|Jalwa| MN FF Chp17 P122 22/8/2010 - Page 76

hey mindblowing update dear

wow Nidz amazing update yaar

its simply marvellous!!such an interesting update yaar..and i m sure sooner or later mayank wil fall in head over heels in love with her..😉plzzzzzz update asap..really looking forward to it..🤗🤗cant wait 4 the birthday party..

Nice update

Mayur are really getting close

Liked the way Mayu clamed Nups wen she was blaming him for wat he had not done

Sam was rude to Nups but Mayu supported her awesum

Mayu wil never chnage his view for Sam i thk

Update soon n plx pm

This tim also u didnt pmed me

Hi 😳

I guess I've missed out on a lot. Nidheya, could you please tell me the whole story in a nutshell so that it's easier for me to catch up with the story. Please?

-Kanky

the update was fantastic nidz ............. loved it lots ............ do continue soon cant wait to read the surprise party bday party of mayank planned by nupur nd his one more step towards realisation ...................... loved the update lots ...........

Hi Nidz
oye hoye what an awesome update
it was super cool
mind-blowing
awwwwwwwwww i loved mayur a lottttttt

heheheehehehe the morning scene was so sweet.
ye mayank bhi na- he is so naughty, poor nups.



i loved the word chipko- sam-gunji r alwz chipko-chipko- it was funny yaar.

the boat journey was wonderful

mayur seems like husband n wife.
yes right observation


nidz i enjoyed the whole update.
it was fantastic.
keep updating

Originally posted by: -Aish129-

RES That's what you were doing Mrs S 😆 Hence the BRB 😆

EDIT:-

OMFG That's what the hell you were doing 😆 I owe you one long comment with explanation 😆

Explanation is cause I could never properly read ANY FF before I started with Kanky's Bin Tere...and now I'm hooked onto yours 😳 You write SO beautifully! And you're excused for disappearing from the CC! 😆 My MRS S 😆 🤗

I simply loved the first scene...Mayank and Nupur together...just fantastic..and what you wrote about her screaming..By God, I can actually imagine her 😆 Mayank's character, you have developed extremely well....Deep, yet fun-loving 😳!

Also loved how Mayank segregated Nupur...so that they were alone..taking sides and all 😆 Your writing has beautiful flow, I'm proud of that! 😳

And what we sort of discussed in the CC of the song...😆 Very well put in 😆 I swear I could imagine MN in front of me...You show when you write, you don't tell, that's the best thing!

And Mayank's little trance he went into with Pasta's mobile ringing 😆 That you captured the best!

Now I'm addicted to this, I know late...but yes, I AM! 😆 And I'll be waiting for Chp17 desperately!

Awww I love you my Mrs. S 😆 🤗 Keep updating!

<3 ya,

Aish

W;ow😲
What a amazing comment😃
Thanks Aish 🤗

Love u

Originally posted by: 2112ization

Shit I miss the chipku couple 🤣 Woah, don't get me wrong, I am just kidding! The FF is so clean without them!
Anyways, lovely update, Monkey 👍🏼 Sorry, now I am not in a mood of leaving a long comment 😳

Update soon, ok?
Sweeto shall be waiting 😳

Miss karne se koi faida nahin 🤣

Anyways thanks monkey!:

Originally posted by: Mari-ARtian

nidzzzz....Awesum update yaaar...
loved itttttttttttt...........
cant wait for Mayank's realization....
eagerly waiting for da next part....
update it soooon jana....

Goat 🤗

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