Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 24

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

too good

superb

mindblowing

Raj ka entry sachme kuch zyada hi filmy tha

upar se Arjun ka dialouge fata poster nikla hero

just rocking

waiting for RN marriage

loved the part

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

& nice joke

Originally posted by: rituka7

part was superb
fabulous
update soon long asap

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya.... Hiiiii Guglu....

Malum hai malum hai... bahuuuuuuuuuuuttt hi zyaadaaaaaaaaaaa lateeeeeeeeee hun... par kya karun yaar... itne saare fics hai ki agar galti se bhi ye socha ki baad me comment karna hai to fir ho hi nahi paata... Sorry for being late yaar... main samajh sakti hun...!!! mere sath bhi toh yahi hota hai...jab bhi main thode tym k liye OL se dur rahti hun toh yeh prob ho hi jati hai...!!!😃

Aur ab update pe aati hun...Mindblowing update...👏👏👏...thanxxxxxxx a lotttt sweety...😃 😃 😃

To Raj kisi kaam se Delhi jaa raha hai... is baat par toh sab ko doubt hai...in fact mujhe bhi...😆

Aur flashback me tumne ye dikhaya ki Raj ne F.I.R. par sign nahi kiya kyunki ek to usse Aslam ki begunahi par koi shak nahi tha upar se Vishaal ne usse rok liya... Too Good.👏👏👏 Aur Jigyasa ki to mai... *ANGRY LOOK* (Isi se kaam chala lena kyunki mujhe pata hai tujhe angry ka emoticon acha nahi lagta...😆😉) dushron par achha lagta hai...mere par achha nahi lagta...😆

Khair, Naina ghar wapas aa hi gayi par inn Rai Sahab ko pata chal gaya ki Raj ghar par nahi hai aur wo Naina ko uthane ke liye apne aadmi bejhta hai... Usse na Priya MENTOS khila de... uss gadhe ko ye nahi pata ki Raj apni Naina par kharonch tak nahi aane dega aur Naina ki suraksha ke liye Aditi aur Vishaal hi kaafi hai...*ANGRY LOOK* Par Gayatri ji ke kehne par Naina chali gayi... MENTOS se kaam nahi chal sakta hai yaar... kyoun ki kuch log janam se hi khaali dimag k sath paida hote hain...😛...jaise VIKRAM...

Nandini aur Naina ke bich ka scene bahut hi khubsurat tarike se likha hai tune... 👏👏👏I just loved it... thanqqqqq😃 😃 😃

Aur iss Gaurav ki himmat to dekho... usne Naina ko chune ki himmat kaise ki... *ANGRY LOOK* Ab ye beta to Raj ke hathon pitega... pitwayegi ki nahi...??? Gaurav nahi yaar...Vikram...!!! aur hero kis liye hota hai...Villans ki dhulai k liye hi na...toh phir jeeja-saala...dono peetenge...tu tension mat le...😛

Aur ye Arjun singh bada chalak hai... Ankur ko most awaited Shaadi me lekar pahunch hi gaya... wah ji wah... kya kamal ki planning hai uski...😆😆😆 ab naam Arjun hai toh us ka nishana toh hamesha sahi jagah par hi lagega na...😛 😛 😛

Naina baar baar darwaje ki taraf dekh rahi thi ki Raj kab aayega aur iss villian ne darwaze par Raj ka photo laga diya... Ab mujhe laga hi tha ki Priya jarur iss poster ko fad kar Raj ko nikalwayegi...😆😆😆 jaise Maharaj Prithiviraj Chauhan nikle the apni dwarpaal ki murti se aur apni Sanyogita ko haran kar le gaye the...😆😆😆 Par yahan to apne modern Prithviraj yaani ki Rajveer sabke saamne shaadi karne ja rahe hain...😆😆😆 Zamana badal gaya hai yaar...prithviRaj ab Rajveer bann gaya hai....!!! aur voh zamana bhi gaya...bhaga kar le jane ka...ab toh sab kuch aamne samne hota hai...😆 😆 😆

Vikram aur Gaurav apne hi ghar me nazarband... sorry bandband ho gaye hai...😆😆😆 par Vishal aur Aslam ne bahut badhiya kaam kiya... kam se kam unhe shaadi enjoy karne ka mauka to diya...😆😆😆 voh dono bade hi DAYAVAAN hain yaar...!!! khud enjoy karenge aur jis k ghar me yeh sab ho raha hai...use kaise bhul jayenge...??? hai na...😆 😆 😆

