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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sapna, awesome ... hope the judai is short followed by a sweet union😉
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Hello my fellow SanRajians😆 i have managed to write a scene continuing from my previous Scene ('Mat Jao'), i was not intending to do this, but since most of you wanted me to continue, i thought i should give it ago. Your wishes are my command!!

I apologise in advance for the length of this scene

Scene 9 - Ke Ghar Kab Aao Ge (When will you come home)

(In the main hall of the Mayavanshi house)

The phone rings.............

Toral runs to the phone and picks it up

Toral: "hello"

DM: "Jai shree Krishna dhikra"

Toral (happy and shouts): "Papa"

Everyone hears that it is DM's phone and runs to the phone (Hiten, birwa, Suraj and Santo)

Suddenly all the kids begin to fight over the phone, pulling it off each other (except Santo who is just stood there) and DM whos is smiling and saying "hello.... stop fighting"

Birwa: "It's Papas phone let me talk"

Suraj: "no let me"

Hiten: "your both small im the eldest so if go first, Toral let go of the phone"

Toral: "no i picked it up"

Santo: "aray bas karo, stop look everyone take their turn, give it suraj first" (because hes the youngest), DM upon hearing santos voice smiles and is waiting for someone to talk properly.

They all let go of the phone and give it suraj but tell him to be quick.

Suraj: "hello papa"

DM: "suraj, kaise hain tu (how are you)"

Suraj: "teek che papa, papa have you got me chocolates", DM smiles "yes i have", Suraj gets happy and runs off. Then Birwa talks, then Hiten and then Toral who then gives the phone to Santo. They all have now left, leaving Santo alone with the phone.

Santo (smiling and shaking her head at the kids) now answers the phone: "Jai shree Krishna Malik"

DM (smiling, thinking finally got to talk to my santuddi): "ey santuddi, how are you?"

Santo: "im fine, and you malik?"

The conversation goes on, sweet talk going on between them, DM telling her what hes been upto (etc etc)

Santo: "So Malik when are you coming back?"

DM: "Probably in about one week"

Santo (shocked): "one week?, you said to me your only going for a couple of days"

DM (smiling): "yeh, but more work has come up and it will take longer"

Santo (now upset): "no malik you promised me you will only go for a couple of days, and couple of days have gone, but now you are staying for one week, no malik this is not fair malik i miss.....(stops and thinks OMG what was i about to say) DM is smiling as Santo is not stopping and is getting angry and was about to say I miss you.

DM: "su, why have you stopped, carry on", Santo gets a bit shy (but upset)

DM: "ey santuddi, just one week and i will be back, okay?", Santo does not say anything

DM: "santuddi?" She does not reply, "i know your still listening, don't be upset please"

Santo : "okay bye malik" (put the phone down as she upsets), DM looks at the phone and knows Santo just put the phone down, because shes upset. He shakes his head and smiles.

It is now night time, DM in Antwerp is getting ready to go to sleep, he takes out a kurta from his bag and with it falls a CD, he picks it up and see whats this, he puts it in the stereo(or wherever) and a song begins to play:

Ke ghar kab aao ge 😭

Likho kab aao ge

Ki tum bin yeh ghar suna suna hai

Ke ghar kab aao ge
Likho kab aao ge
Ki tum bin yeh dil suna suna hai ❤️
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yIYNjoW94I (for full song 'but relate the words to SanRaj)
He smiles and lays down on the bed, thinking of his santuddi (knowing she had sent it).

.........................................................

(THE NEXT DAY) (in main hall of Mayavanshi house):

Baa and Bapuji are sat on the sofas and birwa and suraj are playing next to them and in walks DM.

Baa (happy): "aray Dharamraj"

Birwa and Suraj: "papa" and run to DM and hug him

DM: "aray watch it watch it", he then goes and takes Baa and bapujis blessings and sits on the sofa.

Baa: "how was your work"

DM (his eyes looking for his santo (in pic below): "teek tha"

Suraj: "papa wheres my chocolate",

DM: "its in my bag go and get it" (both birwa and suraj run off)

DM: "baa where is santo"

Baa and bapuji smile, was about to say shes upstairs, but then comes Santo walking down the stairs

DM's looks at her (with BR eyes (in pic below)

Santo while walking down the stairs sees DM and is shocked to see him, as he said that he is coming back in one week, but she is soo happy hes back, she sees him looking at her and smiles.

DM (smiles): "ey santudi, told you only one more week?" (he was actually teasing her on the phone)

She smiles at him but does not say anything.

Baa: "Santo you happy now (she nods and smiles, DM still looking at her), Dharamraj you don't know your santo, shes pagal/pagli, since you have gone she has not been eating much and especially the first day she did not eat anything".

DM looks at Santo as if to say why did you not eat (shakes his head)

DM (gets up): "okay Baa im tired i am going to rest for some time, (then looks at and walks past her) santo bring him something to eat for me in my room "

Santo (nods her head): "ji malik"

.........................

