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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update!!!!
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm



Thanks dear

Will try to continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey shreya amazing update, wow taj mahal i would love to visit it as well man, sad been to delhi but didn't visit it.



Thanks for liking it, Senny

Even me... That's why I wrote it on Mayur, na...

I have visited but was with my parents..and once with my classmates on tour...

Will visit with my life partner for sure in future...after I will find who he is... 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: armayurfan

nice update shreya.
loved it.
continue soon with a long one.



Thank you so much dear

Sure... Will try to update a long part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago


Thanks Divya 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,

awesome part

thanks for PM.

continue soon


love

Riddss



Thanks for liking it, Riddss

Welcome

I will try to update asap

Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavana92

awesome part Shreya!
do update soon....



Thanks Bhavi

I will try to update asap

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hiii shreya lovely updt

mayur were toooo adorable

love it!!...cont sonn

see yaaaaaa

love yaaaaaa

muuuaaaaah



Thanks Monu

Love,
$hrey@


Originally posted by: SHINKI

IT was rocking

do conti. soon



Thanks for liking it, Shivu

I will try my best to update asap

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy shreya
Amazing update
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm



Thanks Sakura

I will try to update asap


Originally posted by: .rumki.

ew like the whole part😊

con soon



Thanks Rumki

I will try to..... 😊 😊


Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

i readed it all the parts

</div>n loved it thanks 4pme 🤗
<div>
love samira



So sweet of you dear

I amglad you liked the FF.

Love,
$hrey@


Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow

this part was so cute


loved the way nupur trusts mayank


continue soon


luv


mahima



Thanks Mahima

I am glad you liked it, dear

I will try to update asap

Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok, friends... here is the update

