MJHT FF: G.O.L . . A ❤️ Triangle (LastCh - Pg.107) - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HI DEAR,
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Your FF is very nice and sounds really interesting
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plz do continue more longer parts soon.👏

Plz add me in ur pm list👏
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Prachi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
superb upd8 dear!!!
I luvd this new idea of urs!!!!
amazing!!!
i wud luv to read moree....
plsss do cont asap...
thanx 4 d pm.. :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
woow...loved it...great start...continue soon kanky...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
hey add me to pm list pls continue and update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
nice.....awesome!! luved it jiah!!- MAYUR ROCKS
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Hola guys!! The response was overwhelming! Thanks a lot. Love ya all. Here's one last update . . . and after that, you need to wait till my exams get over. 🤗


Chapter 2


A week passed away. Nupur was finally sand enough and came back to senses. Reason being, Mayank took her care the way a mother does. His love and affection did not let Nupur hurt herself again. But what made Nupur curse herself was that during that time, she fell all the more in love with him.

Nupur went to the college after almost a week, she was dressed in a white sleeveless kurti and jeans with her hair tied in a bun. She looked a bit pail.

A girl in the college's Cheer Leading Squad came running to her. She hugged her.

"Nupur, are you mad? Why did you do that?? I wasn't even here to look after you."

"Never mind. You're guy took good care of me, Gunjan."

"This ain't the answer to my question."

"I need to go now. See ya around Gunjan."

"Ise kya ho gaya?" the girl, Gunjan thought.

* * *

Mayank was in the football ground and it was time for Nupur to go there and wait for him. As always. Nupur was waiting, just then Gunjan came and joined her. Nupur always made Mayank drink MILK there at that time everyday!! 😆 She was up with some hot milk, CHINU ke haath ka, waiting for him . . . when suddenly Gunjan came and asked her to give it to her and leave for some Professor was calling her.


"Fine! But make sure he drinks it."

"Ya ya , fine."

Just when Nupur was about to leave, Mayank came running and stopped her. And hugged her as tightly as ever. Though, she didn't respond, leaving Gunjan completely unnoticed. Though, Gunjan was okay with it. 😊

"Kahan jaa rahi thi tu?"

"Wo Gayatri Ma'am ne bulaya hai."

"Mera dudh? CHINU K HAATH KA?" 😛

"Go have it, Gunjan's there with it. And make sure you finish it. Bye."

"Arey . . "

He was left confused, scratching his head. 😆

"Jaan, your milk. Here!" said Gunjan, while patting his shoulder.

"Thanks sweetie." he thanked her.

* * *

Uday, Gunjan's twin brother always picked her up from the college leaving Mayank have no choice but to ride his best friend home. As always, he was waiting for her. He had been waiting for the past 15 minutes, just when Dia came, Nupur's younger sister, studying in class 12th of a school near to the college.

"Bhaiya . . . can you drop me today? Di has already gone and I've got late. Else, I would have gone on my own.

"Already gone? Strange! Anyway, come. I'll drop you." he said.


* * *


Mayank dropped Dia home. He greeted Nani and went up to Nupur's room, which was locked but by mistake, she felt the window half open, Mayank could see every action of hers. She was dancing on the song "Dancing Jodi" . . . Nupur was kinda fond of dancing, it made her feel happy. Not many people knew that she could sing and dance, Mayank was amongst the very few people who did.

"Man! She's such a rocking dancer! BREATH TAKING!" he thought.

Her hair were seemed to be flying in the air. She was was sweating. After she was done with the sance, she went inside the cupboard and wore her Ghunghru . . . she knew classical dance as well. And by that time, Mayank had already entered the room and hid behind the curtain. Nupur started doing Kathak . . . there was this step in which she was supposed to twirl . . . she all of a sudden lost balance and in order to catch her, Mayank came out and held her hand.

"Aaram se." he said in the utmost concerned tone.

"TU?"

"Oh, haan. MAIN!"

"Kabse?"

"Aadhe ghante se. You are such a . . .BREATH TAKING dancer. And you look so beautiful, I've got no words." he said.

"Shut up! Bass karr, aur bahar nikal." she said, blushing. 😳

"Arey par . . ."

"GET OUT!"

"Tu aaj mere saath kyun nhn aayi wapis?"

"Wo bass, aaj kuch kaam tha isliye. Sorry."

"Fine, I'll leave now. Kal se aana par, PLEASE! Take care."

""Kahin jaana hai?"

"Haan! Gunjan k saath date pe."

"Oh, bye." her face's glow vanished away.

"Bye sweets!" Mayank kissed her on the cheek and left.


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How's it guys? Please hit the like tab and dun forget to comment. KUDOS!!

Love,
Jiah (Kanky) 😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hey Kanky!!!
luvly post!!!
omgg...twas soooo nicee!!!! :) :)
m in luv with this one!!!!
can't wait to read more...
thanx 4 d pm, btw!
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey kanky....

tujhe is update se pehle ek baat batani thi!!!!! guess what? i got a big compliment on my story published on my blog....

aur tu galti se bhi yeh mat bhool jaana ki hum logon ki kal jo baat ho rahi thi, woh adhoori reh gayi thi.......u got to complete what u said....

chal ab teri padhti hoon.........

i know yaar.....we tend to do things for sometimes......i mean like it never happened........one sided love always get sacrificed....

i too can sing and dance........and nupur too can do so......

but i loved their frdship......and also gunjan........and i also loved the update!

keep updating sis!

love ya.
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Lovely part Jiah, i like the frndship MN share........but Nupur's pain hurts a lot........hope things be fine soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
aweome update
continue soon
thanx for the pm

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