind
Mr Malhotra:No problem Mr Mayank will cum n slove the problems tomm wit u
Nupur gav him a faint smile n left
Mayu turned his chair to c his love going
He still had a smile on face
Mr Malhotra was oberserving all
He was shock that Mayu was so interested in this Deal that he was ready to go her house to sort out problems
He was happy for him{Poor Mr Malhotra dosent knw the real truth}
Mayu was eagerly waiting for her phone call he was still sitting in Nupur's cabin
While Nupur was in the lift n she got the answer why she was remembering Mayank so much after 2 years yesterday night
Thats all
U'll get later to knw who is the caller
Hop my update didnt bored u
Plz Comment n Criticize also
Edited by -afsha- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: pinky_5

Very bad afsha......2 parts updated and no PM to me???🥺
I know i dont get time to read ff's regularly but whenever i do i scan through my PM list & read some ff.....& u didnt even tell me u have already updated......
This is not fair......
No Pm's to you also.....😉
Coming to your part it was sad.....i want the story to unfold soooooon.....i'm very impatient......
Continue soon.....

Arey dnt do this
Warna i will die😆😉
My FF will be ending soon n i dnt want to Miss ur FF
So plz im in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

hey afsha

very sadd part yaarrr

bt intersting me want the story to unfold

and seems like this ff is coming to a near end

i hope not plzzzzzzz

want a happy end

con't soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey afsha

very sadd part yaarrr

bt intersting me want the story to unfold

and seems like this ff is coming to a near end

i hope not plzzzzzzz

want a happy end

con't soon

-sanam-

Its not cuming to an end
Im bringing it to an end
I thk ppl are nt likig it so its better to end jaldi
Thanks for comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
thanks for the pm....plz update the next part soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
sad part
plz give it happy ending
ur ff rockz

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