Raj ko thappad to pada Naina se... par iss thappad ki wajah se unhone Naina se dhang se propose to kiya... Ab to bas shehnai ka intezaar hai... dekh yaar...main koi shehnai nahi bajwanewali... mera iraada kuch aur hai...!!! sayad tum logon ko ajeeb sa lage...par mujhe pata hai ki tum sab mere itneeeeeeeee achhe dost ho ki use digest kar loge...😆

Continue soon...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Priya madam.... jee kahiye Yogi jee😃

Kya yaar itne din hogaye..tune update nahin ki....aur kitna intezaar karna padhega hum sab ko RN ka shaadi dekhne ke liye......jaldi ud karo we r waiting mujhe pata hai ki main late hun...par main sach me baht sare probs me fass gayi thi...!!! vaise ud toh ...aaj karne ka socha hai...par yeh LINE toh thik rahe na...!!! kab chala jata hai kuch thik hi nahi rahta...!!! agar aaj sab kuch thik raha na...toh pakka aaj UD kar dungi...!!!😃

Originally posted by: varshita

Sab kuch bole to bindaas tha is ud me. 👏👏👏👏👏👏 Thanxxxxxx a lottt Varsha...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Raj ka dramatically pehle kahin chale jaana aur fir achanak vapas aa jaana vo bhi tab jab Vikram ki shaadi ka band bajne waala tha.😛😛😛😛😛

Naina bhi umeedin khoti jaa rahi thi apni par Raj ne humesha jaise apna vishwaas banaye rakha aur is baar poore vidhi vidhaan se dono ki shaadi hogi.😉😉😉😉😉😉 pichli baar...baht kuch ajeeb tarike se aur aur bina kisi k maujudgi se hua tha...toh isiliye is baar dono shaadi sab k samne kar rahe hain...taki aur koi bhi sawal na uthaye un k shaadi ko le kar...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Tabhi Raj ki maa jee ne Naina ko le jaane diya agar Nandini k baache ki jaan ko khatra nahi hota to. shagun Nandini ki beti nahi hai...voh un k ghar me bass rahti hai...aur nandini use apne bachhe jaisi pyar karti hai...

Vo ye bhi acche se jaanti thi ki Raj to bacha hi lega na Naina ko.😃😃😃😃😃😃 ab maa hain us ki toh apne bete ko aur achhe se koun janega...

Ab kya halat hogi Vikram n gaurav ki jab apne saamne shaadi hote hue dekhenge dono.😆😆😆😆😆😆 halat toh kharab hogi hi...par achhe se kharab hogi....😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

update soon dear.

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Bahut hogaya mazak ...on serious note ....i am sorry priya ...n thank u so much for informing 😃 😊

Originally posted by: esha143

Arre yaar main fir se mahaaaa late ho gayi............main ek dum aalsi hothe jaa rahi hu..........kya karu yaar........issbar toh mujhe baahar bhi jaanaa padaa so thoda jyaada busy thi........aur tere updates keliye lambe comments karne ki jab se aadat lag gayi tab se chote comments likhne ka mann nahi kartha........ chhoooooooollllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....................... arre koi baat nahi hai dear...!!! tum out of station thi...isiliye samajh sakti hun...!!! aur sorry kahne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...!!! haan agar bina wajah late kiya hota na toh tumhari achhe se khabar leti main...😛

yaar tune shuruaath hi flashback se kar di iss baar par achcha hai ki chota tha.........mujhe lagtha hai ki iss fic ke last part main bhi tu flashbacks lihne waali hai...........kab tak khinchegi yaar inn ko...jaldi khatam karnaa... main kya karun...??? sirf FB agar ek hi baar me khatam karna chahun bhi toh khatam nahi kar payungi...aur tum sab vaise bhi aur jyada bore ho jayoge...!!! isiliye ud ko 2 parts me likhna padta hai...!!! par FB jaldi hi khatam hoga...!!! jyada se jyada 2-3 ud more...phir 'khallas'😃