I hope you will like it




Nupur woke up early in the morning and got ready. She went to Mayank's room to wake him up.
N: Utho Mr. Mayank Sharma. Taiyar nahi hona hai? Me jaa ke breakfast banati hu. Ok?
Mayank looked at her. She was looking so cute, sweet and SO different in formal shirt and trouser. She had tied her hair in a ponytail. No makeup at all. Just a bit of eye liner and some powder.
M: Ok, Sweet heart. Me abhi taiyar ho ke aya.
N: (To herself) Sweet heart? Ise kya ho gaya he subah subah?
M: Kya hua, jaan?
N: Kuchh nahi, me jati hu. Kitchen me aao, jaldi.
M: As you wish, darling.
Utterly confused Nupur left to kitchen. "Pata nahi, subah subah kya ho gaya he? Pehle Sweet heart, Phir jaan, phir darling. Kahi bimar to nahi hua he vo?"
Mayank came from behind walking as quietly as he could, and hugged her from behind. "I love you, Nupur" He whispered in her ear making her shiver.
N: Mayank, chhodo na. Kya kar rahe ho?
M: Apni pyari si, cute si girlfriend ke sath romance kar raha hu.
N: (Pushed her gently) To phir training me nahi jana he kya? Me tumhare dad ya Mr. Vyas se phone karti hu, aur kehti hu, Mr. Mayank Sharma ko training me nahi jana he. How's that?
M: Hmm…. Blackmailing? Ok, I will be back in some time.
Nupur shakes her head and starts to prepare sandwiches for their breakfast.
After half an hour, they were all set to go.
As they reach the training center, they need to go to different counters to get the details. They met each other after 15 minutes. Nupur was with the other guy, who was looking as dashing and handsome as a film star can only look.
N: Mayank, is se milo. Ye he Poorab. Poorab Malhotra. Diya's cousin. We heard each other's names from Diya before ages. And here we meet each other. We rae partners for training project. Isn't that great?
Mayank felt a pang of jealousy after hearing all this. He was really feeling sad that his partner was someone else instead of Nupur. Just then a girl came there. "Hey guys, Do you know any Mayank Sharma?"
M: I am Mayank. And you must be Annie, Right?
J: Absolutely. So chale? Jaldi se projects start karne he na?
N: Ha, me aur Poorab bhi chalte he.
P: Hmm… After you. (He indicated her to go ahead bowing slightly)
Nupur smiled and went from there.
Mayank also went with Annie. After that they met up with each other in lunch break only. That too, for 15 minutes only. And all in all, they were with Annie and Poorab so couldn't talk to each other properly.
Nupur was happily talking to Poorab about Diya and their school memories, college days, and anything she could remember of. Poorab was listening with too much interest, much to the irritation of Mayank.
Mayank tried to control his anger and engrossed himself in project talk with Annie.
At the time they had to go home….
Poorab and Nupur came out of their class. Annie had already left bidding good bye to Mayank. Mayank was waiting for Nupur like anything. As he saw her, he took a breath of relief.
As they reached him, he said… "Kitni der laga di, Nupur?"
N: Sorry.
P: Hey, dude. It's ok. You didn't need to worry. Me drop kar deta Nupur ko. Tumhe chale jana chahiye tha na?
M: It's ok, Poorab. THANKS for THIS MUCH HELP.
P: Oh no. Mention not. Ok, Bye Nups.
N: Bye, Poorab.
M: NUPS?
N: Of ho… Vo mujhe Nups hi bula raha he subah se. Diya ne us se kaha hoga isi liye. Chalo, ab jaldi se chalte he. I am damn hungry.
M: (Controlled his anger) Thik he. Chalo.
After they reached home, they got freshened. Mayank sat on drawing room sofa, reading news paper. Nupur prepared dinner for them. But when she went to call Mayank for dinner, she found him sleeping on the sofa only. "Arre, Ye Mayank bhi na? Bina khaye hi so gaya?"
She saw him in deep sleep. She went near him, sat there on her knees, looked at him adoringly. "I am really feeling bad, Mayank, ki hum pura din me ek dusre se thik se baat nahi kar paye. I missed you so much." She kissed his cheek lightly and went in her room.
Mayank woke up in 5 minutes. "Kitna achha sapna tha na. Kash Nupur sach me ye sab kehti. Magar vo he kaha?"
He went to the kitchen just to find out the dinner ready but Nupur was not there. He called her, "NUPUR… Kaha ho tum?"
N: Ayi Mayank. Tum so gaye the na, to mene socha thoda project ke liye prepare kar lu.
M: Hmm… Chalo. Khana kha le?
N: Ha. Chalo.
They had their dinner. Then both of them went on terrace to sit on swing in wind. Nupur kept her head on his shoulder and was looking in the space.
Mayank put his hands around her shoulder. He was feeling content and happy as she was in his arms.
M: Kya soch rahi ho, Nupur?
N: Kuchh nahi. Bas ese hi.
M: Mujhe bhi nahi bataogi?
N: Maa ki yaad aa rahi he, Mayank.
M: Hey, Nupur. Don't worry. Chalo. Maa ko phone kar lo. Me bhi Maa, Papa se baat kar leta hu. Both of them talked to their parents.
