~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Hey nice part dear

loved it

they fought even wen they were injured badly ......so MAyurish

Wow Mayank & Nupur in one room

cant wait for the next part

do cont soon

luv
Nidzy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Lved the update dear!!!!

Waiting for more mayur nok jhoks!!!

continue soon and thanx for the PM!

Love

Mina

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

fallen in love with your ff.........
fantastic yaar.......
can't wait for you to update

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daniella

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

awesome update!!!!
just loved it
waiting 4 the next part....
do continue soon

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

hey frnds i will be updating nxt part tommorow

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sana866
awesome.

thnx for liking it

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: kash_sajan
hey...!!
it was really gud updt...!!
omg...mn r too much...!!
injured hone ke baad bhi dey r still fightin...dat's really bad....!!
n de'll be shifted to same room...ahohhh...!!
again fights...!!
but dat would be really spicy i believe...!!
do cont soon....!!

wid loads of luv
radhika

thnx for liking it

ya they are reall tooo much

i will cont soon

hpe you will like it

love sehrish

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Kiran--Madiha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

hey...!! gr8 FF....kp it up!!continue soon!!=)

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

PART 3B NUPUR STILL IN CTICAL CONDITION ARMAAN IS COMPLETELY BROKEN

ON OTHER HAND MAYANK IS ALSO WORRIED AND PRAYING FOR NUPUR HEALTH

AFTER 5 HOUR DR SID SAME OUT

AND SAID

S: NUPUR IS NOW OUT OF DANGER

BUT SHE NEED COMPLETE REST SHE IS STILL IN CRITICAL CONDITION

A: KIA ME APNI ANGEL SE MIL SAKTA HU?

S: HA KYUN NHE

ARMAAN WENT IN AND SAW NUPUR LYING ON A BED

CONNNECTED WITH WIRES AND BANDAGES

ARMAN HOLD NUPUR HANDS SIT BESIDE HER AND START CRYING AND HIS ONE DROP OF TEAR FALLS ON NUPURS FACE WHICH WAKE HER UP

SHE SLIGHTLY OPENED HER EYED AND SAW HER BROTHER CRYING

N: B-----H--A----I

A: ANGEL KAISI HO TUM APNA KHAYAL NHE RAKHSAKTI THI TUMHE PATA BHI HAI HUMEIN TUMHARI KITNI FIKAR HOTI HAI AGAR TUMHE KUCH HOJATA TO ME TO M----------

( NUPUR PUT HER FINGER ON HIS LIPS)

N: AISA P---H-IR KA--B H--I NHE K----EHN---A

THEN RIDHIMMA CAME IN

AND KISSES IN NUPURS FORHEAD

R: TUMHE AB REST KARNA CHAYE SHUKR HAI TUM THIK HO ( SHE TOO HAVING TEAR IN HER EYES)

THEN THE TRIO HAVE A GROUP HUG

A: AB TUM KABHI BHI AKELE NHE JAOGI

N: BHAI MERI CAR KAHA HAI THIK TO HAI NA(LISTENING TO HER DIALOGUES ARMAAN AND RIDIMMA BURST INTO LAUGHTER AND THINK HOW A PERSON IN CRITICAL CONDITIN CAN THIN K ABOUT A CAR BUT THEY KNW HER HOW IS SHE POSSESIVE ABT HER CAR AND ALL STUFF)

A: US CAR KO BHUL JAO ANGEL TUM THIK HO JAO ME TUMHE IS SE BHI BETTER CAR LE DO GA

N: SACHI BHAYA

A: PAKKA LE DUNGA BUT PEHLE TUM RECOVER HO JAO

N: U KNW WHT BHAYA

U R THE WORLD BESTEST BRO

R: AUR MEIN

N: AP TO WORLD KI BESTEST BHABHI HO

AUR BHABHI WO LADKA KAHA HAI JIS KA MERE SAATH ACCIDENT HUA THA( IN A CONCERNED TONE)

DR SHASHANK CAME IN

DR SH: ANGEL WO AB BETTER HAI TUM KAISI HU

N: THIK HU PAPA ( NUPUR CONSIDER HER AS FATHER SO SHE CALLED HER PAPA LIKE RIDHIMMA) BUT MERI INTERNSHIP

DR SH: BETA HUM NE DECIDE KIA HAI K HUM TUMHE EK MOTH KI LEAVE DE

WAISE BH I TUMHARA FRND BHI 1 MONTH BAD HI JOIN KAREGA

N: THNX PAPA WAISE BHI ME SAMRAT KO MISS KARHE H HOPE K JALD I AJAI

DR SH TO A:BETA HUMEIN ISE WARD ME SHIFT KARNA HOGA

A: OK PAPA

THEN NUPUR IS SHIFTED IN A WARD NEXT TO MAYANK

THIS WARD ISS SEMI PRIVATE MEANS THAT IN THIS ONLY 2 PATIENTS CAN BE ACCOMODATED

THEN THEY BOTH DOSES OFF DUE TO HEAVY MEDICATION UNKNOWN THAT THEY BOTH ARE IN SAME ROM)

NEXT MORNING

NURSE CAME IN AND WAKE MAYUR

AND GAVE THM MEDICINES

AFTER SOME TIME THEY BOTH FEEL BORE SO DEICIDED TO TALK TO EACH OTHER BCZ THEY CANT WALK AS THIEIR LEGS ARE HANGED TO STRINGS

M: HI AP KO KIA HUA

LISTENING HIS VOICE SHE REMEMBERED THEIR FIGHT AND SHE CAME TO KNW HE IS THE SAME PERSON DUE TO WHICH SHE IS IN THIS CONDITION

N: TUM YAHA

M: TUM TUMHE TO ME ( HE TRIED TO MOVE BUT HE CANT)

M: OUCH

N: TUM HARI WAJAE AJ ME YAHA HU

M: TUMHARI WAJA SE

( THEY START THROWING BLAME ON EACH OTHER AAND ALL PEOPLE GATHER THEIR SEEING WHT HAPPENING)

ARMAAN AND GUNJAN ARRIVE

G: MYU YE KIA KARHE HO

M: ME ME TO KUCH NHE KARHA YE LADKI HAI HI ITNI BADTAMEEZ

N: ME AUR BADTAMEEZ TUM ME KITNI TAMEEZ HAI HAI

A: ANGEL YE KIA HORHA HAI AISE KISI SE BAAT KARTE HAI KIA

NUPUR AND MAYANK MAKING PUPPY FACE AND SAID SORRY

A: DEKHO YE HOSPITAL HAI TUM LOG AB MAT LARNA OK

THEN THEY WENT

NUPUR GAVE MAYANK AN ANGRY LOOK

FRNDZ THAT IT FOR TODAY

OI KNW ITS BORING AND SHORT

I WILL UPDATE NEXT PART TOMMOROW FOR SURE

TILL THEN READ THIS PART

AND DO COMMENT AND SILENT LISTENER PLZ COMMENT ATLEAST CLICK LIKE BUTTON

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: wind453
awesome update
loved mayur fight even after being injured they were fighting

loved it

do continue soon

thanx for the pm

I AM GLAD U LIKE IT

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