chal aate hai tere famous flashbac pe......achchaa hua Vishal ne Rajveer ko sign karne se rok liyaa warnaa Jigyaasa toh tayyaar khadi thi Rajveer ko force karne ke liye.ye toh saaf jaahir hai ki ye sab ek chaal hai aur Jigyaasa bhi iss mein shaamil hai Aslam ko fasaane ke liye.vikram had showed a remarkable presence of mind in such situation.good.👏 ab koun kahta hai ki villans k paas dimag nahi hota...!!! FB me vikram k paas baht dimag tha...par ab umar ki wajah se kamm ho gaya hai...aur apna Raj 'sayaana' bann gaya hai...😆

achchaa hai ki finally Naina thik hai aur discharge ho ke ghar bhi aagayi. yeh sab Mana ki daya hai...😆

ye Vikram toh sabse badaa kaminaa hai yaar...itni maar khaane ke baad bhi Rajveer se iss ki himmath kaise hui Naina ke aas-paas bhi aane ki....shaayad iss liye kyun ki Rajveer wahaa nahi tha warna usski toh tabhi raam-naam-satya-hai ho jaata. yeh achha hi hota...mujhe yahin par is fic ko end karne ka idea mil jata...aur tum sab jyada torture hone se bach jate...😆

ussne Naina ko laane aadmi bhej diye aur Gayatri Devi ne bhi Naina ko jaane ko kahaa?shaayad iss liye kyunki unhe apne bete par pora bharosa hai.vo jaanthi thi ki Rajveer ke rehthe koi Naina ko chu bhi nahi saktha.issi liye jhagdaa badhaane se achchaa unhone Nainaa ko bhej diyaa taaki Rajveer khud jaakar usse wapas laaye?achcha kiya. arre vaah...tum toh sab kuch kitne achhe se samajh gayi...!!! lagta hai tumhare paas dimag hai...😛

par Nandini ne kyun phone kiyaa tha unhe? mujhe kya pata...yeh toh nandini hi bata sakti hai na...😃

ye Vikram apni zidd ke liye khud ki behen ko bhi maar saktha hai.... waise kamine log hthe hi aise hai... aise log bhi hote hain is duniya me...!!! mera yakeen karo...maine khud aise insaan ko dekha hai jis ne apne zidd k liye apni beti ko maar diya aur kisi ko kanon kaan khabar hi nahi mili...aur us ne ise suiside bana diya...😡

Naina ne iss bar bohuth thik tarah se baat ki Vikram se bina dare.....sahi kahaa ussne jab tak Rajveer hai Vikram toh haaregaa hi.....chaahe laakh koshish karle vo Rajveer aur Naina ko alag nahi kar paayegaa. naina ko khud se jyada Raj par bharosha hai...kyoun ki naina janti hai...aaj tak hamesha Raj ki entry sahi tym par hui hai na...isiliye...😛

aur firse Vikram ne apnaa kameenapan dikhaa diya Shagun ko beech mein laake.ek choti bachchi ko nishaana banaake vo jeetnaa chahtha hai....... kutta... kaminaa... ullu... afangaa......gadhaa....suvar.....neech......arre yaar mere paas aur gaaliya nahi hai usse dene keliye tumhi de dena meri taraf se..... sach mein kahaa ho tum Rajveer???? mere paas bhi galiyon ka jyada stock nahi hai...😆...jitna tha...use tum ne use kar liya...😆

ye Arjun bhi na ek number ka nautanki hai.Ankur ko Vikram ka asli chehra dikhaane ke liye ussne itni nautanki ki hai.par usse kaise pataa Vikram ke neech iraade vo toh wahaa par nahi tha na?jo bhi ho ussne kaam bohuth achcha kiyaa. ab is ka jawab toh kisi aur k paas hai...😉

well ye band baaja Vikram ka band bajaane ke liye hai ye toh samajh main aagayaa.......aur ye sirf aur sirf tere dimaag ka hi idea hai ye bhi......aur ye 5 missing kyun hai?koi khaas wajah? mujhe bhi nahi pata...is song ko jis ne likha tha na...usi ne 5 ko gayab kar diya tha...aur is missing me mera koi hath nahi hai😆

aur Rajveer poster fhaad ke uss mein se ander aayaa?yaar ye sab naa emotional atyaachaar kum aur nautanki jyaada lagthi hai.aur lagni bhi chaahiye tu jo itni badi nautanki ho gayi hai.kya entry dilaayi hai Rajveer ki.shaayad ussne khud aisa karne kabhi nahi sochaa hogaa.HATS OFF PRIYA!!!!!!!aur usski natak mandli 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 kis ki natak mandali meri ya Raj ki...😉 ...aur madam...tarif karne ka shukriya...😛

aur Arjun ne sahi kahaa---"fata poster nikla hero".........wah wah.....🤣 🤣🤣 ab hero nikla hi hai toh Arjun apne muh me taala kaise lagata...kuch na kuch toh use kahna hi tha...😆 😆 😆

