YuNa FF: Unshared Secrets Chp 2 - pg 3

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

MJ finally! lol okay I shouldn't be talking...but still :P....loved the update...aww he got drunk cus of her...he does love her a lot...but he can never love her like she loves him!!!

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

OMG...........no conversation between YuNa............its hurting both of them so much!!!

poor naina..........i shouldnt be..but im feeling so bad for yuvi!!!

and this chapter was awesome..........this was something i had expected in the serial.....but didnt get anuthing

cheers for the pm....and do continue updating!!!

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

nice chapter MJ...full

of hurt and emotions.

Well, if you ever need me, you know my number🤣

that line just cracked me up...he could have said

i am here for you but instead you know my number lol

and poor yuvi suffering from all this :(

update soon...i wanna see making up

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

hey.... my Yuvi in such a bad condition... bad bad MJ!!!

use jadli jaldi happy mood me leke aao...

aur Naina kitni ziddi ho gayi hai... huh!

great chapter MJ... i love the opening quotes!

updt soon and do PM me...

Luv,

Pree!

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

MJ....long time no see...huh.....and no updates too.....should whack you for that....but this part made up for that....lolz...awesome update.....Yuvi has taken to drinking coz of Naina.....her love.....aww.....and she could not see him there....like that...lying on the ground and came to his rescue.....they are soo in love!!! Even in the locker room he was thinking about her....and that line of Sid...his number one just cracked me up...lolz.....you have described it all so amazingly and perfectly....you are a great writer....the way you have explained his pain and emotions is superb!! Update soon*hugs*

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karan.my.armaan

@karan.my.armaan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

MJ!!!!!!!!!!!
wow... thnkz for d PM!!
d last prt is too awesuumm
i luv it wen yuvi starts caring eveen a LIL for naina...
coz yuvi matters a lot tu naina..
nd its nyc dat he lyks her way dat too!!
m SOOOOOOO HAPPIIEEE!!
reeding ol dis...
i dnt need yuna on tv...if i hve ur ff..
coz i cn eesily live wid dem...!!
gr88 awesoume..
nd FABULOUS AS ALWAYS!!!
mwaaahh!!!
c**tinu ASAP!!!

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

MJjjjjjjjjjj where r u sweety.....missing u..n love;ly update ....loved the way charchter of yuvi i mean his inner feeling his guilt his love his tragedy is coming up..........loved it to the core....simply outstanding........n the sidraaj convo was too kewl.....now yuvi has done a huge mistake(that i still dunt noe mj wow a suspence[lol]).....n now he hav lost everything his life n his reason to live.....naina wat can say any 1 abt her she is so unpredictable yaar i mean now she hav taken descision to take him off from root from her life but still when she saw him lying on the floor helplessley she rushed to him widout another thought.............YUNAZING..........looking forward for the next part n for suspence..........

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

sitiyaaaaannn 4r MJ dekh naina dekh us double body builder ne chief ke dil ka haaaal jaaan liya or tum *SIGH* ladki kahin ki hmph!!!!

MJ welcum bak n nw lets go bak 2 our books main bhi studies mein hoon n tu bhi feeels really gud am not da only one wid xamzzz .......lol

bak 2 FF wow beautifully written sweets wen am gonna reply next i dnno but keep pmin LUB u *HUG*

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: princessuma
MJ finally! lol okay I shouldn't be talking...but still :P....loved the update...aww he got drunk cus of her...he does love her a lot...but he can never love her like she loves him!!!

sumi ji apne aaj tak chief ki mohabbat ka farman dekha kahan hai 😳😳😳yaad rakhna mere chief ki mohabat ka afsana abhi baaki in shrt picture baaki hai 😉😉😉

papa wlcum now u see da punjabi munde da ishq😉😉😳😳

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Adiba

@adiarmaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

hey MJ this was such a nice part..im loving the way yuvi loves naina soo much especially the way u've put it..it was just mind-blowing yaar..sooo good!! can't wait to read the next part.!! thanks for the pm btw.. :)