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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Hey dear plz plz update dear have u forgotten abt dis ff or something it's been 1 month u haven't update plz plz update dying to read it



Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Plz plz update nw it's been forever nw u told me u gonna update soon bt it's been 2 weeks u said dat nw I can't wait no more plz update naaaa plz



hey anu am really sorry i kno i promised u an update in d last week but trust me i have been caught up with sume persnl work non stop so i didnt get time to update....infact i have now cut short this chap to just make an update.....really sorry for delayed updates but thats d ways its goign to be from now....but dont worry i just have two or max three more chaps to complete this FF.....n am maksing a long ud to make up for d prolonged absence from my FF😆😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA- CHAP 10

Hello Dear friends and readers,

First of all my usual apologies for d delayed updates but as i have been telling all, am caught up in sum persnl n official work n hence dont find much time to write, however i have written now a long update, god knows how it is coz i am totally disconnected from my own FF😆😉....but hope u all have patience n read thru it.......am sure who ever has been requesting me to continue to update wont ask me to update ina long time to come on two accounts.....1. the ud is o long that it will take forever for u to compelte reading....2. the ud cud be so boring that u may want to ask me to cont soon😆🤣.......god am sure u no one will hve any complaints coz i have written one whole chapter this time at a stretch unless its bat a bad update😆😆😆......okie enuf of my bakwas...let me get on with the updates n keep my fingers crossed that i have not lost touch with my ff n u all like it.....pls feel free to let me know ur fank n critical comments ....i welcome the same...i know i have made d E part quite senti n philosophical but i had a reason for it coz before the showdown actually happens i wanted to show on earnest attempt by gunjan to make samrat realize running away never helps....sorry agar thoda zyada ho gaya toh,.........my next ud will be after quite sum time , till such time happy reading n have fun n stay safe

Cheers,

Meenakshi

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CHAP 10 - Part A

Part A- well this one is dedicated to some more lovely readers-----ash_sajan, basket,SM_317, _Monu_

Gunjan thinks "Four days had passed since she had met samrat in the basket ball court, as first two days she had been ona trip with her father to a near by town to fulfill the offerings to a deity for the successful marriage of her lovable di n next two days she had to attend to some work with a friend in a near by town.

Gunjan still remembered the phone conversation she had had with samrat before she had left,especially since she had to leave suddenly n cudnt meet him to say a proper bye

*Flashback phone convo (wheel ..oops I mean film rolling in the background) *

Samrat whining "chashmish''.char din''kahan jaa rahi ho'.."

Gunjan smiling at his desolate voice which he was trying to hide n yet was not able to do so, says "samrat bui aur bauji ne mannat maangi thi ki di ki shaadi achi tarah se ho jaaye toh mata rani ke mandir me chunni chadayenge aur anna daan karenge, is liye do din ke liye shaher se bahar jana padega"

Samrat in a childlike excited voice "chahsmish iska matlab do din me tum aa jaogi , magar phir tumne char din kyun bola pehle"

Gunjan smiles and is sad at the same time to break his excitement filled heart "samrat agle do din mujhe kuch personal kaam hai. Paas wale shaher jana hoga. Mai apne dost ke saath ja rahi hun aur bas do din me aa jaongi"

A disappointed samrat goes silent for a minute n then an idea strikes him "chashmish tum apni saheli se kehdo ki woh ghar me rest le. Mai tumhe le jaongo. Aakhir do jawan ladkiyan akele thodi na jaa sakti hai shaher se bahar, wo bhi do din ke liye" completes in a self satisfied victorious tone.

Gunjan doesn't correct his misconception or rather his assumption but says "nahi samrat we will be fine don't worry, we will take care"

Samrat "magar mai kyun nahi le ja sakta chahsmish. Mai toh tumhe bike me hi le jaa sakta hun. And I promise 40 ke speed se zyada nahi chalaunga. Tumse ladunga nahi aur tease bhi nahi karunga. Aur tang toh bilkul nahi karunga.

Gunjan feels very bad to be doing this to him but she had to do it nevertheless "nahi samrat tume nahi ja sakte, yaad hai tumhe mere team ko coach karna hai"

Samrat knew she had a point and he can't afford bunking the sessions as the coaching camp was coming to a close soon but he still cant understand why he cant accept that chashmish was going away for just four days when in reality very soon he would have to let go of her forever. He applies sudden break and shuts that line of thought process

After the dead silence on the line Gunjan hesitantingly tries "samrat r u there"

Samrat after gulping down d distaste that had still made its way in spite of his quick action on d same, tries for a deep breathe to control his riotous emotions

Gunjan hears a deep troubled breathing, a heavy sigh and gets immediately worried "samrat tum theek toh ho na"

Samrat arrests his unhinged emotions once again and forcibly brings his mind back to the present, as quick as a wink and says in a serious tone "wat if as a coach of the team I say I won't give u the permission for two days leave"

Gunjan relaxes, putting her over imaginative mind n heart to rest, which had sensed sum unspoken trouble, and gets comfort in d fact that samrat was trying to get to her "aww am so sorry to disappoint my sweet bafoon, but I never asked u for permission in the first place" and laughs wholeheartedly

Samrat felt before he heard the moment chashmish started laughing. Coz he cud feel it in the way his heartbeat was relaxing, a calmness and peace was stealing over his entire self. Something about her effervescent heartfelt smile always managed to reach the deepest corners of his heart and healed him and made him feel better.

Samrat joining her in d repartee game "hello princess I can throw u out of the team for insulting the coach"

Gunjan in a mock scared tone"oh my god, now can I let that happen? Hmm well on second thots bet u n rita u can mange d team well" n smiles some more

Samrat now irked at having been reminded of one of the reason the next four days were going to be even more tough for him to handle without chahsmish grunts "arghhhh chahsmish, be thankful tum mere saamne nahi ho warna "

Gunjan continuing the fun "ooh mai dar gayi samrat'..agar mai saamne hoti toh kya karte"

Samrat thinks for a moment n then with a smile says "hmm agar tum mere saamne hoti toh I wud have embraced u within my arms and extracted a right punishment from u for having angered me"

Gunjan blushes to roots as soon as the tune of conversation changes from teasing to romantic and reproves samrat innocently "samrat"

Samrat imitates her "chashmish"

Gunjan smiles and Samrat says in a resigned tone "kya chahsmish tum abhi ja rahi ho aur benji bhi kuch apne family ke kaam se bahar shahar ja raha hai, mai aur dia bore jayenge"

Gunjan stays quiet for a second not knowing how to explain this to him. "samrat bas char dinon ki baat hai na, u will be fine. Don't worry. Dia hai na tumhe company dene ke liye and waise bhi u have promised to take her to shopping in benji's absence

Samrat "hmm yeah sure, am excited about taking the girl who is mad about shopping ona shopping trip. Great my next two days cudnt have got better"

Gunjan trying to lighten his mood "samrat yeh tum kya kah rahe ho, mai speaker phone se baat kar rahi hun aur mere saath'..

Samrat feels awful n raps out non stops"candy I am sorry I didn't mean to say it. It's not as it came out. Mai tumhe shopping zaroor le jaunga , ofcourse isse zyada mere liye khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai, u belive me right "

Gunjan now laughingly says "exactly wahi to mai kahne ki koshish kar rahi thi samrat'.isse badi khushi ki baat tumhare liye kya ho sakti hai"

Samrat is confused and it takes a minute for him to come out of the cobwebs trap he had fallen into, he questions gravely "chashmish candy wahan nahi hai"

Gunjan now unable to control her laughter "kyun samrat, tumhe aisa kyun laga ki dia mere saat hai, mai tumse yahi to kah rahi thi, tum speaker phone pe ho aur mere saat yahan koi nahi hai"

Samrat sighs in relief and catches up with the chulbuli chahsmish in a second "chashmish rem this when u r back n we meet, u will not forget it for a long time'..u will wish u hadn't taken me on like this n rem I play mean when it suits me" completes in a confident smile

Gunjan "I shall wait for it" and coming out of the fun in a serious tone says "u take care of urself samrat, I will miss u. Can I go?

