Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
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mujhe pata hai frnz main is baar record tod kar late hun...!!! koi xcuses bhi nahi dungi...varna aap sab samjhoge ki main nautanki karr rahi hun...!!! 13th march se pahle ud karne k bare me socha tha...kyoun ki 13th ko YASHMIN ka B'day tha...par mere xams the...isiliye karr nahi payi...!!! phir socha Dhara k B'day (2nd April) ko karr dungi...par mere PC ko food-poisoning ho gaya...aur kal hi voh hospital se wapas aaya hai...!!! isiliye aaj UD karne ja rahi hun...agar electricity dprt ki daya rahi toh pura ud post hoga...varna...???
yeh ud main dedicate kar rahi hun apne dono frnds Yashmin (iqbal-pallavi)n Dhara ko....un k dher sare belated B'day wishes k sath...!!!
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Naina:- "sorry......
Rajveer ne Naina ko apne se thoda alag kiya aur pucha:-" kyoun...???"
Naina:- "maine tumhe kafi zor se maara na...???"
Raj thoda mushkuraya aur kaha:- "tum ne hisab barabar kar diya...!!! jab maine tum se pahle zabardasti shaadi ki thi...tab maine bhi toh tumhare sath baht bura bartaab kiya tha na...???"
Naina mushkurayi......
Raj ne Naina k honthon k corner par apna thumb rakhte hue...dhire se brush karte hue kaha:- "baht khun nikla tha tumhara...us guilt se main aaj tak bahar nahi aa paya hun...!!! main ...main...kaise tum par......
Naina:- "jane do na Raj...voh kal tha...jahan hum dono ek dushre k liye ajnabi the...koi mayne nahi rakhte the ek dushre k liye...!!! par aaj...hum sath hain...aur hamesha sath rahenge...hai na...???"
Rajveer:- "hmmm...hamesha....!!! ab jaldi se bahr chalo...varna bahar khade log...yeh sochenge ki tum shaadi k bich me mujhe utha kar yahan par suhag raat manane aa gayi ho...!!!"
Naina:- "kya bak rahe ho...???
Rajveer:- "bak nahi raha hun JAAN...sahi kah raha hun...!!! tumhe sayad yaad nahi ki bhari mehfil me aap ne mujhe khinch kar is room me le aayi hain...aur toh aur door bhi ander se lock hi hai...!!!"
Naina:- "chalo jaldi...
Naina...Rajveer ka hath pakad kar bahar jane k liye aayi...toh door k paas ruki...aur Raj ki taraf dekhte hue kaha:- "us din jab hamari shaadi hui thi...us k baad tum ne mera hath pakad kar kahin khinch kar le ja rahe the...!!! kya tum mere sath us din......
Raj ka chehra achanak udaas ho gaya:- "mujhe khud pata nahi tha naina ki main us din kya karr raha tha...!!!par kyoun kar raha tha...yeh janta tha...!!!us din mere samne ek aisi sachhai aayi thi...jis k baad main pagal ho gaya tha...janwar bann gaya tha...!!!mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki sahi kya hai aur galat kya...!!! mere dimag me bass vikram aur gaurav ki har khushi cheen ne ka bhoot sawar tha...!!!"
Naina:- "jane do na...purani baat...!!! yeh batayo...abhi mujh se koun shaadi karr raha hai...???"
Rajveer ne Naina k forehead ko halke se kiss karta hua kaha:- "tumhara Raj...
Naina ne apni bahon se rajveer k neck ko cover karte hue kaha:- "aur yeh 'mera Raj'...mere liye kya kar sakta hai...???"
Rajveer:-"arre...log ek hi baar shaadi kar k pakk jate hain...aur main toh ek hi ladki se do do baar shaadi kar raha hun...phir bhi tum puch rahi ho ki main tumhare liye kya kar sakta hun...!!!"
Naina...Raj se thoda dur hui aur kaha:- "Rajjjj...main bilkul mazak nahi karr rahi hun...!!!"
Rajveer:- "main bhi mazak nahi karr raha hun...jo sach hai...vohi toh bola na maine...!!!"
Naina:- "gr8888......toh phir raho yahan...main yeh shaadi nahi kar rahi hun...!!! tum raho akele...main ja rahi hun...!!!"
par naina ja nahi payi...Rajveer ne kafi tightly us ki wrist pakad rakhi thi......
Rajveer:- "mujhe akela chod kar jane k bare me sochna bhi mat...!!! jaan bani ho meri...mujhe chod kar jane k bare me socha bhi toh pahle tumhe maar dunga...aur us k baad khud ko...!!!"
Naina mushkurate hue Rajveer k kareeb aayi...aur apna chehera Raj k kareeb late hue kaha:-" is ka matlab...maut k baad bhi mera picha nahi chodoge....???"
Rajveer:- "kabhi nahi......
Rajveer ne Naina ko apne thoda aur kareeb khinchte hue kaha......
cut to Ankur......
Ankur kafi confused dikh raha tha...!!!
Ankur:- "Arjun singh...!!! akhir yeh sab ho kya raha hai... meri toh kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha hai...!!!yeh Rai sahab aur Gaurav kahan gayab ho gaye...??? aur toh aur Naina...Rajveer ko khinch kar ander kyoun chali gayi...??? us par yeh shaadi ka mandap...??? Arjun singh...tum toh is area me kafi pahle se ho na...??? itna toh pata chal hi gaya hai ki yahan k logon ka dimag thoda khishka hua hai... tumhari tarah...!!! par kya tum mujhe samjha sakte ho ki yeh sab kya ho raha hai...??? aur yeh Naina...Rajveer ko khinch kar kyoun le gayi...???"
