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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
hi everyone i am so sorry ki maine itna chota ud diya.but i am sorry ki niche wala aur bhi chota hai.kya karun kind of busy now.ek toh maine likhne mein aise hi lazy hoon upar se time kam toh thoda thoda likh paa rahi hoon .hope u guys will bear with me
so heres the next short part:



part 5



As the doctor left in a hurry


Nupur just couldn't stand any longer.samrat forgetting his condition rushed to nupur


Samrat-"nupur tum kis ki baatein sun rahi ho woh log kaun hote hain ye decide karne ke liye ki chashmish ka kya hoga.abhi tak toh woh zinda hai naa toh they cant say that.its just their job to do the treatment woh koi judge nahi ki apna faisla sunna denge aur hum maan lenge"


Nupur(still crying)-"lekin samrat"


Samrat-"nahin nupur isme lekin ki koi gunjaish nahi ,chashmish ne mujhe........mujhse promise kiya tha ki woh mujhse kabhi naraz nahi hogi ,kabhi mujhe chod ke nahi jaayegi,toh phir doctors kya kehte hain is se mujhe koi pharak nahi padta ...koi pharak nahi padta"


Saying this samrat left from there


Nupur-"mayank maine samrat ko kitna galat samjha tha .woh toh mujhse bhi zyaada gunjan se pyaar karta hai.yeh jante hue bhi ki maine samrat ke bare maine kya sochti thi phir bhi................phir bhi apne halat ki phikr kiye bagair woh mujhe sambhal raha tha..."


Mayank-"haan nupur ............par ek baat yeh bhi samajh aayi ki samraat tumhare saath saath apne aap ko bhi yahi dilasa de raha tha ki uski chashmish ko kuch nahi hoga"...................................

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Samrat runs outside to the hospital garden and falls down on his knees


The tears shamelessly run down his cheeks as it has been for hrs


Samrat(looking at the sky)-"Dude tumhare har faisale ko maine maana hai .jab bachpan mein meri zindagi bikhar gayi ,mere apne choot gaye tab bhi tum ne mujhe taakat di akele sab kuch sambhal ne ki.phir tumne meri zindgi mein chashmish ko laya,aur meri adhoori zindagi ko pora kiya..........chashmish ki dosti pane ke liye maine jo bhi kiya tumne use humesha flop kiya maggar apne tareeke se tumne humesha mujhe us se mila bhi diya.chahe woh pichle saal ka valentine ball ho ya us din ki farm house party........aur dude mera tum par bharosa aab bhi kaayam hai ki tum mujhe kabhi chashmish se dur nahi karoge.doctor chahe kuch bhi keh de main jaanta hoon tum mere saath itna bura kabhi nahi karoge..kabhi nahi karoge.........(and then he breaks down completly and it seemed that the sky too was crying with him as it started raining)"


Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

awesome sushhhhhh

wowwwwwwwwww yaar kya likha hai
really fantastic mindblowing update😉
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
thanks once again for the pm great update cant wait for the next part
-Jyotika- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
awesomeeeeeee ud dear..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzz cpnt soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
it's lovely dear, i can't stop crying 😭 😭 😭 😭. Do continue and thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
awesome yaar...
loved it
thanks for pm
continue soon
Edited by samrat_anki - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
hey nice updat..!!!
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
superb part dear
emotional one
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
please yaar esa maat karna........it was so niceee.......thanks..update soonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
amazing how sweet im sure Samrat's trust ll win & our Chashmish ll recover soon god cant b so rude to Sammy

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