Agar Tum Miljao..(RN) Part.8 || Aug.29.11 || - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, can't wait to read it!! Pls pm when you update both RN fics!xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys and thank you for all your comments and here i am with part 1

Part 1

They watched thier boss yell and yell. Sometimes they would think dosent thier boss get tired? It was a good question but they all knew the answer aswell.
This is what the emplyoes of Shekawat Industries had to go through everyday. One little mistake and thats it. Khanna wasnt a bad man, he had given each employe 3 strikes ofcouse most of them got thier first strike on thier first day and almost all had 2 strikes.
"WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!" He yelled on top of his lungs. "This is what i get for hiring amateurs" he shook his head and turned around to leave. "Don't come back tomorrow" he said with no emotion or without turning around.
The poor man, all he had done was spill a little coffee over him, and now he is fired.
Khanna walked into his his cabin. His desk had all sorts of files, a computer and a name plate writing "Rajveer Singh Shekhawat".
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The sun shined through the windows as the princess woke up. Princess, well she wasnt a princess but the only child of the a married couple and ruled in thier hearts.
She went to the god and started praying. This was her ussual moring.
"God app bhi na, app mera patience test kar raha ho ab. Pata hai ab mein 22 saal ki hogi hu. Ab to mera Prince Charming bhej dejiye." She said with a little pout on her lips.
"Bhagwan ab iska to kuch nahi hone wala"
"Hudatu phir aa gaya?" Anger visible on her face and in her voice.
"Are Itna gussa???" He teased her more.
"Shut up! Pata i bet u tere is vaje se God mera Prince Charming nahi bhej rahe hai"
"Meri vaje se????? Because of me??" He seemed surprised
"Yeah because You..." She got cut of by a voice
"Naina Huda STOP!" Yelled Neelama, Naina's mom "Best Friends hoke lad te rahte ho" She had finaly decided to stop them.
"He/She starts it" Both said in a chorous
"Uff" Neelama left getting tired her self.
***
Rajveer looked at the clock, it was 6 pm. "Time to go home" he told him self.
He entered a huge mansion, which was designed by his Dad. As the doors to his house opened, we could see the elegant staircase. The living room which which had a 52' LCD TV and desiner sofas.
"Bhai what is this yaar? Office ja ke kaam Ghar pe kaam" Sameera said in annoyance as she entered his room. "App mera sath bhi toh time spend kijiye" she complained
Sameera Shekhwat, 22, sister of Rajveer Shekhawat and The only girl of Arti and Brijesh
"Okay I am sorry baba come here" Rajveer called her over to the couch after holding his ears. "Okay tell me now what do you want?"
"Hmmm....." she prented to think "App shaadi kar lo" she really hope that he would say yes. How long is he going to cry over Simi? And make other lives hell...
"Sam NO. We had this talk before.". He said getting up.
Dadi came in before he can go out. " Beta Please, Budi dadi ki tamana to pori karo."
"Dadi please, app itni budi hai to roz joging pe kun jati ho?" He knew very well of his family's tactics.
"Come on son, you are growing old" Brijesh tried to reason.
"Dad I am only 27" He answered back.
"Thats it" Sameera had enough. Sam and Arti pushed him on the couch and Brijesh locked the door. "None of us are leaving this room till you say yes"
"Sam?" Surpised he looked to Dadi but got no response.
He thought...I mean what could go wrong i get married to her and tell her the facts that i never really wanted to get married, tell her to stay out of my life and there. I mean she really shouldnt mind after all she will be the bahu of the rich Shekhawat family.
"Fine" He sighed
They all made thier way out exited and thinking of girls Raj could marry.
He stayed back there in the memories on Simi
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I know the update is done but please read the following
Guys i hadnt thought when i opened an RN version of this story but when you keep reading you will find more Angad and Kripa instead of Rajveer and Naina and i feel that making a RN version was not the right choice as you guys probably want to imgine RN as main chracters...So i am thinking of discontinuing the RN version.....because when you read it, it strictly is a AK story but if you if guys like the story plot or happen to be AK fans than please do read the AK version
Sorry guys this version will not be continued hope you understand because as readers you guys wont find it proper either.
But i still do wanna see the comments for the first part😳😆
Star⭐️
Edited by starasdf - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii dear

WOW !!!! another RN ff..loved the concept n the promo seems to be interesting...waiting eagerly to read the first part

Plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice beginning. waiting for more. cont the RN version
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The first part was nice...specially Raj's yelling....lolz!! But u think u shud be discontinuing this RN version....well....u knw the story well....so its ur choice...but then...I dont think we need any LRL/KMA realted plot to imagine the characters of RN....but still...its ur choice dear....and yes...the first was really gud...hehe.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii dear
the update was nice
Naina has alot of dreams about his prince charming
it was really good
I really liked raj's family atmosphere and the way they agreed them to get married.
Please continue soon
luv Preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update.loved it.it's very good.continue rn version pls.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar the intro and first part were really good.u should keep it going.pata nahi tumhe aisa kyun lagtha hai par we RN fans can imagine them,no actually see them in any character.so,plz don't stop RN version.we r more than happy to read it.plz yaar ud soon...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii dear

The first part is really Awesome
I agree 100%with esha ..we RN fans can see them in any charachter...so plz dont stop posting
plz continue soon dear
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Dear
How r u???
Nice beginning😊
I'll not b able to reply coz I am going out of town till 8th Jan..After that I'll give replies
Bye

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