Arjun:- "sir jee...Jaygarh k pani ki yahi khashiyat hai...!!! yahan ki patniyon me pati-bhakti kut-kut kar bhari hui hai...!!!!!! sare patni log...apne pati ki dhulai ho ya safai ho...band darwaze k ander hi karti hain...!!! kya hai na...unhe pata hai ki family aur assembly me farq kya hai...isiliye...!!!"
hala ki khud Arjun singh ko bhi pata nahi tha ki ander kya ho raha hai...phir bhi us ne ek tukka(guess) maar diya...!!! us ne toh bass utna kiya tha jitna ki use instructions mile the...!!!
Aslam:- "sir......haqiqat main aap ko batata hun...!!!"
Ankur ne turn kar k dekha...Vishal aur Aslam khade the...!!!
Aslam:-" sir ...aap toh jante hi hain ki bhai jee aue Naina bhabi ki shaadi kaise hui thi...!!! is baat se choti maa( Gayatri devi) hamesha bhai jee se naraz rahti thi...!!! aur aaj jab sab kuch bhul kar Gaurav apni bahn se milne gaya...toh choti maa ne apna faishla suna diya ki aaj aadhi raat ko subh-mahurat toh bhai jee aur bhabi ki dushri baar shaadi hogi...sare rashmon k sath...!!! aur raat k dhai baje ka mahurat tha...isiliye yeh sab kuch ho raha hai...aadhi raat ko...!!!"
Ankur:- "ohhhh...ab main samjha ki door k paar Rajveer ki tashveer kyoun lagi hui thi...shaadi jo hai un ki...!!! lekin Rai saheb aur Gaurav kahan gayab ho gaye...???"
Vishal:-"Rai saheb ko dysentery ho gaya hai...aur Gaurav unhe company dene k liye wash room k bahar khada hai...!!! ab is umr me yeh shikayat toh rahti hi hai...jab hum un restricted foods ko khane lagte hain...jise khane se humain doc mana karte hain toh...!!!"
Ankur:- "ek baat aur...!!! yeh Naina ...Rajveer ko khinch kar kahan le gayi...???"
Arjun:- "sir jee...main kuch guess kar raha hun...!!! mujhe lagta hai ki is ki wajah yeh hai ki...jaise ki abhi abhi Aslam jee ne kaha ki raat k dhai baje ka mahurat tha...aur Rajveer jee 2:10 ko pahunche hain...!!! ab is baat se Naina jee ka gussa hona toh jayaz hai na...!!! pahle se hi un ki patni hai...aur ab un par Jaygarh k pani ka asar toh hoga hi na...!!!"
Vishal:- "bilkul sahi kaha...aap ne Arjun singh...!!! ab is me bhai jee bhi kya karte...??? politician hai na...subah 10 baje ki prog me raat k 10 baje pahunchna...hamare desh k har politicians ka janm-siddh adhikar hai...!!! isiliye yahan par bhi late ho gaye...!!!"
cut to RN......
Naina:- "love you......
Rajveer:- "love you too......
Raj jhuka Naina k chehre par...Naina ne apni ankhen band ki......
tabhi un dono ne door k bahar kisi ki awaz suni...voh Vishal tha...dhire dhire kah raha tha:- "bhai jee hum late ho rahe hain...aur bahar sabhi tarah tarah k sawal karr rahe hain...aur jaldi subah bhi honewali hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "Nainaaaaa...tum bhi na...meri izzat ka faluda bana kar hi damm logi...ab chalo jaldi...!!!"
bina kisi drame k dono ki shaadi hogi...kyoun ki drama toh pahle hi kiya ja chuka tha...
(PS:- agar koi shaadi ka scene dekhna chahta hai toh plz khud hi imagine kar lo...kyoun ki main nahi likh sakti...!!! main khud kisi bhi shaadi ko start se end tak nahi dekh pati...!!! us se pahle mujhe neend aa jati hai...aur neend tab khulti hai...jab dulhan...zor zor se rone lagti hai...matlab BIDAI par😆!!!)
Rajveer ne kuch notice kiya aur Vishal aur Aslam ko apne kareeb aane ka ishara kiya...
dono jab Rajveer k kareeb aaye toh us ne unhe dhire se kuch kaha...jo sunn kar dono thoda hairan hue...aur thode pareshan bhi dikhe...par kisi aur se bina kuch baat kiye chale gaye...!!!
Vikram aur Gaurav jis room me kaid the...achanak us room k bahar music band hua...aur door khulne ki awaz hui...
Vikram aur Gaurav...lag-bhag bhaagte hue...niche mandap k kareeb pahunche...lekin tab tak shaadi toh ho hi chuki thi...aur Rajveer-Naina sab se badhai le rahe the...
Arjun ki nazar padi...Vikram aur Gaurav par...!!! us ne Ankur se kaha:- "sir jee...Vishal sahi kah raha tha...!!! Rai saheb ko dysentery ho gaya hai...voh dekhiye...kuch hi pal me kitne kamzor lagg rahe hain...!!! aisa lagg raha hai jaise band kamre me apni puri izaat luta kar aa rahe hain...!!!"
Ankur:- "band kamra...???"
Arjun:- "sir jee...wash room ki baat kar raha hun main...!!!"
Ankur ne dekha Vikram ki taraf...Vikram k baal bikhre hue the...chehre par pasina...kapdain idhar ki udhar ho gayi thi...
Ankur aur Arjun un dono k paas gaye......
Ankur:- "ab aap ko kaisa lagg raha hai...???
Arjun:- "yeh kaisa sawal karr rahe hain aap sir jee...!!! pet ka kachra nikal kar aaye hain...toh achha hi lagg raha hoga na...!!! aisa lagg raha hoga ki...bina ki bhari luggage k hawa me udd rahe hain...hai na Rai saheb...???"
