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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

AWESOME PART

But really sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gunjans comming to mumbai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plz update soon and I think I didn't get a pm!!!!!! so could you next time plz pm me!!!

Mira

big sorry from my side.....the problem is tht i send pm to all the people in my buddy list and so i cant always remember everyone who told me externally not in my buddy list to Pm me....so i mistakely forgot to pm u but still u commented....really thanks a lot for it....and will definately send u pm....
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Posted: 15 years ago
@cute_monaya_fan: thanks for understanding my point of view about story and supporting me....and ya u r right gunjan will become happy again when she comes to mumbai as she will meet sam....will continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_RaDevBest

hey this part was superb but gunjan's parent's death was sad but the whole was awesome.. continue sooon!!!
i will pray to god that your friend gets well soon !!!!

thanks arushi for commenting and will continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Lov ely update. very nice.

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don't worry,ur friend will be fine soon.

thanks for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vital123

Ur concept is really nice. Plz, do PM me.


thanks for commenting and will add u in PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Avi great parts sorry couldnt comment before .

The parts were really good .

So Sajan's lovestory started three years ago .

Hope they unite soon and whatever problems they are facing comes to an end .

Do cont soon and thanks for the Pm .

Sorry again 😃 .
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok kiddo will wait for ur comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks a lot to all my readers for praying for my frend pari….very very thankful to all…and now the next update in on the way.

PART 3

(after a long journey from Darjeeling…gunjan reaches to Mumbai along with her uncle.

They reach to a big mension….. as soon as they reach to the gate….servants starts coming from inside and took all the bags from gunjan and went into house….gunjan also follows them along with uncle……..and enters house)

(After entering in house)

A lady is standing on the door with pooja ki thali in her hand……….she is gunjan's aunty and nupur,diya and uday's mom.

A: (gunjan ko prasad de kar)……aao beti……undar aao…..isse tum apna hi ghar samzho…mai bohot khush ho ki tum yaha aa gai…….mai hamesha se chahati thi ki tum mere sath raho magar jis vajah se tumhe yaha ana pada…uske liye mai bhi bohot dukhi hu.

Gunjan hugs her and starts crying……

A: now its ok beta…..pls don't cry.

Ul: chalo chalo abhi rona mat shuru karo tum dono…gunjan mai aab tumhe rote hua nahi dekhna chahata…..kya hua agar tumhare parents ab iss duniya mai nahi…tumhare uncle aur aunty hai na……..humhai to kya gum hai.

G : (stops crying)thank you uncle.

Ul: (shouts by coming in hall) are dekho ghar pe kon aya hai.

(by listening the sound all the three come down)

Watching gunjan Nupur runs towards gunjan and hugs her tightly.

(even though gunjan is cousin of nupur but nupur always considered her very close to herself..she used to talk to her every time on phone……whenever she came to Darjeeling….she will be always there with gunjan…..gunjan is only person who didn't get bothered by her continuous bak-bak about ddlj)

N: gunjan tu thik to hai na…..aab ro mat ….tune thik kiya jo yaha aa gayi…..hum sab hai na tere sath.

G: thanks di…..aapse milke bohot achhha laga.

N: muzhe bhi….(and wipes gunjan's tears)

N:Chal mai tuzhe mere bhai aur behen se milati hu.

(turning to a sweet girl in western outfits)

N: yeh hai diya.

G: hi diya

D: hi gunjan…….acha laga ki tum yaha aa gayi……..(even though she is modern…..she is very sweet and nice natured girl)

Guy: Aur mai uday........Dids muzhe DODO bulaati hai………magar tum muzhe uday bula sakti ho…and takes out hand for handshake.

N: ha yeh hai mere sweet uday bhaiya…(.diya aur uday both r twins.)

