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Posted: 19 years ago

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Thank u for continuing!!!!! and i loved the part!!!do cont. soon, this is a gr8 fanfic, so i think u should try to update it more often.plzzzzzzzz

I am glad u liked it. I will try to update often but yeah I have updated it again. I hope that was long enough!

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I have continued! 😉 😆

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YES YES!!!! THANX FOR UPDATING AND I LOVED THE PART (as usual), i love angad's character!!!!!! and do cont. soon!!!! this fanfic is going gr8!!!!!
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Part 14:

Recap: See page 26 for the last part

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Angad grabbed Kripa's hand and dragged her to their room. Kripa followed him confusedly and they reached there;

Kripa: What are we doing here?

Angad: At our room obviously!

Angad opened the door and Kripa followed beside him. Angad grabbed Kripa's hand an put his hands around her waist. She looked at him nervous.

K: Angad what are we doing?

A: Dance?

K: Dance?

A: yeah I am going to teach you.

K: you are? She asked happily and excited.

Angad smiled and nodded at her childish behaviour. He read her excited and happy emotions played on her face. Kripa on the other hand was on cloud nine, she was so happy yet at the moment she feared her happiness would go away as they always do. During the past years of her life she learned not to remain to happy because she was happy when her maid raised her child, she began to love her as her mother but when she died, she was heart broken, devastated. The word 'loneliness' was her life!

K: Music?

A: I'll sing.

Angad instructed her to put her arms around her and do the steps. She followed his instructions did the steps. At one point she put his foot on his and he screamed so loudly that it scared her. Since Kripa was wearing high heals, Angad cannot control the pain but screamed loudly, adding to her weight she was putting on her heals! He immediately let go of her and jumped to the bed taking his shoes off and squeezing his toes! Kripa immediately rushed to him.

K: I am sorry!

Kripa touched where it hurts him, and he screamed loudly again. This time the scream did not come directly from his heart but from her touch. As she touched him, he felt electricity on his body and to an extent, he enjoyed it!

Kripa looked into his face and asked innocently: does it hurt?

Angad was taken away by this and replied; yes

Kripa knew what to do, she has learned this from her maid as when ever she used to get hurt she would come running to her maid crying and she would massage her. Kripa hold his leg and set down and put his leg on her lap. Kripa looked at him and smiled;

K: Close your eyes and if it hurts scream as much as you want.

Angad did what as she instructed, Kripa with her hands applied the cream on the part where it hurts him and massaged him. Angad with his eyes closed smiled and enjoying her touch and sensation as she massaged him.

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Angad waked up to find him staring at Kripa's innocent face. Kripa has slept whilst she was massaging Angad's foot, therefore her head was on his chest and half of her was lying on the floor. Angad blushed at the thought how Kripa cared for him.

Angad was never given a lot care from his parents' sine he was born, they were so busy in their business life. When he was six his parents has appointed him the personal tutor who taught him singing. After completing the course his tutor told his parents to start thinking of his career as a rock star because his voice is out standing. Naina, Angad's mother, was on cloud nine as she heard this; this was her idea after all! They both persuaded Angad to do it but he on the other hand had other plans because he wanted Normal life not like his parents!

***

Angad and Kripa were seated across each other in a restaurant waiting for the arrival for lunch.

A: Kripa Thank you

Kripa stared him confused: for what?

A: For what you did last night.

K: What I Did?

A: You took care of me..

K: I thought we were friends and you said no sorry and thank you

A: I know but still

K: O.K

A: It was the sweetest thing that any one has done for me

K: It was also the sweetest thing for me to have a special person like you' she muttered under her breaths

A: What?

K: Nothing.

Angad has heard all this, he smiled knowing she also has special feelings for him, almost blushed. Kripa noticed this

K: What are you smiling at?

A: nothing

K: 'Come on, I thought we were friends' she then pulled a puppy face in front of him that melted his heart.

A: How good we can lie at each other

K: Lie?

A: hmmm

K: like what?

A: Like you just did know

Kripa was embarrassed and made a face as she was caught red handed. She smiled sheepishly at him

K: How did you know?

A: because I know you very well!

'Thank you'

***

Angad and Kripa sat at the car, smiling to them secretly. It was the special feeling, the feeling of excitement as life as just began, feeling of hope, something to look forward to and best off feeling of someone to hang on to the person you can trust. They sat their quite listening to the tune that was being played at the Back ground.

The car then reached at Kripa's house. They both got out, feeling sad because they won't be seeing each other for long. Angad walked Kripa to the front door,

A: Kripa can I use your car today as you know my car is punctured

K: Sure

A: Great… I can pick and drop you off from college and I can take mine

K: Fine by me.

Kripa was about to go, Angad caught her arm turned her around and hugged her. Kripa hugged him back, smiling and blushing.

Angad then kissed on her cheek; Take care

Kripa: you too

Angad: Bye

Kripa: Bye

Angad: Good night...

Kripa was enjoying this; she was smiling to herself without knowing why…

Kripa: Angad

Angad: What?

Kripa: stupid, It's good evening not good night

Angad: So what, we are seeing each other now then we see tomorrow.. Same thing

Kripa was in no mood for arguments, Paagal, she thought

Kripa: Bye Angad.

With that she closed the door and Angad drove the car away. As she heard the engine roar away, she leaned against the door, smiling to herself, dreaming.

Coming up: Love confession and a shock!

I hope you will enjoy this part.

Love

Sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nabz8888

YES YES!!!! THANX FOR UPDATING AND I LOVED THE PART (as usual), i love angad's character!!!!!! and do cont. soon!!!! this fanfic is going gr8!!!!!

Thanks... I can feel your reaction 😆 😉. I will try to continue often during easter holidays 😃

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