Samrat is humbled by her earnestness. That's wat set her apart from others. Her ability to undo others with her sweet lovable innocent self and her affable sunny nature easily rubbed off on others in d most positive manner "ofcourse chahsmish , u don't have to ask, nething for a beautiful princess and I will wait for ur return eagerly after all abhi tak mujhe apna forgiveness ka gift nahi mila hai"

Gunjan smiles confidently and in a non committal tone murmurs "hmm''.u take, care will see u in four days'.njoy urself"

Samrat "u 2 angel'.take care''bye"

To be continued in next part

Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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CHAP 10-Part B

Gunjan comes back to the present with a smile

Gunjan cudnt believe its already going to be one week since her sister had left for her honeymoon and also she was going to be back today and she was especially excited about the the gang's trip to the resort . She cudnt wait for the journey to begin. Though the restless thought was still chasing her but the love she had in her heart was strong enough to overcome all those fears, at least for the time being when the fear was nothing but unknown"

Samrat races his bike to Chashmish's house. His pretext of going there as he explained to benji, so early in the morning was that he had to receive Mayank and Nupur. But he cudnt fool his heart which was dying to catch a glimpse of his beautiful angel princess.

Samrat's thought abruptly are jerked to a halt by a sudden break. His sarcastic conscience voices out "whoa my princess..dude….hello its morning stop dreaming n wake up……they can only be ever ur dreams….stop deluding urself…..or do u need a rude reminder……..well for example "neetha".

Samrat shuts his mind with a vigor while increasing the bike speed to take out the aggression that was soon to follow. God does he have to take permission from his mind even to live a few precious moments stolen from chashmish's life? Didn't he deserve a tiny amount of happiness that he cud save for d desolate days that wud follow him sometime in the future which didn't seem far away?

Samrat "no am not going to allow it to get the better of me. I will live these few moments to d fullest to last me a lifetime. With that he locks the battles of his mind mentally and indulges in a sweet affable grin thinking about his upcoming meeting with sweet chashmish. Yes that was d best remedy for his cold heart. Any thought of her can only bring warmth to his heart for which he cant thanks his guardian angel, if one really existed for him

Gunjan is packing her clothes and also packing her Di's clothes when she feels the unseen breeze around her all of a sudden cooling her heart, a soft touch of d breeze was announcing the arrival of a person who now owned her heartbeats, the ones that were dependent on the sound of a beautiful pair of footsteps to allow the continuity of the rhythmic beatings of her heart. Was it hers anymore? She smiles shyly, a smile of contentment, her life was so attuned to another lovely human being, so glad that her heart was not any more hers but belonged to a soul sent from heaven, for ensuring her existence

Gunjan speaks aloud "itni subah subah Mr. Shergill, Bhushan ghar me kya kar rahe hain"

Samrat is just about to reach chashmish finally. His impatience cud been seen all over his face. Do din ki dooriyan , upar se neeche, bauji aur bui ki mehman nawazi had further delayed his desire to seek out this beautiful angel . And just as he had almost reached her, she reacts to his presence even without turning

Samrat sulks like a disappointed kid but yet doesn't stop himself from enveloping his arms around chahsmish's waist from the back and mopingly asks "tumhe kaise pata chala chashmish, maine toh zara bhi aawaz nahi nikali. Phir tumhe kaise pata chala"

Gunjan thinks to herself "mere kaan chahe tumhare dabe paon ki aahat na sun sake magar meri dhadkan tumhare har aahat se na sirf waqif hai balki unhe mehsoos bhi karti hai", thinking this in her mind her smile brightens

Samrat sees that chashmish is lost in sum thought n smiling to herself. He tightens his hands around her waist as if to remind her that he was still here n she was not alone "hello princess, kahan kho gayi" nuzzling her neck softly and inhaling her wonderful essence wafting out of her soft silky hairs, he queries again "tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya chahsmish? How did u know I was here"

Gunjan feels goosebumps on her skin as samrat's sweet voice breathes out words in her ears n his beautiful lips contact with her soft neck and hairs seem heavenly to her heart n soul and it's as if a sweet gentle cool n mushy warmth is hugging her soul.

Gunjan "tumne wo kahawat suni nahi, shaitan ka naam lo toh who haazir ho jaata hai" ends with a sweet chuckle

Samrat tightening his hands around her waist as if admonishing her for her pun intended…"very funny chahsmish"

Samrat slowly turns chahsmish around in his arms and now holding her in between his locked arms behind her back says smiling sweetly "waise shiataan hi sahi….magar tumhe mai yaad toh aaya" and cutely hits her forehead with his.

Gunjan blushes and moves back a little asking "waise tum itni subah yahan"

Samrat "chashmish bhool gayi humhe do gante me nikalna hai resort ke liye. Benji aur Dia kuch last minute shopping ke liye gaye hain. Maine socha mai aake chashmish ki kuch madad kar deta hun, waise bhi wo behcari akeli sab kaam kaise kar payegi"

Gunjan hits him on the shoulder "very funny" n tries to wriggle out of his arms but samrat only tightens his hold "samrat chodo mujhe"

Samrat with a wicked smile"itni jaldi kya hai chashmish…..humari us din ki baat yaad hai na …. ….u rem u owe me sumthing"

Gunjan remembers he had mentioned that she wont forget the time they meet for a long time n gulps"samra tttt…kya ….wat do I owe u…..tumhara matlab kya hai….yeh mazak ka waqt nahi hai….mujhe abhi packing karni hai….di aur jeeju bhi abhi aate honge"

Samrat "nice try chahsmish but am not convinced, ab batao r u going it give it to me or not"

While gunjan is still trying to plan how to escape from samrat, Samrat tightens his grip around her waist, further squeezing her into his chest and enjoying her sweet discomfort says "chahsmish soch lo, mujhe koi problem nahi hai, mayank aur nupur aate hi honge , waise on second thoughts unke samne hi I will ask it"

Gunjan is shocked n wonders how can he ask her to kiss him in front of di n jeeju " samrat yeh tum kya kah rahe ho….di aur jeeju ke saamne ….r u out of ur mind"

Samrat smiling innocently "wat to do chashmish, tum aise maan nahi rahi ho toh unke saamne hi mang lunga, then u wont be able to deny me"

Gunjan gulps her breathe on seeing the determined glint in his eyes, no she cant risk her di knowing about them yet, especially when she hadn't confesses her feelings to samrat yet. She knows she has to give in to samrat and licking her dry lips nervously comes forward in a jiffy and closing her eyes. Just as her face and lips come close to samrat's , she very gently touches her lips to samrat's and at first for few seconds samrat's lips remain unresponsive but after few seconds his lips reacts to the soft as butter touch of her lips and her heart springs to life like new blooming flower

Samrat is pleasantly surprised when all of a sudden before he could wink, chahsmish's lips meet his. For a few seconds he is unable to comprehend her reason but not to be d one to miss a once of a lifetime moment like this😆, he crushes her to him and enjoys the bliss of the moment. Somehow it felt as if he was home after a long forever kind of lonely journey into oblivion.

Gunjan oh so slowly detaches her still trembling lips from his and tries to control the zillions hormones running zealously within her body. Samrat slowly eases his own erratic heartbeat while bringing his forehead to rest on chashmish's . There was absolute silence in the room ,save their ragged breathing which were coming to a state of relaxation.