U: ha main naam ka bhai hu…par sach kahu to sabse jyada sataya hua soul of this house is right introduction for me.…..pyar to muzhe koi nahi karta……..nupur sis ke liye to mai DDLJ ke RAJ ke dialogue sunanevala silent listener ban chukka hu……bohot bore karti hai magar…kya kare nups dids ke samne chalati kiski hai…diya ko to humesha muzhpe hukum chalane ka shauk hai……nokar samaz ke rakha hai sabne muzhe…tum to aise nahi karogi na?????(saying all this like small child is making complaint…..lolzzz)

N: (hearing this)KYAAAAA???…..kya kaha tune uda…..y.mere samne kisi ki nahi chalati????? Aur mere raj ke dialogues ko boring mat kaho…… nahi to aanjaam bura hoga……(in angry tone)

U: dekha gunjan……...maine bola nahi tha ki sab muzhpe sirf apna gussa nikalte rehte hai...(making sad face)

N: gunjan tu iski bate mat sun…….wo aisa hi hai.

G: (smiles) hi uday bhaiya….and shakes hands with him….mai aapko bhaiya bulaaogi…kyu ki muzhe koi bhai nahi hai…..aur nahi muzhe kisipe hukum chalane ka shauk hai aur nahi hi mai marti hu…(and smiles)…….aap to mere sweet se bhai ho na….mai aapko kaise tang kar sakti hu.

U: tum kitni sweet sis ho meri……tum akeli ho jo mera dard samzati hai……nahi to baki muzhe pagal hi samzate hai.

(even though nupur is angry on uday………but after watching gunjan smiling because of his foolish acts she in mind thanks uday)

N:gunjan tu thak gayi hogi…..ja jakar fresh ho ja………tera admission bhi karne jana hai college mai…sham ko…..aur tuzse bohot bate bhi karni hai.

D: ok doll hume bhi chalna chahiye…...hume college mai thoda kam hai…….and she hits dodo to tell him to follow her.

U:ok sis…….raat ko milte hai dinner mai………waise dinner ka naam nikla hi hai to dids muzhe bhuk lagi hai…..kuch khane ko hai kya.?????

D: dodo tume kabhi bhi khane ki hi padi rehti hai.

G: (at that moment) uday bhaiya…..muzhe nahi pata aapko kya acha lagta hai…….magar kya aap gajar ka halwa khayenge?

U:kyu nahi sweet sis…..jaldi se ban jaye aur khane layak hoga to kuch bhi chalega.

G: ok mai abhi karke lati hu.

(after few time gunjan comes with gajar ka halwa and gives it in tiffin to uday….with that both diya and uday leaves to college)

(After reaching college)

D:Oh yeh Sammy kaha hai???…..aaj uski bike race hai na……..Ronni ke sath.

U: dids wo hoga yahi kahi…….muzhe to bohot bhuk lag rahi hai….to mai ja raha hu canteen……..gunjan ne diya hua gajar ka halwa khane……tumhe khana hai kya??????

D: nahi tum jao.mai Sammy ko dhundati hu.

U:ok…(with that he went to canteen.)

(In canteen uday is eating gajar ka halwa….and praising it when someone taps on his back)

U: oye kon hai…jo uday ko khate vakt pareshan kar raha hai??????(in angry tone)

GUY: are uday……tu yaha kya kar raha hai???….aur diya kaha hai??????..aur yeh kya hai???.........its our SAMRAT

U:are sam tu hai…..kya pata?……….woh thodi der mere sath thi…..tuzhe hi dhund rahi thi……magar muzhe bhuk lagi………aurrrr

S: (cutting in between)ha ha samaz gaya….tuzhe bhuk lagi aur tu canteen mai aa gaya…magar tu kabse tiffin lane laga?????(smiles)

U: yeh gajar ka halwa hai….bohot hi delicious hai…..mere sweet sis ne diya hai….jo aaj hi Mumbai ayi hai.

S:kyaaaaa gajar ka halwa…….mera favourite…...muzhe bhi dena…….(takes one bite from the tiffin in uday's hand and starts eating it)…….ooooooooooohhh……….kya halwa hai…….jis kissine banaya hai………woh issi halwe ki tarah sweet hoga……..usse kahna………you are the best…and with that he takes the tiffin from uday's hand and goes outside eating halwa.

U: are sam…sweet kyu na ho…….mere sis sweet hai to halwa bhi sweet hi hoga na…… magar sam woh halwa mere liye tha…he kept on talking but all in vain…sam left him in canteen.

U: are yaar…...kyu muzhe canteen mai ake khane ki sushi…..usse acha mai kissi corner me jake wo delicious halwa khata…….kya halwa tha…….abhi sam se to muzhe khali dibba hi naseeb hoga……….so halwa gone…….chalo aaj firse apne canteen mese hi khuch khana hoga……chinu ek grilled cheese sandwich dena.

