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Posted: 15 years ago


Credit- Anu <3


Part 7

Precap- " Wow, Ridzy, mai masee banne wali hoon'yippie..!!"

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At the Mallik House,

" Ab mujhse wait nahi ho raha '.Aaj Armaan aa rha hai. Mai usse baat karne ke liye taras gayi hun." She looked at the watch. It showed the time 2.00 a.m.

She took her cell and messaged Armaan.

To- Armaan

Hy whre r u? Whn r u cuming home?

MSG DELIVERED

Riddhima, partly due to excitement and partly due to loneliness, was unable to sleep.

She felt her phone vibrate. " Must be Armaan's reply'.!"


" Nahi yeh to Di ka msg hai."


Inbox

Anjali di

Hey sweetheart, mujhe pta h tumhe neend nahi aa rhi h. U missing Armaan.

But apne liye nahi ,to Jr. ke liye thoda aaram kar lo.

To- Anjali Di

Haan di, mai rest karti hun..

Thnx 4 d concern'😊


MSG DELIVERED


She shut her eyes trying to feel the presence of life within her. It was a heavenly feeling. She was feeling proud, proud to be a mother soon.

Just then , the phone vibrated.


Inbox

Armaan

Hey relax Basket, m on my way. I will reach there by tomorrow. Will meet you at Sanjeevani.

p.s its 2 at night and your awake?!

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To- Armaan

I want u to cum soon. M missing u so much


MSG DELIVERED

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Next morning.

Riddhima yawned and opened her eyes. She was shocked to see that the time was 11.oo a.m. " Shit Riddhima, tu abhi tak so rahi h'kitni careless hai.."

Within a few minutes she got ready but as time was less , she skipped the breakfast.

To- Atul

Hey yr plz cafeteria mien mere liye breakfast ready rakhna'.m soo late

And dun tell di, agr usse pata chala, she will surely kill me.


MSG DELIVERED

At the cafeteria, Atul hid two sandwiches for Ridzy,

Anjali- arrey Atul, kya baat hai? Tujhe kuch zyada hi bhuk lagti hai'.

Just then, her pager rang and she left the cafeteria.

Atul- Phew, bach gaye.

Riddhima came and had her breakfast.

Atul ' yaar Ridzy

Ridz ' hmm

Atul- tune Armaan ko good newz sunai ?

Ridz- nope, baat nai hui usse, but mai usse aaj bata dungi'he will be so happy

Just then she was called to Dr. Shashank's office.

She sensed some serious talks between Shashank and Dr. Keerti.


Dr. K- Dr. Riddhima, please come in.

Shanky- Riddhima, hum aapke liye kuch hai '.

Riddhima- thanks dad, mujhe kudh bahot excitement ho rahi hai.

Dr. Keerti ' but Dr. Riddhima.

She stopped

Riddhima- kya hua Dr. Keerti? Kya koi baat aapko bother kar rahi hai?

Dr. Shashank- Dr. Keerti, aap Riddhima se akele mien baat karle to better hoga. Mere saamne who itna comfortable feel nahi karegi.

He picked up his files and went away.

Riddhima- Dr. Keerti please mujhe bataye naa kya baat hai? Aap itni serious kyu hai? Kuch hua hai kya? Dad itna weirdly kyu behave kar rahe the?

Suddenly, Riddhima felt dizzy and was in a fainting fit.

Dr. Keerti- Riddhima, relax, yaha baitho aur suno'.tum mujhe apna dushman mat samajhna '.baad mien thande deemag se sochna'.

Mere khayal se tum bahot jalbaazi kar rhi ho

Riddhima- kya matlab?

dr. Keerti- abhi tumhari pura carreer baaki hai Riddhima. Accha ek baat batao, tumhari ambition kya hai?

Riddhima- I wanted to be a very good doctor and make my father proud'

Dr. Keerti- And have you achieved your goal completely?


Riddhima- I don't know.

Dr. Keerti- You haven't reached its peak yet' you can still grow so much in your field'So does Armaan. We have a lot happening at our career fronts to take such a responsibility'

Riddhima- ' we'll manage' I mean everybody does'

But what do you want me to do?

Dr. Riddhima- Abort this child Riddhima

Riddhima felt herself going loose. She was terribly shattered and broken into pieces.


Riddhima- aapne yeh itni aasaani se keh diya? Yeh bhi nahi socha ki mujhpar kya beetegi?

She turned around and started walking with a heavy heart.


Dr. Keerti- Riddhima tum meri baat to suno


(She without turning)

Riddhima- ab sunne ko baaki kya reh gaya hai Dr. Keerti?

