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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar lyked d twist..!!
acha hi hai gunji sana nai hai...otherwise karan n samrat me fight ho jaati..ffor gunji...!!!
really loved it..
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..!!
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sush just read 2 parts. Will read all the parts soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one Sushy..:))
I thot so too..about Sarah.:))
Great one..waiting to read more..:))
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh weell..my prediction turned out to be wrong but anyways...awesome ss dear..congo on part11!!!
awesome job yaar sushu...


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Posted: 15 years ago
That was very good.... Atleast Samrat smiled a bit...His confidence on his chasmish's presence is outstanding..

Happy that Sana is nt Sanaya 😊 i mean Gunjan...
2 months and love.. 😲 😲 😲 shocking..
Hey and thanks a lot for the long update.. do continue sooooon...
Edited by shruthinair - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Read upto part 8. Nice concept. I like the twist and turn and I knew gunjan was not dead.
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok guys i somehow managed to write something
plzz do reply on how it was
next part not sure when i will post so plzz bear with me
and one more thing sarah doesnt wear specks


part 12



As the gang enter with the shagun

Diya,suhani & nupur have their little discussion

Diya-"samjh nahi aa raha kya kare kya naa kare"

Nupur-"ha diya,aisa humare saath hi kyun hota hai"

Suhani-"bhai jo keh raha hai us par yakeen karne ka bahut mann karta hai par mayank bhi toh thik hi keh raha hai naa"

Nupur '"jab se nainital aaye hai samrat main ek ek karke badlaw dekhne ko mil raha hai"

Diya-"haan nupur pehle samrat ka yeh kehna ki use lagta hai gunjan yahi kahin hai,phir uska itne mahino ke baad halwa khana"

Suhani-"aur aaj sham ko bhai ka guitar bajana................itne saare changes ek saath ek hi din mein anaa itefaq toh nahi ho sakta naa diya...........meri toh kuch samjh nahi aa raha,ek saath itna kuch....."

Nupur-"meri bhi kuch samjh nahi aa raha suhani.......pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna baki hai"

Diya stops and suddenly holds both the girls hands(as she is in the middle)

Suhani- & nupur-"kya hua diya?"

Diya looking shocked and petrified-"gu..gun.....gunjan"

Suhani and nupur's eyes travel the way diya's gaze was showing

They were shocked too seeing gunjan dancing with everyone

Nupur had tears in her eyes but suddenly they lost her as she disappeared in the crowd

Nupur-"ab yeh hamara imagination nahi ho sakta,suhani diya tum ne bhi gunjan ko dekha naa."

Suhani-"haan nupur,maine bhi dekha ,yakeen nahi ata bhai ka vishwaas jeet gaya......"

Diya-"par woh kahan chali gayi"

At that point benji called them

Diya-"benji mujhe tumse kuch bata kehni hai"

Benji-"jo baat karni hai baad mein karna phil hal chalo"

Nupur-"lekin benji..."

Benji-"baad mein nupur ab chalo"

Suhani-"haan nupur chalo,hame pehle use dhundna hoga,kyunki bina dekhe koi humare baton ka vishwaas nahi karega"

Diya and Nupur understood what suhani was trying to say therefore they proceeded

Karan-"meri dulhan se miloge?"

Adhiraj-"neki aur puch puch"

Karan-"Sonia di woh sana kahan hai"

Sonia-"itni besabri karan,thoda toh intezaar karlo"

Karan-"actually mere doston ne sana ko abhi tak dekha nahi hai toh is liye....."

Sonia teasingly-"acha accha toh thik hai tum mom dad ke paas jao main tumhare doston se unhe milwa deti hun"

Karan-"lekin didi aacha nahi lagta naa apne dosto ko is tarah akela chod kar......"

Sonia-"rehne de rehne de drame baaz saaf saaf kyun nahi kehta ki tujhe bhi sana se milna hai"

Karan-"woh..............."

Sonia smiles

Arnav-"kyun pareshan kar rahi ho yaar use .....uski halat toh dekho"

Sonia-"tumhe bada taras aa raha hai us par"

Arnav-"aur nahi toh kya main uski halat nahi samjhunga toh kaun samjhega.akhir aise situation se main bhi toh gujar chukka hoon..........."

Karan-"plzz didi"

Sonia-"thik hai thik hai............................SANA zarra yaha aana"

As sana entered the guys mouth dropped

Karan-"hayee kya main itna khush naseeb hun"

Arnav-"shadi se pehle sab yahi kehte hai lekin bahut kam log hote hai meri tarah jo shaadi ke baad bhi yeh baat kayam rakhte hai."

Sonia blushes

Sonia-"tum..... "

Arnav-"nahi sudharunga"

and they leave

Karan introduces everyone to sana

Sana-"ab log itni dur se aaye yeh sun kar accha laga."

