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Posted: 15 years ago
#551

That was a really nice update Shreyu.. and confession on the way.. i m so dying to read that update... and i'll get behind Nidzy to update her FF.. btw, even u have two more FF's to be updated...

So, u also have to update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#552
simply loved the part to the core yaar.amazing truely!!plzz continue soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#553
Heyyyy shreya
Amazing update
Nupur hates liars...
But mayu ne to bahut jhooth hole hain
Ab kya hoga
Waiting for confession
Hope nupur haan kahe
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#554
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Posted: 15 years ago
#556
Hey... when are you gonna update???
Pls update soon...

- Pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#557
Hey, friends.. Even I want to update. But ye Nidzy Love unconfessed update kare to na...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#558
Hey friends... I am back with another part. Sorry if I made you wait for long...Here it is..




PART 14:


Mayank and Nupur reached the Sharma Nivas in half an hour.


They came out of the taxi and took their luggage. Mayank paid the fare and the driver drove away.


N: Mayank...


M: Haan? Nupur?


N: Hum yaha pahoch to gaye, magar keys kaha he hamare paas?


M: He. Mr. Vyas ne di thi mujhe.


Mayank opened the door and led her inside.


They kept the luggage at side and sat on sofas opposite to each other.


M: Thak gaya hu. Baap re. Travelling can be so tiresome.


N: Really. Aur bhukh bhi bahot lagi he.


M: Pehle to mujhe nahane ka mann kar raha he.


N: h. Bahot garmi lag rahi he.


M: Ok. To kon se kamre me rahogi tum?


N: Pehle ham ghar to dekh le. Koi guest room hoga vo mujhe chalega.


M: Magar, Nupur... tumhe jo kamra chahiye us me reh sakti ho na tum.


N: Mayank. Ye tumhara ghar nahi he. Mana ki bada ghar he aur bahot sare kamre he, magar hume ye sochna chahiye na ki agar unke bete ya beti ka kisi ka kamra ho to unhe ye pasand nahi ayega ki koi aur us me rahe.


M: Actually...(Abhi batau ya raat ko? Kya karu? Oh God! Please help me...)


N: Kya hua? Kaha kho gaye?


M: Kuchh nahi. Chalo dekh lete he.


Mayank shows Nupur all the rooms and finally he stops in front of one room.


M: Hey, this seems like a guest room.


N: h. Mujhe bhi ye hi lagta he.


M: You liked this room?


N: No. I LOVED it. Kitna lovely decoration he. Aur mera favourite colour wall ke liye. Cream. And balcony bhi kitni spacious he. Me isi kamre me rahugi.


M: Ok. No problem.


Mayank brings Nupur's bags and keeps in that room.


Mayank was going while Nupur realized something.


N: Arre, Mayank?


M: h, Nupur?


N: Tum kaun se kamre me rahoge?


M: Dekhta hu. Shayad niche vo jo corner vala room tha vo bhi guest room jesa laga to..


N: Ok. Me fresh ho ke kitchen me jati hu.


M: Ok. Me bhi naha ke ata hu.


Mayank goes in the room and keeps the luggage. He takes bath and comes out of the room.


M: Nupur, tum kitchen me ho?


No reply came from her so Mayank went in the kitchen to look.


Mayank found her climbed on the table. She was standing on her toe and peeping in the shelf to find something.


M: Kuchh dhundh rahi ho, Nupur?


Nupur was startled by his sudden voice and lost her balance. Mayank was not paing attention at that time so he also got struck by her. Both fell on floor.


M: Ouch..


N: Ooppss... Sorry.


Mayank looked at her face. Her hair were falling on her face blocking Mayank's view. Mayank moved his finger on her face and moved her hair aside.


Nupur was feeling numb but suddenly she realized their position and stood up.

Mayank also stood up from the floor. Both were not able to meet each other's eyes.


N: Vo.. Sorry.. Actually.. tumhari awaz achanak se ayi to.. me darr gayi thi.


M: It's ok. Kuchh nikalna he shelf se? Me nikal deta hu.


N: h, vo salt, sugar dono nahi dikh rahe he.


