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Posted: 15 years ago

@Zafz ' Im so sorry but a new guy is not for today '.. or for the next 2-3 updates ' I am really very sorry'.

@All - who did not enjoy AmSu that much - Lucky for you I am going to show the flashback for quiet some time.

@Iqqz - lol wht am i supposed to say? haha cuz if i say it was cute i would be saying that i write good lol ... but yeah it was kinda cute in my mind so sure it was very cute 😳😳😳

As soon as Sukirti took the picture in her own hand Karan swiftly snatched it away.

"Karan", Sukirti called out in a whiny voice. She pretended to be mad and walked away. As she was getting out of the changing room she bumped into Shilpa. She carefully picked up the papers from the file that had spread around them. She stacked the paper into a neat pile and stood up rubbing her left side of her forehead. When Sukirti and Shilpa looked at each other they burst out laughing.

"OWW", Shilpa cried out, still laughing as hard as she could.

"Shut up. It didn't even hurt that much", Sukirti mumbled playing with her hair.

"Did too", Shilpa said calming down.

"What took you so long?" Sukirti asked.

"You know Dr. Keerti. I had to run labs and it was too much research. Did you know? Eating before bed can make you gain weight faster than if you eat the same foods during the day?

"That's a really interesting fact", Sukirti said chuckling a bit.

"Hey Shilpa", Karan called out purposely ignoring Sukirti.

"Shippu I got to talk to you", Sukirti pulled Shilpa by her hand and took her away from the changing room before Karan could get there. Seeing Sukirti and Shilpa heading out Karan hurried his steps. Karan was thinking of how stubborn Sukirti was being. She seriously couldn't take a joke. When Karan got close enough he took a jump and appeared in front of Sukirti and Shilpa.

"Hey", Karan waved his hand.

"Hey", Shilpa answered.

"Don't 'hey' him", Sukirti barked rolling her eyes.

"Not again", Shilpa responded.

"Yes again", Drashti and Mayank retorted simultaneously.

"We really should stop saying things at the same time", Drashti said.

"Yeah it's really annoying", Mayank agreed showing his cutest smile.

"Mayank don't do that!" Drashti said a little too loudly.

"Don't do what?" Mayank asked innocently.

"Your smile", Sukirti, Shilpa, Karan and Drashti yelled in sync.

"I need to talk to you", said Mayank ignoring everyone else. Mayank took Drashti by her arm and headed towards the terrace. When they were just 3 stairs away from the terrace Mayank's cold fingers closed Drashti's eyes. Drashti didn't question Mayank and went along with whatever Mayank had in his mind. Mayank grinned and supported her to the place he'd wanted to get.

"Why are you so quiet?" Mayank whispered on Drashti's ear his nose touching the skin just below her ear. Drashti still gave no sign of words. She had a good feeling about this. When ever Mayank did these kinds of things she always knew something good was stored in for her. First time, he had helped her get together with her boyfriend. But just after couple of days following a horrible incident he himself had saved her from Arjun. She was kind of glad that he had turned out that way because she really wasn't feeling that god about him. The next time he had done this kind of act was when he told her how he had felt about her. She could never forget that moment. Even though it came as a surprise for her she knew in her heart that she Mayank really made a difference in her life. When Mayank let go, and Drashti's eyes slowly opened she saw paradise. Mayank wandered in front of her with that same smile on his face. Then right at that moment Drashti didn't see that cute boy she thanked when he saved her life but an admirable guy who she had loved since a long time. She looked around to see the beautiful scenery in front of her. She approached the round table placed in the middle. Her smile turned into an overjoyed face. Tears started filling in her eyes but she was not sure why they were coming on her way. Mayank ran his fingers through his hair and put his hand in his pocket. He followed Drashti and stood besides her. Drashti gave a contented look to Mayank in which he got down on his knees. Now Drashti had a confused look. He took a blue box on his hand and opened it.

"Will you marry me"?

Drashti was dumbfounded by Mayank's action. They both were in silence for few moments.

"Answer me. I can't stand like this forever", Mayank said.

"YES", screamed Drashti in delight.