Gunjan slowly eases her head away while her pink face refuses to raise its eyes up and look into samrat's face"

Samrat is busy admiring the beautiful pink that seemed to have invaded chashmish's lovely face and with a huge grin says "waise chashmish ………yeh kis liye tha….if this was a welcome kiss, I wish u travel out more often"

Gunjan who was finding it tough to control d blush sweeping her face is perplexed by samrat 's words "wat do u mean by yeh kis liye tha……tumne hi to kaha tha….i owe it to u……us din ke liye jab maine tumhe phone pe tease kiya tha n u said u wont allow me to forget d moment we meet for a long time to come….n how can u dare to ask me to give it in front of di n jeeju"

A new understanding dawns in samrat's brain and he smiles impishly "oh toh chahsmish yek kiss us baat ke liye tha jise mai puri tarah se bhool chukka tha…..not bad…..u not only remembered it but also voluntarily accepted ur punishment, without me even asking…..must say u r way too unique chahsmish🤣"

Gunjan in a confused state says "wat do u mean by u didn't ask for it or I gave it on my own……u only said I owe it to u……n u blackmailed me by saying u will ask in front of di n jeeju

Samrat is unable to hide his laughter and he releases his hold on her n holds his stomach and laughs uncontrollably😆😆

Gunjan is bewildered about samrat's weird behavior just then. She is unable to understand what he meant by his sentence of few min back. "samrat would u mind stop laughing and care to enlighten me whats so funny here……can u be generous enough to include me in ur joke?"

Samrat looks up , after continuing his laugh for a full 30 seconds he bursts out laughing again looking at chahsmish's raging bull expression with her confusion acting as the highlight on her face.

Gunjan releases her pent up anger in a big sigh and counts 10 to one mentally closing her eyes and takes another deep breathe and without saying a word further she turns around to continue with her work

Samrat notices that he is again crossing d live-wire and before gunjan can move further , he pulls her hand and brings her back to rest against his chest and encircles her in a tight hug allowing her no space to even attempt an escape and knowing her anger just then he knew it wud be on top of her mind and without wasting any time further whispers the following in a husky voice in chahsmish's ears while his breathe works like a sweet caress for her enraged mind

Samrat "u know chashmish, y I love teasing and rousing ur anger or baiting u, coz ur beautiful angelic face glows with thousand fireworks adorning them at the same time…..normally itself its very tough for me to slower down my heartbeat when it comes across ur heavenly face, on top of it if its dazzling with millions small sparks of fire , they send out beautiful arrows to my already agitated heart. The more d arrow hits its mark, d more my heart becomes crazier to retain the beautiful sight its been honored with and I cant help but anticipate more arrows to come my way through those arresting n amazing eyes……gosh chahsmish do u even know u can pack quite a punch with those scintillating captivating eyes of yours" and saying so he tightens his arms as if trying to ensure all his words r reaching out to her.

Gunjan was fuming red the moment she felt samrat's hand arresting her move and bringing her against himself and before she cud even attempt to break out, his arms come up around her waist like unbreakable manacles. And subduing her further attempts samrat'sweet as honeylicious husky voice plays havoc with her tensed consciousness and his nearness was not helping. Each of his words were slowly bit by bit breaking the molecules of anger inside her heart.

Gunjan thinks to herself "god this guys is incorrigible, he spikes my sensitive bones and when they start reacting he doesn't even allow me to stay mad at him for more than few seconds…….but that's precisely the reason I love him so much……if his anger brings a chaos in my hormones, his love soothes my ruffled feathers n oh so beautifully and in a gentle sway, that it elevates my senses to paradise within minutes

Samrat "chahsmish ab bhi mujse gussa ho" n hits his side ahead against hers n when she doesn't respond further he continues "chahsmish when I said u owe it to me I meant the forgiveness gift (turning chashmish around in his arms he brings her a little close and says)but am not complaining, am ready to wait for it coz ur lovely welcome kiss made up for the wait u put me thru and I cant thank u enough for welcoming me back like this princess" and touches his finger cheekily to her nose

Understanding anew dawns on Gunjan and she mentally feels like hitting herself for being such a duh and confusing things in her mind on her own accord and falling prey to her own misconceptions, but inspite of all this she doesn't regret it even an ounce coz love makes u see the beauty fo small acts u share with ur loved ones😳 ….they don't become good or bad unless u start categorizing them like that…they just become beautiful memories for u to cherish lifelong coz any moment with loved one only is a gift, a gift which helps u understand the person u have fallen in love with, u don't need to judge as love is one entity where god forgot to put any restrictions while creating it, hence it gives us d liberty to love the person the way we want with no holds barred…..n hence celebrate the gift of life by living every moment, ,tough or easy good or bad small or big, with the strength of d beautiful love u feel for d other individual.

Gunjan thinks further "Yes she cant thank god enough for bequeathing her with such a beautiful treasure which she was going to die safeguarding with all d life in her, without ne second thots."

But on the outset Gunjan feigns a mock anger and says "how mean samrat…..u kept meaning d gift of forgiveness and here I thought u were acting on the threat u made in our phone convo before I left. She hits him on his chest "tum kitne gande ho"

Samrat "hmmm I agree I don't play fair but when it comes to u angel, who wants to play fair. Acha batao now where's my gift….before u get confused my gift of forgiveness😆😆" says with a huge grin reaching his eyes

Gunjan thinks in her mind , wow we two r sumthing mr. shergill, how easily u also play into my hands, she feels excitement like rustling her hands in her mind n saying I am going to love this one

Gunjan "excuse me Mr Samrat shergill. Before u can accuse me of misconstruing ur request, I need to tell u, galatfaimy me jeene ki aapki aadat si ho gayi hai, gift aapne managa zaroor tha us din but u shud have atleast waited till finding out if I am agreeing to that request or not....tch tch…….now who is going to get disappointed unnecessarily coz I don't have a gift for u😆😕

Samrat "oh come on chahsmish I know u well by now, stop trying to get back at me and give me my gift …..pleeezzzzzzzzzzz" With a cute puppy look in his eyes

Gunjan in a remorseful tone "am really sorry samrat , I don't have ur gift……I promise u I don't…..u know I don't lie…..am really sorry I didn't know u were serious about getting that gift"…….her hands softly caress his cheeks

Samrat gets really disappointe knowing she was speaking the truth n in d same tone asks "u mean u didn't even try chashmish….bas mere request ka itna hi khayal hai tumko…..i didn't expect this from u" his dejection was apparent on his face.

Gunjan tries to cajole him, trying to make him look in her eyes, but samrat resolutely turns his face away and just as he is about to storm away from the place, nupur n mayank make an entry

Nupur "hello shello goor moning Mr Casanova ….subah subah mere ghar me aur wo bhi meri behen ke kamre me……kya baat hai….kahi main nahi mili, is disappointment me meri bahan ko bhaga ke le jaane ka irada toh nahi tha?

Samrat controls and masks his disappointment and says "r u kidding me ms bak bak machine….tumhari jagah mai My universe ko bhi nahi de sakta, tumahri behen to door ki baat hai ….(going and putting his arms around nupur's shoulders he says) wo toh mai tumhari behen se madad mangne aaya tha ki kya wo aaj mayank ke nashte me jamalghota mila sakti hai🤣, Is tarah se hum mayank ko yahi chodke hum dono picnic saath me manane challenge" n pulls nupurs from his side towards himself

Mayank quick to raise to d bait😡 "excuse me samrat, mai aapko giraftar kara sakta hun meri patni ko brainwash karne ke jurm me….on second thots I have a better idea, nupur gunjan y don't u recommend to bui for samrat…rem that umarried 40 year old aunt in ur wedding who kept murmuring she was never lucky enuf to find a gud groom in her life…..am sure u girls have not forgotten d looks she was stealing in samrat's direction when she made those statements…....especailly when the song "hello is it me u r looking for was playing in t eh background (donkey this one is for u...sorry persnl joke😆)..better let me do the honors myself, after all dost hote kis liye hain "bui bui" bui

Samrat firstly blushes at d reminder of chahsmish's relative who was ogling him all through the wedding and secondly panicks when mayank start shouting for bui in real. He quickly goes n puts his hand on mayank's mouth n says "abbey kya kar rahi hai yaar, marwayega kya , hum dono dost hain , aapas me baat karke koi bhi problem sulja sakte hain😆, bui ko kahmakha kyun takleef de raha hai" in a soothing gesture he rubs mayank's chest 😆

Mayank "hmm gaadi ab line pe aayi hai." Gunjan n nupur burst out laughing looking at smarat's horrendous expression when mayank yells for bui n samrat's attempt to fob n calm down mayank

