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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

guyz i hv a favour to ask..read diz epi..nd try to imagine da scenez....😊

😊...................................2nd epi startz.......................................😊

[da door openz...in da room...a guy iz sitting in a wheel chair...luking through da window...tarin goes infront of him..]
[tarin takez out a yellow flower..out of her pocket...bendz down..nd givez it to him]

tarin- hii armaan..[smilez]

[our armaan...2 n half yearz dmg dekhne ke baad...we knw our armaan very well...natkhat..flirtu...pranku...cute sweet..adorable..fun-loving..happy go lucky..perfect in every way....we just luv him...right..??
..but now sumthing changed...kisi waje se...he lost da life in him...😭...kareeb 2 yearz pehle..we all knw..our beloved armaan had dat accident...dan shankey said...he will go mad eventually..or be brain dead..but he never told him da reason..neither tried to cure it..arey koshish karne paar toh..jo chaho woh mill jaye..[useless doc shankey newayz moving on]..armaan lost all hopes..trusting shankeyz predictionz..armaan got admitted to..panchgani mental asylum...woh nehi chata tha...ke uske waje se..kisi ko takleef ho..[aww luv him..😭]...admit ke baad..armaan ke upar kuch test kiye gaiye..MRI..nd blah blah...after a alot of test nd research it was found out..dat uske brain ke ek nerve mein 3 blood clotz hai..which was cancelling da blood flow..to one part of da brain..da blood clotz are drying rapidly..due to which da nerve iz also shrinking...da doctorz told him..dey can oporate but itz a risky procedure...derz a 85% chance he might die...nd 15% chance dat he will be cure completely...hearing dat his hopez raised..he said 15% chance of being wid my luv..ridhimma..he agreed..he will take da risk to be wid his lyf..once again..he asked da doctor...to give him sum time...opotration k pehle..woh kisi se milna chata tha...he left...came back after 4 dayz...all his hopez lost..he told da doc'z...mein yea decision apke upar chor ta hu...mein jiu yea maaru ab mujhe koi farak nehi parta..he also said..if i die...i want u to donate all my organz except my heart..kiu ke ab yea dil kisiki kaam ka nehi hai...da doctorz decided to oporate..nd it was successful...but..sumthing was wrong...armaan kahi kho gaiya..da lyf in armaan was missing..da body was missing itz soul...oporation k 1 saal baad bhi...armaan kahi nehi mila..still in a shock..body toh hai..but armaan ki soul kahi missing hai]

tarin- mujhe miss kiya..[nd looked @armaanz eyez]..tum na karo...maine tumhe bohot miss kiya...pata hai mein janti hu tum mere haar baat sunte bhi ho aur samajhte bhi ho...paar pata nehi kiu kuch nehi kehte..lekin tumhari jo yea bari bari..ankhe hai...yea mujhe sab bata deti hai...
[den tarin holdz da handle on da wheel chair..nd takez armaan out]
..ajj na hum bahar ghumenge...kiu k mujhe achi tarha pata hai...tumhe bahar ghumna bohot acha lagta hai...[parkz armaanz wheel chair..nd standz beside him..infront..was a big lake wid crystal clear water..around...dem green grass..loadz of flowerz nd..sum big trees]
..u knw armaan..if i cud..mein yaha humesha reh jati...apni duniya mein kho jati..real world se bohot dur chali jati...koi dard nehi no tension..bas shanti aur khushi...[smilez nd lukz @ him]..mujhe pata hai k armaan bhi yeahi chata hai...pata hai kaise...kiu k..tumhari ankhe abhi sapne se bhari hai...[nd holdz his hand]..pata hai..i dn't lyk tattooz.....but tumhare tattooz mujhe pasand hai.....

