Kahi to hogi woh:sajan FF. new thread on 150 - Page 12

di is here for u........

now the things i liked in the past two updates........

1. you are composed enuf even it is ur first attempt.

2. u gave it a proper serialish look....

3. the incidents are cool

now the things i dint like

1. extensive usage of bye's

2. and gunjan's parents death to funeral and the gunan's decision to move to her packing all happens in the time periood of sam's winning to his going to pub?...how come? besides..........when some1 loses his/her parents ( i lost my father...i know) the whole family sink in some sort of mourning state and numbness...only one thing remain unchanged there like a sharp sense of pain and emptiness........which last for a very long period.....in that time ppl arent capable enuf to think or act rationally.....then after that period the senses starts coming back to them to allow them take some major deciesion ( i still remmeber, our own apratment which was indeed rented...was kept like that for months...and we never got back there...mom, said she cant handle it...living in the same house full of his memory while he isnt around, we paid the rent but dint live there anymore...then finally we made up our mind to let go of that apartment)

so, when it comes to huge thing like losing a family member things just doesnt get settled by a day or overnight, only having tears while packing cant justify it...it wud have beenmuch more realistic if there had shown some leap of a month or something.....like her uncle's coming back after a month and then taking her to mumbai...to give her, her life back...

i am sorry avi if i have hurt u anyway.......i just cudnt leave u tellinh how nice it is...or things like that....cause i care...