MJHT FF-10 Things I hate bout u-Pt 13-Pg 77(29/07) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Jess-

Aparajita... I liked that movie...looking forward to Mayur FF on the same story... add me to your PM list please...

Hey Jess...u've seen da movie too...:) Gr8!! The story's almost entirely da same...Ill be making some minor changes though...I hope u like dis too...:)
Added u...:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

AWESOME CHARACTER SKETCH YAAR!!!!specially of mayur!!!!.i mean the most misunderstood guy and a bitch!!!woahh!!!!!please update soon.

plzzz add me to ur pm list!!!!

Thnx a ton...:) Am glad u liked da CS...Ya, MayUr r quite intriguing characs...Mysterious n stuff...😉
Will add u for sure...:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 1:


Samrat looked at the name plate outside the office door,which read, "Ms.Aha – Guidance Counsellor" and knocked softly as he licked his lips nervously. His first day at Excel was proving to be quite uneventful till now, with the Principal being extra-understanding of his sudden and mid-of-term admission to the college... He wondered if she would be equally nice as he heard a loud and irritated "Come in!!"

"Good Morning,maam" Samrat smiled at her, handing out his admission paperwork to the woman behind the desk.She looked up at him and gave him a smile which, to Samrat, seemed almost seductive. On an impulse, he moved back and plopped into the chair across her.

"Samrat Shergill...My,my...9 schools and now admission to a 2nd college!! Army brat??" She said, appearing to be interested...

"Well,kind of...my Dad...."

"That'll be enough!!" Ms.Aha cut him abruptly...Samrat looked up,slightly miffed at this.
She continued," Im sure you'll find Excel no different than your old college...."

PHAT!! A wet tissue ball landed onto the window behind her...She smirked...

"Same old shit and crap going on here too!!" she finished, pointing towards the window...

SHIT??CRAP??Had he heard her right??

"Im sorry...did u just say..??Am I in the right office??" Samrat burst out,unable to contain his shock..

"Not anymore, darling...Here's your time-table and the rest will be explained to you by Benji...Im sure you will find him somewhere in the college! Now scoot!! I have deviants to attend to." She dismissed him with a wave of her hand.

As if on cue, there was a knock at the door and Samrat bumped into the handsome guy entering the room...The guy glared at him as Samrat left hurriedly to look for whoever in this World was Benji...

"Aah!! Mr.Mayank Sharma...I see we are making these visits a weekly ritual..." Ms.Aha spoke to the guy,her voice laced with sarcasm...

"Only so we could have these moments together...Should I hit the lights??" Mayank retorted, just as dryly...

"Very clever, Mr.Sharma...It says here that you created a ruckus in the canteen, forcing Mr.Uday to gobble up 25 burgers...He passed out and hasn't been able to come to college since." She reprimanded him.

"It was supposed to be taken as a joke...That idiot took it on himself to prove it..." Mayank responded irritably...

"Well, next time, think before you make your silly jokes...Now scoot!!"

Mayank glared at her one last time before leaving the office... Stupid Uday!! Because of his pea-brained antics ,he had to listen to this nonsense...He made a mental note to himself to ask C.J. to stop seeing that idiot!!

**********

"Samrat Shergill??" Samrat turned as he felt a tap on his shoulder...

A guy,dressed in a striped, collared T-shirt and a pair of black pants stood grinning at him, with his hand stretched out...

"Hi...myself Benjamin Swami.....uh...Benji..." he added as he noticed Samrat's confused look...

Samrat let out a sigh of relief...God!!He had never felt happier on seeing a guy before....He smiled as he shook hands with him...

"Finally!! Im so glad to meet you...I was feeling utterly lost in this crowd and Ms.Aha said that you...."

"Dont listen to what Ms.Aha says...She herself doesn't know what she's talking about,half the time.." Benji cut him midway, with a smirk.

Samrat laughed genuinely, for the first time of the day...He had a good feeling about this guy,as Benji started showing him around,as if he had known him all his life...

"That's the cool group...You don't say Hi to them unless they say it to you..." Benji explained...