Mayank came to Nupur, "Nupur, Dad tum se baat karna chahte he."
N: Maa, 1 minute. Tum Mayank se baat karogi? Me abhi ayi.
NM: Haa, Beta. De to use phone.
Nupur and Mayank exchange the phones.
Nupur and Mayank's dad convo:
N: Hello, Sir.
MD: Sir nahi, uncle. Mayank ne mujhe sab kuchh bata diya he. Me aur Mayank ki mom dono hi tum se milna chahte he.
N: Ji uncle, Me bhi. Kese ho aap?
MD: Thik hu, beta. Tumhe vaha par koi pareshani to nahi he na?
N: Nahi, nahi uncle. Sab kuchh thik he.
MD: Aur beta, jee jaan se project me dhyan dena. Agar is training me tum dono ka performance achha hua, to hamari company ko International recognition certificate milega, jisse hame business me faida hoga.
N: Ji. Uncle. We will try our best. Don't worry.
MD: Thik he, ab me phone rakhta hu. Bye. Aur apna aur mayank ka dhyan rakhna.
N: Ji. Pranam.
Nupur was feeling happy as she knew that Mayank's mom dad knew everything about her.
Mayank and Nupur's mom's convo:
M: Namaste aunty, kese he aap?
NM: Thik hu, Beta.
M: Aur uncle?
NM: Vo bhi thik he. Magar hum logo ko Nupur ki bahot chinta ho rahi he, Mayank.
M: Aap pareshan mat ho, aunty. Mene kaha than a ki me Nupur ka khayal rakhuga.
NM: Haa, Beta. Vo to he magar…
M: Beta kehte ho, aur itna sa trust nahi he?
NM: Nahi, beta, esi baat nahi he. Aaj tak kabhi Nupur ko ankho ke samne se nahi jane diya, isi liye.
M: Me samaj sakta hu, aunty. Aap fikar mat karo.
NM: Agar tum kehte ho to maan leti hu. Achha, ab iske papa aa gaye. Me phone rakhti hu. Khaha lagana he.
M: Ji aunty. Namaste.
Mayank and Nupur kept aside the phones.
M: Aunty se baat ho gayi na? Ab thik ho na?
Nupur just looked at him lovingly.
M: Nupur, Kaha kho gayi?
N: Uncle se baat ho gayi. Is liye jyada khush hu.
M: Kya?
Nupur hugged Mayank out of blue. "Thanks Mayank. For coming in my life. I promise me tumhe kabhi shikayat ka mauka nahi dugi."
Mayank was taken aback by her sudden hug and this emotional talk but hugged her back. "Shhh… Nupur… Kya ho gaya?"
N: I am happy ki tumne uncle aunty se sab bata diya he.
M: Oh… Vo. Me un se kabhi kuchh nahi chhipata. Parents hame freedom dete he, so I think we must not misuse it.
They broke the hug. Nupur was now in her dramatic mood again.
N: Oye hoye Mr. Sharma… Kya baat he, aaj bade dialogue shilogue maar rahe ho?
M: Ab kya karu? Saubat ka asar he. You know? (He flashed his 1000 Watt smile to her)
N: Achha, Annie itni dramatic he kya? Ch…ch…ch… All the best.
And Nupur ran away after ruffling his hair. Mayank followed her. "Nupur ab tum nahi bachogi. Pehle to mera majak udati ho. Upar se mere baalo ko chhuya."
N: Pehle pakdo to sahi. Mayuuuuuu…
M: What's this, Nupur? Ab tum mujhe Mayu kab se bulane lagi?
N: Abhi abhi se…. Mayuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
They were in hall by now. Running around the sofa like little children.
Nupur didn't notice Mayank changing his direction and bumped straight in him. And they fell on sofa with Mayank on top of Nupur.
Mayank smirked… "Hmmm…. Ab bolo."
Nupur started shouting again, "Mayuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu"
As she did this Mayank put one of his hands on her mouth. While his other hand was holding her elbow. As he shifted for that, his full weight was on Nupur now. Chills ran down her spines as she was feeling his body touching her body.
She lowered her eyes, and her face was red like tomato….due to which Mayank noticed their closeness. He stood up and Nupur also stood up straightening her suit.
M: Sorry. Vo me… actually…
N: It's ok. You don't need to give explanation, Mayank.
Then they went to their own rooms to sleep.




So now tell me, how was that? I wanted to write this FF's update in afternoon only with my other Ff updates. But mood nahi ho raha tha. Agar tab likhti to thik se likh nahi pati. So abhi likha... Now comment and tell me how you feel for this?

Hit the Like button too if you liked the update

Love,
$hrey@
Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
shreya aaj toh hamari lottery lagi hai..

Ek hi din mein 4 updates wow...thank u soo much hun..

Update was fantastic ahem swtheart darling.,janeman..bechari nupur kitni confuse hogayi ti.

Loved d update as usual.

Do continue s0o0n.

P.s:im first to comment.

❤️kulsum❤️
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
im the first to comment
awesum update but i wish end main mayur ke beech main thoda romance hota
a rocking update on the whole

*editted*
second
koi baat nahi 😆
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

superp awesome update lov

i loved it nup's dailogue
Nupur hugged Mayank out of blue. "Thanks Mayank. For coming in my life. I promise me tumhe kabhi shikayat ka mauka nahi dugi."
it was gooooood part
update soon thnx 4 d pm

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