Samrat gets even more angrier looking at chashmish laughing n forgetting that she had cheated him out of his gift, gives her a cold stare which only makes her laugh even more

Just then bui steps in there "kya baat hai mayank , kis liye chilla rahe the? Kuch kaam tha"

All three r giggling at samrat😆 while samrat is giving a glare😡 to mayank, daring him to speaking nething n yet trying to sweetly smile at bui"

Mayank goes one step further "woh bui wo actually samrat ke liye ek favor maangna tha"

Bui "haan bolo na…..tum bachon ke liye kuch bhi" saying so she lovingly pats samrats cheeks

Nupur n gunjan continue giggling while samrat giving his sweet smile to bui, behind her back tries to catch each one's eyes n threatens them to burn them once this was over, telling them with his eyes, they r all going to dead meat soon 🤣

Mayank "woh bui woh kya hai na samrat ko aapke woh aapke parathe itne pasand aa gaye hain…..bas uski tareefen ruk hi nahi rahi…..toh maine socha kya aap hamare trip ke liye bhi thoda pack kar sakti hain to"

Samrat heaves a sigh of relief which but for bui all witness n giggle in d most controlled manner possible

Bui Patting mayank on d shoulder, "buddhu yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai. Mai abhi jaake pack karti hun, tum log neeche aake thoda nashta karlo"

Mayank and nupur start along with samrat when gunjan calls out "di mai soch rahi thi samrat agar meri packing me thodi madad kar de, jab tak aap aur jeeju nashta kar rahe hon"

Samrat gives her a blank stare while nupur looks from one to other suspiciously but nods her acquiescence without saying anything and leaving it for another time.

Samrat is left with no option but to stick around or else mayank and nupur will consider his act unfriendly.

Samrat goes and starts packing some generic stuff like handy cam, camera, magazines and all the while d anger from him is emanating very clearly😡

Gunjan who's loving this angry young man avatar of samrat😆😆 starts packing her clothes and starts singing "tumhari nazar kyun khafa ho gayi khata baksh do ghar khata ho gayi"

Samrat heaves an angry sigh trying to ignore and block out chahsmish but we know Gunjan is not the one to give up so easily. She rolls her dupatta end to make a pointed thin cone and takes it to samrat's ears and tickles from one ear to another singing "hamara irada toh kuch bhi na tha, tumhari khata khud saza ho gayi"

Samrat arresting gunjan's hand "gunjan agar tumhe meri help nahi chahiye to pls saaf saaf kah do. Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai" saying so gets on with his work

Gunjan picks up d camera from his hands that he was packing n says"oohhh itna gussa, imagine samrat hum agar tumhare is anger wale energy to conserve kare toh india ko kitna faida hoga na"

Samrat gives a chilling stare and storms off from the place

Gunjan to a departing samrat "arey jaate jaate ek pose to dete jao…..itne sincere expression wapas dekhne ko mile na mile. The only response gunjan gets is banging of the doors against the walls and she smiles to herself saying "paagal"


To be continued

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CHAP 10-Part C

All d bags r packed and all of them assemble near the entrance. They were planning to go by two cars, one to be driven by samrat and the other by mayank. In one car mayank, nupur, benji, diya r seated while bauji and bui request samrat to drive them to a nearby village on d way.

Though samrat shows his displeasure at having been left with gunjan he could see that it was clearly planned by benji and chashmish and he doesn't fail to give his cold stare to benji before leaving, to which a guilty benji just squirms

After dropping bauji and bui, samrat drives the car in top gear and breezes through the highway like a bullet train.

Gunjan refutes to get rattled by his act and stays calm by counting in her mind mentally and closing her eyes

Samrat takes one look at Chashmish's face and regrets his kiddish act of getting back at her. Her angelic face trying to subdue the fear lacing her heart, shrinks his anger teeny weeny bit but he still has not forgiven or forgotten what chashmish did to him

Gunjan slowly opens her eyes realizing the change in the speed and knows that this buffoon can try hard but can't stay angry on her for long and even if he tried she won't give him a chance to.

Gunjan "samrat tum pehle kabhi yahan aaye ho"

Samrat "baad me baat karenge gunjan abhi mera mood nahi hai so pls don't disturb"

Gunjan doesn't sulk at the rebuke and starts afresh after some half an hour of silent driving journey they were undertaking. Samrat was finding it difficult to concentrate on his driving with chashmish looking like a natural timeless beauty goddess, whom even the nature loved playing around with. Her changing expressions while viewing the world outside of the car, which were passing them, were arresting his thought process every now and then. It was sometimes her simple smile with a sparkle in her eye, adorning her face when she came across some scenery or a crowd of people, sometimes as they were whisking through the deserted highway her smile spoke of the serene enjoyment she felt even in the loneliness and d silence of the moment, sometimes the intense expression she had while placing her hands to rest her chin on the window and gaze at the never ending mountains was as breathtaking as the mountains, sometimes it was a shy smile encompassing her face when a bout of breeze softly caressed her hairs like a teasing lover, as was d case just now.

Gunjan had been feeling samrat's eyes on her constantly for the last half an hour and she was trying her best not to squirm in her seat, at his undivided attention which samrat was trying to hide behind his sunglasses. U don't always need to see a person to know that u r in their thoughts or u r d object of their attention. Feelings have a way of their own, to convey messages that we refrain from speaking aloud.

Gunjan all of a sudden turns towards samrat's side. Samrat is caught red handed looking in her direction. He thinks in his mind, thank god at least the sunglasses r there to protect my eyes that were literally trying to eat up every emotion chasing Chashmish' face

Gunjan tries to look steadily in his direction and asks "samrat have you ever gone for long walk in deep woods of the forest. I so enjoy the bliss I feel whenever I get to walk with the nature surrounding me on all four sides. Its as if I am entering the real world from d unreal world I live in. Tell me na samrat, do u also feel such things.

Samrat turns his face away from her and looking hard ahead and trying to escape her expectant eyes says in a soft tone "we will talk later gunjan , I am not in a frame of mind to do so now"

Gunjan hides her disappointment with her silence and turns away again towards the scenic beauty which seemed to be welcoming her with more affinity than Mr smarty pants😆

After some time gunjan leans forward and picking up the carry bag from the dashboard, picks out an apple from it and rubbing it on her kmees offers it to samrat "apple khaoge samrat"

Samrat starts redundantly "nahi chashmish…"

Gunjan cuts him short "pata hai….abhi tumhara mood nahi hai, suits me n showing him a face by twisting her lips as if making a face at him , frowns and turns away her face and starts munching the apple ,

And way too loudly for samrat's comfort😆😆. Samrat is unable to hide his grin at the face chahsmish made for his benefit and after having rejected her sweet offer for the delicious apple, he was having to gulp down his hunger, but he cudnt stop himself from mentally rebuking his over zealous mouth "very nice move Mr high handed, now suffer in hunger while chahsmish shall sit and make u regret every second , of ur rejection, with every loud bite she takes of the fruit.

Gunjan was enjoying d gulping his saliva movements of samrat🤣. She thinks in her mind "Serves Mr angry young man right"😆. Turning towards samrat she starts, purposefully with a piece of apple still crunched up in her mouth "shamraaat…oh tune…waiiit"….munching her apple piece in leisure and ensuring she relishes eveybit of d small piece her teeth had made of that piece and not to forget the d juicy extracts, she wipes her mouth with a tissue.

And what looked like after eternity to an angry samrat who had just stopped the car in d garage having reached their destination,she turns around and says "sorry …..woh mooh me apple thana isliye theek se baat nahi kar saki."

Samrat ignores her and gets out of the car and goes around the rear of the car to open the car boot to unload some luggage and just as he was opening the door of the boot gunjan's words makes him stand to attention

Gunjan was enjoying the sulking expression of samrat when she was wiping and apologizing for not being able to speak with the apple in her mouth. She cudnt help but grin when she sees samrat ignoring her and going towards the dickey and she follows suit and just when he is opening the door she says "samrat wo tumne gift wali baat toh mujhe poori karne hi nahi di"

Samrat stands quiet for a moment, his interest having been sparked off with chashmish's words. He waits for her to continue.