par Vikram ko kuch bhi sunayi nahi de raha tha...us ki ankhen sirf aur sirf Rajveer aur Naina ko dekh rahi thi...us k kadam aage badh rahe the...
Vikram k paas Rajveer aaya aur kahne laga:- "shukriya Rai saheb...jo bhi aap ne hum dono k liye kiya us k liye...!!! shaadi toh meri thi...par aapne intezaam is tarah se kiya tha jaise ki shaadi meri nahi aap ki ho rahi hai...!!! sach me uparwale ne aap ko jitna bada jism diya hai utna hi bada dil bhi diya hai...!!!"
Arjun ne badi mushkil se apni hassi dabayi...par Ankur khaashne laga...!!! use Rajveer k last line par hassi aa rahi thi...par hassna sahi nahi hoga yahi soch kar...us ne khaashne ka natak kiya...
Raj thoda aage badh kar Vikram k kareeb aaya...Naina us k sath hi thi...!!! Rajveer ne Vikram ko hug kiya...aur dhire se us k kanon me kaha:- "tujhe hug karne me mujhe bilkul bhi achaa nahi lagg raha hai...par mujhe tujh se kuch kahna hai...!!! Nandini k shaadi se saalon pahle...tune ek baar aur zabardasti ki thi ek ladki k sath....us k baap ko daarane k liye us ladki se shaadi karnewala tha tu...!!! kya hua tha tab...??? us ladki ko us insaan ne utha kar shaadi kar li...jiss se voh ladki shaadi karna chahti thi...!!! aaj bhi barshon baad tum phir se kunware rah gaye...!!! voh kahte hain na ki...'hath ko aaya...par muh na laga'...thik vaise hi...!!!"
Naina hairani se sunn rahi thi ki Rajveer ki baat...par samajh nahi pa rahi thi...!!! Vikram apne tez kadmon se diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan us ki rifle thi...par Gaurav ne use rokk liya...!!!
Gaurav:- "bhaiya...humain jaldbazi me kaam nahi karna chahiye...!!! aap bhul rahe hain ki hum kitne taqatvaar hain...!!! sab k samne humain apni kamzori nahi dikhani chahiye...!!! aap bhul rahe hain ki hum Rajveer k parivaar k sath kitna bura karr chuke hain...!!! hum ne kya halat ki thi Rajveer ki...us ki bahn ki...us k baap ki...!!! humab bhi use tabah kar sakte hain...par abhi aap apne gusse par kabu rakhiye...!!!"
(@ Mana n Guglu:- tum dono phir se dimag laga kar puchoge ki ADI k sath kuch aisa vaisa toh nahi hua tha...??? arre yaar...tum dono mere dost ho...itna toh samajh sakte ho na ki main kuch alag hi karungi...)
Vikram thoda shaant hua...par nafrat aur gussa us k ankhon me abhi tak saaf jhalak raha tha...!!!
Naina ne Raj se pucha:- "tum yeh kis ki baat kar rahe the...???pahle kis se Vikram ki shaadi honewali thi...jo nahi ho payi thi...???"
Rajveer:- "shhhhhh.....secreat hai jaan...kisi se mat kahna...!!! Vikram pahle...choti maa (Gayatri devi) se shaadi karnewala tha...tab main sirf 7 ya 9 saal ka tha...aur Gayatri devi meri teacher hua karti thi...!!!"
Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha...par Naina hairan hui...!!!
(PS:- jab Vikram...Naina ko lene Rajveer k ghar police le kar aaya tha...tabhi is baat ka ishaara Vikram ne khud kiya tha...aap sab ko sayad yaad bhi nahi hoga...!!! par dont worry main is point ko khinchungi bilkul bhi nahi...)
Rajveer:- "ab jyada hairan mat ho...ghar chalo...tumhare liye tumhara shaadi ka gift intezaar karr raha hai....!!!"
Naina:- "shaadi ka gift...???"
Rajveer:- "jee haan...!!! aur biwi...pahle se bata deta hun...us gift ko dekhne k baad tumhe jitni badi khushi hogi na...utna hi deep kiss chahiye mujhe...!!!"
Rajveer ne Naina k kanon me dhire se kaha...
Naina:- "pahle main apna gift dekh toh lun...phir sochungi...???"
Rajveer...Naina ko le kar chala gaya...aur Ankur, Arjun aur us havaldaron ko chodne k liye ek jeep bhej diya...!!!
Naina aur Rajveer jab ghar pahunche toh subah ho chuki thi......
Naina hairan hui jab us ne dekha ki door k paar Nandini khadi thi pooja ki thali liye...un dono ka sawagat karne k liye...!!! ghar k ander Aditi ne aane nahi diya...shart rakhi ki do saal k ander use ek bhatija ya bhatiji chahiye...agar judwaan hue toh voh jyada khush hogi...!!! Rajveer ne is ki zimmedari li...!!! Naina sharmayi...aur Gayatri devi ne hath uthaya...Adi ko maarne k liye...lekin voh bhaag gayi...
phir Naina ghar k ander aayi toh Nandini se pucha:- "bhabi aap yahan...kaise...???"
Nandini:- "main tum se badi jarur hun...par mujhe khushi hogi ki agar tum ne mujhe bhabi k badle didi bulaya toh...!!! kyoun ki maine faishla karr liya hai ki main Gaurav ko divorce de rahi hun...!!!"
Naina ne samjha ki ki tabhi shaadi k turant baad Vishal aur Aslam khana gayab ho gaye the...!!! un dono ne sab ki nazar se chupa kar bina kisi hungame k Nandini ko vahan se gayab kar chuke the...!!!
Naina:- "aur Shagun...???"
Nandini:- "so rahi hai...thoda darr gayi thi na...isiliye...!!!"
Rajveer:- "tum dono ki batain agar khatam ho gayi ho...toh main apne ek laute biwi ko apne sath le jayun...??? mujhe use us ka gift dena hai abhi...!!!"
