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lucario thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
Thanks a lot mira for commenting and will continue soon.
Edited by lucario - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
hi avi
i am so sorry dear
for commenting late
i was really very busy
but i just read it and i am in love with it
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and dont forgot to add me in ur pm list
luv u
do continue soon
maryam😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
hey good one pls update fast
and added me to your PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

hi avi
i am so sorry dear
for commenting late
i was really very busy
but i just read it and i am in love with it
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and dont forgot to add me in ur pm list
luv u
do continue soon
maryam😊


thanks for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

hey good one pls update fast

and added me to your PM list


thanks for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

NOTE 1: hello people before continueing reading the update.i just want one favour from all u….my frend pari (pari_smile) got into accident and she is badly hurt………so I want all of u to pray for her well being……and my this update is for pari…if u don't like my update its ok…don't comment but pls pray for my frend……its humble request from my side.

NOTE 2: everyone is asking about what happened to gunjan……..so I just wanna tell u that what happened with sajan its not gonna revealed soon.when correct time comes I will reveal that..now I m concentrating on sajan love story as u know from first update nupur is telling how sajan met and fall in love………so next some parts will be on sajan story in flashbacks.

Part 2:

(now the story is rewinded to 3 years back….now we will see the actual story how sajan met and what happened to them)

(scene in Darjeeling)

The camera focuses on the college which is buzzing with students….all r gathered at notice board…as results r out.

We see one girl with her result in her hand and all r congratulating her….WHY?..who is she??

She scored highest in the college and topper of college...who is she?

...guess

……our sweet

……our innocent

GUNJAN.

Meena(frend of gunji): gunjan tu toh bohot khush hogi na aaj….tune mom-dad se kiya hua wada sach kar dikhaya..aur pure college mai top kiya hai tune.

G: ha meena…mai aaj bohot khush hu…..pichale 2 salo se mai maa-dad se dur yaha hostel mai reh rahi hu……woh bohot khush hoge aaj…mai unne surprise visit dungi….. do saalo se nahi mili hu unhe.

M: to tune packing karli hai ?

G: Ha.mai dopahar ki bus se ghar ja rahi hu.

M: ok bye…….and finally congrats….maa-dad ko mera pranam kehna.

G: ok.bye

(scene shifts to mumbai)

(Camera focuses in some room which is fully messed up....all things are put anywhere……….well if someone comes in that room he will think how can anyone lives in such a mess.)

We see on big bed one boy with no shirts on just on jeans sleeping peacefully……..with a cute smile on his face…(don't know what he is dreaming…lolzzz)……..not at all bothered with the world around him.

At the same time alarm clock starts ringing……………BUZZZZZZZZZZZ

The Guy gets irritated and shuts the alarm clock by throwing pillow on it……and again sleeps with covers on.

Again buzzzzzzzzz….he again looks for alarm clock but he already shutted it then what is making sound …….finally got irritated with the sound……..he wakes up and starts looking for the thing making sound…..it's none other but his own mobile.

He takes the phone and is about to shout when a guy on other side says

WHERE R U SAMRAT????????

BASKET BALL MATCH AADHE GHANTE ME SHURU HONE VALA HAI..AUR TU ABHI TAK COLLEGE NAHI AYA.

Hearing this….that guy completely wakes up and says in his sweet voice.

SORRY BEHNJI…..MAI ABHI AA RAHA HU 10 MINUTE MAI……TU TENSION MAT LE JAB SAMRAT HAI TO DARNA TO DUSRE TEAM VALO KO HAI…..saying this he disconnects the phone and runs towards washroom.

(back to Darjeeling)

Gunjan reaches her hometown….and takes the cab to her home.

After coming out of cab and paying him when she turns towards her house she sees a lot of people are gathered there.

Gunjan is confused…she moves towards the gate of house…..after entering she sees many people in white dresses……she is now damn confused getting scared…..and thinking what is happening here?????

Gunjan goes inside the house and what she watched……………..

There are two bodies covered in white cloths and all people are crying .

She didn't get anything………what is happening in my home ???and where are mom and dad????

She goes towards the center of hall where bodies are kept…..she sees the photos of her parents and see' pulo ka haar' on each of the photo .

Now she is damn scared……and tears started to well up in her eyes…….she got what is happening there now…

The bodies are of her parents………….her parents are no more…….she is too mature for her age…..she gets the difficult things very well………..she started to cry……that time her uncle comes near her

(watching uncle)

G: uncle ye sab kab hua? Kaise hua? Muzhe kisine kyu nahi bataya?

Ul: beti kal bhabhiji aur jijaji tumhare liye gift lene ke liye gaye the..tab ek truck ke sath unke car ka accident ho gaya……aur unki mout ho gayi……humne tumhe call kiya subah to hume pata chala ki tum yaha ane ko nikal padi ho……toh hum tumhara hi wait kar rahe the.

Gunjan starts to cry placing her head on shoulder of her uncle………..and starts cursing the god for taking away her parents from her to whom she loved very much….the day which was happiest day for her.. .as she completed the wada which she made to her parents…now became her worst nightmare.

Gunjan carried out all the activities to the funeral

(scene shifts to Mumbai)

Excel college team win the match because of their captain SAMRAT.

B: hey dude this calls for celebration.pub ko chale

S: ok dude…….sham ko milte hai.