(In evening)

(Gunur comes to college)

Gunjan and nupur gone to registerar's cabin and fill the admission form.

R: aap ye form account section mai submit kar dijiye aur fees bhi bhar di ji ye.

N: ok

N:gunjan tu bahar jake race dekh…….…mai sab formalities bharke ati hu.

G: ok di.

(nupur leaves)

Gunjan comes outside waiting for nupur when she hears people cheering for someone…..She follows sound and reaches to the place where all students are cheering for two guys in middle on bike…she goes and stand in the the crowd who cheering for some guy named SAMRAAT

Samrat and Roni both were there in the middle….all are already cheering for sam even before the race actually begins….kyu na chillaye………sam college ka champ……. kabhi koi bhi bike race nahi hara.

Sam is giving flying kiss to every girl when his eyes fell on one girl in white salwar-suit….she is not feeling good at all….her eyes were showing the nervousness…….he was mesmerized by her simple beauty..…she was looking like angel(sam thought)…….he got mesmerized in her dark deep brown eyes behind her specs…….by watching different expressions of nervousness on her face………he thought to hold her and tell her not to fear…..the girl is no other but gunjan.

G: ye log aise kyu chilla rahe hai?……..aur ye samrat kon hai?……dono ne toh helmet pahne hai…..kya pata…..aur ye nupur kab ayegi…….usse nahi pata kya ki……..muzhe bhid-bhad vali jagah nahi pasand.

Here Sam was mesmerized in her beauty and was not at all paying attention to what referee is blabbering…….when a tap on his shoulder makes him out of his dreamworld……….its benji .

B: dude kaha kho gaya….race karni hai ki nahi?

S : ( coming back….). ha ha..karni hai dude….aur mai kisko dekhunga…...sab samrat ko dekhte hai….samrat kisilko nahi dekhta.

B: ok dude……best of luck.

(after that referee whistles and race starts)

As race is going on…sam speeds away from his competitor…………with every round he tries to get glimpse of gunjan………and thinking of who is she?????

(when the race is in last stages and few rounds are remaining…nupur comes to gunjan…..and tells her that work is done and now they can leave)

When nupur is talking to gunjan……Sam watches them but can't do anything as he has to complete the race…....he thought after race he will meet that girl..and how nupur knows her?

But when he is on last lap…….he again looks at same position where gunjan was present….but to his dismay….he didn't find both of them.

Sam win the race and all the girls surround him………all are congratulating sam….but sam was watching here and there…his mind was not at all paying attention to what crowd is saying.….he was just searching for that girl in white salwar-suit.

Benji notices that something is wrong with sam.

B: sam kisko dhund raha hai???

S: kisiko nahi………sab college ki ladkiya yaha hai to mai kisi aur ko kyu dhunduga……..with that he starts paying attention to crowd around him……..(but in mind he decides to ask nupur who is that girl????....what she was doing here?????????)

After the all congradulation session ends……..sam starts to look for the girl or for nupur…….but he can't find any of them….finally he decides to go home.

(after coming home)

S: aaj aisa kyu ho raha hai…..uss ladki ka chehara aakho ke samne se hatata hi nahi………uski wo aakhe……...kitne khubsurat thi……GOSH….. muzhe kya ho raha hai……mai un aakho ko bhula kyu nahi pa raha hu……….chalo iss tension ko mitana hai to mere paas ek acha idea hai……and he goes inside and comes with canvas and pencil and starts sketching on the paper…can u guess what he is sketching???????

He was sketching the beautiful eyes of gunjan…….which r fixed in his mind like they were always be the part of his mind….and night passes with sam painting and thinking about the mysterious girl…….and here gunjan is setting her room with nupur…..after that gunur chat and chat and then went to sleep……gunjan sleeps thinking from tomorrow her life will start with new chapter where she has to cope up with new surrounding,new obstacles and meeting new people……and most importantly making frends...

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Posted: 15 years ago
love;y amazing superb nyc part continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
omgggggggggg awesoe update yaar
mindblowing one
kahin sam ko first sight love toh nahi ho gaya na
plz try to continue soon
n thanx for the pm
love
sana

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