[tarin keepz on talking wid armaan...here in mumbai...ridhimma left for da airport]

[ridzii sitting in da car..nd checking her bag...to check she has everything or not]

ridzii- ticket check..address check..[den suddenly..she hearz a voice calling..ridhimma..soo intense..ridzii getz scared]..kiya..[she keepz luking right nd left..]yea kiya horaha hai...

driver- madam..apne kuch kaha....

ridzii- nehi kuch nehi app jao[tensed..she said to herself]...sumthing iz wrong..mujhe aisa kiu lagrahe kuch hone wala hai...[tensed ridzii pickz app da mobile..callz sid]...

sid- hello..

ridzii- hello..tum thik ho na...[worried]

sid- wow..itni tension...arey daro maat...mein kisi dusri larki pe dore nehi dalunga[nd laughz]...

ridzii- mazak baand karo..mujhe na ek ajib si daar lag rahi hai..kuch hone wali hai..

sid- tension maat karo...7 din ke liye door ja rahi ho na isiliye...newayz mujhe patient dekhna hai..u hv a safe journey...

ridzii- yeah mein samajhti hu...bye..apna khayal rakhna ok...

sid- ok..luv u...bye..

[sid hangz up...den just after hanging up..ridzii hearz a voice brushing up againgst her..ridhimma..tumne aisa kiu kiya..voice very intense..just den ridzii has a flashback of armaan...filled wid guilt ridzii shoutz]..armaan mujhe maaf kardo.....

[da illusion breakz...driver stopz da car..nd askz..]

driver- madam kiya hua..apko..app thik hai...

ridzii- mein thik hu..app chalo...

driver- madam airport agaiya...

ridzii- huh...umm.thik hai....mein jati hu..tum hospital chale jao...

[ridzii getz off da car...takez her bagz..nd startz walking..distracted ridzi..chalte chalte..she bumped into a kid...da kid fell...ridzi..usse uthane ke liye age bari]

ridzii-[feeling really sorry]...i am very sorry beta...really sorry...

kid- [smiled]..itz ok aunty...

ridzii- [kissed da boy]..thank u...apka naame kiya hai...

kid- mera naam armaan hai..[nd smiled]..

[ridzii shocked keepz luking @ da boy...nd suddenly..takez a back...]

kid- [confused]..aunty kiya hua...

ridzii- kuch..umm i am really sorry...

[nd startz walking..nd finally boardz]

[sitting on her seat..ridzii startz having..all da flashbackz of her nd armaan together..nd wht armaan did for her...da whole flight ridzii cudn't stop thinking about armaan]

[here in panchgani..tarin nd armaan..sitting by da lake]

tarin- u knw mein jab choti thi...mere bohot sapne the...but dhire dhire jab bari hoti gayi..mere sapne bhi tootte gaye..aisa kiu hota hai..😔..
mein abhi bhi mere un sapno se bohot pyaar karti hu...u knw sabse weird sapna kaunsa hai...mujhe ajj bhi lagta hai mere liye ek rajkumar ayega..mujhe le jane....safed ghore par na sahi...safed gari...par...[nd laughz]...

[just den a nurse comez]

nurse- maam..dr.kavya ka phn aiya tha..apko ghar bulaiya hai...kuch imp kaam hai...

tarin- [@nurse] thank u sister...[@armaan]..ajj humne kitni baatein ki na...tym ka pata bhi nehi chala...chalo abhi chalte hai..tumhe medz bhi toh lena hai...

nurse-[comez behind armaanz wheel chair..holdz da handle][@tarin]..maam yea toh kuch sun nehi sakhte..bol nehi sakhte...app unse itni baatien kiu karti hai..isse kiya samaj ayegi...

tarin- [getz pissed]...apko kisne kaha yea kuch sun bol nehi sakhte...

nurse- maam mein toh baas...

tarin- bas kuch nehi..u may go now...i will take him....

nurse- sry maam...

[da nurse leavez]
[at a distance sister sara..was standing...she called da nurse]

sister sara- jo kaam diya jata hai wohi karne ki kosish karo...tum ajj 1 ghanta ziada kaam karogi...

nurse- ji sister sara...