Gayatri devi ne hasste hue kaha:- "haan...haan...le ja...!!!"
Raj Naina ko le kar ander chala gaya......!!!
vishal...gayatri devi k paas aaya aur kaha:-"choti maa...ab main bhi chalta hun...!!"
Gayatri devi hairan hui...jab se Vishal jail se chuta hai...unhi k sath rahta hai...kabhi bhi apne ghar me nahi rahta...akele-pan ki wajah se...!!!
Gayatri devi:- "tum kahan jayoge...???"
Vishal:- "apne ghar...!!! pahle akela tha...isiliye yahan rahta tha...!!! lekin ab toh mera khayal rakhne k liye meri badi bahn bhi aa gayi hai...isiliye sochta hun ki use le kar ghar chala jayun...!!!"
Vishal ki batain sunn kar Nandini k ankhon me anshun aaye...!!!
Gayatri devi mushkurayoi aur kaha:- "voh sab toh thik hai...lekin abhi jo mahual hai...us me hum me se kisi ko bhi alele rahne ka matlab hai ki mushibat ko ghar bulana...!!! tum kisi kaam se kabhi agar bahar chale gaye toh Nandini ghar me akeli ho jayegi...aur dushman ko vaar karne ka ek aur mauka mil jayega...!!! isiliye jab tak hum apne iraadon me kamiyab nahi ho jate tab tak ek sathj rahne me hi hum sab k liye achha hai...!!!"
cut to RN......
Rajveer ne Naina k ankhon par apna hath rakh kar ek room me le gaya...aur dhire se apna hath hatate hue us k kanon me kaha:- "tumhara gift samne hai...!!!"
Naina ne ankhen kholi...ek bade se room me ek chair par ek khubsurat si ladki baith kar koi book padh rahi thi...!!! magar jaise hi us ki nazar in dono par padi toh voh khadi ho gayi...aur inhe dekh kar mushkurane lagi......
Naina ne Rajveer ki taraf hairani se dekha...!!! Rajveer ne use dushri taraf dekhne ka ishaara kiya...!!!
Naina ne khidki taraf dekha...!!! ek aadmi ek wheel chair par baitha...khidki k bahar jhaank raha tha...!!! naina aage badhi...us insaan ko dekhne k liye...
phir us insaan k samne aayi...us k pair kaampe...voh piche ki ore hati....apne kaampte pairon se voh diwar se takrayi...vohi zameen par baithi!!! ankhon me anshun...aur honthon pe mushkurahat liye voh us insaan ko dekhne lagi...!!!
Rajveer Naina k paas nahi aaya...kyoun ki voh samajh raha tha ki abhi Naina kya feel kar rahi thi...!!!
Naina aage badhi us insaan ki taraf...us k goad me sar rakha...aur dhire se kaha:- "PAPA......
us insaan k hath kaampe...par voh tamam koshish karne k baad bhi apna hath move nahi kar pa raha tha...paralletic attack ki wajah se...!!! par us k ankhon se do baand anshun nikle...jo naina k saar par gire...!!! jo Naina ko ashirvaad de rahe the...us k is nayi zindagi k liye...!!!
Rajveer us ladki k paas gaya......
Rajveer:- "Yashmin...uncle thik toh hain na...???"
(PS:- maine abhi tak YASHMIN k role k liye kisi ko finalized nahi kiya hai...agar YASHMIN khud yeh role karna chahegi toh achha hai😆...varna mujhe ek heroine dhudhni padegi...😛!!! vaise bhi yeh role guest role hai😉)
Yashmin:- "jee...abhi abhi maine unhe medicine diya hai...!!! sone k liye kaha...magar soye nahi...yahin par kab se baithe hue hain...!!!"
cut to Ankur......
Ankur:- "Arjun singh...aaj sham ko tum kya karr rahe ho...???"
Arjun ne khud se kaha...'yeh toh aise pooch raha hai jaise mujhe DATE pe le kar jayega'...
Arjun:- "kuch nahi sir...!!! par aap kyoun pooch rahe hain...???"
Ankur:- "aise hi...!!! main soch raha tha ki kyoun na aaj raat hum dono sath me dinner karen...???"
Arjun chunka...khud se bola...'beta Arjun sambhal ja...!!! yeh tujhe khila-pila kar halal karne k mood me hai...!!!'
Arjun:- "sir jee...meri nani bimar hai...mujhe us k liye dava-daru le kar jana hai...!!!"
Ankur:- "dava-daru...???"
Arjun:- "mera matlab hai ki...mujhe apne nani k liye dava le kar jana hai...!!!"
Ankur:- "thik hai kisi aur din hi sahi...!!!"
cut to Rajveer's house......
at 10:30 P.M
sabhi so chuke the...!!! Naina apne father k sath kuch baat karne ki koshish karr rahi thi...!!!
terrace par...Raj, Aslam,Vishal...baithe hue the...ek chautha insaan bhi tha...jis ne blanket me apne aap ko puri tarah se chupa rakha tha...!!!
un charon k bich me ek bottle Rum ka tha...aur ek bottle Whishkey ka aur ek bottole water tha...aur kuch ice cubes...
Raj ne apna peg khali kiya aur kaha:- "Rum me jyada nasha hai.......
Aslam ne apna peg khali kiya aur kaha:- "nahi...whishkey me jyada nasha hai......
Vishal ne dono taste kiye aur kaha:- "50/50......
chauthe insaan ne apne blanket k ander se apna hath bahar nikala aur dono taste kiye aur finally apna chehra bahar nikalte hue kaha:- "sara nasha is saale pani me hai...!!! jis k sath bhi mil jata hai...apna joint account khol deta hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "kya baat kahi hai...Arjun singh tum ne...vaah...vaah....!!!"
