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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
Hi Friends...
I had written this OS for Priya on her Birthday.
Please comment or criticize and silent readers, please press like button.

hey Priya!!!!!!!
Tumhe yaad hai na yeh OS, vaise mein janti hoon tum mera yeh torture bilkul nahin bholi hogi. kyun sahi kaha na mene?
Chalo ab padho aur comment karo, burai bhi kar sakte ho, par us ke liye Mana, Guglu aur Yogi bhi mera saath denge, kyunki post karne se pehle mene unhe padhaya tha.
So, fell free to say anything...
Love Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

hi preetoo !!!

you know jab maine yeh OS abhi dubara padha, toh laga areey yeh maine pehle kahi toh padha hai ! 😛
fir teri note padhi toh yaad aaya ! arey haan ! yeh toh tune Pri ke Bday pe likha tha 😆 😆 😆
Aajkal dimaag mein eksaath itni cheezein chal rahi hai, ki Aalekh ke language mein...saala dimaag ka dahi bana hua hai ! 😆 😆
Aur shot ekdam zabardast tha !
right from Naina's nonstop blabber, iss shot ne jo pace pakdi woh last tak maintain rahi ! 👏 👏
Aur kyunki tumlog mujhse naraaz ho, meri zyaada bakwaas toh sunoge nahi...
issliye yahi stop karti hoon...😛
Do write more awesome shots ! 😃
Luv,
Mana 😊
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hi

OS was fantastic dear
loved RN bonding n u describe it beautifully
do write more on RN
thnx for pm

Bye
Take Care
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Hi Preet
This OS was just so sweet..😊😊
I dont have words to praise it...
the first meeting between Raj n Naina was really cute..By the way Naina talks a lot😆😆😆
gradually they start meeting more n soon their were best friends..😛
Their unspoken love was so strong but still one needs to express his feeings..😊
Raj n Naina r tied in this special bond which binds them together for their whole life..
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
hi
the os is really very good
rn confeesed their love at last yaar
plz write more os on RN and do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
awesooooooome......
superb............
loved the OS........
do write more.......
thanx for the pm.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
that was beautiful
plz write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Hi Preet...

Kaisi ho...mai to tumhe pehle hi bata chuki hun ki ye OS bahut pyara hai...in case tum bhul gayi ho...to fir se yaad dila deti hun... it is AWESOME...yaar ye torture to kisi bhi angle se nahi hai...aisa to kaha hi mat karo...baaki ka judgement mai Priya ke upar chodti hun...wahi bataegi kya sahi hai aur kya nahi... Lambe comments nahi de sakti kyunki time bahut kam hai mere paas...so short comment se hi tumhe kaam chalana padega... but tum post karti raho aur mai like button click karti rahungi...

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
lovely...........👏 👏 👏 👏...................had read it earlier too.......😃 😃 😃.........in priya's b'day post......... 😃 😃..............but when it comes...... to Rajeev FF's.........can read it any number of times........😳 😳 😳..............
it was treat to read it once again..........😃.........
will wait 4 next OS 4m u soon...😃 😃 😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey!!
i liked the concept.. was good!
unspoken love... really like the way naina was, n the way raj bcame talkative n stuff!
the best was the confession scene!
thanks 4 penning down this beautiful OS :) :)

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