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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear plz add me in the pm list of all ur mayur ff's...am crazy abt mayur and luv to read their ff's...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi lina
after long time u update it
lovely update.
mayur r rock as usual
it was very short dear but really very nice.
fantastic part.
keep it up

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey!!!
amazing part
continue it soon...
plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 15 years ago
linu 🤗
I love ur FF ..esp for the *smiles*
makes me smile each time I see it 😆

tho next time make it a bigger part 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum update dear.....

but yaar....it was really short....next time it has to be a longer one dear !!

loved the mayur convo....it was really cute...n sweet...

so finally mayur reached Goa.....

now want to see some really cute scenes b/w mayur.....n hope nupur soon falls for mayank...

lovely update dear.....

keep it up !!
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey its just awesum yr

loved it a lot

cont soooooooon

and pm me

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 8 They knock on the door, and it opens. It is Gunjan standing. Nupur- *Smiles* Gunjan? Gunjan- Di???? She gets all excited, and hugs her. Gunjan- Diiiiiii!!!!!!!! Nupur- Haan haan haan. They break the hug. Gunjan- Mein abhi aayi di. She goes around, screaming that Nupur is here. The whole family hather around to see them. They go inside. Nupur has no idea what ot say to them. She knows a "Sorry" wont do anything. But they don't want a sorry, they are just too happy to see them, to see her. Her mom comes, and hugs her. They are too usy talking with her, asking her everything, millions of questions, and non of them realizes Mayu holding Arti. Mayank is happy to see Nupur with her family. He turns around. Gunjan- Boo!!! She starts laughing. Gunjan- Don't worry ji-ja-ji mein khusi ke wajhe se abhi kissi ko darraon gi nahi. Mayank- *Smiles* Gunjan right? Gunjan- of corse, the only and only one Gunjan in the entire world, and you know the gorgeous one too. Mayank- Haan meine notice kiya. Gunjan- Really? Mayank- Of corse, tumhe toh ek bolloywood star hona chahiye. Gunjan- Khash.. Mayank- Khash kya? Gunjan- Khash mein Samrat se phele aapse mili hota. Mayank- Samrat your faince right? Gunjan- Faince kam, ghadha zyada. They start laughing. Gunjan- think humari bohat jaame gi, jiju. She realizes that he is holding Arti. She gets confused. Gunjan- Yeh? Mayank- Arti. She smiles. Mayank- Nupur ki beti. She looks at him. Gunjan- What????!!!! _____________
Mayank- Ummmm, I mean-
Gunjan- Wait wait wait, Arti aapki aur-ahhhhh, Di ki-?
She goes up to her. They all realize Mayu wioth Arti, and Gunjan tells everyone about her. They all are even more happier.
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NM- app behetiye na.
He sits down.
Gunjan- May I?
He hands Arti to her, and man ypeople talking to him. Nupur standing behind a pillar and is loking at them.
NM- Nupur?
Nupur- Haan mom?
NM- Umm, Mayank aur tu plezz unnse baat karle abhi.
Nupur- Maa Dad se-
NM- Nupur woh tujhko bohat miss- kherr chor, mein sab ko samalti hoon, tu aur Mayank please jaa na.
Nupur- Ji mom.She sends Mayank to where she is standing.
Mayank- Nupur hum kahan jaa rahe hai?
Nupur- Lets go please.
On the way she tels him everything. Her dad is very rich bussiness man. He is nice, but mostly quite, and very strict. He had never tired to talk to her in the phone after she ran away with RV. They reach in front of his door. She is too afraid to knock, he looks at her, and decides to knock.
Nupur- Nahi, nahi, nahi, nahi.
Mayank- What?
Nupur- Mayank mujhe bohat darr laag raha hai, pata hai dad kya kahein ge.
Mayank- Dont worry mein hoon na
Nupur- Par-
He ignores her, and kncks on the door harder.
ND- come in.
Nupur mummering- abb toh tu gayii Nupur, now u'r died.
Mayank- Challe?
She stares at him, with irrated expression, and he opens the door. They go inside, and find her dad on his laptop, facing the other way.
Nupur- Abb...woh.....dad....
ND- Nupur?
He turns around, and sees them.
hope u liked this part, do comment na, and I tried hard to make it longer. Hope this is long enough na. Plezzz do comment, and will continue soon, And thanks everyone for commenting everytime, u all r soo sweet. Luvv ya all.
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it,,,thnx alot 4 da pm,,,=D
keeeep it up,,,,😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wanted to know her dad's reaction
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Posted: 15 years ago
lina amazing update thank u 4 pm me cont soon i'll wait dear

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