Vishal:- "bhai jee...aap aur mat pee jiye...!!! bhabi aap ka wait karr rahi hongi...!!!"
Rajveer:- "Naina....aaj baht khush hai...apne papa k sath...!!! mere baba bhi hote toh aaj baht khush hote...!!! (Raj ki ankhon me anshun the...) main khud ko shaant rakhne ki koshish karta hun...par ander jo aag lagi hui hai...use kaise shaant karun...!!!!!! jo in ankhon ne dekh hai...use kaise bhul jayun...!!! chah kar bhi main kuch bhi nahi bhul sakta...kuch bhi nahi...!!!"
Arjun:- "waqt is samay aap k sath hai...ek waqt aayega jab jeet bhi aap ki hi hogi...kyoun ki is baar uparwala bhi aap k sath hai...!!! aur ab aap plz...bhabi k paas jayiye...voh aap ka wait kar rahi hogi...!!!"
Raj:- "mujhe toh us k paas jane me bhi darr lag raha hai...!!! us ne agar dekha ki maine thodi si pee li hai...toh meri dhulai kar degi...!!! lekin yaar...us k hath me damm hai...thoda aur zor lagayegi toh kisi k bhi gardan tod kar rakh sakti hai...!!! voh sach me Rajveer singh ki biwi lagti hai...!!! aur ab toh usi tarah se react bhi karne lagi hai...!!! aur kabhi kabhi toh itni violent ho jati hai ki mujhe bhi us se darr lagta hai...!!! phir bhi jana toh padega hi na...vaise bhi maine toh bass ek hi peg piya hai...is se kya farq padd jayega...!!!"
Arjun, Vishal aur Aslam badi mushkil se apni hassi dabaye baithe hue the...reason yeh tha ki...jis Rajveer ko voh jante the...jo kisi se nahi darta tha...ab voh apne biwi se darta hai...!!!
Raj chala gaya...
Arjun bhi jane k liye utha...!!! niche utar kar aaya toh andhera tha...seedhiyon par kisi se takraya...dono zameen par gire...
Arjun ne dekha...voh Yashmin thi...
Arjun ko background me koi gana sunai de raha tha...
"tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam......pyar hota hai diwana sanam..."
Yashmin toh pahle hairan hui...phir kaha:- "aap zara hatenge...toh main apne room me jayungi...!!!
Arjun:- "aap ko voh gana sunayi de raha hai...???"
Yashmin ne khud se kaha:- "lagta hai is ko chadh gayi hai...!!!
Yashmin:- "dekhiye...aap ko agar yahan pade pade andheron me gana sunn na hai toh suniye...par mujhe plz jane di jiye...!!! mujhe is andheron me bass '20 saal baad' ka gana sunayi de raha hai 'kahin deep jale kahin dil'...!!!'
cut to Raj......
Rajveer ne door band kar k jaise hi turn kiya...na toh kuch bol paya aur nahi ankhen khol paya...apne honthon par voh bas kisi jani pahchani se honthon ko mehsus kar raha tha...!!!
Raj k hath dhire dhire Naina k waist tak pahunche aur tight hue...!!! Naina ne apni bahon se Rajveer k neck ko cover karti hui...us k aur kareeb ja rahi thi...!!!
Rajveer mehsus kar raha tha...ki ab voh Naina ki har ek chahat bann gaya tha...us ki aadat ban gaya tha...!!! Naina use mehsus karwana chahti thi...ki Raj us k liye kya hai...!!!
par achanak Naina chillayi:- "whishkeyyyyyyyy......
Rajveer ne bade masumiyat k sath kaha:- "tumhe galat-faihmi ho rahi hai jaan...yeh toh Rum hai...!!!"
end of d epi......
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IMPORTANT:-
aaj 7th April hai...aur in 7 dino me mujhe 6 nayi baton ka pata chala hai...!!! toh socha tum sab se bhi share kar lun....!!!
1:-90% of ppl in Myanmar dont drink milk......😲
2:- snake's vision is upto 5 km......😲
3:- A man can touch sun if his body is completely surrounded by mercury......😲
4:- no twins hv been born till now in greenland......😲
5:- zebra doesnt hv lever......😲
6:- all d details are false. thanxxxx for beleiving for a while...!!! actually main bass itna hi kahna chahti thi ki belated hi sahi lekin 'April Fool'😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆LRL joke😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne kitchen k ander se Raj ko bulate hue kaha:- "Raj....zara kitchen me toh aayo...aur dekho...is nayi dress me main kaisi lag rahi hun...???"
Raj ne vohin baithe baithe kaha:- "kamal ki lag rahi ho...ufff...mind-blowing...masa-allaha...subhan-allaha...gazab dha rahi ho tum...!!!"
Naina:- "par tum toh abhi tak yahan par aaye bhi nahi...phir tumhe kaise pata chala...???"
Raj:- "jali hui Roti k khushbu se...!!! tum itni khubsurat lagg rahi ho ki rotiyaan bhi jaal gayi...ab bahar walon ka kya hoga...???"
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okkkkkk...ho gaya aap sab ka long ud...wid LRL JOKE...!!! next part likhna suru kar diya hai...jitne jaldi aap sab ka response milega utni jaldi ud bhi hoga...!!! ab aap sab comments hi toh mera health drink hai na...!!! isiliye galiyaan dene ka mann kare toh do ya phir kuch aur...main toh prasad samajh kar hi kha lungi...!!!
love u all
take care
Lioness😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Heloooo Lioness !!

