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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

hey i have edited my comment on pg 63...do look nah mahi...sorry for commenting late...



sure and its ok
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

mayur part...just i have missed many parts..just read it in one go...mmmh where to search for words...yet i felt bad for not commenting nor reading these dazz sorry for that...u no nah hw lazy i am??well u just keep on pm me me lazy fellow will defintely catch all ur parts and pm u....as mayurian am enjoying ur ff...do write more on mayur...i luv to read...

keep rocking mahi chweety...
loads of love
jeni
sorry for late comment...
i missed out am the 1st one to comment hey give me a treat buddy



thx for the comment.......

glad you caught up.....

of course i'll keep pming you........

your treat-





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Posted: 15 years ago

i knew u wuld say it chweety 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima



thx for the comment.......

glad you caught up.....

of course i'll keep pming you........

your treat-





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thx for ur treat buddy...well i thought of ice creams...ur treat is different well i liked it...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur


thx for ur treat buddy...well i thought of ice creams...ur treat is different well i liked it...



glad you liked it........

ice-creams are good......

but you deserve a crown
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW... Mahima.. that's all I am left with..b4 u think who I am... I am Divya S.. and i came to know abt ur FF randomly as I was just surfing.. and thnk God.... for that.. otherwise I would have really missed out on something so nice.... This FF is really good..
OMG.. IF mein itna saara talent bhara pada hain.... PHEW!!!! anyway, Good job!!
And do add me to your PM list, buddy list and PM me whenever you update or whenever u plan to start a new FF or OS...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

WOW... Mahima.. that's all I am left with..b4 u think who I am... I am Divya S.. and i came to know abt ur FF randomly as I was just surfing.. and thnk God.... for that.. otherwise I would have really missed out on something so nice.... This FF is really good..

OMG.. IF mein itna saara talent bhara pada hain.... PHEW!!!! anyway, Good job!!
And do add me to your PM list, buddy list and PM me whenever you update or whenever u plan to start a new FF or OS...

glad you read my ff.....
added you to both my buddy and my list
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 11:- PAGE 63

