Bhavana's Gallery of Stories-New OS-Pg 18 - Page 6

Bohut khoob...... 👏
Loved it...!!!! 😳

Oh Bhavi awesum awesum fabulous OS, You wrote so well yaar.

I am fan of urs now........i loved this one.

Mayank's concern fo his wife Nupur, u have described it so well.
Love you for this and now come back soon.............

Love you.......

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

tune woh os likh bhi liya?

mujhe bahut kushi hai ki tune ek naya os likh liya.....

i loved how mayank got concerned about her......and i really cud feel what happens when u are in a situation where u know that u somehow have to take urself out......i know this better coz i have faced it.......so i know abt nupur.....

and i am so happy that mayur are wedded......and negative thoughts do haunt u when ur beloved is in danger! u just can't help having them! but i am so happy that mayank found that pink pallu of her.....yaar u know that i simply love this colour!

yaar i am really really trying hard not to cry after reading the description.......i just can feel the pain! and u know how sensitive i am! and i loved how mayank saved her........somehow when ur closed ones are with u.....u seem to have the utmost of strength coming to u......

and i loved the description u gave.......and i simply love that without the actions.....u portrayed some feelings......and i loved........i simply loved the ending lines.....

awesome os!

and i loved it to the core of my heart!



loved it yaar!

its fantastic.......

mind blowing........

besides one more thing i need to tell u before i go off.........i have added ur oneshots on my site......and i am also want to inform u that now i am gonna write some personal stories which i haven't published so far....i am gonna publish them on my site.....so check for my site atleast once in a week......after ur exams get over......

http://mahak-goel.webs.com/

and once again i am repeating myself by saying that "i loved it"

awesome!

do write more.........and don't forget to pm me ever!

love,
Mahak

awww Mahi!thanx a million!🤗 i've tried my best in writing it.....glad u loved it....
actually i'm not much experienced in writing action sequences.....so i've concentrated on the emotions, as itz much easier than action😊.....glad u liked the ending lines!i always try 2 write the begin& ending lines a bit differently every time.....😉
thanx 4 adding these OSs.....of course, i'll be more than happy & excited 2 read ur works, they're fantabulous!😃
don't worry, i'll write as soon as i get any new concept....i'm always restless until i write off any new concept i get!😆
thanx again!

Bhavana

@ myownarea : thanx a lot Divya! glad u liked it!

@Rozain : thanx a lot Rozi!

@Shivangi278 : thank u so much Shivangi!hehe, actually i'm still quite inexperienced in writing intense scenes!😊

@Tapoor : thank u Tapu di!

@-afsha- : thanx Afsha!do consider it as my b'day gift 2 u!😃

@rida_ranbir : thanx a lot Rida!

@MJHTFan_Mahima : thanks a lot Mahima!

fantastic OS!!!!
it is just amazing and awesome.....
do write more

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Bhavna,
What a mindblowing shot dear!!!!!!!!!
Truly awesome.
i loved it frm the core of my heart.
very well written.
Do write more after ur exam.
So now all the best 4 ur exam

thanx Faru!i'm happy u liked it!thanx again....of course, i'll surely write more after examz...😊

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Hey, Bhavi... Awsome OS, dear.

That's really fabulos.

I have no more words for it.

Pls write more soon.

And yes, all the best for exams.

aww thanx Shreyu!thanx 4 appreciating it....

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Oh Bhavi awesum awesum fabulous OS, You wrote so well yaar.

I am fan of urs now........i loved this one.

Mayank's concern fo his wife Nupur, u have described it so well.
Love you for this and now come back soon.............

Love you.......

thank u rabi!arey ur making me blush yaar!😳
yeah, i've tried my best in description....thanx again...

@daniella05 : thank u daniella!

@achoose : thanx aswathy!

@arunbehere : thanx a lot!

i'm glad u ppl liked my OS....😃

thank u friendz 4 liking & comenting on my OS!all ur comments mean a lot 2 me!🤗

Bhavana