Mayank quickly got up and embraced Drashti tightly. Mayank kissed her cheek and then her forehead. Drashti's tears broke from her eyes and she smiled. Looking at her, Mayank wiped it and pecked slightly in the place of her tears. Mayank looked deep in her eyes and saw the true happiness he was looking for. Mayank chuckled to himself, he slowly swiped her hair out of her face. Then he kissed her cheek again in which Drashti blushed in a shy tone.

"I can't take it anymore", they heard Karan say in which both of them turned around. One by one they saw Shilpa and Sukirti come behind him. Mayank looked annoyed by the disturbance made by his friends. Drashti too had the same expression on her face.

"Sorry, Karan couldn't help it", said Sukirti emphasizing Karan's name.

"Yeah I couldn't help it", Karan mumbled.

"Yeah thanks for sparing the time when he was proposing me", Drashti said with an irritation.

"Which was just so adorable", Shilpa interrupted with her arms open.

The girls exchanged hugs when Mayank and Karan exchanged some fist pounding.

"Oh, come on you can do much better than that", Shilpa said. After that Mayank and Kara quickly hugged and let go.

"That wasn't so bad now was it?" Sukirti asked laughing.

"Congratulations Mayank", Sukirti walked to him and hugged him. He hugged her back thanking her.

"You got yours so let go of her", Karan declared. Mayank hugged her even more tightly.

Sukirti let go of Mayank bursting out laughing. Karan gave an "I-knew-you-couldn't-be-mad-at-me-for-so-long" look to her. Sukirti went and stood next to Karan, tucking a strand of her hair behind her ear. "Oyye hoyye soniyo", Karan said pleased with himself.

"Are you four going to romance here or get on with your job?" Shilpa questioned rolling her eyes at them.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy!!!
😃
a fantastic part!!
loved it to bits...
the best part.... "oyye hoyye soniyo" 😳
sooo cute!!!
=P
the part was really nice..
nd i must say..
the grlz in DMG are damn lucky.. kitne romantic ladke mile unhe..
lol šŸ˜†
anyways..
thx a lot for the pm
nd do cont veryyy soon!!!!
luv,
HiNaL


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YAYYY first to read and comment!!!! 😃
Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aaisma!!
i was totally looking forward to this after you said it'd be a surprise for the RMians!! coming to the update, lolz.
fabulous part!!!! loved it to the core!! it was too cuteee!!
I actually need to go back and reread the previous parts since this was my 1st time coming across this, thanks to your pm. why did i not know you had this ff before?! lolz.
anyway, awesome job!!! and please continue soon =)
lots of love,
Sabz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sab93

Aaisma!!

i was totally looking forward to this after you said it'd be a surprise for the RMians!! coming to the update, lolz.
fabulous part!!!! loved it to the core!! it was too cuteee!!
I actually need to go back and reread the previous parts since this was my 1st time coming across this, thanks to your pm. why did i not know you had this ff before?! lolz.
anyway, awesome job!!! and please continue soon =)
lots of love,
Sabz

sabzz thanks a lottt šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
I PMed you everytime i updated but you didnt read it šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

music_l0ver036 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: basket_101

res

*edited

Heyy!!!
😃
a fantastic part!!
loved it to bits...
the best part.... "oyye hoyye soniyo" 😳
sooo cute!!!
=P
the part was really nice..
nd i must say..
the grlz in DMG are damn lucky.. kitne romantic ladke mile unhe..
lol šŸ˜†
anyways..
thx a lot for the pm
nd do cont veryyy soon!!!!
luv,
HiNaL


*edited again../

YAYYY first to read and comment!!!! 😃

šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
you're always the first one to read and comment
you rockk for thatt EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
haha yeah they are veryy luckyyy
šŸ˜†
basket_101 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: music_l0ver036

šŸ¤—
you're always the first one to read and comment
you rockk for thatt 😳😳😳
haha yeah they are veryy luckyyy
šŸ˜†



yu rock for such an awesome ff
cuz if the ff wasnt that gud.. i wouldnt really care about being firstt
Embarrassed


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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part........luved i!!
well written.......šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww shooo cute !! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Hinal - you totally rock and im sorry i havent really commented on yours but i ve rad it and its awesomee!!!
@betiiiiii- first of all HUGS!!!!!!!! havent seen you aroundd .. and love you for reading+commenting on my FF
@Pia - thank you sooo much for the comments .. love you =]

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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful yaar aaisma!!!!!!!!!!! loved it!! šŸ¤—

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