Naina ne Rajveer ko thappad maaraa!!!!!!!!!well well well sahi bhi hai jaisa tumne kahaa aur jaisa Rajveer ne sochaa Nainaa ka reaction sahi tha.......usse darr lagaa hi hoga na......achcha hua Rajveer usse samajh gayaa........aakhir vo hai hi samajhdaar aur usse ishaara hi kaafi ta na😉 naina chahe samne se kuch bhi kahe...par ander se toh vohi bhi thodi si dari hui thi na...isiliye us ne aisa kiya...par raj use nahi samjhega toh aur koun samjhega...hai na...😉

WOW............Rajveer aur Naina ki shaadi........issi mandap main...........Vikram ke nazron ke saamne............isse achcha toh kuch ho hi nahi saktha.......Priya u r a darling yaar.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 kuch naya bol...yeh mujhe pata hai...he he he...😆 😆 😆!!! vaise is bahane teri taraf se itne sare HUGS mil gaye...ab mujhe aur kya chahiye...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

........hamaare RN ki shaadi ho rahi hai 🥳🥳🥳 🥳Vishal aur Aslam ne Vikram aur Gaurav ko kamre mein bandh kar diyaa achcha kiyaa unke saath aisaa hi hona chahiye...........👏👏👏 RN ki shaadi bhi toh dekhni hai na...in gadhon ko...toh vishal aur aslam ne un k liye A.C k seats reserved kar diya hai...😆 😆 😆

yaar tu ne Gandhiji ko bhi leke aagayi inn sab ke beech....aur sath hi Rajveer ke dadaji bhi aagaye muft mein....u r too muh Priya...romance ke waqt inn ka kya kaam. buzurgon ka ashirvaad toh rahna hi chahiye na har subh kaam me...😆 😆 😆

Rajveer ne aakhir confess kar hi diyaa ki vo bhi Naina se pyaar kartha hai........chalo anth bhalaa toh sab bhalaa........i mean iss update ka anth toh bhalaa hi hai naa...........ab agli update mein Raj-Naina ki shaadi hogi.......aur hum baraathi banenge........aur Vikram aur Gaurav prekshak.......bohuth mazaa aayegaa.........par shaadi hogi kab.....i mean next update kab karegi...................jaldi karnaaa... mujhe bhi shaadi mein naachnaa hai yaar............... koun si song par nachegi...😆

aur iss baar ka tera LRL-Joke jitnaa chota hai na utnaa hi mazedaar bhi hai.........👏👏👏👏 matlab tum samajh gayi hai na...😃 😃 😃 😃

aur Priya tune dekhaa tera fan following lag-bhag 30 tak pohunch gayaa yaar..........tu toh din ba din IF pe chaa rahi..........aise hi aage badhthi reh..........aur khushiyaa baanthi reh.........meri dua hai ki tera ye fan following aur jyaada badhe................ khinchai karr rahi hai na meri...???😛 par sach me thanxxx kahne ka mann nahi kar raha hai...😃!!! tune itni badi dua jo maang li mere liye...luv u sweety😃

ab CONT. SOON..................😉😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi ke kaha jake likhu..have been trying 2 send a pm since long..im sure abtak dabba saaf ho gaya hoga

thanks priya for doing this:)

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

NOTE-hiii friends....priya ji ka aap sab ke liye sandesh hai ki unka pc mere pc ki tarah dhokebaaz nikla aur peter ki tarah gaya kaam se😆😆😆😆....to jab tak vo theek nahin ho jaata aap sab tere naina aur priya ji ka intzaar karen....kyunki apun ke paas koi option bhi to nahin hai😭😭😭😭

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

update karne ka koi vichaar hai ya nahin???????????abhi ke abhi reply on my cell😡😡😡😡😡😡😡