"Why's that??"

"Here,watch me - Hey there!!" Benji said to the group standing nearby,

"Bite me!!" came the curt reply...Ouch!! Samrat had his answer...They walked ahead...

"Those are the nerds and brains of the college...Stay wary of them! They don't like unnecessary distractions..."

Samrat noticed the guy from the office, sitting at the bottom step of the staircase, poring over a thick book in his hand...

"Who's that??" he asked casually,as he remembered the icy glare he had received from him...

Benji looked in his direction and frowned automatically, which didn't escape Samrat's notice...

"What?" he prodded...

"That's Mayank Sharma...One of the brightest kids in college and equally notorious!! It's rumoured that he spent the summer in jail because he lit up a police jeep, just for fun..." Benji said in a scandalised tone...

"What rubbish!!I don't believe that..." Samrat looked at the guy again,who seemed pretty oblivious to those around him...

"Thats your choice,mate...I'll just warn you to stay as far away from him as possible...Sharma is famous for his hot temper and not to forget, those muscular biceps..." Benji added,as a whispered threat...

Samrat grinned and as he turned around, he stopped in his tracks as he saw the vision in a white summer-dress coming from the other side...She looked beautiful...Almost ethereal...an angelic smile lit up her face as she waved to the group standing nearby...He let out a slow,loud sigh...

"And which group does she belong to??" Samrat asked,his eyes never leaving her face...

"The Don't-even-think-about-it group!! That's Gunjan Bhushan...Has an incredibly uptight father and it's a widely known fact that the Bhushan sisters are not allowed to date...Plus,she won't care two hoots about you!!" Benji replied, a smug look on his face...

"Only time will tell that...Is there any way I can get to talk to her??" Samrat tiptoed,as she disappeared in the crowd...

"Hmmm...I think you are just in luck...She's actually looking for a salsa teacher...That way it wont..."

"It won't count as a date, and I'll still get time to spend with her..." Samrat winked,as he completed his sentence...

"Right! But do u even know Salsa??" Benji enquired and sighed at the triumphant smile on Samrat's face...

The chase has only just begun!!

**********


Next chap: Nupur's & RV's entry,some classroom action...

Thats it for now..Plz do comment,guys or atleast press the like tab if u liked it...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey aparajita ..nice FF..just read it..
i have'nt seen the movie ur talking about..so i guess it'll be a better read! :)..
Mayank is feared by everyone?..wow..weird..n i dont think that he went to jail..
Nupur is also feared n hated..but i wonder why?..
Gunjan is more like the hottie of the college..nice..Samrat joins the college newly..gud..
Gunnur are fighting here too..wow..
Samrat went to Ms.Aha's cabin..n was shocked at the words she was usin..lol...but then he has to get used to it nw..
he banged into Mayank while coming out..n he glared at him..bt Ms.Aha screwed Mayank for asking Uday to gobble 25 burgers..lol..
Benji showed around the college to Samrat..n even introduced the groups..Samrat did'nt beleive the Mayank thing either..but Benji just warned him..
Samrat was awestruck by Gunjan..n wanted to get close to her..bt did'nt know how..n Benji told him about the salsa teacher..n thankfully he knew it..so nw it'll be nice..
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey aparajita,
(sry odnt know ur nicknme if there is any)
Superb Part dear..
Kya likha hai...
by the way...maine yeh movie kabhi dekhi nahi hai..
but am plannin to see it this weekend...
but ur part was too gud...
and i really feel bad for MAYANK poor guy..!
and samrat is soo gud...he is such a sweetheart..
Lets see..how they bcome frenz!!

plz cont soon..
coz m w8in...😉😉😛

love
Prats
Edited by Prachi173 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
awesomeeeeeeee ud dear..
luved it..
pllzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
its awesome...add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
plz add me to yur pm list,,
Posted: 15 years ago
#59
amazing start!
so nupur is kat n mayank is patrick? omg soo cool!!
i cannot wait to read ahead! continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start
Continue soon
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