Gunjan knowing very well that she had samrat' complete attention, says in a totally uninterested tone "khair chodo jaane do….sum other time maybe" . Saying so she turns around to leave the place and go inside and just as she expected a hand springs forward handcuffing her hand and blocking any further movement possible from her end.

Samrat "wo gift….poori baat kya thi….bolo chashmish….am listening"

Gunjan turns around with a sweet perky smile lighting up her face and bending a little forward she picks up one hand luggage and put the strap of that luggage on samrat's hand, the weight of which forces him to leave his grip around gunjan's wrist and before he cud recover chahsmish runs away from the place and just as she reached the door, she turns around and shouts to a stunned and baffled samrat in a husky tone , imitating his voice "not now samrat, abhi mera mood nahi hai, am not in d right frame of mind, we will talk about it some other time" 😆😆and making a face at him she disappears from d spot

Samrat cant help but grin by chahsmish' s witty retort for his horrible behavior all through the journey. She always made him realize, in d most sweetest manner , of his childish attitude. But he still sure as hell was not done with her yet.

Nupur collides with a running gunjan who was turning back and running as if fearing someone was about to catch up with her "whoa chutki, itni tez kahan bhaagi ja rahi hai…….kaun tera peecha kar raha hai……bol kisne jurrat ki meri chutki ka follow karne ki" and just then samrat enters like devil in question.

Nupur raises her eyebrows towards gunjan in askance and before either of them cud speak mayank appears from the bedroom in the ground floor of the house and says "oh u both have finally come, thank god, we thought we 4 would have to leave alone for the day's outing . Now go get ready and be back here in 5 min or else we will surely leave u both and go "completes with a smile.

After 10 minutes samrat comes down after having freshened up and having changed his t-shirt. He was looking forward to this outing and getting chashmish alone somewhere to confront her on the gift business which was unfinished between them. But his hopes r dashed just as his ears tune themselves to chashmish's words as she was telling nupur that she won't be joining them for the outing, while nupur is trying to convince her otherwise

Gunjan "nahi di, tumhe pata hai mujhe oonchai se kitna dar lagta hai aur waise bhi last time jab tum mujhe zabardasti aisi hi ek jagah pe le gayi thi, because of my sickness everyone's outing was spoilt…..so no way am not coming, u guys go , I will meanwhile entertain myself in d kitchen and prepare a lovely dinner for all of you so that we can all catch up for a cosy dinner by the time u guys return in the evening

Mayank with a twinkle in his eyes and a broad grin "now saali ji that's one offer I don't have the heart to refuse. Kal subah honeymoon wale resort me aapki di ka boring khana khake, I have been dying to eat good decent food"

Nupur "mayank kya kaha tumne, boring khana, mai tumhe abhi batati hun. Agar aajse tumhare khane me namak aur michi zyada nahi daali na , mera naam nupur bhushan nahi…"

Mayank swiftly cuts nupur's outburst short and pulls her into his arms much against her liking and says in a loving tone "correction mam, nupur bhushan nahi nupur mayank sharma" and saying so he tightens the hug. Bending a little forward he whispers in a sweet cajoling tone in her ears "and did u know u have two bright spots of red dots enhancing ur already pink cheeks, which directly are proportional to the increased rate of my heartbeats and that why I love to peeve you up so very often"

Nupur's cheeks turn further pinkish red albeit now with a difference of it being from the blush than anger. She mock beats him on d chest as if chastising him for his silly joke.

Benji straining his ears towards them as if trying to overhear some conversation, while Mayank and Nupur are busily locked with their eyes and in their hug, says "excuse Mr and mrs Sharma, if its fine with u, can we mere mortals request your entry back to earth, sorry to be disturbing u but I guess ur audience wud enjoy the Just-Back-From-HM-RomanticMayur movie if they can get to hear the lovey dovey dialogues than a soundless film or mime"

Mayank giving benji a discerning frown, as if trying to caveat him not to spoil a private moment

Dia moving forward and breaking up mayur by looping one arm around mayank's and another around nupur's says"exactly mayank jijjajji. Agar humhe bhi apni wife ke love ka thoda glimpse dikha den to hum bhi hamare nupur ke liye khush ho jayenge"

Mayank's frown dissolves imme into a blushing smile and all 6 correction all five of them r giggling gleefully while one person seemed to have failed to participate in the entire fun of last five minutes coz he was busy pointedly staring at gunjan and thinking something deeply

Dia sweetly tries to convince gunjan"jokes apart, doll tum bhi humare saath chalo na, kitna maza aayega hum sab sath jayenge toh" holding gunjan's hand

Gunjan" I know dia but am really sorry I just can't take the toll a trip like that brings on me, as it spoils everyone's idea of fun. Don't worry we will have more time to catch up in the next two days. In the meantime u guys have a good outing and anticipate and hope I don't punish u all with some horrible food when u guys are back after an adventurous trip"

Nupur coming forward and hugging gunjan from d side says proudly "no ways my chutki is the best cook in the entire universe, even if she just boils water it tastes as good as elixir

Samrat who was silent all along breaks the moment with a barbed comment trying to take out his anger at chashmish for cheating him out of his much anticipated quality time with her "really bakbak machine, don't u think ur love is blinding u, or is it so easy to please u that even boiled water equals to a heavenly concoction for u…."

Everyone seemed to have missed out the hard edged derision in his voice except Gunjan but she ignored it coz she did not want to get into an argument and spoil his outing, so she just smiled, a smile that was purely for his benefit but that didnt reach her eyes.

Nupur in an overprotective tone "hey mr casanova, my chutki needs no certification for her cooking proficiency, the only punishment that will serve u right for even daring to doubt my words, will be u eating up ur fingers accidentally when u r lost savoring her delicacies and I swear u r so going to come to me with a pupply look to bandage ur hands and I promise I wont send u away" ends up with a wink😉

Samrat was impressed by the sincerity in nupurs words, it was a tigress protecting her cub and yet proudly showing them off. "oh really ms bakbak, I cant wait to get bandaged by my most favorite girl, especially if she tends to me in front of her loving husband, what say mayank"😉😆

Mayank "very funny, ab tum logon ka joke kahatam ho gaya ho toh shall we make a move"

Benji makes one last attempt "gunjan r u sure, I can stay back to help u out if u want to, seriously I don't mind"

Gunjan smilingly sweetly and trying to hide behind dia and just bringing her head alone forward from dia's one side of the shoulder says "no ways and bring my sister like diva's wrath on me for cheating her out of a beautiful outing with you….no thanks , I will be able to manage and just when she saw samrat about to open his mouth and she was sure he was going to volunteer she says"seriously "guys am going to be fine, waise bhi the trip in the last two days has made me completely tired so I can relax a bit and then freshen up myself before I start on my mission to give hopefully a good challenge to your taste buds"😆

Samrat is back at wearing his favorite grumpy and condescending look while trying to ignore her completely, when everyone else was busy telling a bye to gunjan

To be continued

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Chap 10-Part D

Samrat is restless, but trying to cheer himself up along with others, just as they had crossed some one kilometer away from their guest house. All of a sudden a brilliant plan formulates in his mind and rolling his eyes nattily to his right and left, as if summing up his surroundings before an attack, starts screaming holding his stomach "awww oh my gawd , its so damn painful"

Mayank stops the car , mayur were sitting in d front, dia, benji and samrat in d back and all turn their attention to samrat, who was just on his way to Oscar awards for his brilliant performance😆, at least he hoped so in his heart to convince his friends to believe so, if his plan were to work

Dia and Nupur simultaneously rap out in concern "what happened samrat , kya hua samrat"

Samrat doing his best to graon with utmost sincerity of pain lacing his broken sentence "candy….nupur….woh woh mere…..woh mere pate me….oh god…..y is it paining so much"