(In SanRaj Room):

DM is sat in his chair, relaxing, Santo walks in with chai and sheera (sweet dish)

Santo: "Malik chai"

DM (pointing at the table): "muki de" (put it down)

DM then holds her arm and says: "come sit here" (makes her sit in his lap)

DM: "what did i hear from Baa?", Santo looks down

DM: "why did you not eat, you know that i get angry when you do something like this, so why did you do it?". Santo does not reply keeps on looking down.

DM: "fine don't talk, but you remeber next time when i go Antwerp i wont come back and......" before he is able to finish, Santo quickly looks up and puts her hand over his mouth and shakes her head

Santo: "please malik don't say that, i promise i wont do anything like this again, but i missed you soo much that i did not feel like doing anything or eating anything"

DM removes her hand from his mouth: "aray duffor, chal i let you off this time, but next time if i find out anything like this, then i wont speak to you ever again"

Santo shakes her head indicating she wont do it again.

DM: "chal uba uba ab meri moo kya dekh rahi hain, mujhe kilaygi bhi" ("now what are you looking at me like that for, feed me"). Santo picks the sheera (sweet) from the table and begins to feed him, DM puts his arms around her waist (santo still sitting in his lap), he looks deep into her eyes, whilst she is feeding him.

They have sweet conversation between them and about the kids, whats been going on at home etc etc...................................

(In SanRaj Room ' It is now night):

Santo is walking back from putting the children to sleep

She enters SanRaj room and closes the doors behind her, she sees the lights are off and thinks Malik has gone to sleep so it's best not to turn the lights on. As she was about to turn around (after closing the doors) she feels DM's arms around her waist. He puts his head on her shoulders. She smiles and looks at him from the side.

Santo: "Malik i thought you were asleep"

DM: "how can i go asleep without you?" Santo smiles.

(the room is dark) DM turns her around but still has his arms around her, but now facing each other, DM looks down at her with his BR eyes and santo looks in his eyes with a smile. DM moves closer and brushes his lips on her neck, the moment his lips touch her neck, santo feels a shiver up her spine... and closes her eyes. DM moves towards her lips but does not touch them (he is so close and looks at her, she has her eyes closed) he could hear her heart beating faster.

He removes his right arm form her waist and places it under her legs and carries her to the bed. Her arms are now around his neck. He lays her slowly on the bed (EYELOCK),

Santo puts her hand over his eyes (as she cannot take his eyes piercing her and feels embarassed), DM smiles. He then tilts his head and goes down to her neck (kissing). There bodys are touching, Legs are mingled and................................................. (fades to next scene)

(In SanRaj room - It is now morning)

DM and Santo are asleep (DM arm around her waist, her back touching his chest, DM's kurta button opened, santos saree and hair a mess). Santo slowly wakes up and feels DM arm around her, she looks behind and sees he is fast asleep (awww), she slowly removes his arm and rests it on the bed and then leans forward and kisses him softly on his forehead. She gets her saree together and goes to the bathroom.

She comes out of the bathroom, where DM is awake but still lying in bed, his right arm is under his head and his other arm is resting on the bed on his side.

Santo (looks at him): "Malik your awake"

DM (looking at her): "yeh"

She moves around the room talking to him and he is talking to her, but his eyes are following his santuddi where ever she goes.

Santo then comes near the bed to get something out of the draw, DM holds her hand.

DM (being naughty santo can tell by his eyes): "ey santudi., you know........." (santo does not let him finish, she knows what hes upto)

Santo: "no malik get up we have to go saumil bhais today, come on please, im going to make your breakfast so be quick". She lets go of his hand

DM: "but"

Santo (walking out of the room): "no malik"

DM: "suno to" ("listen atleast"). He smiles.....................

Hope you ENJOYED it!!!

Told you it was long - Really sorry for the length ' but it had to be done!!

REMEMBER TO HIT THE 'LIKE' BUTTON 😃

Edited by s000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice as evr 😆 santu........ plz lt him complete his............................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I forgotten every thing after reading ur story.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pinky as usual just speechless. bravo yaar.............

but i don't know i think Dm wants to tell abt some love bite........ i just guessing tell me i m correct.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Maa,u rockz as wel.Wow papa's pic r 2 gud...Aww...Ther SR pic....Hugs 2 u maa...I luv u maa...I feel very sad tat im unable 2 pres like button in my cel...Wow my suraj wons amng the others 2 talk 2 papa...My suraj always cute...
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it sapna pics were superb too. How is DM GOING to have time for the wedding between bandini shooting & IPL??? 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
sweet😛
really liked it a lot: D
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Posted: 15 years ago
pinky , that was shweeeeeeeeeeetttt and don't appologize for the lenth it was really sweet
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ... the milan after judai and the pics ... want CVs to show bandini like it was before leap ... no fleshtrade, baby killers ... about Sanraj, their bonding, their family

Looking forward to your next post ... can you hint at what's coming up😉

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