PART 12
NEXT FRIDAY
After the incident on last Friday nupur had managed to avoid mayank. Mayank didn't get a chance to talk to nupur properly as she always cut him off. But mayank was successful to talk to gunjan, c.j, dia, uday and benji who forgave him for everything. Samrat was not just ready to see mayank's face forget talk to him. Angel's and mayank's bond's grew stronger.
Nupur and kids were having breakfast in the morning when mayank entered.
MAYANK:- Good morning, everyone
KIDS:- Good morning
NUPUR:- Good morning, sir
Mayank then started having breakfast.
ANGEL:- Muma?. Aaj school ke baad hum sab movie dekhne chale?
MOHIT AND SANAYA:- Plzzzz massi
NUPUR:- Sorry baccho?.. actually aaj mujhe office mein late night tak rukha padega?. Kal bahut important presentation hai?.
RATI:- Aap humme school se pick karne toh ayogi na?.
NUPUR:- Actually aaj possible nahi hai? gunjan, dia aur c.j ayege tum sab ko pick karne?.
ARJUN:- Oh no?.
NUPUR:- Hum kal pakka movie chalege aur Sunday ko dream land chalege?.
ANGEL:- Perfect muma?. Par raat ko time se ghar aaa jana?
NUPUR:- Koshish karugi?. Aur tum time se so jana? meri wait mat karma??
ANGEL:- Par?
MAYANK:- angel, tum apni muma ki chinta mat karo? main hoon na?.. mujhe bhi daar tak kaam karma hai?. Toh main bhi tumhari muma ke saath office mein hi rahuga?..
ANGEL:- Pir thik hai?. Aab mujhe koi chinta nahi hai?.
Mayank, nupur and kids finish breakfast. Nupur goes to drop the kids to school. Mayank goes to office in a separate car as by now he knew the way and also had car.
Mayank and nupur work for the presentation the whole day.
About 12 at night when mayank is about to leave the office he sees that the light of the presentation room is on. He goes inside and sees nupur there. He thinks it is a perfect opportunity to talk to her.
MAYANK:- Nupur..
NUPUR:- Yes sir?
MAYANK:- Tum abhi tak gayi nhi?
NUPUR:- Bas ja rahi hoon?
Nupur tries to leave but mayank blocks her way.
MAYANK:- Aaj main tumhe jaane nahi dunga
NUPUR:- Mera rasta choda?..
MAYANK:- Do hafte se tum se baat karma chahta hoon aur aaj karuga?.
NUPUR:- Mujhe koi baat?.
Mayank puts his hnds on her lips.
MAYANK:- Nahi karni?. Toh sun toh sakti ho na?..
NUPUR:- (removing mayank's hand) aab kucch sunno ko baki nahi hai?
MAYANK:- Hai? bahut kucch hai?. Tumhe mujhe apne pregnant hone ke baare main batana chahiya tha?. Meri job mere liye tum se important nahi thi? yeh tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho?
NUPUR:- Agar important nahi thi toh mujhse pucche job li kyun?..
MAYANK:- Hamare liye?? hamare future ke liye?.
NUPUR:- Hamara future??? Wah mister mayank sharma?.. tum ne hamare future ke baare mein socha tha?.. tum ne toh saaf saaf kaha tha kit um shaddi 2016 mein karna chahte ho?? yaad hai na?.. jab hum gala kha rahe thae?.
MAYANK:- Par?.
NUPUR:- Aur tum ne job ker liye haan mujhse bina pooche kaise ki?? maine tumhare liye apni job thukra di thi?.
MAYANK:- Kaunsi job?? (shocked)
NUPUR:- Acting ki job?.. karan johar ke film mein kaam karne ki job??. Sharukh ke saath acting karne ki job?.
MAYANK:- Par tumne mujhse poocha hi nahi tha??
NUPUR:- Puccha tha?. Indirectly
MAYANK:- Kab?
NUPUR:- Yaad karo?. Maine tumse mazak mein poocha tha ki agar mein karan johar ki film mein sharukh ke saath kaam karo toh kya tumhe problem hogi? aur tumne saaf saaf keh diya tha ki tumhe problem hogi aur tum mujhe aisa karne nahi doge?.
MAYANK:- Mujhe laaga kit um mazak kar rahi ho?.
NUPUR:- Toh tumhe galat laga?..
MAYANK:- Par tumhe jo laga bilkul galat tha?. Maine hamesha tumhe sab se zyada importance di thi, di hai aur deta rahuga?.. tum mano ya na mano?. Tum chaho ya na chaho?. Tum mujhe ek baar apne pregnant hone ke baare merin baata toh sakti thi na?.. mein 6 saal tak apni beti se aur tum se dur raha hoon?.. main har pal maar maar ke jiya hoon?.. kya hum dost bhi nahi ban sakte?
NUPUR:- Nahi
MAYANK:- (now upset) thik hai?.. (walking towards the door)?.. main jiyu ya maru tumhe kya?.
Nupur felt her heart paining on hearing this.
NUPUR:- (going towards mayank) mayank?.. (but she trips and falls down) oouch?.
Mayank turns to see that nupur has fallen on the floor. Her eyes are wet with tears.
He goes and hugs her. Nupur hugs him back. After some time they break the hug.
MAYANK:- Sorry?.. woh (getting up from the floor)
NUPUR:- Humme ghar chalna chahiye (also getting up)
NUPUR:- (trying to walk) ouch?.
Mayank looks at her and without thinking for a second he picks her up in his arms. Nupur puts her hands around his neck.
They get lost in one another.
Mayank starts walking towards the exit of the office.
When they reach the exit Mayank puts Nupur down.
NUPUR:- Thank you?? par iski kya zaroorat thi??
MAYANK:- Main tumhare paroo ko taklif nahi dena chahta tha?
Nupur looks at Mayank
MAYANK:- Kya hua?
NUPUR:- Mayank, hum friends ban sakte hai??
MAYANK:- (eyes gleaming sach) sach?..
NUPUR:- Much?..
MAYANK:- Toh friends??.. (stretching his hand)
NUPUR:- (shaking his hand) main itne der se farssi bol rahi thi kya??. Aab ghar chale?
MAYANK:- Chalo?.. uum nupur??.
NUPUR:- Haan??
MAYANK:- Raat bahut ho gayi hai?. Toh tum mere saath meri car mein ghar chalo?
NUPUR:- Thik hai?..
So mayank and nupur go home in mayank's car.
On reaching home, angel hugs nupur.
NUPUR:- Tum soi nahi
ANGEL:- Nind nahi aaa rahi thi?? aur aap itna late kaise?
MAYANK:- Who humme kam tha?.
ANGEL:- Ok..
NUPUR:- Angel, raat bahut ho gayi hai? tum so jayo?.. main tumhe kahani pad kar sunati hoon?..
ANGEL:- Muma? kahani sunate sunate aap zaroor so jayogi?.. mera toh pata nahi?..
MAYANK:- Toh main sunna deta hoon?..
NUPUR:- Mayank, main sunna dungi?? tum so jao?. Waise bhi kal presentation hai?
MAYANK:- Come on nupur?. Apni dost ki itni bhi madad nahi kar sakta kya??
ANGEL:- Aap dono dost kab se baan gaye??
MAYANK AND NUPUR:- (together) aaj se
ANGEL:- Ok?? aab aap dono mohit aur sanaya ki tarah ek saath bolna band karo? aur chup chap jakkar so jayo?.. mujhe bahut nind aaa rahi hai?.. main sone jaa rahi hoon?.
NUPUR:- Par tum ne hi kaha tha ki tumhe nind nahi aa rahi hai?
ANGEL:- Aap toh janta ho na ki main aapki wait kar rahi thi?.. aab good night
NUPUR:- Good night (kissing angel's cheeks)
Then angel, nupur and mayank go to their respective rooms and go off to sleep.
PART 13:- PAGE 82
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Lovely Lovely update hai abb Now MayUr are friends hai thanks god she now is ok with Mayuu

hai when Mayuu left her in his strong arm hai Awesome
Do Con Sooon................
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Posted: 15 years ago
i guess i missed many parts.......i don't know how but i did!

so i am gonna reply to each one of them!

part 10



i really loved mayank and angel's hug.....

i really wish that mayur become one!

mayank has to do something............

cant wait to read the next part......

love,
Mahak

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