Mayank adding his bit "hang on samrat, I will reverse the car and we will go to the doctor in the street near our guest house, we are not far away from it"

Samrat leaving his hands imme and shrieks as if in horror, of his plan going for a toss "nahin" and then he realizes his over reaction and imme gets back to the skin of his role and holding his stomach in a massaging manner mouths as if in distress "I mean uski koi zaroorat nahi hai…….i mean itna bhi bura nahi hai"

Benji was the only one who found samrat's reactions and shrieks odd. Knowing as well as he knew samrat, samrat will be d last person to celebrate his pain, even if it was physical or bodily one. He knew samrat was upto something and he was curious as hell to know that "acha utna bura nahi hai chalo toh phir we will continue, kya pata aage jaate jaate theek ho jayega"

Samrat trying not to glare at benji for his stupid unwanted conclusion "nahi, mai nahi jaa sakta,"n on seeing benji's raised eyebrows he tries to tag in line saying "I mean pain hai, I mean utna burra nahi hai hai…." As soon as he sees benji about to interrupt he continues "magar utna theek bhi nahi hai ki mai travel kar sakun"

Benji was sure now something bizarre was going on here. "acha , waise yeh pain ahchanak se hi shuru ho gaya kya " to samrat's cold glare benji continues "I mean thodi der pehle toh tum theek the phir achanak se kya ho gaya gai"

Samrat trying his best to dampen his anger at benji's cross questioning session grunts "achanak se nahi, woh thodi der si mujhe slight pain ho raha tha but I didn't give it much thought in d excitement of d day ahead I guess maine raaste me cha, I mean gunjan ke saath kuch khaya tha, who mujhe shayad suit nahi hua"

Benji had hit bulls eye now "acha strange gunjan ne toh humhe bataya nahi ki tum logon ne raaste me kuch khaya tha, waise tumhe pain left side me ho raha hai kya"

Samrat says mildly "haan" n heaves a sigh internally that benji has bought his bluff, relaxes a little and holds his stomach with one hand and to continue d portrayal of a man in pain, he leans back in his seat and rubs his forehead with the other hand closing his eyes as if trying to seek some relief to his pain

Benji trying to control his laughter hard at having guessed samrat's intention "tho phir tumne right side ko kyun pakad raka hai😆😆

Samrat springs forward from his relaxed stance at benji's words and curses himself mentally for being so duh in not being to play a part convincingly and barks off the words "whats this benji, some twenty-question-have- to-answer-session, cant u see I am in pain now"

Benji says with a wicked smile "really sorry I am being so insensitive, mayank tum car reverse me lo, we will cancel the plan, after all samrat ko is haalat me le jana theek nahi hoga na"

Samrat again raises his tone on seeing his plans almost going in the air "noooo" after seeing some 4 pairs of raised eyebrows this time around he subdues his demeanor and tone saying "I mean why shud u guys spoil ur plan coz of me, I mean I cant come doesn't mean that u guys shud be cheated out of ur much awaited trip"

Benji "its ok samrat, we understand and we don't want to leave u alone and we wont feel bad, hai na guys" n all three murmur their acquiescence

Samrat holding his anger back just that little bit and firing out words which to others looked a pain contorting his tone n words "samjha kar benjiiiiiii….i don't want to spoil d day for all, I will manage, u just drop me around the street and I will take a rick and head back home" but to benji it sounded like pure frustration

Benji smiling in his heart finally gives in saying "r u sure samrat"

Samrat doesn't miss the sparkle in benji's eyes and he knew his game was out in front of benji but he was still nevertheless glad of benji's compliance and murmurs "absolutely"

Benji "okie fine as u wish, mayank lets drop him around the corner"

Just around the corner, samrat gets down and benji follows him suit and benji mumurs for others benefit "r u sure u don't want me to come back with u, I am gonna miss u a lot today my friend, oh y do I have to go leaving my firend in pain" saying so hugs samrat and grins wholeheartedly😆

Samrat masks the bubbling irritation he feels at benji's over friendly act and tightens his arms around benjis back as if trying to punish him for taking his case like that and murmurs "benji bahut overacting ho gaya hai, chup chap yahan se bhaag ja warna dinner me gunjan ke khaneke bajay mai tujhe kahca chaba jaunga"

Benji feels samrats iron like hands trying to warn him oh so sweetly not to test his luck anymore and his words as well "samrat itna pyar mujse tumhe bhi shoba nahi deta, ab chod bhi do mujhe warna dia galat matlab nikal legi"

Samrat imme releases his hold from around benji ,scared to give any wrong opinion to their onlookers and looks up in benji's eyes to catch his wink, which he returns with a lopsided grin of his and benji turns and joins the other three as samrat waves them a bye holding one hand over his stomach but this time the right side of it and as the car vanishes away around the corner samrat jumps up in the air and does a high spirited yes and thinks now to part two "mission chahsmish gift and quality time"

Gunjan was busy preparing a dish in kitchen when she hears the door bell ring. Without even having to open the door she knew who it was going to be. Something had been telling her the moment the gang had left, one of them was going to come back without going for the trip and no prize for guessing whom she was anticipating but she still feigns shock and surprise when she opens the door to a so called stern looking samrat and mouths "tum …yahan kya kar rahe ho…..tumhe toh un logon ke sath hona chahiye tha"

Samrat "very funny chahsmish tum soap serial bahut dekthi ho, at least dialogues toh original bol liya karo, as if u didn't know I was going to come back"

Gunjan "acha strange samrat mujhe kyun aisa nahi laga ki tum wapas aane wale ho," saying so she turns away and starts going inside as if the convo was over for her when she feels her hand being pulled from d back just in time as she anticipated

Samrat "ek min chashmish, not so fast, first my gift and then u can go"

Gunjan turns around and with a determined smile "sorry samrat abhi mood nahi hai baad mein" and saying so she twists her hand out of his hold and leaves the place

Samrat is now slightly irritated and he lets her leave knowing she would come back to passify him on her own. But after pacing in his room for 30 minutes when gunjan doesn't come, he climbs down from his high horse and heads towards the kitchen and adopting his most gullible heartwarming and melting puppy look he says too sweetly "chashmish kya tum sach much mujhe gift ke bare me nahi bataogi kya"

Gunjan was impressed, she had given samrat 15 minutes to come in search for her but he had held out for 30. She just turns around and samrat's sweet innocent boy look does achieve the effect it set out for, she relents a little and smiles back but then nothing more

Samrat encouraged by her smile moves forward and going close to her and knowing how his proximity melted any anger for chashmish, blows the words pleasantly, like a breathe of fresh air in her ears "chashmish mujhe meri gift do na, I promise mai tumhari koi bhi baat manunga if u give me my gift"

Gunjan's heartbeat that had kicked into an overdrive as soon as it feels d gentle breathe along with d words reaching every corner in her heart. The moment samrat says he would listen to anything if she gave him her gift , she grabs on d opportunity to ask him what she had been dying to ask for long

Gunjan turning around and looking in his eyes from close proximity asks "acha kya tum mujhe apne life ke bare me kuch bataoge, apne parents ke bare mein, apne childhood ke bare mein, apne college ke bare mein, iss tough samrat ke peeche chupe ek totally diff samrat ke bare me?"

