pRiDa FF- AN UNTOLD STORY updtd pg21(part7)

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ankita

@Ankita_88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: naina.patel
aww that was so sad. poor aditi. grr im hating this simran already 😡
but anyways. awesome update! loving this ff [ 😊
and could you please pm me when you update next??

ok i will.i m adding u in my pm list.

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aparajhita

@.Aparajhita.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

my god.....pri cnt do dis...no he cnt.....
he slaped damz...dis cnt happen.....
fab part dear....made me cry.........pls continue soon.....

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Rachel

@Rach.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

OMG .... Prihviiii .... You CANNOT do thiss !!

FAB update Jhinks .. Loved reading each and every part of it !!

-- Rachy

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

awsm part jhinksy dear ! luvly ! 👍🏼

wuffffffff ! me nvr gng 2 pardon saket 4 dng dat 2 aditi ! hmmmmmm..

plzzzzz make hm grovel very badly on her feet b4 she 4gvs hm.. i dun want it 2 go prida way wer damzie dalng 4gvs wty pie pri easily .. atleast he dint insult her.. bt here hw dare he say such thngs abt her ?! hmm .. make hm grovel on his knees ! hmmph !

cnt asap dear !

luv Niki !

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Siddharth Patel

@-Sid-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

prithvi you surely need to learn to trust.

didi it was a fab part again. hey do i have to use the word fab again.

lolz yes i do it was fab,fab and just fab.

clearly visualized everything there.

continue sooner than possible

Edited by -Sid- - 15 years ago

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Keva

@Keva

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Awesome, fantabulous update. Waiting for the next part. I know it will fab just like your previous parts of this ff. 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Great part Jhinki!! OMG can't believe Saket slapped and humiliated Aditi like that!! Liked the way u told the story of what happened through the diary!! great job, will be waiting for more!

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deepak pandey

@deepak1989

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

nice stroy. i think u have to start story writing. i hope u will be a great witer in future. i love the scenes and the emotions and its too natural feelings in this story. i love it ...........

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

nice one Jinks do cont soon😃

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Jhinki,

Totally enjoyed this update...it was very very good. I cant Believe Pri said such awful things...but maybe as Saket and with enough provocation. I want to kill that girl...hopefull you will do that for me soon😈. Poor Damz/ aditi.....but I am sure she will put up a great front & fight this in her usual Classy way.

Do make Saket find the realily after a couple of fights ( well we dont want to give up on that😉) and make him stew please. I know how much of a soft corner you have for GK😆 - but still he does deserve it after the way Saket jumped to conclusions.😡

Looking forward to more GauCha moments & loads of rebudding romance.😳

& you better update soon.😊..not such a long wait that we had to undertake for this update.

Khushi.