Welcome back !!!
SO MY GUESS WAS RIGHT !!!
Chachaji hi Raj ke Sasurji nikle !!! 😃
Ab start pe aate hai...
Naina is sorry as she slapped him 😆 😆 ( Achcha hai...pehle haath saaf karlo, phir sorry bolo !😆😆)
But Raj is guilty for whatever he did when he married her first.... Naina is right....it's better to forget past and move on ...as they love each other now....
Now Cut to Arjun and Ankur....😆 😆 😆 😆
The answers which Arjun singh gave Ankur were damn hilarious....😆
And to add to it, Vishal was there !! 😆 😆 😆 I tell you, whatever dial and explanations these both gave Ankur regarding the " Dysentry" thing...was....well.....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
So RN ki shaadi hogayi !!! And then Vikram and Gaurav bhi bahar aagaye Aashirwaad dene !! 😆
Raj ka dial...jitna bada jism, utna hi bada dil...was hilarious !! 😆 😆
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT !!! 😲 Woh Vikram pehle Gayatri devi se shaadi karna chahta tha !😲
Abey uski age exactly hai kitni???😲
muyaan besharam !! Pehle Raj ki maa aur ab Raj ki Naina se shaadi karna chah raha tha 😡
Par...chalo...abhi keliye toh theek hogaya !
Woh log nandini ko bhi waha se bhaga laaye !! good !!!
And then Naina met her Papa !!😃
So " Yasmin" gets to do cameo 😃
Woh terrace walla scene and Raj ke dial were funny !
Arjun ne sahi kaha hai....sabse jyaada nasha toh paani mein hai...😃
And now Arjun ko bhi gaana sunaai de raha hai ! 😆 Yasmin se takraane ke baad....do i see new pair in making???
Last waala RN scene was nice...
LRL joke was awesome !!
Dekhle ! Subah subah jaldi mein reply kar rahi hoon...gotta rush ...issliye isse plzzzzz kaam chala lena !
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