[dey both goes inside da hospital]

[tarin comez infront of armaan]

tarin- armaan..uski baat na dil pe maat lena...mein janti hu...tum sab sunbhi sakhte ho..aur samajh bhi sakhte ho...lekin kuch bolna nehi chate...
insaano ka kaam hi hai..bolna woh bolenge...tum baas avoid karo..aur kaho..all iz well...[laughz]...pata hai yea dlg 3 idiotz ka hai..mujhe na yea film bohot achi lagi..ak din saath milke dekhenge...[smilez]...abhi chalo...

[tarin bringz armaan..to his room..givez him his medz...nd den tugz him to bed]

[tarin comes back home..leavez da kyez nd bagz on da table..nd comez to da kitchen...]
[dr.kavya..cooking]
[tarin comez behind her mom nd hugz her]

tarin- mujhe na pata tha appp yeahi hongi...ajj toh mera turn hai na..cook karne ki..

kavya- hai tumhara turn hai..but maine socha meri beti..thak gayi hogi kiu na mein hi karlu..hhmmm..[smilez]...abhi jao freshen up ho jao..mein khana paros ti hu....

tarin- ok...ummm..u knw wht...??

kavya- wht..?[confused]

tarin- i hv da worldz best mom..sachi muchi..

[both smilez nd tarin leavez to get freshen up]

[after sumtym...both came..nd sat on da table..to hv dinner]

kavya- tumhari woh patient..armaan..kaisa hai..ne improvementz..

tarin- mom...dr.armaan...

kavya- ooh yes dr.armaan...sorry...how iz he..???

tarin- acha hai..u knw..mujhe pata hai...he understandz everything...sab thik hai..par for sab reason..kuch react nehi karna chahta..uski will to live..kahi missing hai...

kavya- hmmmm.....btw..ek doctor ane wali hai..doctor ridhimma..kafi achi doc hai..u knw na my friend dr.shashank..uski beti..armaan ki case mein madat karegi....
😊......................................2nd epi endz..................................😊

[ok guyzz i knw..woh stupid sid nd selfish ridzii...ko phirse layi...datz y..u guyz might feel bad...but to move da story forward..i needed dose loserz...]

newayz..i really hope u guyzz lyked it...doo comment..if u lyked it....nd do tell me if u wish me to continue...😊

epi 3[pg-5]- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1344021&TPN=5&#31520742

Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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Farzana

@FarzuIrani

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

actually now i cnat identify ridz and armman scence together

i dont know why 'but maybe matter of time

tarin but i loved you take care of armman

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Julie

@JULIEL

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

OMG .. I had tears in my eyes reading this ... please do continue soon.

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maggie131984

@maggie131984

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

please please continue. atleast i can relive the moments via you ff. i agree to everything u have written...

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No_Comments

@No_Comments

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

OOOOO....Loved IT!!!!! 😛
You are pretty good in writing
Keep it up....
Cont soon.... 😳

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Dhruvika

@dhruvikaluvsKSG

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

heyy dear

just ur ff

its so cool

plzz pm me whenever u update

n nice parts

luv dhruvika

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navtinder

@navtinder

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Hey dear,

I just came across this ff. And I love you for writing this one.

You can't even imagine I much I hate sidma, and that ridz so selfish women not only now but even when arman was there in memory loss track, she was thinking of dichting arman at her dad's words, and yeah all his friends are also so selfish. arman did so much for them but they didn't even thought of looking back at him once. My poor arman had to suffer so much.

so, I just love what you are doing now. please give him all his deserved happiness in this FF. and one more request, please make that ridz suffer for hurting my arman countless times.

I will be eagerly waiting for next part. continue soon and please add me to your pm list.

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

uwain uwain..................gadhi ridz ko us sid ki padi kamini..........................ohk fine aw i loved the caps.................n us dr.tarin ko bol mere ammy se zyaada chipke na...............kyunki chahe koi kuch bhi kar le ammy is atrue lover .............wo apni ridz ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta...aur haan pls ho sake toh in 7 dino k trip mai us sid ko upar bhej dena