Still Waiting(OS), AR, MAYUR n SAJAN versions pg 8 - Page 8

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee OS on sajan

totally lovweeeeeeeeeeeeed it

thnx 4 the pm

love

sonal

hey, i read your one shot on AR and i just found that half of the time you had not changed the names Riddhima from Gunjan and Armaan from Samrat.. lol.. sorry for being such a plan.. but i was completely lost as to who was who..

anyways it was really good!

i m speechless. no words to describe ur piece of work. i mean i was near tears of happiness. wow i mean really this was the best OS i have ever read. really i mean it. thank u writing.

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Wow!!!!! That was great..........
Loved it to the core.....
pls keep writing such wonderful os....

whoa! t'was indeed heavenly...a completely fresh background and storyline..lol rahul was the subject of armaan's jealousy and temper for nothing...he almost lost his hand to anguish-i meant armaan lol...jokes apart, i really loved the length as well as the totally new concept...i, for once, fell for the fact that the story wud end at riddhima, shattered and vulnerable but wud continue to enncompass him nd shower him with love life long...while he either wud call her his 1st love nd get married alongwith a child or will contiinue to live with his wife or w.e....lol...potentially ver amazing try..keep writing nd pmming me....have a nice day!

beautiful one shot.
simply loved it

wow....very beautiful one shot
loved it completely
write more of these one shots...i just love them
thanx 4 d pm
love
debadrita

Lovely OS.......................it was so cute and endearing