finally updated

awesome
amazing
mindblowing
superbbb
fantastic
loved the whole part
loved everything
cont soon
and plzzzz post the other ff also pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
tc
ammu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Priyaa tu kya paagal ho gayi hai bina comments ke hi like button press kar rahi hai......lagtha hai vikram ka asar pad rahaa hai tujh pe............sambhal jaa warnaa musibath mein pad jaayegi yaar....😉😆😆

iss baar tune shuruaat hi RN scene se ki hai ab isse jyaada khushi ki baat kya ho sakthi hai......and that too a romantic one........haa thode past ke yaadein jaroor the par jaise Naina ne kahaa ab jab sab thik hai toh vo sab yaad karke kya faayda.........aur fir unn dono ki nok-jhok....it was also very sweet perfectly complementing the situation they r in..........

aur Ankur-Arjun ki convo toh highlight hai iss update ka.........yaar kya dialouges likhe hai tune..........wow.....aur Arjun ke so-called 'PATI-BHAKTHI' ke bhaashan sunn ke toh mere hosh udd gaye....... i mean hass hass ke.............i think har patni ko ye bhaashan jaroor sunna chahiye.......it'll help a lot u see 😆
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aur Vishal aur Aslam ne baat ko bohuth achche se cover kiyaa hai Ankur ke saamne..........it was good.aur Viram ki 'dysentry' ka bahaana toh bohuth funny tha......aur Naina ke behaviour pe Arjun singh ki explanation bhi kamaal ka tha......aur ek tarah se sahi bhi........par Vishaal ka ye kehnaa ki "politician hai na...subah 10 baje ki prog me raat k 10 baje pahunchna...hamare desh k har politicians ka janm-siddh adhikar hai..."..........it was so true.......

finally Raj-Naina ki shaadi ho gayi.....iss baar sab ke saamne,sab ke aashirvaad ke saath.....very very good.......

aur ye Ankur ko police waala kisne banaa diyaa bina kuch soche Vishal aur Arjun ke baaton mein aagayaa aur ab jaakar Vikram se pooch rahaa hai ki ab usski tabiyath kaisi hai?bechaara khaamokhaa ullu ban gayaa iss khel mein......😆😆

aur ab Rajveer jale pe namak chidakne kaa kaam kar rahaa hai Vikram ke saath par sahi bhi hai usske saath aisaa hi karnaa chaahiye balki isse kahi jyaada ......

aur yaar vikram ne Gayatri devi se shaadi karne ki koshish ki thi ye baat jaankar toh i was really shocked😲😲😲 aur abb vo unke bete ki patni se yaani literally apni beti jaisi ladki se shaadi karnaa chahtha hai........how disgusting!!!!!!!!!😡 tune sahi kahaa i din't remember when Vikram said anything abt this and i had to go back to the previous update.....

aur ye Gaurav toh Vikram se bhi jyaada gayaa-gujraa hai.......koi bhi bhai apni hi behen ke saath itnaa sab kar sakthaa hai sab kuch jaanthe hue bhi......
even more disgusting!!!!!!!!!!ye toh bhai ke naam pe dhabba hai......bhai ho toh apne 'NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWAALIA' jaisaa..... aur naa ho toh 'GAURAV' jaisaa.......par ye Adi ke baare mein kyaa bol rahaa tha........yaar tu isske baare mein kab clear karegi hamaari confusion..........kab se pooch rahe hai tujhe..........ab bataa bhi de Adi ke saath hua kya tha jis ki wajah se Raj aur Naina ki pehli shaadi hui thi??????

Nandini ne kitni achchi decision li hai Gaurav ko divorce dene ka faislaa karke.....jo insaan khud ki behen ka bhalaa nahi kar sakaa vo kya kisi aur ka bhalaa karegaa?chaahe vo patni ho yaa fir beti?kamse kam ab toh Nandini ki zindagi sawar jaayegi aur usse bhi ek mauka milegaa apne pyaar ko waapas paane kaa.....aur Shagun ko ek achchi future dene kaaa...... good, Rajveer ne achcha kiya jo Vishal aur Aslam se keh kar Nandini aur Shagun ko pehle hi vahaa se bahaar le kar aagayaa.... aur iss wajah se Vishal aur Nandini ka rishta bhi thik ho gayaa..... isse achchi baat aur kya ho sakthi hai.......

Rajveer ne Naina ko apne papa se milwaa diyaa.....isse badaa tohfaa toh usske liye kuch aur ho hi nahi saktha.........and i guess Yasmin uski behen hai,right?toh pichle update mein jo Rajveer Aslam se baat kar rahaa tha vo inke baare mein hi tha..........

ab ye beech mein Ankur aur Arjun singh ka ye 'DOSTAANA' ka track kahaa se aagayaa?Priyaa tu kar kya rahi hai........kahi tu sach mein pagal toh nahi ho gayi naa itne saare fics likh likh ke????????

