My collection of one shots - update pg 6 - Page 10

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

she is only crazy woman

she ait princess or queen or anything...dont listen to

her bakwas :P

Originally posted by: Tushtih7

sneha it was pleasant to read... jus like dreaming...

n the concept from elementary to college was so excellent... there are few real stories i know something like this, not from kindergarden lol from high school to then...

i luvd it reading must say like dreaming, with flashes of images of two kids, n then to various stegaes...

write some more like this one sneha...

Originally posted by: ...anshu...

tell her dat she dont listen to me

btw u r a good writer😊

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

whacks whacks now 🤗🤗
wah!! wah!! childhood love story nice concept sweets ⭐️⭐️⭐️n i like da evolution of feelings of bth of dem. boys slowly change n u showed well 4r yuvi but ma chief n flirt😲😲 i disagree hmph!!!! gals must be following him 😉😉not he give me a break!!!!

now i want more n more 4rm u 😳😳😳😳n very gud make sumi work she has b'cum one lazy bum she has not updated her FF😡😡
😡😡😡

Originally posted by: Sofna

Truly EXCEPTIONAL!!!!!👏👏👏

One of the most fantasticYuNa ff i hav read to date!!!!👍🏼

N i wholly agree with Sumi,this was one ff that did justice with few dialogues............

I loved the way u simply built it up from kindergarten to college!!!😍

Thank u 4 forcing me to read it!!!🤗 😆