Karan-"waise tum logo se toh ek special insaan ko introduce hi nahi karwaye."

Gang-"kis se?"

Karan-"sarah se"

Sana-"aap log sarah se ab tak nahi mile........."

Gang-"nahin"

Karan-"sarah is duniya ki sabse pyaari ladki hai"

Sana-"she is the best.aggar karan aur main aaj saath hai toh woh sirf sarah ke wajah se....kyunki sarah ne hi meri aur karan ki feelings ko parakha liya tha aur ............."

Karan-"aur Sonia di ko bataya tha..............woh sahi mein bahut pyaari hai.jis se bhi milti hai naa bas sabko apna bana leti hai.waise sana sarah kahan hai"

At that point sarah comes in middle of karan and sana with both her hands on their shoulder

Sarah-"main yaha hoon....kya baat hai jiju aap mujhe yaad kar rahe hai"

The whole gang was shocked .........they felt as if for few second their heart stopped beating

How can this happen this was not possible

Gunjan in front of their eyes

They were brought back to sense with karans voice

Karan '"yeh hai humari pyaari sarah"

Sarah-"namaste"

Nobody said anything only just liked robots returned the gesture by folding their hands

Nupur had tears in her eyes and was about to say something but mayank stopped her and she helplessly looked at mayank as if asking let me meet my sister why r u stopping me from doing so but mayank with his look asked nupur to wait

Sarah-"jiju ne aap sab ke bare mein mujhe sab kuch bataya tha.bas kiska naam kya hai yeh jaan na baaki hai"

Karan introduced her to everyone and when it was time for nupur aur mayank

Sarah-"hello nupur di"

Hearing this nupur couldn't held her tears any longer and excused herself

Sarah-"inhe kya ho gaya"

Diya covering -"kuch nahi bas use kuch yaad aa gaya"

Sarah-"ohhhh "

Karan-"aur yeh hai mayank mera cousin"

Sarah-"oh hi apke bare mein bahut suna hai jiju sir "

Mayank shocked-"excuse me tumne abhi mujhe kya bulaya"

Sarah-"jiju sir.......sorry i hope u don't mind me calling u that actually jiju ne bataya tha ki aap part time professor hai,toh mujhe achanak se yahi naam sujha.i hope u don't mind"

Mayank-"no......no its alright"

Sarah to karan-"waise aapne toh kaha tha ki aapke saath aath dost aa rahe hain par yahan toh saath hai"

Mayank(not revealing about samrat) '"woh humare ek dost ki tabiyat thodi thik nahi hai toh isliye woh nahi aaya."

Sarah-"kuch zyaad problem toh nahi hai naa"

Karan-"nahi bas thodi thakan hai....waise aacha yaad aya sana aaj tumne khana bahut accha banaya tha"

Sana-"khana maine nahi banaya"

Karah-"toh kisne..........."

Sarah-"maine banaya tha jiju "

The girls listen this and r shocked

Karan-"woh humare us dost ne tumhe thanks kehne ko kaha tha"

Sarah-"unhe itna hi pasand aaya hai toh kal ka bhi main bana ke bhej dungi"

Sonia '"are aap log abhi tak yahi khade hai aayi ye mere saath,main aap logo ko baaki sab se milwati hun"

Sonia takes the gang with her and the gang also proceed with her deep in thoughts

They were just thinking that whatever just happened was it their imagination or not

Karan-"waise sana mujhe sham ko adyasha ka miss call aya tha"

Sana gets worried '"oh no!!!!!!!!!!yeh maine kya kar diya"

Karan-"kya hua"

Sana getting panicked-"mujhe adyaasha ko designs bhejne the aur main bhul gayi ab kya hoga"

Karan-"tumne................oh no ab kya hoga"

Sarah-"wahi hoga jo manzoore sarah hoga. "

Karan & sana-"matlab"

Sarah-"matlab yeh ki main jaanti thi ki aap bhul jaogi ,isliye maine aaj sham outhouse se aapke designs lekar shyaamlaal ko courier karne ko de diye the "

Sana hugging her-"sarah i love u so much u r really a life saver"

Karan-"thanks sarah tumne meri shaadi postpone hone se bacha di"

Sarah-"koi baat nahi,par ab sagai toh karlo warna agar muhurat nikal gaya toh shaadi aise hi delay ho jayegi aur meri mehnaat bekar jaayegi"

Karan& Sonia-"haan chalo"



Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

ohh so everyonesaw gunji 😊

except sam 😭
plzzz make them meet fast 😳
amazing update
continue soon
Edited by ---ishita--- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeee ud jana😊

Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
it ws amazinggggggggg...
finally sabne gunji ko dekh liya.. bt sammyy.. pllzzzz sajan ko jaldi milwao...
anyways.. grr8888 ud..
luevd it..
pllzzzzzz cont soon...
n thnxx for d pm..
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago

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