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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Verika

How r u??
Hey Suhana i am fine dear. 😊 😊 😊
This fiction was really gud..πŸ‘πŸ‘
thanks sweety 😳 😳 😳

Raj n Naina really compliment each other a lot..Abhi tak jo ankaha tha woh sab kuch Raj Naina se kehna chahta tha..
Haan serial me nahi par yahan to mai confession kara hi sakti hoon na. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Usne apni feelings ko bahut dino tak chhupa hai but ab koi bandhan nahin hai.
Raj Naina ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas karana chahta hai..😊..
Karana bhi chahiye, kyounki kabhi-2 kahi hue baaton ka asar bahut hota hai 😳 😳 😳

baarish ne mausam aur bhi romantic kar diya ..Naina bheegna chahti thi but Raj ne usko aisa nahin karne diya..
Offcourse, ab tabiyat kharab ho jaati to?

Naina was scared n Raj was making fun of her..πŸ˜†πŸ˜† even I'm too scared of cats..
Aur kya ek Army officer dar jaaye to .......... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Naina ko Raj towel mein kitna hot lag raha tha..Bechara Raj bhi uske aise dekhne se uncomfortable ho gaya thaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Sharmaa raha tha 😳 😳 😳

This line was too gud.
"Ek vaada aur ek sach batana chahta hoon tumhe aaj."

thank u darling πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Raj is too naughty.But he is really a gem..naina is too lucky to have him as her life -partner.πŸ˜›
Kisi ko bhi aisa life partner mil jaaye to us ki life settel ho jaaye. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
God has showered them with his blessings n they r too fortunate to b with the one they loveπŸ˜›
"A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

The dream, a never fading happiness
Spreads through my heart
Faster and faster it beats
As the memories begin to start

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

The memories, ones I'll never forget
I'll make sure to go at a slow pace
All I ever wanted was to wake up
I open my eyes to see your face

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

I take a look into your eyes
The unbearable flame of pain welcomes your rain
It's an amazing feeling
To hold you once again

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

Your arms like tress, cover over me
Protect me from all the fears
A day, week, month passes
You will always be mine for years

We wait for that time to come
Dreams we make shadow the nightmare to overcome
Memories that will never fade for eternity
Beautiful eyes that are worth every moment to see

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll always be."
awesome darling, these lines r beautiful.
Congratulations for winningπŸ‘πŸ‘
Bye



Thank u again for such sweet reply 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hiii vertika
wow what a beautiful shot
mindblasting
too romantic
love raj lines
thanx for posting it here.....

love
deepa



I am fine n hope same for u. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Thank u sweety
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Hey g8 work πŸ‘, mujhe expected tha ki tum jaroor koi na koi short fic likhogi fic contest me aur jab maine ssaari entries padhi thi to sach me mujhe nahi pata tha ki it's urs yaar. πŸ˜‰
amazing superb. πŸ˜ƒ
That's called a true romantic story na.😳 Bus pyaar and Raj aur Naina ki thodi si naughtiness.πŸ˜† Raj se first time Naina ne kaha ki u look hot and is tarah se hi ek khoobsurat rishte ki shuruvaat ho gayi. πŸ˜‰ Jo kaam shayad karne me Raj ko time lagta vo ek cat ki help se khud aaram se ho gaya.😊
Keep writing babes..............😊
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wonderful update. loved it.

loved the part when naina dar gayi cat se.
loved the way raj giving her promise....so true...
raj is too naughty....



Naina bhi na kitna darti hai, socho ek cat ne kitna kamaal kar diya jo Naina ne kabhi nahi kaha vo bhi aaj keh diya. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Thanks a lot dear
😳 😳 😳
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: saanch_69

First n foremost...........

A many congratulations for your win dear😊
Thanks Saanchu, happy to see ur reply on my fic. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

The scene was really good, I enjoyed it lots. At first I thought where would he wear the towel but then the rain did wonders
Yeah, every thing has his unique importance na, so as the rain h it made the environment. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

the rain or the cat??? am confused 😳 😳 True how can Naina be scared of a cat πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Are yaar har jagah apna Army ka hisab nahi ho sakta na. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Ek cat ne kitne problems solve kar di na. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Thanks to the Cat deary haha

Keep going 😊



Thanks a lot sweet heart, i am so much happy to get ur reply here.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooooooome...........
superb...........
excellent..........



