~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: daniella05
awesome promo....
felt gr8 that gunjan is not a negative character....
do continue soon
thanx 4 the pm

ya she is nt

will cont sooon

luv sehr

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
promo-

i am dieing to read your update.......

sam and nups got overnight....... not bad.......

i am sure they'll have fun together.....

hope mayank gets overnight too and gets jealous seeing them together.....

gunjan's plan was good but loved when sam rushed to nups......

i know nups was not faking.......

hope gunjan dosen't hurt nups.......

hey tthnx 4 likin will cont sooon

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Gun toh yahaan Negative ho rahi hai yaar
But liked the way Mayu actually made Sanu also fall in trouble wit him

Loved it

gunjan is just insecure

thnx forl ikin

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: mayadika11
awesoooooome...
superb......precap........

thnks for likin

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623
nice ff..
plz ad dme to ur om list..

i hve added u dear

thnkyou for likin

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

yr mera update delete hogya dueto pc problem but iwill try to update new part soon

so sad........ try your best to update soon

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy sehrish
really intresting promo
plzzz update soon
thanx for pm

thnx for likin

will cont soon

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

so sad........ try your best to update soon

willl try to cont soon

may b tommorow

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

u welcome my frnd

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#260

PART 6

samrat and nupur were planning something

but wht

let seee.

and listen their convo

n: hey sam mere paas ek plan hai mayank idiot ko maza chakane ka wht u thnk

s: kia plan hai waqise bhi us akdu ko sabak to sikhana chaye kafi attitude hai sale me

n: mai soch rhe thi k kyun na hum is ki case file file me kuch pics daaal de hot chicks type

s: per isse kia hoga

n: are budhu ye case file jab dr keerti k paas pauhanche gi to wo gussa hojayegi and idiot mayank ko overbight karna padega

s: wah kia baat hai waise ye sab tune kaha se seekha

n: (try to raise her collar) akhir behen kis ki h

s: oh so ye plan armaaan bro ka hai

n: nhe dumbo un ki behen hu to un k jaise plan o bna sakti hu na

s: rite chale

now back to general ward where all interns are doing duty but in general ward romance was going on

but who was doing romance

come lets see

oh ye to humare senior dr sidharth and dia hai

d: sid mere haath choro

dr s: tumhara haaath chorne k iye thori na thama tha

at this dia blush

b: dia kia baat hai kia horha hai

d: kuch nhe benji

thn uday and benji sarted teasing her

suddenly announcement was made

alll intern gather at nurse station for todays closing up

alll gathered at nurse station and sanu were throwing devlish smile on mayank

dr keeri enter

dr k: mujhe ap logo se ye umeed bilkul nhe thi ap ek dr ho kar aise harkate karsakte k socha na tha u knw wht i hate it

n t s: tabhi to hum ne aise kia take ye idiot phas jaye

s to n: tujhe kaise pta

n 1o s: bhaya ne btaya tha

s to n; oh

dr k: so intern jis ne ye harkat ki hai wo mj se nhe bach sakta

at this nupur give mayank a pity look

dr k: to intern aj un interns ko overnight karna pageda and kal morning me bhi duty karege phir ap ko pta chalega k doctors ko serious hona chaye aur wo ha

alls face were shown

dr k: wo hai dr nupur and samrat

at this alll shocked

dr k: nupur mjhe tum se ye umeed nhe thi ab galti ki hai to saza bhi milegi

sanu didnt replied to this as they were in complete shock

but ye hua kaise

flashback

mayank listened their whole convo

m: to ye plan banaya hai is churail ne dekhna ab kaise ye apne hi plan me phasti hai

thn he put tht pics in nupur and samrat file

m: ab dekhna miss nupur malik! ab tum aur tmhara frnd karna puri raaat overnight hahahaha😆

flashback ends

frnds i knw tht am late and this is small part but i am busy so i didnt got tym to write bigger part i have written this part on mahimas and ayeshas request

i will update nxt part sooon

till thn do comment

all criticism will b accepted

luv sehrish

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago