MJHT FF-10 Things I hate bout u-Pt 13-Pg 77(29/07) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: samrat_anki

its awesome...add me in ur pm list


Thanks a ton....:) U r anki, rite? I've added u...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

amazing start!
so nupur is kat n mayank is patrick? omg soo cool!!
i cannot wait to read ahead! continue soon


Hey mishu...Yepp, Mayank is Patrick, Nupur - Kat, Samrat - Cameron and Gunjan - Bianca...😃


Thanks...will update soon!! :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

amazing start

Continue soon
x x

Thanks ZoaH...😃 Will continue soon...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#74


Thanks a lot, Sana...:)


Originally posted by: -Jess-

Appu... great first part...


Thanks Jess...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey u didnt pmed me yaar

Liked the update
Mayu is tuff while Sam lik sweet
Liked the whole
Ben is awesum yaar
Bhushan sisters
Plz pm nxt tim
Liked the whole update


So sorry afsha...will PM u for sure, next tym on...:)

Thanks a ton...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi appu,
Nice start.
Loved it.
update sson


Hey faria...Thanks...glad u loved it...😃 Will surely update soon...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Hey Rocker... sounds interesting... everyone's scared of Mayank.. hmmmmm.. and Uday had 25 burgers.. what's it stomach or what??????????????😲but nice start dear!!!!!!!!!👏


Hey Divi...Thank u...Yepp, everyone's scared, just like they were in MJHT in da beginning...😉


Yaa, u noe Uday na? Petu kahin ka!!😆😆 Thanks again...🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
#78


Thanks a ton...:)


Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome part!!!!...i loved it!!!poor mayu....stupid uday.....lol
samrat is soo sweet yaar!!! and benji is super cute!!! everything is good!!!
i was going to watch this movie yesterday but then i thought if i will watch the movie....i will lose the interest in this ff!!!thank fully i didn't watch!!!!update soon.pm me!!!


Thanks a ton...I noe dis is late, but i wud love to noe ur name...dunno till now...😳


aww, dats so sweet of u...u dint see da movie coz of my FF?😳 thnx! I hope i dont disappoint u...:)


Thanks again...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: basket_101

heyy great job!
thx for the pm..
do cont soon
HiNaL


heyy HiNaL...thnx a ton😃 will surely continue soon...:)


Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

amazing start
Mayank lit a police jeep?
Nice... LOL
That would be funny to see
great start into the story
but it was somewhat short
make it LONGER!
okay,
I need to stop complaining
continue soon!



thanks nikki😃

LoL...dats da rumour, who noes wat da truth is, rite?😉

I'll try n mk it longer da next time....😊

Thnx again...:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 2

"By God!!! Can't u watch where you're going??Moron!"

The Guy who had bumped into her actually went 2-steps backwards, reeling with the verbal abuse as if he had been physically slapped...

"What are you standing there like a statue for?? Who's gonna pick up these books you sent flying across the floor??" She continued in the same tone, unaffected by the countless stares she was attracting with the commotion...

"I-I-I'm sorry, Nupur..." Benji bent down instantly to pick up her books, while she stood there tapping her foot impatiently...Samrat gaped at her, unable to believe that someone could be this rude.

"What a b***h,man!!" A girl standing nearby whispered to her friend,who snorted in reply, "Thats Nupur Bhushan for you!"

Nupur snatched the books from the poor fellow's hand and left with a loud "Hmph!!" leaving him wondering what wrong he had done to face the wrath of this fireball, first thing in the morning.

With a sigh, he turned towards Samrat and said, "And that,my dear friend, is the biggest hindrance in your path!!"

Samrat looked at him,confused. "She's Nupur Bhushan, Gunjan's elder sister..." Benji explained.

His eyes widened as realisation dawned on him...It couldn't be...This wretch could NOT be Gunjan's sister...Gunjan seemed so sweet, so pure and Nupur-----Well, if Samrat had to describe her in one word,it would be- MEAN!! Yes,that's what she was...and attractive,of course...but who cares?? She was M-E-A-N!!

"But what does she have to do with my path??"

"I don't know... I just know that we need to get out of here before she comes back to slit my throat!!" Benji exaggerated and pulled a laughing Samrat with him.