Samrat is thrown aback by chashmish's request. His entire body and emotion freeze like as if they had achieved the freezing point instantly. Its as if a curtain had been drawn upon his heart and mask had been put on his face, he backs off saying" am sorry chahsmish, u r wasting ur time, u don't have to psychoanalyze me, there's nothing interesting to talk abt my life and especially nothing worth sharing about my life with u"

Gunjan knew mulish look when she was one and she knew she had taken a wrong approach by directly hitting the target. Samrat was still sore about lot of things in his life. She tries to divert his attention by saying "acha chalo theek hai, mai tumhe gift ek shart pe doongi ,provided u help me with cooking food"

Samrat smiles a grateful smile. Chashmish knew how to handle him d best. She never pushed him beyond his comfort zone and she always accepted his stand offish attitude when she was crowding his personal space. Samrat happily agrees "done but don't blame me if ur dishes tunr out not worth being eaten by the dogs as well" with a grin

Gunjan happy that she had managed to bring him out of his gloom says "very funny, u better work to earn ur gift or else u can say bye to ur gift"

Samrat saluting her says "ok mam, am upto the challenge"

In the next half an hour they have a riotus time thanks to samrat's light hearted banters and his new found love for cooking which left a lot to be desired. Gunjan cudnt contol her smile everytime samrat messed up even the smallest tasks she entursted upon him. Sometimes she wondered if he was really this clumsy in kitchen or was he doing it deliberately to bring a smile on her face. Eitherways she was not complaining

Samrat looked picturesque with flour on his forehead, a radish leaf slid behind his ear, a little of tomato puree adorning the edge of his lips, the white sauce smeared lovingly by chashmish, shining on his cheeks. Most of all he enjoyed bringing so much smile to the angel princess whose beauty was shining 100 times more when the smile of hers was not only reaching her eyes and hearts and but also reaching his befuddled as hell heart as well

Samrat was busy heating oil in the pan, which was the latest task given by chahsmish when Gunjan comes forward and says "samrat come here, lets play a small game. Afterall u deserve a break after all this hard work of urs"

Samrat smiles and says "sure any game is welcome from the challenging tasks u have tortured me with in dlast half an hour"

Gunjan smiling widely "well the game is simple, I will give u things to taste and u just have to identify what u r eating"

Samrat smiles and agrees and thus starts an interesting game

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CHAP 10-Part E

First gunjan places a bunch of chilli pakodas, which had extra spice in them to bring tears to ones' eyes and smoke from one's ears.

Samrat screams the moment chilli effect gets to him. He opens his eyes screaming "paani paani paani" but to his consternation he finds water nowhere in the kitchen, not in fridge not on the table, nowhere and in his greed for quelling the chilly taste, he opens the kitchen drawer in desperation and he comes across the sugar jar and taking handful of the same he stuffs it in his mouth and after five minutes he calms down and looks crossly towards chashmish and says "yeh kaisa mazak tha chashmish, i trusted u and u let me down so easily"

Gunjan not expanding further just says a sorry sincerely and says she will make it upto to him for her prank and saying so she asks him to close his eyes another time and makes him taste a spoon of soup which had excessive of salt flowing in it.

The moment samrat takes a spoonful he spats it out and shouts in frustration "whats wrong with u chashmish, wat games r u playing with me, have u gone crazy or r u still punishing me for this morning"

Gunjan calmly again apologizes to him and says "sorry samrat, am not playing any game, but can I request you to take another spoon of this soup"

Samrat "r u crazy chashmish, this soup is going nowhere but to the sink. It has so much of salt that one cant even gulp a drop of it"

Gunjan sweetly cajoles him and requests him to taste and at her bequest samrat relents coz it was a small wish and he didn't want to disappoint her. But the moment he gives in and apprehensively tastes the soup again, to his utter sweet pleasant surprise the soup tastes delicious and if he could come out of his shock he would have liked to ask chashmish how the soup turned in a minute from horrible to out of d world taste

Before samrat can continue gunjan interrupts him saying "now for d last dish samrat, pls close ur eyes"

Samrat eyes her doubtingly and says "nahi chashmish tume mujhe aise hi khilao"

Gunjan continues to coax him to trust her and after five minutes of non stop assurance she wins her way

Samrat opens his mouth with lot of apprehension wondering what googly chashmish was gonna throw this time around. A light sweat breaks out on his face preparing for something really hot to burn his tongue or sour to spoil his taste bud. Just then chashmish's sugary voice coos in his ears striking up thrilling sensation in his body- fear along with sweet anticipation

Gunjan seeing the tensed expression on samrat's face goes closer to him and whispers in his ears lovingly "this is my first gift for u sweet bafoon" And saying those words she places a spoonful of mouth watering n palatable gajar ka halwa" in samrat's mouth

Samrat is unable to decide what was soothing his frayed nerves more, chashmish's honeylicious words or d best ever delectable gajar halwa he had ever tasted. He just was able to mouth "hmmmm" for what sounded to him like a full two minutes

When Samrat was still lost in the appetizing taste of the sweet dish, chashmish starts talking and before he can open his eyes, Chashmish closes his eyes with her hands and says "ahan, abhi nahi, just let me talk for the next few minutes, u just listen to what I have to say, or better try to relizie what am trying to say, in short try feeling up my words like u felt up the sweet dish

Gunjan continues "u know samrat the first time I placed d spicy as hell pakodas in ur mouth, u were desperately looking out for water to nullify the same. The problems in our life can make us act just like that, the moment we face one, we are desperate for a solution that our mind perceives to be d one. I had purposely hidden the water for u not to reach out to it but did that stop u from searching for an alternate solution to remove the sting of the chillies u had tasted right? Life's like that, when we face problems we just don't have the right perspective to look for the solution. Sometimes the solution might lie right in front of us yet we run away from it coz we have allowed the problem to overcrowd our mind.

Gunjan "Rem u might have read in a poem "happiness is always like a bout of gentle rain which is hiding behind the dark cloud, just like the gentle sheathe of air behind the moon. Only those who have the perseverance to look behind the cloud can seek it or else most of us get disappointed assuming that all we deserve is only dark clouds. Had u assumed that, u wud not have sought the alternative way of quelling the hot taste burning ur tongue. U believe that there was something that cud undo ur sufferings and u found it after ur intense rummaging of the kitchen and cupboards. That's what we need to o when we are burdened by a mountain of problems in life all along, we just need to keep our perspective clear, that even though we might have faced hell in the form of problems all our life, we can only make a problem seem as big as long as we consider it like that in our mind. U felt i broke ur trust but that was not purposeful, similarly when sometimes life breaks our trust in it its not to punish us but only to make us stronger

Gunjan continues "Next when I gave u the over salty soup, u almost puked and felt the entire dish was wasted. But in life problems always are not that bad as we like to make them be. Agreed only a person who goes through rut understands its intensity but there's always a perspective that can help u look beyond the problem and overcome it. U thought the soup had to hit the sink but all I had to do was add a little bit of ingredients to nullify the effect of additional salt and u were almost ready to agree the soup was good'.Thats what a barrage of problems do to us. They color our perspective that we stop believing that it could be overcome, but all we need is a little bit of inspiration to live life some more and bang on our positive spirit definitely springs up a way to wade through even the worst of turmoils. As I said earlier, its just our perspective that can help us decide how we want to look at even the most troublesome life we may be leading

Gunjan "Lastly when I fed u a spoon of gajar halwa, u were least ready to trust me to do good by u, u were sure I was again going to give something sour or really hot, but what d heck I gave u a sweet dish to entice ur sweet tooth and taste buds. Well that's how life is, how much ever it may seem unfair, the distance between ur miseries and happiness is bound by a thin thread of hope and trust. Its very difficult to trust when u have repeatedly been hurt, but when u take the bold step of trying to trust again u will see that u have been rewarded with paradise for ur ability to try again, to trust ,to hope, to believe in d happiness u deserve, in short deserving a life than can be lived. U see u do get the best when u take d courage to trust in-spite of having fallen innumerable times before. Life's fair in the end but only as long as we are ready to be fair to ourselves by believing unconditionally in what we desire and what we deserve.

Gunjan continues "I was not trying to give u any gyan samrat. I just wanted to tell u what I believe from the bottom of the my heart, that more than anyone else in this world I trust and believe that u deserve to have a happy life for urself. All I can request is just believe in it when it may ever approach u, just give it a chance. All it takes is one chance, a chance to trust in wat u deserve and desire in d depth of ur heart"

Gunjan slowly removes her hands from his eyes and very slowly samrat opens his eyes only seeing a pair of sparkling eyes which in turn were witnessing a pair of eyes which were moist and wet

Gunjan quickly closes his eyes and says "aham not so fast Mr. Shergill, u have to wait till u receive ur actual gift. Saying so she drags him forward saying "tumhe meri kasam u wont open ur eyes till I say so". Saying so, she takes him to a room and slowly brings him to a table which had a big parcel, one inch thick in width and the length was something like a life size poster, beautifully wrapped in the most colorful of gift wrappers and neatly tied with wonderful satin ribbon bow.