Thanks a lot Preeti. 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey vertika congrats dear...
Thank u Priya jee. 😳 😳 😳

as usalll...very nice plot...!!! as usall isiliye bola...kyoun ki hamesha se tere sare plot badhe achhe hote hain...aur tu unhe bade achhe se likh bhi leti hai...
Pata nahi, mujhe to kabhi aisa nahi laga, kahin tu mujhe chane k jhaad pe to nahi chada rahi hai na. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
raj aur naina dono hi ek dushre se pyar karte the...par kabhi kah hi nahi paye...chalo achha hua ki towel aur cat ne yeh kaam karwa diya...
Sahi baat hai yaar, kabhi kabhi choti choti cheejin bhi bahut kaam aati hain na. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
mujhe cats se bilkul bhi darr nahi lagta...hamare ghar me pahle 3 the...abhi ek bhi nahi...!!! lekin haan naina ka darna jayaz hai...kyoun ki andheron me cats bade darwane lagte hain...kisi horror movie ki tarah...
Haan ye to baat sahi hai, mujhe cats jara bhi nahi pasand hain πŸ˜•πŸ˜• πŸ˜•. Par Naina k liye to bahut accha hua ki cat aayi yahan pe. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
aur tere bich bich k awesome lines k kya kahna...'ek vaada aur ek sach...n all...jo bhi Raj ne naina ko kaha...naina ne raj se kha...voh sabhi...
Kya baat hai, mujhe nahi pata tha ki ek simple se line mere readers ko itne pasand aane waali hai. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
ab jyada tarif nahi karungi...varna tu bhaav khane lagegi aur tere fics par aur bhi late ud karegi...
Nahi yaar, aisa kabhi nahi hoga bus thoda time kam rehta hai isliye timely comment nahi de paati hoon. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
luv
Priya



Thanks sweety so much, tere comment k bina poora kaise hota ye OS na.😊 😊 😊 Mujhe lagta hai agar tu saath na hoti to aaj mai yahan na hoti. 😍 😍 😍
Love u n take care
πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

hiii Vertika....
so this ws ur story...so lovely.."vaada".....
raj proposed naina in a very diff n romantic way.... with "vaada'... to be there with her in the whole life....!!!..soo romantic....
awesome, mindblowing story......πŸ€—



Thank u dear tum sab k support se hi mai itna likh paa rahi hoon sucessfully warna shayad abhi tak mai likhna chod chuki hoti.😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Vertika...

First of all congrats on winning. You deserved it.
Hello dear and thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

And now... about this OS... it was loveeeeeeeeeeeeelllllyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
thank u again sweety 😳 😳 😳

Yaar mai bahut khush hun ki tumne isse yahan post kiya hai...

Naina ko Raj hot laga... well koi shak nahi hai... wo hai hi hot.πŸ˜‰
Isiliye to kiya tha ki tum sab khush raho. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Yeah that's true that he is hot.


Acha hua Naina billi se darti hai... warna usse Raj ko towel me dekhne ka mauka nahi milta aur na hi usse Raj hot lagta.πŸ˜‰
Sach me, aur baaki ka sach bhi jabaan pe nahi aata kabhi. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Aur Raj ne usse ek Vadaa kiya... ek vadaa aur ek sach... beautiful.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
thanks πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Mujhe wo line bhi achi lagi jab naina ne kaha ki Raj ko jaane bhi nahi degi. Mujhe humesha se hi Naina ke muh se ye dialogue sunna pasand hai... kash ki LRL me vo ye baat kehti... instead of aap mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayenge.😍
Haan yaar, kuch aisa hi maine bhi expect kiya tha but Raj k serial chodte hi dil toot gaya.

Great job...

Love
Guglu



Thanks dear, tum saare doston k pyaar aur wishes se mai abhi aage bhi likhti rahoongi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hii vertika.. πŸ˜ƒ main bhi kitni stupid hoon na.. mujhe jabtak OS ka matlab pata nahi chala tabtak maine uss link ko open karke bhi nahi dekha.. 🀣 shayad meri bewakufiyon ki koi limit hi nahi hai.. 🀣 acha hua tune aaj mujhe pm karke OS ka matlab bata diya warna main toh iske bare main bhul hi gayi thi.. aur apni bewakufi aur bhulne ki adat ki wajah se itna cute romantic story miss kar deti.. 😑

its was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice sweetieeeee.. πŸ‘ i loved raj's VAADA to naina.. πŸ‘ every line was mindblowing specially the ek sach ek vaada.. πŸ‘

naina soldier hoke cat se darti hai πŸ˜† waise soldier hai to iska matlab yeh to nahi hai na ki use cats se hi fight karni hai.. πŸ˜•πŸ˜†πŸ˜† isliye uska cat se darna bilkul jayaz hai..πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜† waise bhi agar woh cat se na darti to kaise keh pati raj ko ki he loooks hottt πŸ˜‰ i loved der confession.. 😳


thanks for posting it here and ofcourse thanks for telling me the meaning of OS πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ


love
nandini πŸ˜ƒ

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