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Hello Riddhima/ nikki? ( she burst out crying) / kya hua ridzy tum ro kyu rahi ho? Sab theek to hai?/ ( ridzy told her about Dr. Keerti's convo)/ Riddhima tum chinta mat karo, unne jo kaha galat kaha hai/ aisa vaisa kuch mat karo/ mujhe pata hai nikki but mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha/ tum Armaan se baat karo iss baare mien/ theek hai nikki mai dekhti hun/ please apna khayal rakhna ridzy/ tum bhi nikki


After talking to Nikki, riddhima went to the locker room. She saw Armaan with Atul and Anjie.

" I hope inhone Armaan ko kuch bataya naa ho.."

She hugged Armaan, trying desperately not to break down. " Maine tumhe miss kiya."

" maine bhi"

" Armaan jao tumhe sister Stella bula rahi hai. Mai tumhe milti hun baad mien"


Armaan understood something was bothering her but he dint ask. He went.

She told Anjali and Atul what Dr. Keerti had said.

Atul- cheee, apne Sanjeevani ke liye iss had tak gir sakte hai log mujhe yakeen nahi hota

Anjali- Ridzy tu paagal ho gyi hai? Kyu tension le rhi hai? Mat maan unki baat '. Papa ka sapna to tu baad mien bhi poora kar sakti hai naa?Mujhe papa se yeh umeed nai thi.... woh aise kaise kar sakte hai?

Atul- Ridzy Armaan ke baare mie soch. kya wo seh payega.


Riddhima- Atul, kya Armaan bhi wohi sochta hai jo Dr. Keerti? Kya woh apne carreer par concentrate karna chahta hai? ( sobbing loudly)


Atul- nahi , mai usse acchi tarah jaanta hun, carreer se pehle uski life mien tum important ho..

Riddhima- di mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha. Mai kuch nahi soch pa rhi hun. Atul please mujhe drop kar de. Di aap Armaan ko koi bahana bata dena, and please usse sach mat batana . Mai ghar jaa rhi hun.


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at home,

At home, she called up Padma and cried a lot. Padma understood her and asked her to relax. She was very angry with Shashank for his insensitivity towards his daughter's happiness. She herself wanted to become a nani soon..!


Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha
Aakar mujhe tum tham lo
Manzil teri dekhe rasta
Mud ke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha

After a talk with mom, she felt better. She slept. She dint know for how long she slept.

Precap- will Riddhima listen to Dr Keerti and Shashank or Padma and her friends?


What will Armaan do after knowing this truth?



Edited by candygurl_ksg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Arushi!!!!!!!!!
beautiful update yaar....
it was sooo cute....😊😊
but dat Shanky Panky....he'z still da same...uhhhh...
n wats wiv Keerti????? has she lost it ???šŸ˜•šŸ˜•
she told Ridz 2 abort her baby caz she has 2 standup 4 her nerdy father's dream...
plzzzzzzzzz dun let Ridz do sumfin bad....i want AR happy atleast here....
n i hate dat GOONY AUNTY MANISHA...😔
i hope Armaan solves da prblmz sooon....
n hope AR hav da cutest baby eva😳
waiting eagerly 4 da next part...
n thanx alot 4 PMing me dis timešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
tc ...lots n lots of love..
JIA!!!!ā¤ļø
Edited by pinkss - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
hope ridzi doesnt listen to kriti and shanky
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmmmmmmmmm.......very very serious huh !
but very true to the characters u have portrayed.......u r doing justice to the characters.......😊
the way they think the way they behave is very natural...........there is a lot of stability in ur thots.......šŸ‘
u r a very good writer.....keep it up n please keep me updated thnx...😃
and of course please do give a dose of pure romance once in a while when the situation demands........hehehehehešŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MadAbtArmi

hmmmmmmmmm.......very very serious huh !

but very true to the characters u have portrayed.......u r doing justice to the characters.......😊
the way they think the way they behave is very natural...........there is a lot of stability in ur thots.......šŸ‘
u r a very good writer.....keep it up n please keep me updated thnx...😃
and of course please do give a dose of pure romance once in a while when the situation demands........hehehehehešŸ˜‰



Thnx a lot 4 d appreciation...
I will PM u 4 sure...
I will add romance once the situation is sought out..😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice ff dear
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear
just now completed reading all parts
its a very nice ff
do add me in ur PM list
pl continue soon
will wait for ur pm.
Luv
Amruta
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Posted: 15 years ago
do pm me the next part
ArushiBS thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey dear

just now completed reading all parts
its a very nice ff
do add me in ur PM list
pl continue soon
will wait for ur pm.
Luv
Amruta



thnx, i will add u nd cont ASAP
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy dear
such a huge twist...i will always hate shashank for this.....how can he be so insensitive......
pls make ridzi tell all this to ammy.....he is the only one who can support her in real sense....
newayzz......nice part...i confess that u are on e of the most fast and progressive writers i have seen
continue the good work
will wait for the following part
thanx for the pm
lots of love
kavya

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