Gunjan"ab tum apni aanken khol sakte ho"

Samrat opens his eyes to find something like a lifesizee of a cardboard or frame, wrapped beautifully in front of him. He looks questioningly at chashmish to which she just nods to him to unwrap it

Samrat unwraps the gift slowly , taking pains not to tear the wrapper in anyway,he wanted to preserve that coz he knew he was going to unravel a gift of lifetime in few minutes from now.

Samrat's eyes meet the most beautiful thing they had ever seen in single instance and frame in whole of his lifetime. He was seeing a collage of his pictures of whole of his life till now, encased with lots of care in the frame before him. The collage had diff mixed moments if he could ever count them to be like that right from his childhood, till his trip to morena. He had one picture at d age of 5 when his grandmother had lovingly enveloped him in her warmth, he had a pic at the age of 7 when he and his friend were horribly drenched in d colors of holi and both were still trying to color the other more, he had a pic where he was bravely trying to wipe the tears when he had fallen down while learning to ride a cycle on his own,he had a picture of d football match where he was being tossed in d air at the age of 13 when his local team had won. He had a picture with absolute horror on his face when caught by a teacher from behind with a hold on his shirt when he was trying to escape after drawing mosutaches to her sleeping form with black sketch at the age of 15, he had a picture when he was strumming the strings of his guitar at the age of 17 for a rock show along with benji, which he had loved performing, he had a picture of dancing mindlessly when he had performed for a inter college cultural competition and won d best dancer award. It had the picture of him dancing with chashmish on d mehendi day, both looking lost , it had d picture of him n chashmish singing n having fun during nupurs sangeet , him dancing in girls costume, a picture from their outing when they were in the lake and the fort.

Samrat's eyes well shamelessly at having been shown all the wonderful moments he had had the good fortune to live in-spite of his horrible life otherwise in a single frame.

Gunjan breaks into d awe filled moment with her words "samrat I wanted to gift u the best moments of ur life. U know, I always believe that we can live happily in-spite of any amount of troubles as long as we have wonderful memories playing guardian to us. Memories can be good and bad and they make life beautiful with their combination and not just happy memories alone. We learn to appreciate and safeguard good memoirs only when we recollect the bad phases we have gone through to get to the good phase. I have tried to collect all the beautiful moments from ur life, stolen them from ur past and present, to seal them in this frame, to remind u of the bliss that u have lived. When ever u r down I want u to look at this frame and draw inspiration to live life in a way that u r able to add more pics to the empty slots beautifully inserted in d form of design in the frame.

Gunjan continues "When life comes to a juncture from where moving ahead seems tough the best remedy is think of all the beautiful moments we have d fortuity to live and work towards coming out of your turmoil to earn more. When a person most dear and close to our heart leaves us, we can always keep them alive through the memories we have managed to earn in the process of living life with them. Life is nothing but collection of beautiful memories, good and sad, long and short, but they r that and symbolize what we have made of our life. Its only memory that can always help u erase any negative impact fate manages to leave upon u, coz u have to power to remember only what u want of that and no one can ever change the way u hold and cherish ur memory, its urs to create, live and cherish, just as u wish to"

Samrat is awestruck and mesmerized equally by the life size frame in front of him as he is by each word of chahsmish, which had upped the respect he had for her in his heart. This was another perfect example to justify why he called her angel princess, coz she was an angel who always managed to make anything appear beautiful, show a ray of beautiful light and hope always, make even a life as miserable as his look enchanting. She was a princess who knew the gift of giving unconditionally to all she came into contact with.

Samrat doesn't waste any second further and goes ahead and crushes her in a tight hug. His throat is too choked up to convey any words to express his heartfelt gratitude to this wonderful being in his arms who had yet again touched his life oh so beautifully. He starts bestowing sweet small kisses all over her face, her forehead, her eyes, her nose, her cheeks, her jaws and when he comes to her lips he locks her eyes with his daring her to move an inch further and without breaking his eye contact, he kisses her with all the life possible in him, commemorating her beautiful self, as if trying to absorb, adore, venerate and worship her, all in one breathe of his. What words had always failed to do, he was trying to show it with his emotions. The way his lips were gently traversing over hers, he wanted her to know that she was the most special angel he had had the kismet to come into contact with. She was in short what he never dared to believe was ever possible in his life. She was a ray of hope which never stopped in its efforts to make him believe in the happiness he deserved. He wished he cud believe utterly n completely that she was his salvation!!!!


To be continued ........


Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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Omg omg meena(hope I can call u dat) u updated n wobhi 5 updates awesome chalo I forgive u for giving us dat much late update anyways it's a say naaa "shabar ka phaal meetha hota hai" I can say dat million times today for dis updates u gave us perfect apoloize gift today lol all the updates were jst perfect no words to describe it seriosly updates were full of romance n cuteness n funny n emotions n touching moments n all da superb dialogues wow wow it was fantabulous man da scene in starting was so sad as gunji was going away from Sammy for 4 long days der conversation in phone was full of sadness bt loved all gunji dialogue In der convo she was also sad bt she was not showing it she was all determined n all loved dat u perfectly explained da feelings n all n den da gift part da part were Sammy was blackmailing dat if she don't give da gift den she has to do it infront of mayur n den wen gunji kissed him hayeeeee so romantic n Sammy expresion coz he didn't expected dis lol loveeee it n den wen Sammy told her he was talking abt gift nt kiss den all der dialogues were toooo good lol jst loved dat scene to core n wen gunji saying she didn't brought any gift n she was using all da dialogue lol awesome I can never imagine the show gunjan like dis lol n den da car scene of sajan da wat Sammy was all angry at her lol I was enjoying it a lot da way Sammy was looking at gunji expression n all n all his thought too cuteee n den wen gunji was all being mischief eating apple loudly lol tooo good awesome job gunji lol n den gunji using bafoon word lol loved it n den all gang scene wen Sammy was having fun pulling mayu leg lol superb n den Sammy fake stomach ache lol loveeee it n as benji knws Sammy well he was irritating sammy haha dat scene lol awesome n den da best part sajan kitchen scene n da gift scene dat was beautifully written dear da game played by sajan n wen gunjan was describing y she made him taste it n all her dialogues abt dat was jst perfect wow ur writing was tooooo good der man how do u manage to write alll dat god n den last but not least da gift wow wow dat was da best n beautiful gift anyone can give to someone awww all sammmy memorable moments in dat collage pic awwww n den wat gunji said it was so so beautiful man n touching also somehow loveeee it to core n finally der hug n all dat kisses hayeeee u put me in sajan dreamland lol u r superb writer dear u willll be best writer in whole world I can bet da way u write wow u deserve many standing ovations dear wow for me dis is best FF seriosly n dats y I alwayd wait for dis ff n dats y I forced u to update soon n nw I will stop lol it's getting damn long lol n it's k we understand dat u had toooo much work dats y u didn't updated bt nw plz try to continue soon ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome........................
excellent..............


and i love long parts 😊 😊
Edited by 358674 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
just mind blowing
loved it to the core
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Ok first let me just tell you how EXCITED and CRAZY I got when I saw that you posted it....🤣
haiiiiiiiiiiii main marjawan😍
Di.......kya part tha!!!.........
sach Di the part FABULOUS!!!!.......
uffffffffffffffffffffff iss pal mein mein tho behosh ho gaayi thi kuch secs ke liye lekin phir yaad aaya ke maine padna khatam nahin kiya😆😆......so kisi bhi tarah apne aap ko samhala end tak😆😉..
hmmmm ab jaldi next part post karo kyunki maine kaha naa tumse ek bar jo phas gaayi tho phas gaayi😆.........aur tum tho hume janti ho we always want MORE😉

*Sana*😳

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