par ye kya lagtha hai tere saath saath tere fic ke characters bhi paagal ho gaye hai--Rajveer,Vishal,Aslam aur Arjun singh....sab ke dimaag kharaab ho gayaa hai....ek kehtha hai rum mein jyaada nashaa hai.doosra kehtha hai whiskey mein hai,toh teesra ko 50/50 lgtha hai.......aur choutha toh inn sab se bhi jyaada paagal hai kehtha hai ki paani mein jyaada nashaa hai.....waah kya baat hai......woh kehthe hai naa sab 'EK SE BADH KAR EK' hai yahaa pe........ustaad hai sab ke sab!!!aur ab ye Rajveer khud apne hi izzat ka faludaa banaane pe tulaa hua hai ye keh kar ki voh Naina se itna dartha hai.......jiyoo beta Rajveer!!!!!!!!!😆😆
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Yasmin aur Arjun singh.......pairing kaafi dilchasp hai..........dekhthe hai kya hotha hai inn dono ka......

aur ab Naina ne Rajveer ka kahaa maan liyaa.......usske tohfe se jitni khushi Naina ko hui utni hi deep kiss Rajveer ko milaaa, very good Naina😉😳.aur iss kiss ke saath saath Rajveer Naina ke har feeling ko mehsus kar rahaa tha.par jab Naina ne khaa whiskey tab Rajveer ka jawaab bohuth badiyaa tha.......
"tumhe galat-faihmi ho rahi hai jaan...yeh toh Rum hai...!!!"😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 sach mein ye ladka....... haiiiiiiiiii allah!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

aur tere April fool note ke baare kya kahaa jaa saktha hai yaar........ tu ne firse prove kar diyaa ki hamaara paala Priya ke saath padha hai..............

aur Lrl joke toh iss baar bhi bohuth achcha hai.....Raj ka Naina ko tease karnaa bohuth achcha tha........Naina ko dekhkhe rotiyaa bhi jal gayi.......kya baat hai.........😆
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ab jab ki tune already next update likhhi diyaa hai toh jaldi post bhi kar de meri maa..............

P.S. PRIYA MUJHE NA EK DOUBT SATAA RAHI HAI......AGAR TU HAR SHAADI MEIN AISE HI SOTHI RAHI TOH JAB TERI SHAADI HOGI TAB TERA AUR TERE DULHE KA KYA HOGAA KAALIYAA........I MEAN PRIYAA??????ZARAA SOCH AGAR TU AISE HI SOTHI RAHI TOH TERA DULHAA BHAAG JAAYEGAA YAAR...........SO PLEASE AB TOH JAG JAA..........😆
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Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago
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Hey Lioness...!!! First of all, thank you for the bday wishes...!!!

Update was as usual...sada hua, boring, pakau....extremely nonsensical....!!!! 😡😡

Aur yeh comment bhi tumhara April fool joke jitna hi rite hai...!!!! 😆😆😆
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Hi Priya

How r u?
Update was brilliant as usual..👏👏 I really cant stop laughing while reading your updates.😃
Naina ne Raj se sorry bola but Raj to past ko lekar kaafi guilty fel kar raha hai..Naina ne sahi kaha ki past ko bhoolkar ab unhe future par zyaada dhyaan dena chahiye..
Rajveer apni izzat ka faluda khud hi bana raha hai..jab dekho Naina mein kho jata hai..
Arjun Singh ke sense of humour ka jawab nahin...But ab to aslam bhi uska khoob sath de raha tha..
Ankur se woh log jo bhi keh rahe the woh sab bahut hi funny tha...
Jaigarh ke pani ki khasiyat sach mein bahut hi acchi thi..Patniyaan apne patiyon ko dhoya karti hain..😆😆😆
Raj n Naina ki shadi ki baat to theek hai par Vikram ko dysentry hone wali baat padke mera hans hans ke bura haal tha..🤣
Raj n Naina ki shadi dekhke Vikram ki halat to wakai kissi mariz ke jaisi ho gayi thi..
this scene was just too hilarious
"Arjun:- "yeh kaisa sawal karr rahe hain aap sir jee...!!! pet ka kachra nikal kar aaye hain...toh achha hi lagg raha hoga na...!!! aisa lagg raha hoga ki...bina ki bhari luggage k hawa me udd rahe hain...hai na Rai saheb...???"
Raj ne sahi kaha Vikram ka dil unke jism ki tarah hi bada hai..😉
Bhawanji bhi usse pareshan ho gaye hain😊
Yeh Vikram Raj ki mom Gayatri se bhi shadi karna chahta tha..😲..aakhir iss buddhe ki age kya hai??
Dono baar dulha baane ka uska sapna ek baap bete ki jodi ki wajah se reh gaya..😆😆
Ankur ko kya ho gaya hai..wo Arjun Singh ko dinner pe kyun le jaana chahata hai??😉 kahin kuchh gadbad to nahin hai..😉😆😆
Raj ne Naina ko bahut hi keemti tohfa diya...Usne Naina ko uske papa se milwa diya..sach isse bakar koi gift ho bhi nahin sakta..😛
Raj is really sacred of Naina n every1 is enjoying this..A person who is not afraid of any1 is so sacred of his own wife..
Naina ko pata chal hi gaya ki Raj ne drink kiya hai..
Wat will ahppen now???
Continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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