(back to Darjeeling)

(UL: uncle)

Ul: gunjan tum yaha akeli kya karegi…..kyu na tum apni age ki padhai Mumbai me karo..waha nupur diya aur uday bhi hai….tumhe acha bhi lagela apno ke sath rehkar.

G: magar uncle aapko tekleef hogi to.

Ul: muzhe konasi takleef…...jaise nupur ,diya,uday mere bacche hai...waise hi tum meri beti ki tarah hi ho….aur jab hume iss accident ke bare me pata chala nupur ne tumhe Mumbai ko leke ane ko kaha….aur meri bhi yehi iccha hai….after hearing that gunjan hugs uncle and start crying again.

(in Mumbai)

In pub

B: are sam,sab kuch thanda thanda lag raha hai…..kuch nachna gana hojaye???

S: kyu nahi……

And both goes on dance floor and starts singing this song………..

(sam starts with)

Aaja Aaja Dil Nichode,

Raat Ki Mataki Tode

Koyi Good Luck Nikaale,

Aaj Gullak Toh Phode...

(benji also start now)

Aaja Aaja Dil Nichode,

Raat Ki Mataki Tode

Koyi Good Luck Nikaale,

Aaj Gullak Toh Phode...

Hai Dil Dildaara Mera Teli Ka Tel

Kaudi Kaudi Paisa Paisa Paise Ka Khel...

(now sam continues)

Dil Dildaara Mera Teli Ka Tel

Kaudi Kaudi Paisa Paisa Paise Ka Khel..

Both: Chal Chal Sadako Pe Hogi Than Than

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da...

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da...

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da...

Both(in chorus and loud):

Aaja Aaja Dil Nichode,

Raat Ki Mataki Tode

Koyi Good Luck Nikaale,

Aaj Gullak Toh Phode

Aaja Aaja....Hey Aaja Aaja....

Benji : Aaja Ki One Way Hai Yeh Jindagi Ki Gali, Ek Hi Chance Hai...

Aage Hawa Hi Hawa Hai Agar Saans Hai Toh Yeh Romance Hai

Sam: Aaja Ki One Way Hai Yeh Jindagi Ki Gali, Ek Hi Chance Hai...

Aage Hawa Hi Hawa Hai Agar Saans Hai Toh Yeh Romance Hai

Yahi Kehate Hai,

Yahi Sunate Hai

Jo Bhi Jaata Hai, Jaata Hai, Woh Phir Se Aata Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Sam : Aaja Aaja Dil Nichode,

Raat Ki Mataki Tode

Benji: Koyi Good Luck Nikaale,

Aaj Gudlak Toh Phodeeeeeeee.

Hai Dil Dildaara Mera Teli Ka Tel,

Kaudi Kaudi Paisa Paisa Paise Ka Khel

chal Chal Sadako Pe Hogi Than Than……

Both: Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da……

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da……

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da...

Benji(sitting on stairs):

Koyi Chaal Aisi Chalo Yaar Abb Ke, Samundar Bhi Pul Pe Chale

Phir Tu Chale Usape Ya Main Chalu, Shehar Ho Apane Pairo Tale...

Sam:

Koyi Chaal Aisi Chalo Yaar Abb Ke, Samundar Bhi Pul Pe Chale

Phir Tu Chale Usape Ya Main Chalu, Shehar Ho Apane Pairo Tale...

Kayi Khabare Hai...

Kayi Khabare Haiiiiiii……… Jo Bhi Soye Hai Khabaro Me Unako Jagaana Nahiiiiiiiiiiii

Both(loud): Aaja Aaja Dil Nichode,

Raat Ki Mataki Tode

Koyi Good Luck Nikaale,

Aaj Gullak Toh Phode…..Aaja Aaja...... Aaja Aaja……….. Aaja Aaja

Both: Dil Dil daara Mera Teli Ka Tel

Kaudi Kaudi Paisa Paisa Paise Ka Khel...

Kaudi Kaudi Paisa Paisa Paise Ka Khel

Chal Chal Sadko Pe Hogi Dhan Dhan

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da…...

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da.......

Dhan Te Dan Ta Da Da Da.......

(the part ends with on one side gunjan preparing her bag to come to Mumbai….and watching the house for one last time and really sad of her loss in life……..and here samrat going home on his bike with benji on back and sharing laughter with each other)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
ooooye...!!
ye me first to comment...!!
grt part yaara...!!
ohhoo....mina di in it...hpe vahi hain....!! 😉
so gunji is alwayz so excellent in studies...!!
achcha hai...!!
nahi toh aise log kahaan hote hain jo top maare...!! 😆😆
ya...so sad sad part kyun likha ji...??
gunji ke parents ko hi maar diya...!! 😕
gandi baat na...!! 😆
but chaloss....it's finezzz...!!
nw on serious nt...!!
hpe pari get well soon...!!
do updt soon...!! 😛

luv ya
radz
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
nice one avi and dont worry ur friend will be fine soon and we will pray for her!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
hey lovely update...pls cont soon...n dont worry v will all pray for pari n by gods grace n everyone's best wishes, she will be back to normalcy in no time....dont worry at all 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice emotional update.Hope your friend gets better fast.My prayers are with her.Please update next part soon,Make it a long one

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