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Nupur walked into the classroom and looked around for a seat and smiled automatically as Diya waved at her... The only good thing about this College,for her,was Diya...and of course her Dramatics Class...She looked down at her books and noticed the shoe stamp on her diary...

"By God!!These guys have no sense...Look what he's done to my diary!!" She was muttering to herself and didn't see when she banged into him...

"Hey babes! Humse takrane ki itni jaldi thi,to humein pehle bata deti...Hum to kabse tayyar hain!!"

Nupur looked up with her eyebrows raised as she saw the jerk she had bumped into...

"By God,Ranvijay...Tumhe nahi pata tha ki mujhe kab se issi mauke ki talash thi??" She replied,with an evil smile forming on her lips,as she batted her eyelids...

"Really,Nupur?" RV actually sounded hopeful as he moved closer to her.

"Really Ranvijay!!" Nupur replied as cheesily and then with full force stamped her 4-inch heel on his foot.

"Owww" RV yelped with pain as everyone who had been listening in on the conversation burst into laughter...

RV glared at them and their laughter subsided...Nupur turned at her heels and was about to leave when he said, "Nupur Bhushan, try as u may, I'll show u your place one day!" his voice evil.

"Oh really?? I'll wait for that day!!" Nupur retorted and walked to her seat and joined Diya, still muttering under her breath about what a day it had been so far.

Mayank, who had been reading his book at his seat when the whole scene occurred in front of him, looked towards Nupur, with mild interest in his eyes,when C.J. tapped on his shoulder.

"What happened,dude?Kya dekh raha hai?"

"Hmm? Nothing...Yes,this reminds me...When are you going to stop seeing dat idiot??"

"He has a name,Mayank...And Uday is not an idiot!!He's just very sweet and childish..."

"and hungry as hell all the time!!!" Mayank completed for her and continued when she narrowed her eyes at him, "Aaj uski vajah se Ms.Aha ne mujhe phir se office bulaya...Ek to vaise hi ppl talk all nonsense..."

"Oh!!So now Mayank Sharma suddenly cares about what ppl talk about him??" C.J. raised her eyebrows.

"Certainly not!! I give 2 hoots about what they have to say...but atleast not the teachers,u noe..."
C.J. burst out laughing.

"What??" He looked confused.

"I don't know how people are scared of you,Mayank...You're the sappiest person around!!"

"I am NOT sappy!!!" He glared at her...

She continued laughing...Mayank hmphed loudly and went back to his book when Deodhar Sir entered the classroom and all the students rushed to their respective seats...

Deodhar Sir was their English Literature teacher...A subject for which Nupur had particular fondness,because of the beautiful poetry that came as part of the subject. Nupur wiped her precious diary with a piece of paper,as she flapped the pages to check if everything was in order or not...

"What happened,Nupur? How did your diary get stained?" Diya whispered as she leaned in to see what Nupur was doing.

Nupur snapped the diary shut. She didn't want anyone to find out what was in there. Not even Diya. She glanced towards Deodhar Sir who was taking attendance.

"Arey kya bataun Diya...This Stupid guy....." and she started narrating the whole story to her.

"Nupur Bhushan" No Answer.

"Nupur Bhushan" Deodhar Sir called out a little louder this time. No answer.

"Miss.Nupur Bhushan!! If your important talks and issues are over,then do you mind paying a little more attention to the class??" This time Nupur looked up and with a soft "Yes,Sir",she looked down, completely embarrassed.

RV whistled from the backseat and the class burst out laughing. Nupur turned to glare at him,but there wasn't a need for her to say anything as Mayank intervened.

"Will you cut it out,Ranvijay? We are all here for a class and not to listen to your whistling skills!"

There was pin-drop silence as the whole class turned to look at Mayank, who was himself utterly confused as to what had made him say that. Even Deodhar Sir didn't say anything for the next 2 minutes.

"Parul Mehra" "Present Sir"
"Prem Kumar" "Present Sir"

Mayank let out a slow sigh as the class resumed their normal activity. He dug into his book to avoid C.J.'s continuous nudging and of course, Nupur's fleeting glances his way every now and then. He didn't have an answer to his action himself, let alone for them.

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A small part, but promise next time on, ill try posting longer....😊 Plz leave ur comments... Silent readers, plz press the like tab if u liked it...:)

Edited by aparajita.s - 15 years ago

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