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sanchari mookherjee

@saanch_69

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

First n foremost...........

A many congratulations for your win dear😊

The scene was really good, I enjoyed it lots. At first I thought where would he wear the towel but then the rain did wonders

the rain or the cat??? am confused 😳 😳 True how can Naina be scared of a cat 😆 😆

Thanks to the Cat deary haha

Keep going 😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey vertika congrats dear...

as usalll...very nice plot...!!! as usall isiliye bola...kyoun ki hamesha se tere sare plot badhe achhe hote hain...aur tu unhe bade achhe se likh bhi leti hai...

raj aur naina dono hi ek dushre se pyar karte the...par kabhi kah hi nahi paye...chalo achha hua ki towel aur cat ne yeh kaam karwa diya...

mujhe cats se bilkul bhi darr nahi lagta...hamare ghar me pahle 3 the...abhi ek bhi nahi...!!! lekin haan naina ka darna jayaz hai...kyoun ki andheron me cats bade darwane lagte hain...kisi horror movie ki tarah...

aur tere bich bich k awesome lines k kya kahna...'ek vaada aur ek sach...n all...jo bhi Raj ne naina ko kaha...naina ne raj se kha...voh sabhi...

ab jyada tarif nahi karungi...varna tu bhaav khane lagegi aur tere fics par aur bhi late ud karegi...

luv

Priya

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
hi vertika ! 😃

It was one amazing shot !
Hello Darling, thank u so much. 😊 😊 😊

i really liked the plot and how the things proceed in this...

No confusion and messing of feelings...only love!
That's what i wanted to show that. 😃 😃 😃

Though both knew that they loved each other , but still has not confessed it....
Ab mai kya karoon in dono ka, in dono ne mujhe tung kar rakha hai. 😡 😡 😡

Waise even I'm scared of cats, but I take this opportunity to thank her ! 😆 😆 Kahin na kahin wahi madam responsible for making the confession happen...and ofcourse the towel !
Sahi waqt par cat ki entry aakhir nahi aati to Raj n Naina ki setting kaise hoti na? 😆 😆 😆

I really liked those lines...." Ek vaada aur ek sach..."...superb ! 👏
Kya baat hai, sab ko ye baat bahut pasand aayi............ 😉 😉 😉

And so finally happy ending !!! 😃
Yeah, ye to hona hi tha. 😉 😉 😉

once again congrats for the award....you deserved it !!! 😃

Thank u so much Manali, tum sab k support se hi mile hain ye awards. 😊 😊 😊

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hi Vertika...

First of all congrats on winning. You deserved it.

And now... about this OS... it was loveeeeeeeeeeeeelllllyyyyyyyyyyy!!!

Yaar mai bahut khush hun ki tumne isse yahan post kiya hai...

Naina ko Raj hot laga... well koi shak nahi hai... wo hai hi hot.😉

Acha hua Naina billi se darti hai... warna usse Raj ko towel me dekhne ka mauka nahi milta aur na hi usse Raj hot lagta.😉

Aur Raj ne usse ek Vadaa kiya... ek vadaa aur ek sach... beautiful.👏👏👏

Mujhe wo line bhi achi lagi jab naina ne kaha ki Raj ko jaane bhi nahi degi. Mujhe humesha se hi Naina ke muh se ye dialogue sunna pasand hai... kash ki LRL me vo ye baat kehti... instead of aap mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayenge.😍

Great job...

Love
Guglu

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

hiii Vertika....
so this ws ur story...so lovely.."vaada".....
raj proposed naina in a very diff n romantic way.... with "vaada'... to be there with her in the whole life....!!!..soo romantic....
awesome, mindblowing story......🤗

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Beautiful story

Raj and naina both love each other but they still haven't confessed their feelings to each other. Raj wants to tell naina his feelings for her...but cannot get the words to express it.

The rain has made the atmosphere more romantic.

naina darr ker raj ke paas aati hai..only to find him standing there wearing a towel.

Raj ko naina hamesha sexy aur hot lagi hai...and this time even naina awed to see him like this....she finds him too hot to resist. And this confession was just the trigger that raj needed speak out his emotions. Raj vaada karta hai ko who naina ka saath kabhi nahi chodega uar use hamesha khush rakhe ga ...

They are both made or each other.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: arpita25
awesome dear,
thanks Arpita 😊 😊 😊

Mai soch rahi thi ki is fic ko tum yahan post karo aur dekho tum ne meri baat maan li aur kar bhi diya.
Haan yaar vo Shiropa ne kaha tha jis se sab log padh lein jo vahan nahi padh paaye hain. 😛 😛 😛

Superb, ek baat mujhe is OS ki sab se acchi lagi ki tum ne is me bus Raj n Naina k pyaar aur love acceptance ko hi dikhaya hai na kuch unnecessary liya hai na hi story bekaar me drag ki hai.
Yaar maine pehle hi socha tha ki base line romantic hogi bus vahi kiya. 😉 😉 😉

Dono ek doosre ko chahte hain aur pyaar karte hain but ab jaa k accept kar paaye hain.
Bus yahi is couple ki sab se badi problem thi na.

Finally ek cat ne vo kaam kar dikhaya jo koi aur nahi kar paaya. Raj ne bhi jabardasti Naina ko barish se bahar liya varna sach me madam bemmar padna chahti thi.
Vo jaanti hai na ki Raj hai us k pass us ki dekhbhaal k liye bus isiliye itne naughty ho jaati hai. 😉 😉 😉 Cat na hoti to jaane dono kya karte? 😆 😆 😆

thank u dear 😃 😃 😃

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wow.....Vertika That was reallllllllllllllllyyyyy lovely!!! I loved it when Raj was confessing his love....I loved the depth of his love...😳😳😳
Thank u darling, 😃 😃 😃 sach me Raj k pyaar ki gehrai bahut hai Naina k liye aur ye Naina bhi samajhti hai. 😳 😳 😳

And Naina said suddenly....that he looked hot...😳...how cute!! Achha hua Naina darr ke chillane lagi....warna wo ek sunehra nazara miss kar deti na....😆😆😆
Sahi me, kaisa sunhera najara tha na. Thank god sahi time par cat ki entry hue. 😉 😉 😉

But I really loved the way u put it Vertika....awesum job!!! It was really very enchanting n romantic as well!!😉
Thanks sweety again 😃 😃 😃

Thank u sweety 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
simply amazing.......👏
thanks so much 😊 😊 😊

totally beautiful ...luved d lines of raj der...tooo romantic....👏

glad d at u posted it here....😊

thnx...😊

Thanks that u liked darling 😳 😳 😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Vertika sweety...congrats for winning...!!!!

thank u darls..........😳 😳 😳

I just loveeedd your OS...!!! It is soo sweet...!!!!
thanks again 😊 😊 😊

So Raj has not confessed his love to Naina yet...!!!! And now the moment is here..!!!
Kabhi na kabhi to kehna hi hai na pyaar kiya hai to........😉 😉 😉

So Naina is scared of a cat...!!!
Tabhi to cat wonders karte hai..........😆 😆 😆

Naina ne usko hot kaha...???? 😲😲 Aur iske badle me raj ne ek vaada de diya...!!! 😳😳
Socho ek baat se kitne badi badi cheejin ho jaati hain. 😛 😛 😛

Lekin Raj ne itniiii naughtiness dikhayi ke they finally became one...!!!!
Mauka kahan chodne waala tha Raj.

Keep it up Vertika...!! 👏👏👏

Thank u darling n i will try my best to keep ur expectations fulfilled all time. 🤗 🤗🤗

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