MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 87

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
poor nupur
loved mayu
no AR 😭
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey kiran..nice parts..sorry for the late comment, ive been really busy with exams n studies..

so samrat does come to the re-union..n mayank gets new hope! :)..he goes n talks to sam who was trying to run away..but mayank stopped him n convinced him that going back to pari was the right thing to do..

sam thought about it n what gunjan wanted..n he knew he had to go back to fulfill her wish..when he went back his family was glad to see him..he went to pari's room..n she was so happy to meet her dad!..but she thought her mom came too..aww..

nupur came to the shergill house..n mrs.shergill insulted her at the breakfast table..sam wanted to go to india n resolve the issue..thats a good thing..

nupur started crying..n the way mayank consoled her was just so sweet!

thnx 4 d pm
update soon


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Posted: 14 years ago

I loved this part kiran :) esp the mn part~~ !! and that dialogue was indeed very beautiful and suited MN so well...glad u included it!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
This is so so sweet of u all...I am so touched by the comments...a very big thank u to all of you..🤗
Love you all :)
Edited by kiran--madi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
simply wow
just loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey buddies....
Thank you so much for all the comments. Truly, you guys have no idea how much it means to me...
Here's next part coming up. My apologies to all those AR fans who missed AR in the last part. So this is especially dedicated to all those people who wanted AR scenes..
Part-26:
Ridhimma completely her final packings to leave for Mumbai. While picking up her final things, she looked at photograph. One in which she was there with her Armaan...the excel reunion picture:"Zaroor Nupur ne yahan rakhi hogi...kitni cute picture hai...ho bhi kyun na???main jo hoon.."she said to herself and smiled..
"I am jealous.."Armaan whispered from behind into her ears that made her heart skip a beat and turn behind to find him so close to her....her hair touched his face...
R:"Kia hai Armaan?Dara dia na?"
Armaan placed his arms on Ridhimma's shoulders and gave a romantic look:"Madam..waise mujhe ek baat ka bohat gussa aa raha hai..."
R:"Wo kia?"
A:"Actually do...ek toh ye k aap ne photograph achi lagne ka credit khud ko hi de dia...main nahi dikha kia?"
Ridhimma said mischieviously:"Ab agar main itni achi dikh rahi hoon toh koi tumhari taraf kaise dekhe ga..?!"and she tried to run away when Armaan caught her hand and again got close to her and said:"Doosri baat nahi pocho gi?"
Damn his voice...so deeply romantic...so flirtish and those looks...Ridhimma would never admit it to him but she always knew that if looks could kill...and the rest she knew..!!
She was so uneasy at the way in which he stared at her...usually when Armaan looked at her this way, she would hide herself in his arms so she wouldn't have to face him..but she wanted to know what was that "doosri baat" and she innocently asked:"Kia?"
A:"Wo ye.....k tum jhoot nahi bol rahi thi....sach mein jab meri Ridhimma itni achi lagegi toh..."
Ridhimma teased:"MERI Ridhimma...kaafi possessive hain aap...ye Ridhimma aap ki kab se hogayi?"
At this Armaan moved just one more inch closer to her..so much that Ridhimma felt he would just kiss her and so she closed her eyes..
Armaan said in his deep sexy voice:"Hamesha se..."
At this Ridhimma opened her eyes and looked at him. She felt so protected to know that he was so possessive about her...
A:"Ridhimma hamesha se Armaan ki thi...Armaan ki hai...aur...??"
"Ussi ki rahe gi..."Ridhimma completely smiling and looking into his eyes...
Armaan kissed her forehead gently and wrapped his arms around her and they shared a warm hug.
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Things were getting unimaginably tough. Samrat, Mayank and Nupur always knew that reuniting the families was no easy a task. With Mrs.Shergill overreacting in this way, that Shergills were not ready to lose against Bhushans was something they were sure of. Later that day, Samrat, Mayank and Nupur sat down to have a conversation over it but then all the three just didn't know what should be done next and so there was silence in the room. After a long while, Mayank broke the silence:"Kia socha Samrat?"
S:"Sochna kia hai?!Mom toh kabhi nahi maane gi...In logo ki ego itni badi hogayi hai that they don't even realize k inki is ladaayi mein ek bachi ki zindagi dau par hai..." Nupur was still lost in her own thoughts, deeply thinking about all that had happened. She didnot look at Mayank or Samrat though she was listening to them. She said, while looking away:"Aur kahan meri Gunjan ye soch kar apni jaan ki kurbaani de gayi k Pari sab theek kar degi...in ki selfishness k rehte inhe Pari ki masoomiyat kabhi dekhaayi nahi degi..." S:"Samajh nahi aata kia kia jaaye?!Mujhe nahi lagta ye sab kabhi khatam bhi hoga..." Nupur still was looking away as if deeply thinking and she said:"Hoga...hona parega....aur ye sab waheen khatam hoga jahan se shuru hoa tha..." S:"Kia matlab?"
Nupur finally looked at Mayank and then Samrat and said:"India!!!"
Mayank and Samrat looked at each other. They somewhat guessed what Nupur was thinking of.
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Nupur was standing near the window in her guestroom lost in her thoughts. She didn't realize when Mayank came from behind until he called her name:"Nupur?"
Nupur turned and just replied with a:"Hmmhh..."
M:"Nupur kaheen tum abhi bhi Samrat ki mom ki baaton ko le kar....???Nupur please pareshaan mat ho...You know that I..."
N:"You love me..."Nupur smiled and Mayank nodded.
N:"Mujhe pata hai k tum mere liye pareshaan ho...par main us baare mein nahi soch rahi.."
M:"Toh phir kis baare mein soch rahi ho?Nupur...kab se dekh raha hoon tum kitni gehri soch mein ho...kia hoa??"
Nupur sighed:"Kuch nahi Mayank...bas puraane bikhre rishte jodne hai...par wahan India mein....dad toh....!!!"
She moved away and the thought of all that was going to happen made her frustrated:"Pata nahi kia hoga Mayank....!!!ye bhi nahi pata k main jo kar rahi hoon wo sahi hai ya...?!!!Main kia karoon?"
M:"Nupur relax...is mein itna ghabraane wali baat nahi...Main jaanta hoon tum kia karne wali ho...but trust me, this is the only way out...."
Nupur got reassurity from his words and she knew what was then going to happen was TRULY THE ONLY WAY OUT!!
Part ends...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Long time Kiran.. how have u been doing?
Lovely update ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update Kiran
i wanna knw what nupur had decided to do.
do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
after a long time..........good to see u..............great update

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