M: Nupur, hum abhi bahar kahi lunch le lete he. Baad me kuchh chize le ayege market se. Thik he?


N: Magar Mayank..Abhi bahar jane ka mann nahi he.


M: Ok, me ek kaam karta hu. Bahar se khana pack karva ke le ata hu.


N: Ok.


M: Hm.. Chinese, right?


N: Tumhe kese pata?


M: Bhool gayi? Us din hamare parcels exchange ho gaye the. Aur next day office me....


N: Bas bas. H, jaldi karna. I am so much hungry.


M: h, bas yu gaya aur yu aya.


Mayank and Nupur took their lunch. Then both went to their rooms to sleep as they were tired. In the evening, they went for shopping and after that went in hotel for dinner. After they came back, Nupur arranged the kitchen necessities and then they went to sit on terrace.


M: Umm.. Nupur.


N: h, Mayank?


M: Mujhe tum se thodi jaroori batein karni he.


N: To kya permission leke karoge? Bolo na?


M: Actually, me..vo.. kya he na ki...


Nupur's cellphone buzzed.


N: Ek minute.


M: h.


N (On phone): h Diya, kesi ho? Me thik hu. H, Mayank bhi yahi he. H, bol dungi. Sammy kesa he? Ok, thik he.. bye, h. Me kal tumhe call karugi. Good night.


N: Mayank, Sammy aur Diya dono ne tumhe yaad di he. Tum kya keh rahe the?


M: Nupur, mene tum se bahot sare jooth bole he, ya phir sach chhipaye he.


N: Jooth? Kya?


M: Pehle to, aaj jab tumhe ye laga tha ki me tumhe apne ghar la raha hu... To h, Nupur, you are right about that.


N: Matlab? Me kuchh samji nahi.


M (Taking a deep breath): Me hi hamari company ke owner ka beta hu.


N: Very funny, Mayank. Majak bandh karo, ok?


M: Nupur, ye majak nahi he. Ye sach he.


N (Still not taking this seriously): To office me kisi ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?


M: Kyuki office me bahot kam logo ko pata he. Sirf receptioninst aur Mr. Vyas un dono ko hi pata he.


Nupur thinks about that for a minute. Of course! She knew that the receptionist always respected Mayank and called him 'Sir'. And Mr. Vyas trusted Mayank for anything.


N: Pranav, Rishabh, Sammy kisi ko bhi nahi pata?


M: Nahi.


N: Magar ye kese..


M: Mene kisi ko bataya nahi, kyu ki.. me apni mehnat se life me kuchh karna chahta hu. But dad wanted me in his company only. So I had to do this.


N: Mayank.. tum.


M: Mere sath aao, chalo.


Mayank gets up and waits for her to stand up. Nupur was still confused. So Mayank pulled her by wrist and went to one of the room.


He opens the room and takes Nupur inside. He switches on the light.


Nupur was shocked. All the walls contained so many photographs of Mayank. From childhood to present. Nupur didn't know how Mayank looked in his childhood, but that dimple smile was so similar.


N: Mayank, ye..


M: Ye mera kamra he.


They quietly went to the terrace and sat on swing there.


N: Ab samaj me aya, ki tumhe address kyu yaad tha. Tumhe ghar ke sab kamre ke bare me kese pata tha. Mayank..


M: h?


N: Aaj tak kisi ko nahi bataya, to ye aaj tum mujhe kyu bata rahe ho?


M: Actually, me tumse kafi dino se bat karna chahta hu, magar.. dance competition ke baad...


Nupur's face fell down. "Please, Mayank, hum kuchh aur baat nahi kar sakte?"


M: Nupur, please aaj meri bate sun lo. Please.


N: Bolo.


M: Ek aur jooth jo mene tum se bola he vo ye he ki, Meri girlfriend Arti ke bare me... Actually Arti naam ki kisi ladki ko me nahi janta aur na hi meri koi girlfriend he.


N (Thinking): Mayank ko aaj achanak kya hua he? Vo apni life ke bare me mujhe kyu itna sab bata raha he. Kahi vo bhi mujh se pyar to nahi karta?


