FOUL IN LOVE-sk (last part)pg 111 - Page 77

are ye kya...abhi abhi sab thik hua tha.....bt i agree wid sujal....kashish shud understand...bt fact is....she has been so much of a mom all these years tht she is only thinking frm tht point of view....ab sujal ko bhi abhi hi ghussa hona tha...he refuses to go...bt i think kashihs shudnt hv left like tht...use sujal ko manake lekar jana chahiye tha....atleast mana lena chahiye tha....aise chod kr chali gyi spoony ko lekar... aur spoony na....bohot ziddi hogyi hai...use sambhalna ab kashish k bas ki baat nhi rhi....kaise zid kr rhi thi....n kashish just gives in everytime...parade dekhne ruk gyi...time ka bhi nhi socha...bt thn the poor chap is trying to show tht parade to her daughter...bt ofcourse itne bade bade daddies me ye kaise possible ho...i hope sujal was thr..it wud hv been a perfect day 4 them....ab lets c wht next....sab saath aa to gye...bt it dsnt seem tht easy for them to adjust.....

Part 37

Spoony & kashish reach the hotel & knock at the hotel room.

Sujal opens the door & looks at both of them. He is still straight faced.

s-you people are'.[k cuts]

k-late ! I know !

sp-you know daddieeeee there was a carthoon parade sho we sthayed, buth I couldh'nth see anything. Mommyyyyyyy is veryyyyyyyyyy short. Buth we will go thommorow & ..&..i will sit on your shouldher like other kids & I will see everthing !

s smiles a bit hearing his daughter.

k-yes that's for tomorrow, now quickly go to sleep its late.

K holds spoony's hand takes her to the other room.

Sujal was also about to go to bed, when kashish enters the room changed in a nightie.

He looks at her & lays down facing his back towards her.

after a minute or two of laying there silently, he feels her fingers slowly gliding on his arms.

He turns when he feels her nibble his ear slowly.

s-kya kar rahi ho?

k-mushy mushy things.

She keeps her chin on his chest.

k-sujal, I am sorry naa baba. I love you. I missed you so much today.

She gives a peck on his cheek.

s-aaj spoony nahi uthegi?

k-nahi ! agar hum thodi thodi mushy mushy cheezein karein, bilkul hush hush bina awaaz kiya. Itna to hum kar sakte hai naa. Baaki zyada wali mushy cheezein baad mein.

She blinks her eyelashes close to his cheek vigorously that causes a tickling sensation in him & forces him to smile.

He wraps his arms around her tiny waist.

s-to kahan se shuru karein hum mushy mushy cheezein?

k-sabse pehle..chadaar odhke..hush-hush remember?

nice part

really cute set of parts neelu loved it cot soon

Part 38

Sujal is on kashish.

He plants a juicy kiss on her forehead.

s-you are so beautiful!

Then kisses her chin.

s-so hot !

then plants a kiss below her neck.

s-so sexy !

'whath is sexy and hoth?'

Sujal gets up abruptly hearing spoony's voice & k also sits up making her dress proper.

k-you..emm..you..are up..baby !

sp-yes ! what is sexy & hoth daddyiieeeeee?

k-nothing dear, go to sleep.

s-hot & sexy is your mother !

k looks at s, warns him with her eyes.

Sp-mommy??????? How????

s-emm..it means thatttttttt.......that your mommy is very sweet & cute !

sp-oh !

k-emm..come baby, spoony is a good girl naa & good girls go to sleep at this time.

K takes her to her bed & makes her go to sleep.

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Next day all three of them go to the amusement park together.

Spoony is very happy that today she has her 'daddieee ' with her.

Pura din zidd karke wo sujal ki godhi mein hi rehti hai, she seldom comes down from his lap.

Spoony goes to the ride specially for kids while sujal & kashish are waiting for her.

s-kashish, wo mera visa agent ka phone tha. Visa aa gaya hai. Aur usne India ki ticket bhi kara li hai.

k-oh ok

s-maine Varun aur Priya ko bhi phone karke bata diya hai ki hum aa rahe hain. Tum ready ho naa , tumhe koi problem to nahi hai naa.

k-nahi, maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki chal lenge. Bass spoony ko tum samjha lena.

s-nahi main uski baat nahi kar raha. Main soch raha tha ki India pohonchke shadai bhi kar lenge, to tum uske lie ready ho naa , tumhe koi problem to nahi naa.

K looks at him with astonishment.

k-are you proposing me or what?

s-yeah !

k folds her arms.

s-so?

k-i have to think about it !

s-what do you wanna think? We have to get married !

k-yes we do ! but......this is not the kind of proposal a lady expects.

s-what do you expect me to do? Bend down on my knees with a rose? Its been five years !

k-so what? Thode to romantic ho sakte ho !

s-oh kashish ! pleaseeeeeeee grow up !

k-don't speak to me ! [she folds her arms looks away]

s-what yaar ! wo..tum samajhti ho na..aur..spoony ke saamne mujhe sharam aati hai..wo kya sochegi !

k-mere saamne to nahi aati naa, itni baatein karli par ek baar thik se pucha tak nahi !

s-this is so obvious naa yaar ! this is so kiddish & girly !

k-go to hell !

she walks away with spoony who just came back from her ride.

Sp-mom I am hungry !

K hurriedly goes to a restaurant with spoony so sujal can't follow her in that crowd.

Spoony is having her favorite pizza.

Sujal is standing behind the glass, & kashish can see him. He can't come in because it's a restraint for kids where adults are not allowed without a kid.

He is waving to her to get kashish's attention but she is ignoring him & looking away.

Her phone beeps to signal the signal the arrival of a message.

Its from sujal.

I am SORRY ! I know I am a jerk ! but will you marry me?plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. MUAAAAAAAAAAH !!!!!!!!!!!

K smiles seeing the message & looks up outside the glass where sujal is there bent on his knees with a red rose in his hand.

She looks at him & nods happily, tears of joy rolling down her cheeks.

She blows a flying kiss towards him.

really cut part yaar neelu loved the proposal

wow

cute proposal

very nice & cute part neelu. proposal scene was so beautiful.

hey kitna cute scene tha...n sweetly romantic....sujal bhi na...propose krna nhi ata.....hehe....tht reminded me of wht sujal actually was.....b4 all the probs took place...tbhi bhi itna hi sharmata tha....kuch nhi ata tha use...bt finally he propsed n so cutely....