~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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simi

@searchoffriends

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

hey nice part , but really small one

really loved it , mayank too intelligent haa , he allready listenned to there convo and poor samrat and nupur plan got backfired on them , too cool ,

would love to read it ahead

please try and update with this soon

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#262

nice part
continue soon with bigger update....
thanx 4 d pm

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#263

heyyy sehrish
nice update
poor sanu but mayank bach gaya
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for pm

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Angle.

@Angle.

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

nice update but 2 short
pls make it long

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#265

awesome part......

but so short......

waiting for sanu overnight........

i know they'll have fun.......

mayank is too good......

i love the sanu bonding.......

plzzzzzzz update soon.......

atleast a promo..........

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

promo

hi frndz i am posting this only on mahimas request i willll update nxt part till thursday for sure and will try to give you a bigger part pakka promise

promo begins

sanu were punished overnight

their duty begins with lot of fun and work

but thn samrat was tired as he just came today morning after a long travel

n: sam tu ja ke soja

s: but nups duty kon kare ga

n: me hooon na

s: but tu akele kaise

n: karlugi sam bus ek baar kaha na k sojao to sojao samjhe

s: ok but r u sure

n: ha baba

s: but

n: tujhe meri kasam

s: yr kasam mat diya kar na

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

wht will happen nxt

will nupur b able to manage both duties as she still no recovered

will mayank realized his mistake

will gunjan be more jealous after her all plan failed due to nupur

wht will happen to nupur

will she be alright

will mayu start likin her

so for all this

keep guessing

and do comment

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
awesome part......

but so short......

waiting for sanu overnight........

i know they'll have fun.......

mayank is too good......

i love the sanu bonding.......

plzzzzzzz update soon.......

atleast a promo..........