M: I am sorry, Nupur. Mene tum se jooth bola.


N: It's ok, Mayank.


M: Nupur, ek aur baat bhi he.


N: Ab bhi kuchh baki he, Mayank?


M: Pata he, tum mujh se bahot naraj ho, magar..


N: Esi koi baat nahi he, mujhe ye hi pata nahi chl raha he ki tumhe apni girlfriend ke bare me mujhe jooth bol ke kya faida?


M: Sorry Nupur.


N: It's alright. Bolo, aur kon sa atom bomb he?


M: I love you, Nupur.


N: Mayank, tum ye kya..


M: Shh... 1 minute. Me tum se kab se pyar karta hu, Nupur. Us din jab Suhani ne mujh se puchha, to use mana karne ka ek hi reason tha ki me pehle tum se ye baat kehna chahta tha. Aur jab tumhe galat fahmi hui, tum mujh pe gussa hui, to mujhe laga, ki tum mujhe pyar nahi karti, to uski vajah se me upset tha. Magar ab me janta hu, in sab misunderstanding ko door nahi karege to hum puri life na hi ajnabee ban ke reh payege, aur na hi dost ban payege.


N: Tumhe kese pata ki mujhe kya galatfahmi hui thi?


M: Kyuki me tumhara Arrman hu, Basket.


Nupur felt like her head is spinning.


N: Kya? Tum hi Arman ho.. to tumne mujh se chhupaya kyu?


M: Mujhe tum Basket ho ye us waqt pata chala, jab mene tumhari story padhi.


N: Oh...


M: Nupur. I am sorry, mene tumhe pareshan kiya aaj subah uske liye.


N: Mayank, mujhe nind aa rahi he. Me sone jaa rahi hu.


Nupur stood up and was going when Mayank grabbed her wrist and stopped her. Nupur tried to free her hand but couldn't so she stopped attempting.


Mayank made her face him by her shoulders. "Nupur, me janta hu ki abhi tumhare mann pe kya bit rahi hogi. I am really sorry."


N: Tum mujhe usi waqt sach bata sakte the jab tumhe sach pata chala.


M: Mene socha ki subah office me batauga, magar tum to office me mujh se baat hi nahi kar rahi thi. Uske baad Delhi ate waqt bhi tum thik se baat nahi kar rahi thi.. to mene socha ki tumhara mood thik karne ke liye mujhe abhi Mayank nahi Arman banne ki jayada jaroorat thi. Aur isi liye tum se jooth bhi bol diya ki me apni girlfriend Arti se baat kar raha hu.


N: Mayank, mujhe chhodo.


Mayank left her hand but instantly cupped her face.


M: Please Nupur. Meri galti to me manta hu na. Please mujhe maaf kar do.


Mayank was on verges of tears. Nupur looked in his eyes and found the love of whole the world in those deep brown eyes.


She stared at him for a minute and then hugged him suddenly. Mayank was taken aback by her sudden reaction but he responded to hug.


N: I love you, too, Mayank.


M: I know.


They stood there in embrace for somw time. Then Mayank broke the hug.


M: Nupur...


N: h, Mayank?


M: I am really sorry ki meri vajah se tumhe itna hurt h. I promise, aage se kabhi esa nahi hoga. Trust me.


N: I trust you Mayank, more than I trust myself. Tumhe safai dene ki koi jaroorat nahi he.


M: Ab j ke so jao. Kal jaldi jana he. Traininh venue pe registration ke liye. Jaldi taiyar ho jana. Thik he na?


N: h. Good night, Mayank.


M: Good night.


And both went to their rooms and slept peacefully with a wide smile of happiness, feeling content.





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Finally.. they confessed... even my head was spinning....gol gol ghoom rahi thi.. agar mujhe yeh sab pehle pata nahin chalta toh Nupz ki tarah mein bhi merry-go-round ki spin kar rahi hoti... I can heave a big SIGH of RELIEF now... i so loved the conversation and the Magical Mayur HUG.....🤗 AWWWWWWWW.. 😍 the sweetest and the cutest ever.. hmmmmm.. I am really happy about this update... good u made it up for your absence..

Lovely Update!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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